Chapter 1: I'm feeling like such a softie for getting emotional while reading this T-T
You wrote the characters in a way that invites the reader to get indulged with their insecurities and worries, but also with their love and hope for a brighter future - together.
This was a quite angsty but very happy ending oneshot, perfectly for Valentine's Day! I only noticed that you jumped between present and past tense a lot, I would have preferred it to be written in one tense. It was nevertheless easy to read so I didn't feel bothered by it too much!
Thank you for writing and uploading this sweet oneshot <3 I hope you don't mind my small critical thought!
Chapter 1: Waaaaaah! I wish all the couple would be like this >< gosh I'm listening to chanbaek's harmonizing so yeah Iend up crying and reading this fic? oh gosh it was a perfect combination!!!
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