KYAAA!!!! TAIKIBABA COUPLE!!!!<br />
thanx so much for writing bout them...im a HUGE fan of them!!!<br />
i was craving for their fanfic but it seems like nobody ever write it yet...<br />
gosh i wish u could write more bout them...i'll be VERY grateful if u do that...<br />
if u do..i would like to share it with other Taikibaba's fans....<br />
gosh...they are the CUTEST couple ever!!!<br />
cute + hot = Taikibaba...ahahahha<br />
i hope u continue with ur story...GANBATTE!!!<br />
eventhough itz a shonen-ai...i already more than happy...<br />
im curious bout the next story....<br />
p/s...great elaboration...Taiki is indeed a very adorable baby bunny...^__^

hmmmm DaiMao fic~<br />
um just saying it would be wayyyyyy easier to read if you made a page for character profiles instead of the *pause*s because those make the writing difficult to read.<br />
it would be cleaner to make a section where you maybe put a picture of each of them and placed those descriptions as mini bios. and then had the actual writing/story/foreword clean of that stuff. you dont have to, just a recommendation from someone reading the fic.