We've Been Through So Much: Review
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We've Been Through So Much: Review
Reviewer: awesomegurl4815
Title 7/10: I guess it goes with the plot. I think you could make a better title though.
Poster/Background 6/10: Your poster with fine. It's just that I thought that it didn't look so interesting. Also, it was kind of messy with the words. For the background, I don't think it matches the story or the poster. Even though it was moving and it was cool, it didn't go with anything.
Writing Errors/Grammar 8/10: I saw numerous grammar mistakes but I think that was pretty much it so I guess you did a good job.
Enjoyment 8/10: I like your story. Just try slowing it down. There was already actions in the third chapter! Try your best to take your time on it.
Writing Style 9/10: YAY! You used quotation marks instead of the script thing! You could have used more color though. That would have made it pop out and well, the background would help a little bit with that.
Extra 10/10: I don't do this part.
Total: 78/100
Reviewer's Comment: Well, at least you were close to 80 points. Sorry if I sounded mean in any way! Um, I guess all you need to do is just follow my tips.
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