I think im gonna revise this story. I read it again and im not that satisfied, some parts are rushed and cringe-y. To make it better, I'm gonna revise some parts but still aligns with how the story flows. Some parts are gonna be deleted, I hope for your patience and understanding. :)
Chapter 25: i know i’m late to the story but dangggg your story line, all the words you used, you’re a great writer indeeeeed. I was able to
imagine the whole thingggggggg and it’s not easy to get your reader to do that as a writer but you just did. ???
Chapter 25: OOMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOO I HAVE SHED GALLONS AND GALLONS OF TEARS THROUGH THIS STORY....LIKE UWAAAAAAAAA HOBI DIED??? MY SWEET ANGEL JHOPE??!! AND THEN I THOUGHT THEY ALL DIED AND I ALMOST DIED FROM DEHYDRATION FROM CRYING SO MUCH.......AND THEN JIN COMES BACK AND OH MY GOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO ING MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
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