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Hey guys! I'm trying a new story right now. No, wait, 'trying' is the wrong word - I'm working on a new story right now.  It's this one:

Awake

For the ones among you who want to know what it's about, here are the Description:

I've had this idea when I read an article in a movies magasin belonging to my father. There is a series called 'Awake'. Though my story won't be quite the same, only the idea's the same.

 

Description:

Heechul's a spoiled boy who gets everything he wants from his parents. And what he can't get from them, he will get in the blink of an eye. Because - well, he's Kim Heechul. He has everything.

At least until that fateful day when the car accident happened. Everything that he knows is that he lost someone - either one person or two. His parents - or Hankyung. But his mind won't tell him who it is. Because when he wakes up he will be with the other...

 

 

and the Foreword:

It was my birthday. I had gotten a lot of presents like every year but was more excited than I had ever been. Because tonight, Hankyung would give me the best present I had ever gotten. He would take something away from me, you could say, but I was more than willing to give it to him. Only this boring dinner was in our way before we could go into my soundproofed room. No one would hear anything. Even Heebum would have to wait on the outside.

I smirked, thinking about what would happen tonight.

"Honey? It's your turn to order now." my mom interrupted my pretty good imagination.

I looked up, a little bit annoyed while Hankyung next to me smirked, having noticed my little problem already. I glared at him, shook my hair out of my face and gave the waitress one of my irresistable smiles before I turned back to my boyfriend. "Hannie, what did you take?"

"Do you really have to ask?"

Of course I didn't. He always took the same when we went to this restaurant - either because my or his parents dragged us here. "Then I will take the same, please." I said and leaned back again, taking Hankyung's hand. Yes, this evening would be unforgettable!

 

 

I'd be really happy if you guys checked it out because this is about a topic I've never ever tried before. So, please give me some support? I know that this is again a story that doesn't have too many happy moments, at least not in the beginning and I don't even know if it will end in a desaster or if it will become awesome but I'd like to find it out with you guys by my side. So, please give 'Awake' a try? I'd love you guys!

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miss-siwon #1
I shall check this out~! :D I love how you used Come Clean by Hilary Duff in the poster~!
Mystaeria #2
I'll read it! It sounds cool. Oh wait! I just deciphered the part that had me confused. Yes I will definitely read. Undoubtedly. You know the couple I like but this coupling is a close second so I have no qualms :) can't wait!
HYUKslave #3
Good to know you're working on new fic. But i'm sorry i'll have to pass.
i only read eunhae/haehyuk ... a little kyumin n kangteuk here n there.

I'm sorry :((