That's Right, I'm a Composer

I write songs. No, you didn't read wrong, I do... I don't even know why I made this a blog post... I suppose I was wondering as I sang over my songs, whether anyone would like them... I can't write K-Pop, though... I'm more into 'Contemporary'? I have no idea... Anyways...

First Song: Reaching You

In that gentle spot warmed by the sun, the wind rushes by
As it turns into my deep breath, I hear the chime of the wind
Roundabout tears, the tomorrow we named
Are all overlapping future-coloured lines

These childish feelings           
The days we laughed together happily
I hope we come to treasure them
You surpassed this disconnected time
And gave me lots of firsts
I'll connect them to you, I'll reach you

The after school sunset, your back, as you're laughing
Secret whispers, inside these untouched feelings of mine
The you inside of me, and the me inside of you
Are all interweaving future-coloured lines

The smell of the town after the rain
And the dream-like secret I hold in my heart
So many times I've felt like crying, but then laughed
Rather than thinking about it, hurry up
It's fine if you just fly into my heart
To connect to you, to reach you           

In front of you, cherished more than anyone
is someone who cherishes you more,  that's right, it's me
Even if your words somehow become "goodbye" instead
Everything will be as it is

These childish feelings
The days we laughed together happily
I hope we come to treasure them           
I’ll become just a little grown up
Surpassing the me that wants to be just like you
To connect to you
Right now
to reach you…

 

Second Song: My Love

Now that I notice it, you’re always there right next to me
But do I hate you? Love you? Or am I just delusional?
When I take at a look at my feelings clearly
Whether you accept me or not, it doesn’t matter to me

People fall in love for all different sorts of reasons, but...
Maybe you’re my love.

I want to see you now to give your tender self my kisses
And if your heart beats faster... let’s let our love bloom!
Right now is more vital than the future...
The springtime of love’s beauty is a damsel in bloom

I know now... that...
Baby, you’re my love.

 

These are both stuffed up... Can you give me suggestions?

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chaotic_tranquility
#1
I luv :3
(And for some I can imagine Yongguk singing to this XD Imagine if you posted this on tumblr and Yongguk saw and he used it in one of BAP's songs oh Shisus that would be amazing but then he would have to give credit to you and yeah I'm just ranting randomly now. .__.)
humanoiddino
#2
romantic >///<
krinkle_shawol #3
They're all so romantic xDD
1234kpopland #4
its lovely!!
IcyWish
#5
Not stuffed up!
I really liked the first one!
And it doesn't really help that I'm watching an anime that sorta seems BASED on that song you composed. The anime is called Kanon.

As for the second song... is it complete? o.o (NO IDEA ABOUT COMPOSING SONGS..)
If it is, then oh!

Anyways, both are nice songs, I like em! ^.^