ð A Remedy To The Broken Soul Review
My PortfolioReview done on July 6, 2017 for Bubbly G.S.
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Username:Â PenguinLOvers772
Story title + Story Link:Â A Remedy To The Broken Soul +Â https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/878445
Story Description:Â Youngbae works as a therapist to treat a depressed girl Suhyun and in the midst of therapy, he tells her the story about his dread past with an involvement of a mysterious boy named Lee Seungri who changed his life forever
Genre:Â Angst, Depression, School life
Main Character(s) + Supporting Character(s):Â BIGBANG's Taeyang and Seungri + AKMU's Suhyun
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Title (8/10): I took off two points because well the title really gives away the plot.
Characterization (8/10): You gave Suhyun too much of an emphasis as her being a flat character. Sheâs not much of a character so going really into detail is a bit pointless. I also wish you would put more emphasis on Seungriâs character seeing how important he is to the plot.Â
Themes (10/10): I think you did an excellent job at representing depression. You gave the audience a point of view for them to be able to feel the characterâs point of view.
Setting (0/10): You donât really have a setting and I really canât review something that doesnât have it.Â
Description and Foreword (9/10): I think the description is rather misleading honestly
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