Daehyun as a father scenario. He has been pretty absent due to his schedules and you can't take it anymore after a hard day

A story that came to mind when I was looking at imagines that I had saved, and the story kind of fell into place.  >< However, I don't know how well it is, so please give me some feed back on how it is...

A scenario that I wrote to help me get through a hard weekend.  Random stuff was going on the house with my brother and a good friend of mine, and I thought this fan fic would help me over come it. I got a few good laughs when I was writing it, and I still laugh when I read it.  Would love to get feed back, still new to posting my writing for people to see it...I feel that I can never meet anyones taste when I write..