Chapter 1: This was a really interesting start. Three things stood out to me in particular 1) Tzuyu no longer has the picture of her dead family (I feel like this will come back and either haunt her or cause her to lash out) 2) There might be another settlement or group of people who have no qualms about killing humans and will probably cause trouble for Mina's settlement 3) Mina is now indebted to Tzuyu for saving her life. I look forward to reading the rest of your story!
Chapter 1: I love Mitzu so so so much and they were so cute and so soft in this fic!
I hope you continue this, i would really really like to see what happens next!
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