Chapter 2: does anyone know that one fic where minho and taemin meet in a party and minho is all up on him and taemin tries getting away from him and then they become friends and taemin eats chocolate that have those pills that make u _____ and minho ends up giving him a _______ but his parents come home and almost catch them
Chapter 1: This is really good. I like your grammar and pace but you have many mistakes on spelling. And I'd just like to advice you to use quotation marks instead ( " " ) than ' - ' when there are dialogues. Anyway, I wish u could write more ! Hahaha :) I really had fun with this. And not to mention, I really like it when s l u t!Tae gets it rough and hard ;)
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