Wake up call!

School of Rumble!!

while you were in the clinic you and chunji fell asleep in one bed 

then nurse Cho woke you two up because it was dismissal time 

you woke chunji up then went home.When you got to the parking lot 

your friends were there they saw you with chunji 

 

(woohyun):" yah _____-ah is that you?"

(you):" ahhh woohyun i didn't notice you guys there, how are you?"

(woohyun):" welll i'm okay, how about you?"

(you):" well nothing has changed at all, dad went home the other day"

(woohyun):" really? that's good news tell him i said hi "

(you):" yeah i will "

(woohyun):" so who's the guy with you? is he your boy friend?"

(you):" yah! no he's not he's just my friend,any ways chunji this is woohyun, woohyun this is chunji "

(chunji):" nice to meet you "

(woohyun):" nice too meet you too"

(you):" uhmm woohyun  we have to go now i was glad i ran into you say hi to the gang for me "

(woohyun):" haha okay i will "

(you):" thanks bye "

(woohyun):" bye _____, bye chunji it was nice to meet you again "

(chunji):" it was nice to meet you too, bye "

you were on the way to chunjis' house 

 

(chunji):" ______ is woohyun in the 3rd year class B?

(you):" yeah why oppa?"

(chunji):" do you know that a lot of students there are involved in fights outside and inside the campus?"

(you):" yeah i'm fully aware of that oppa and some of those students are my friends "

(chunji):" really? so sometimes you fight with them?"

(you):" that was a long time ago, if your thinking that we bully people well we don't we stand up against those people who bully us and others 

thats why sometimes we fight "

(chunji):" haha you guys are like super heroes but with no powers "

(you):" for a kid maybe" 

(chunji):" yah ______ why are you so serious all of a sudden? "

(you):" nothing i just remembered something, anyways are we near to your house?"

(chunji):" yeah just turn to the right then the 3rd house with a green gate "

(you):" okay "
 

you arrived at chunjis' house, it was big but it is also dark its like there is nobody home

(you):" oppa why is your house dark?"

(chunji):" there is nobody home its just me and chanhee "

(you):" chanhee isn't that your name?"

(chunji):" yeah its my name and also my puppy's name "

(you):" you named your puppy after you? hahahaha "

(chunji):" i know it's funny just be quiet it's just a secret okay "

(you):" hahahha... okay i won't tell anyone oppa "

(chunji):" good you better not tell anyone this "

(you):" why are you going to do something?" 

(chunji):" yes i am "

(you):" what? your gonna make me hug your dog everyday? hahaha" 

(chunji):" of course not i'll just do this instead "

(you):" yah! oppa stop tickling me! yah! "

(chunji):" haha i told you "

(you):" okay i won't tell anyone "

(chunji):" come inside it's getting cold out here "

(you):" okay but my mom might ask where i am i better just go home "

(chunji):" yah~"

chunji grabbed your wrist then pulled you towards him then you hear something barking 

chunji whispered to you "_____-ah don't go my dog is waiting for you "

(you):" haha okay oppa i'll just talk to my dad, anyways where is that dog of yours?"

arff! arrrfff! " yahh~ there you are " chunji lifted up his puppy 

(you):" oppa are you sure this is a puppy? it looks more lika a rabbit to me haha joke "

(chunji):" yah don't tease my chanhee he'll get mad at you "

(you):" haha i think he's not mad at me "

chanhee(the dog) was liking your hand 

(chunji):" haha why is he your hand this is so wrong "

(you):" hahaha i think he's not gonna hate me even if i like that "

(chunji):" so are you gonna call your father? "

(you):" ohh yeah i almost forgot "

you quickly got your cellphone to call your dad but before you had a chance to dial his number 

your phone rang, a sign flashed in the screen "appa calling" you quickly picked up your phone 

(dad):"Yeoboseyo _____ -ah "

(you):" ahh dad i was just about to call you i'm here at my friends house and since there is no classes tomorrow 

uhhmmm...

(dad):" yes i am allowing you to sleep there "

(you):" really? thank you, thank you , thank youuuu! i love you dad tell mom i love her too "

your dad hanged up, then chunji asked you "yahh~ what's wrong? did he say yes?"

(you):" of course he did hahaha "

(chunji):" you seem so happy "

(you):" why aren't you happy?" 

(chunji):" well yes of course i'm happy, you know how to cook right?"

(you):" all i know is how to cook noodles,how to cook rice and my favorite bibimbap why ?"

(chunji):" nothing just checking "

(you):" why are you checking that? you're so weird oppa "

(chunji):" are you hungry?"

(you):" no uhmm i'm okay "

(chunji):" ok if you say so "

(you):" where is chanhee??"

(chunji):" in my room why?"

(you):" can i go in and get him please he's just so cute "

(chunji):" haha i thought i was cute?"

(you):" haha in your dreams oppa "

(chunji):" haha that's what you girls say every time "

(you):" maybe, or maybe not "

(chunji):" yah!~ you come here _____! "

(you):" don't tickle me oppa! or i'll kick you in the but! "

(chunji):" haha you can't do that to me "

(you):" yes i can, ahhh! oppa stop it! it hurts! >.<"

then accidentally you kicked chunji in the head 

(chunji):" ahhhh! that hurts!"

(you):" oh! oppa i'm sorry i didn't mean to kick your head i told you not to tickle me that hard "

(chunji):" nahhh it's okay, it's not bleeding right?"

(you):" let me see, no there's no blood "

(chunji):" just get some bandage in my room it's beside my closet "

(you):"okay oppa "

you entered chunji's room, then you smelled something good, it's like a woman's perfume

you didn't mind it then grabbed the first aid kit with the bandage inside, you opened the box then grabbed the bandages

then you noticed the mirror it has writings on it the message was written with lipstick it said "thanks for last night"

(you):" what the?... i just hope this isn't what it looks like "

(chunji):" _____-ah what's keeping you so long?"

(you):" nothing oppa it's just,can i ask you something ?"

(chunji):" what is it?" 

(you):" uhmm can you explain what is that written on the mirror?"

(chunji):" ohh that, that's my cousins joking around they visited me here yesterday and maybe they did that 

sorry if you thought of something suspicious about that "

(you):" actually i did think of something that's why i asked you "

(chunji):" anyways where's the bandage?"

(you):" oh here it is, why don't you rest for awhile?"

(chunji):" ok but lay down with me here "

(you):" okay i'll just get my bag "

you guys laid down on the bed then suddenly fell asleep your head was against chunjis' shoulder and you were hugging his arm tightly

chunjis' hand was holding your hand then you were suddenly awakened by a door bell.. 

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sensationoflove
#1
I hope chunji remember L.Joe was the little boy he known few years back & be friends again! :) Omg, update soon!!
sensationoflove
#2
update soon!! :)
chunjioppa
#3
P.S the title of the anime is school rumble :))
chunjioppa
#4
heheh i know the anime but i haven't watched it actually :DD
pseudonym-ous
#5
Well, it isn't really that original, cause I think I have watched an anime quite similar to this one. I can't really remember the title of the anime, all I remember is that there's a word "Rumble" in it.<br />
But I still love your story though ^^
LyssaLynn
#6
<br />
First impression: Ok, to be honest I don’t know what to think! Is this a play? If so then…I don’t know how to review this];<br />
But if you’re not going for a play…I’d trying using a different format like:<br />
On the way to school<br />
I glance at my watch, and nearly scream before running out the door and into the garage. I frantically search for my key; I found it thank the heavens I did. I put the key in the ignition and start driving.<br />
“Ahhh!!! Jinha?! I’m so late!!” I nearly fall of my motorcycle from my screaming. I’m about to cross through the intersection when the light turns red.<br />
“Jinaj?! Why now; why did you stupid light just become red??!!!” I look around to see if any cops are around. There wasn’t so I sped through the intersection.<br />
See how that adds body and description? And I noticed that your writing in second point of view (when you use ‘you’ ) I really don’t like reading second point of view it gives me headaches that’s why I typed it in first point of view (when you use ‘I’)<br />
Title: the title reminds of that anime…umm…School Rumble! And the description of it sounds like the show to…:/<br />
Flow: a bit cluttered because of the play format, unless this is a play…eh…<br />
Overall: I think it’s a cute and funny. I’ll definitely be reading more!~<br />
i'mma subcribe!~<br />
~~Mi Sun
pseudonym-ous
#7
Hey there!!!<br />
I like your story ^^<br />
It's really cute and quite original. I haven't read a story similar to this kind of story. Most stories that I read are mostly similar to one another. You know, same plot, same love life, etc.. But this one's different. In a good way of course. It's original and I like it very much. I hope to see you update soon ^^<br />
Hwaiting!!!!<br />
LOVE,<br />
your 2nd subscriber and the first one to comment :]