29. Don't Touch Her

Visus

 

"I said, touch her again and you're dead." Woohyun repeated as he stood in the doorway with Hoya and Sungyeol as his flanks.

 

"They can't hear you, oppa. Hyuna put a spell on them." I told him as the 6 wolves turned to source of interruption.

 

The one that wasn't doing anything lunged at them and Hoya dodged it easily.

 

"Just because you don't have control of your mind doesn't mean a werewolf can beat a vampire." Hoya said.

 

The others continued their business as Kikwang's hand started to move closer.

 

"Guys. There's still five of them over here." I said, as Kikwang's hand reached its destination and squeezed my harshly.

 

I squirmed at his disgusting touch and I know I squealed and it affected them.

 

Squirming only had the ones holding me down, pushing harder so I remained still on the bed.

 

Kikwang continued his massage of my while the ones holding my legs left to help the others.

 

Hyunseung was still there holding my right arm and the other one narrowed his eyes at me before pushing my wrist deeper into the bed.

 

"You're dead." I heard Woohyun say as Kikwang's hands moved lower to find the main erogenous zone on my body.

 

Woohyun stared harshly at the three of them before looking angrily at his obstacle.

 

", Sungyeol. Take her." Woohyun shouted as I heard a very loud thump on the ground despite the buzzing in my ears.

 

My face felt wet and I realized I had tears falling from my eyes.

 

"I can't, hyung." I heard Sungyeol say as another thump happened to hit the ground.

 

"Hoya." Woohyun said and immediately I felt the familiar hand touch mine.

 

I couldn't see him until he touched my hand and he smiled sadly at me.

 

The invisibility wasn't helping, the boys knew exactly where I was. They just couldn't see me.

 

Hoya cursed quietly, "Distraction, Sungyeol." He said as the master of mischief came over.

 

I would never want to get on Sungyeol's bad side of an argument. Without even thinking, he found all their tickle spots and despite the spell controlling their minds, bodily instincts could not be fought.

 

They pulled away quickly as Hoya scooped me up in his arms and ran outside of the room.

 

"Give her to Dongwoo and Myungsoo." Woohyun shouted at him and Hoya obeyed immediately, taking me downstairs.

 

"Dongwoo hyung!" Hoya shouted as I was handed off the other vampire.

 

"I got her!" He shouted as Hoya joined the fight downstairs with the nymphs and sirens.

 

Dongwoo walked outside with me casually and I already felt my anxiety calming. Tears were drying as I knew that Dongwoo was controlling it but I didn't care.

 

"You're safe now.." He said softly, as I felt the sun shine on my face.

 

I just nodded, "I know."

 

Author's Note:

Update! It's short!

i know. T.T

I'll try to get chapter 30 done tonight too~!

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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 51: I would say this story is alright. Well, I do feel interesting but somehow it was rather dull in my opinion. Please don't take this as offensive. >.< First, is the lack of chemistry between the two main characters. In which, the female character didn't have a distinct personality or should I say that a certain characteristics. Like I don't know if she was a sweet type or anything but what I knew is that she was a kind girl. :) That's all. And I couldn't feel the tension when there were actions or hell broke lose. Writing about the kidnapping consecutively is rather I don't know...It was somehow careless for them not very attentive to protect her. The lesson from the first event should be learned. But hey, it's your story. You can do whatever you want. xD I'm just stating my opinion. Also, I would love to see the interaction between other characters more deeply. Like give a lil bit of montage of their bonding especially between two protagonist. Yes, I know when people face dangers or been through hell together. They easily fall in love within a short time because they trust each other. I can see that but I want more. Your genre already stated a romance, so show more romance between them despite everything happen to them. And the drama, not so much expressed in here. I think but hey maybe because the chapters were too short and it seems rush. It's okay, you will improve and become better. I'm sure of it. :D Sorry, if it seems harsh to you but I don't have any intention but try to help you. ^.^v Anyway, love your story! ♥
matogalaxyV
#2
Chapter 50: daaaaaamn three days? lol
elfcassopeia #3
Chapter 51: A lot of thought has been put into this story to make it work abd the plot is pretty unique too! Definitely a great read, over and over again.
sullivanyoo
#4
Chapter 50: Aw man. That's like so sweet ;; great job!
sullivanyoo
#5
Chapter 50: Aw man. That's like so sweet ;; great job!
sullivanyoo
#6
Chapter 49: Awwww dayuuuum woohyun. Just dayum.
sullivanyoo
#7
Chapter 34: My cheeks are burning gaaaaaaaaah
sullivanyoo
#8
Chapter 33: Uuuuuuuuuuu >///<
sullivanyoo
#9
Chapter 32: That was.... Erm eue
sullivanyoo
#10
Chapter 27: i would say that is a simple kiss and beetles in the tummy OuO