[RV] The Crazy And The Insane
[CLOSED] CHOCO WAFER (REVIEW/ADVERTISEMENT/GRAPHIC/TRAILER) SHOP
Author: kokonoona
Reviewer: Viviannguyen
Date: 19/11/2015
The Crazy And The Insane
Title - 10/10
The title matches the story really well. I was confused why you titled it that way until I read the story and found out it was a mental/psychological fanfic.
Foreword - 5/5
Although it's short and simple, it gave me the intense and curious feeling. The foreword makes me want to find out what's Taeyong talking about.
Description - 4/5
Honestly, I really want to give you a 5 on this cause you deserved it. Short one-line description but explained a lot. But the only problem is, you kinda gave out the plot by saying "A love story between two asylum inmates, Seulgi and Taeyong.". To me, I prefer you not saying "love story" but that's my opinion.
Grammar/Spelling -14/15
I couldn't really spot any spelling mistakes... Either I read it too fast or you just don't have any mistakes... Anyway, there aren't any big problems, which I'm a bit surprised, since most of the fanfics I read have mistakes that're really visible. But one thing I noticed, "But if the inmate is aggressive, it can be dangerous not locking them up. That’s when the strain jacket comes in handy." I think
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