The Day We Broke Up

Description

It's today. You and your four year-boyfriend decide to end the relationship and make it a 'good' goodbye.

Reader Insert (Name) x Personal Bias Insert [Insert].

Foreword

Hi /randomly rolling around like a buffalo.

So as you know (or should know), Super Junior's sixth album came out. One of the songs is called "헤어지는 날 (A ‘Good’ bye)", which roughly translates into "The Day [We] Break Up." As you read through this one-shot (or maybe two-shot?), you'll be able to notice the way the song influenced this short fic. I made the story a bit vague for your imaginations to soar. Truthfully, it was somewhat on purpose and somewhat on accident. Also, I really don't like to put unnamed characters into my stories, but I just didn't know who to put the boy as so I made him "[Insert]" so you can choose whoever you want. I really didn't want to name the girl either, but at the same time, I didn't want to make it a second point of view. I don't know why.

I hope this story doesn't confuse anyone. In fact, I hope it touches some part of your heart. Really, I do.

By the way, I started writing this around three-thirty and finished about one and a half hour later. I kind of feel unsatisfied with this one shot so if there's a sequel to it, don't be surprised. Derp. It'll most likely be set in the future (several years after breaking up?).

.... Comments are much appreciated. /RUNAWAYFORSHAMELESSWHATEVERYOUCALLTHIS.

Without further ado, here is The Day We Broke Up. Enjoy.

 

Yes, I wrote this to make up for the lack of updates for my other story.
Yes, I'm hoping this will break my Writer's Block for my other story.
No, I do not know when I will update my other story. Sorry.

 

Comments

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Givaren #1
Chapter 1: Deleted my first comment. Rereading this made me tear up, while I was listening to Ga-In's Nostalgia. Anyways, just realized how good this was. Sorry.
Insoogirl69 #2
I hope u will put this name in ur ff pls i want luhan thank u this story is true in real life lol sequel
Blacksleeves
#3
Good story...but it would be better if u apply the character name and it`s definition...and the whole thingy still a wonderful.story ^^
YouhMahChingu
#4
I like how you write! I did get a bit confused when it came to the character's names hehe. so I couldn't get a real picture of who the two were huuuuuu- all in all, you explain things very well and keep up the good work :D
Joyvin #5
Nice story!!