School of Rumble!!

Description

hi guys! uhmmm i'm just new here so i'm still familiarizing myself i don't even know how to place a profile pic teeheehee.. Well anyways just enjoy reading    this story is mainly about fighting but it also has a romantic and funny side to it. oh and just comment any suggestions 

 

 

ps: teen top is here and also as infinite and yourself and some fictional characters that i just made up :))

Foreword

this story is going to be about fighting you know like bullying in campus like those korean drama like little mom scandal 2 well its not gonna be like rater or anything it also has a little romance in it and comedy well i hope you guys will like it. :)) and pls be nice when you comment thanks :))

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sensationoflove #1
I hope chunji remember L.Joe was the little boy he known few years back & be friends again! :) Omg, update soon!!
sensationoflove #2
update soon!! :)
chunjioppa #3
P.S the title of the anime is school rumble :))
chunjioppa #4
heheh i know the anime but i haven't watched it actually :DD
pseudonym-ous #5
Well, it isn't really that original, cause I think I have watched an anime quite similar to this one. I can't really remember the title of the anime, all I remember is that there's a word "Rumble" in it.<br />
But I still love your story though ^^
LyssaLynn #6
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First impression: Ok, to be honest I don’t know what to think! Is this a play? If so then…I don’t know how to review this];<br />
But if you’re not going for a play…I’d trying using a different format like:<br />
On the way to school<br />
I glance at my watch, and nearly scream before running out the door and into the garage. I frantically search for my key; I found it thank the heavens I did. I put the key in the ignition and start driving.<br />
“Ahhh!!! Jinha?! I’m so late!!” I nearly fall of my motorcycle from my screaming. I’m about to cross through the intersection when the light turns red.<br />
“Jinaj?! Why now; why did you stupid light just become red??!!!” I look around to see if any cops are around. There wasn’t so I sped through the intersection.<br />
See how that adds body and description? And I noticed that your writing in second point of view (when you use ‘you’ ) I really don’t like reading second point of view it gives me headaches that’s why I typed it in first point of view (when you use ‘I’)<br />
Title: the title reminds of that anime…umm…School Rumble! And the description of it sounds like the show to…:/<br />
Flow: a bit cluttered because of the play format, unless this is a play…eh…<br />
Overall: I think it’s a cute and funny. I’ll definitely be reading more!~<br />
i'mma subcribe!~<br />
~~Mi Sun
pseudonym-ous #7
Hey there!!!<br />
I like your story ^^<br />
It's really cute and quite original. I haven't read a story similar to this kind of story. Most stories that I read are mostly similar to one another. You know, same plot, same love life, etc.. But this one's different. In a good way of course. It's original and I like it very much. I hope to see you update soon ^^<br />
Hwaiting!!!!<br />
LOVE,<br />
your 2nd subscriber and the first one to comment :]
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