Chapter 1: Even though it was short it was enough to make my day tbh :,) its so sweet and simple but you described their interactions sooo well in just 3k words im not even surprised anymore since its u tho
Well done!!
Chapter 1: I love the way how you describe her feeling, like I literally feel how much she likes him. All the gesture was so heart flattering especially that slow kiss.
But.. why secretly kiss and left her alone in the classroom alone, Baek? Why lol
Chapter 1: Oh God!! So heart fluttering and fluffy. Lol the way he kissed her, when she was pretending to be asleep. Haha!! read it with a grin on my face. Beautiful!! ٩(๑´3`๑)۶
Chapter 1: YOU ALWAYS ALWAYS WROTE SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFULLY!!!! It's so poetic in a way that it just falls so easily when I am reading it. The visualizations are easy to reach by the description you made.
Onto the plot!
The little staring game Reader did with Baekhyun is so high-school stuffs, it made me remember doing the exact same thing with my ex. *giggles*. I like the way you described Baekhyun in Reader's point of view, literally a dream-like man that I want to marry!!!! SCREAMS. When he kissed her as she pretended to sleep LMFAO BOTH OF THEM ARE CLOWNSSSS CLOWNS!!!! I'm happy to finally able to read a bestfriend to lovers AU without any LEGIT heartache that comes from a third person.
My heart is in shambles. I want to go back to highschool rn!!!!!! :-(
Thank you for writing this <33
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