Chapter 1: AAAHHHHHH!!! all the kisses are so cute!!!! Nicely written!!!

Chapter 1: "Kyuhyun needed him to be complete, to fill that aching gap deep within his soul. Nothing and no one other than Yesung would be able to do so." I don't know why but I love that line. This is so beautiful that I can't even process right now. The feels.. ugh the feels T-T! Their just too precious together. Kyu needs Yesung and Yesung needs Kyu and that's all there is to it. As long as their together everything will be alright. Thank you for this piece of fine literature. <3

Most of this was just too deep and too true to even comment on. Honestly, I fell very embarrassed by this piece of wisdom, how it tells things I already know but cannot even shape into manageable thoughts.
So I'm gonna comment on something very trivial. Is it weird I really really liked how Yesung smelled of coffee and cinnamon? ^^ :3

And the kisses!! ALL THE KISSES!! SO MANY KISSES!! I loved the kisses!! I like died from all the kisses!! They're getting so much closer and it's so sweet!! And Yesung's so shyyyy!! My biasness just kills me with the image of shy blushing yesung as Kyuhyun kisses him. OMG. <333
And the last line... I'm just going to go cry and the perfection of it all T.T Snuggling in bed will always just get to me.
Aww Unnie this is so wonderful T.T Why are you so amazing >.< All the love that radiates throughout this fic is just so... <33 I love how possessive Kyu is and how much Yesung just loves him and works to make him feel better. Doubt can go die in a hole XD Yesung loves Kyuhyunnie and there's no changing that >.< There's just TOO MUCH LOVE!! Good job Unnie ^.^

Aww and just imagining Kyuhyun clinging to Yesung every night because of doubt... I know I shouldn't be cooing but that is just precious. The idea of Kyu holding onto Yesung like a stuffed animal is just... I dunno how to explain XD I'm just weird ok, let's not go into that XD
It was just so freaking cute when Yesung hugged Kyuhyun from behind was just!! ARGH I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN HOW MUCH I SQUEALED >.< just know that there was mass squealing.
And the feeding scene!! OMG don't even get me started >.< The cuteness... The way Yesung cares so much about Kyuhyun, the way Kyuhyun just gives in... And the way they both feed each other and Yesung sneakily sneaks in vegetables it's all just... It's like some sweet domestic fic where they're like 20 years in the future feeding each other >.< I just can't!!
Goshness!! Kyunnie must've gotten the shock of his life when Yesung took off his shirt O.O haha I would've fainted. Of course Kyuhyun would just think about touching him XD I would hide under the blanket... before I proceeded to faint XD
I kind of loled and spazzed when Kyuhyun thought about just pulling Yesung on top of him. Sneaky little maknae XD But then when he didn't get the chance, he just moved a tiny bit so Yesung would stay squeezed up to him... omg I just can't T.T
Yesung + Aegyo = whoever becomes an absolute puddle. I swear, no one would be able to resist a Yesung aegyo act. And clearly Kyuhyun is a special case that melts well and truly - more so than the average human. hahaha. And I kind of love how he is hypersensitive to everything Yesung does, it's like he pays special attention <33
Awwsssssssss I love the whole confession part... Kyunnie doesn't want to disclose anything cuz it's embarrassing and Yesungie thinks he's cute!! That's just cute~ The supposedly super serious matter and Yesungie's just like "You're cute" squishes XD

Oh Goshness... Prepare for my usual essay of nonsensical spazzing :P I've actually been putting off commenting cuz I know I'll spend 20 minutes just writing endlessly about how amazing it was. But that's the usual XD
Oh Confession: Er... I feel bad omg... Umm... Umm... I kind of... er... I thought the initial monologue at the beginning was... boring? Oh God I actually said it >.< Okay maybe not boring per se but more like... dry and very long. I feel bad cuz it was very insightful and an interesting take but the large paragraphs just ensured me skipping through that part and reading like 2 words per paragraph to kind of understand what was going on. And I was kind of really really glad you did like a couple of sentence summaries sprinkled throughout later when Yesung and Kyuhyun were conversing because I kind of knew what I missed out on. I feel so bad cuz I'm probably the only one that thought that way cuz I just at reading T.T I thought it was cool that you addressed 'Love' 'Mind' and 'Doubt' as characters but I just... I just couldn't last very long and ended up skipping to the part with Ryeowook. I'm so sorry Unnie T.T I wish I was better at reading so I could enjoy this properly.
Anyway enough about that and let's just get to regular spazzing cuz after the initial part I did read it properly.
Oh Kyunnie... He's scaring all the dongsaengs XD More so than usual :O That's scary just thinking about it >.< Dude!! If I saw Yesung hanging out with girls I'd just cry, not get angry :P But that's just you Kyuhyun... Sigh... It's his way of dealing with jealousy (plus you're so stubborn!! It's called jealousy, not getting upset XD) from both males and females getting close to the person he loves ;)
Poor Ryeowookie T.T He got the bad end of the stick even if he was just worrying about Kyuhyunnie... haha!! Luckily he has Yesungie to tell on him and Kyuhyun's just butter in his hands XD

finally Kyuhyun told Yesung about his possession. this one is so fluffy X3 I really love it.

anyway, happy belated birthday ^^
thank you for writing this =D

Wow, you conveyed emotion really perfectly O.O

Every emotion spread through me, it was intense, aching, relieving, cheering. A real roller coaster, enjoyable to experience and read :) I read all your fanfictions and imo it's the one that conveyed best the character's mind and heart.

Thank you very much midnight :D
Can't wait to read your next KyuSung :3

OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE. I think that's one of my favorite chapters ♥