Chapter 1: again, this one was breathtaking too. you seem to love rain, and the way you describe each sensation donghyuck felt is beautiful! i'm not fond of rain, always thought it was too messy though kind of romantic, but now i'd wish to experience what they had under the rain. on a side note, can you correct that small typo after the first break. it kind of broke the flow of the story for me, maybe because it's my bias' name? lol. hope you'd write more stories in the future! i'll be looking forward to whatever you publish. ^^
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