I don't want to say perfact, why did you do that in the end, yes i would like Ryeowook's point if view. And i wish it had more detail. But since it was a letter, may be you could narrate their life in more detail from Ryeowook's point of view.
Chapter 1: This is so sad. A tearjerker. My poor Kyuwook but at least they met and had a happy life until tragedy struck. What an amazing letter Kyu wrote for Wook.
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