My Stepbrother

Hiding My Heart From You
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~~❤~~   Minho opened the taxi door for me. I tried reading his expression so I would have a clue as to where he’s going to take me and what he’s going to do. Minho had never done anything to hurt me and to be honest I still believe that in spite of all the ing I did to him on the phone and earlier he still cares.    That is one fact I hate about now. Because of him I can’t be with my boyfriend. Because of him my independent life is ruined.    I just sat down and stared at the window the whole time the taxi was on the run. Thoughts and ideas came in simultaneously and made me feel so confused. I sighed and closed my eyes.    Oh please. I really hope nothing goes wrong.   “Hey.” I heard beside me. When I turned around, he poked me on my right cheek and chuckled.   “You’re still the same.” He said. He always does that every time. And every time, I become a victim.   “Yeah so what?” I said to him with an annoyed tone of voice.   “Oh Yun Hee … why are you treating me like this? Have you forgotten about what you felt about me? You were crazy in love with me. Why are you acting like this now? I just want us to be in good terms again. I don’t know what’s gotten into that mind of yours and you decided to break up with me and go back here to Korea.” He narrated seriously.   “I already told you before. Do I have to say it again?” I said to him.   “But we’re not really siblings. Please. Come back to Japan with me. Please.” He begged.   “No. I like it here. And besides, I have a boyfriend.” I said to him.   “I DON’T CARE. You can always leave him behind and break up.” He said selfishly.   “Who told you I would do that? I won’t ever. I love my boyfriend and I won’t break up with him. Stop thinking I would because I won’t. Never.” I said to him.   “You’re just using him so you can forget about me. That’s the real reason. You’re just lying to yourself and you’re denying it.” He said to me. I was ing annoyed when he said that.   “Stop talking to me if you don’t want to get punched in the face.” I said toughly.   “Alright . Chill.” He sighed after.   “Great … now, where are we going?” I asked.   ~~❤~~   “Here we are.” Oh my God? Really? He’s taking me here? I wonder how much money he got from our parents. This is a ing big hotel. Oh and how many days is he going to stay here in Korea?! How many days is he going to piss me off?! UGHHH!   “Why are we here?” I asked.   “Because … I wanna bond with you. Let’s go and relax. Come on.” He opened
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-2Mirae-
14 streak #1
Chapter 83: Wow that was a surprised wedding.... the script before he proposed to her sounded like the story between him and her with a few twists and changes. Wasn't jonghyuns character name in their first performance daehyun too?????? I thought that mee kyung and minho would end up together and rei na would end up with taemin. I didn't think that kenji would end up being obsessive and did that thing to her ):
Issdnn
#2
Chapter 83: Wow this story is absolutely awesome! But honestly at first I thought this story is not really interesting but guess I was wrong! I read it nonstop hahaha
I thought Mee Kyung will end up with Taemin:( andd I also thought rei na will be with Minho lol I'm so sad Taemin and Minho both are still singles XD
Ermm... it's actually confusing at first to read the chapter without writing the POV but then I get used to it and to think about the good side, it'll train the readers to be more concentrate while reading the story:)
Oh, I thought you were gonna make Ye Rin hates Yun Hee but gladly she is not:')
Job well done, dear!:)
(Hope u will consider a Minho/Taemin sequel tho:D)
atowah #3
Chapter 81: Woah! I really like this story. And i enjoy my time when i read it ♡♡♡♡
asmasouma #4
Chapter 63: omg you just made my day :D
Lexi14 #5
Chapter 83: This story was extremely good and I'm very happy I found it thank you for sharing it you should definitely write another jjong fanfic thank you ^.^
tyrakeyss
#6
Chapter 81: This story is so good! u never fail to create a beautiful story..they got married on a stage. hahha i never thought of that.


keep writing ♥♥♥!!
Minah_sarang #7
Chapter 81: Damn ... i really enjoyed this story!! ... the plot was really good :DDD
darkbandit01 #8
Chapter 81: Awwwww <3 so cute!! Alright comments time. So I like the ending a lot, but it's wierd that she starts crying, it's a bit histrionic, I mean that was such a cute move I would have loved it and like been open mouthed not crying on the stage. Also, I think you should wrap up a bit more with other characters, like what happened with rei na, she kinda just disappeared. And following up near the end with min hee would have been cool too, she's a pretty complex character. Also, I think a little part from kenji's pov would have been cool, to see how he thought, like why did he start getting angry, what were his reasons for beginning the problem. I think a side-romance would have been cool as well and added to the story and made it more fun to read, like with mee kyung or taemin. And I know you didn't mean it in a not nice way, but if you could not use the line of something being "gay" like "that sounds gay", (you only did it in chapters 40 and 54) that would be great, b/c it's a little offensive, even though I know you didn't mean it to be :) it's only those places it's an easy change. But overall, I really enjoyed the story, it was great! And I'm impressed with how much you wrote! Awesome job!! Keep writing!
realamal97
#9
Chapter 81: It's Kind of too long but i like it ^^
Thnx a lot :) you're a good writer xD
<3 and i'm Really happy Because they got Married :)
DanShortyShort #10
Chapter 42: well some parts of this fic did happen in my real life so it feels like kinda read my own diary ㅋㅋㅋ authornim, you did great! :D awesome :)