Chapter 2: Here's another review, feel free to delete it if you're offended by it. So, looking at the tags with fluff + mitzu, i thought it would be something wholesome but this chapter is really not that, you might want to add angst to your tags. Unlike your 1st chapter which has some fluff, this one has almost none. The 1st chapter is more enjoyable and somewhat consistent with the tags (even though they didn't know each other). This one has less amount of mistakes (there are still some here and there) and easier to read compared to the 1st chapter. Anyway, good luck for the upcoming chapter and your future endeavor.
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