Bloodshot

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Soo Jin does her job and she does it well. Her squad hunts down lycans and any other threats to the vampire race. While on a run she encounters a hybrid who's pack is in alot of trouble. Will she and he squad help or just terminate the threat all together?

 

 

P.S.- I'm grabbing some of my stories off of Wattpad and posting them here.

Foreword

Soo Jin POV

I sat on the ledge with my partner waiting for our cue. The wind blew my hair out of my face as I watched the target enter the subway.

"Why would lycans be here?", Daehyun asked through the earpiece.

"I don't know. Just be ready when something happens.", I said and he nodded.

"Gi you ready?", I asked in the radio.

"Ne.", I heard her answer.

I nodded at Daehyun before jumping off the ledge landing on the ground below. Daehyun and I split up into the crowd still following the target. I noticed him following someone and tailed him to the end of the subway. They both turned the corner and I quietly followed.

"Suga don't act like I'm not here.", I heard the lycan growl.

"Or what? Jay what exactly are you gonna do?", Suga retorted.

"Don't ing tempt me. Why the were you coming out of that prison? Trying to break them out again? You know your pack is there for a reason.", Jay argued.

"They don't belong in there.", Suga snarled as his eyes turned dark. "Besides why are you out and about? Don't you have blood ers after you?"

"Yeah they're here but I doubt they saw me.", Jay smirked and I grabbed my pistol.

"They're out to assassinate you Jay. I'm going to get my pack but you can do whatever the hell you want.", Suga told him.

"Any move you make he will come for all of you. They were sent there so he can't get to them.", Jay said.

"What does he want with them?", Suga asked.

"A pack of hybrids? A mix of the two strongest races is a step towards an army. He would make more.", Jay stated.

"Where the hell are you?", I heard Daehyun asked in my head.

"Two lycans. End of the subway turn right.", I said and I felt his and YeonGi's presence coming closer.

I rounded the corner and shot two bullets into Jay's arm before Suga ran off. Daehyun and YeonGi showed up to grab Jay as I followed the other one down the tunnel where he disappeared. I sighed before my body was thrown into a wall. He grabbed my arms pinning me to the wall.

"What do you want blood er?", he snarled and I flipped us over.

"You spoke of hybrids and him before did you not?", I asked and he chuckled.

"Why? You gonna try and kill them like everyone else?", he asked.

"No. In order to stop him They need to be kept safe. Where are they?", I asked and he scoffed.

"As if I would tell you.", he sneered.

"Fine you leave me no choice so you're coming with me.", I said before knocking him out.

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Jackhead57 #1
Chapter 1: Nice story and concept so far! A little criticism, if you don't mind:
1: i think that your chapters should be longer, and a lot more detailed. A suggestion on how to do this would be something like world building: you could tell the reader about the world and whats going on in it.The plot at the moment seems to be moving rather too fast.

2: i think the plot should be more clear. I'm having a bit of a hard time understanding the plot at the moment. You should have it a little more clear cut in the description.

Sincerly, ~N