I See You

Hiding My Heart From You
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~~❤~~   TOKYO, JAPAN   “Our dear passengers, we would like to inform you that in 15 minutes we will land in Narita International Airport. Please fasten your seatbelts for your safety. Thank you.”    Japan. I’m back.   After I got my baggage I went out and found snow all over the place. The weather was really cold and I can’t wait to reach home. I called my parents yesterday so they’re probably excited already especially my dad.   I took a taxi home and in a few minutes I reached home.   “YUN HEE!” Minho got out as soon as he saw me. He pulled me to a tight hug and smiled so widely because of happiness. I saw my dad and my stepmom at the doorstep.   “Welcome home Yun Hee!” said mom.   “Come here and give us a hug!” said appa. I ran towards them and hugged them both.    “Umma cooked you your favorite dish. Let’s all get inside.” Said Minho after joining the group hug. Minho’s acting way too different. It’s a good thing for me though.   ~~❤~~   After dinner, I went to my old room. I missed this.   I quickly jumped over my bed and hugged a pillow. I smiled and giggled like a crazy girl.   “Ya. Crazy Yun Hee. What are you doing?” Minho asked. He was standing at the door. I looked at him and ignored him. I mentioned before that Minho and I shared one big room. His bed is at the other side of the room though. We still have boundaries.   “I missed my room so I’m doing this.” I said to him.   “You mean … missed “OUR” room.” He said surprisingly crawling beside me.    “S…stop right there!” I shouted when he was about to plant his lips on mine.   He sighed and did a facepalm.   “You’re never going to make this possible.” He said in an obvious disappointed tone.   “Yes.” I answered.   “Sometimes I wish my mom didn’t meet your dad so liking you would be possible.” He said sitting up on bed.   “Minho come on, Stop acting like this already. I just want the old us back. I want my stepbrother back. I want the hilarious, sometimes crazy and thoughtful you again.” I said rubbing his back.   “Okay. I’ll stop bothering you from now on but you should help me find another girl.” He said.   “No problem. What kind of girl do you like?” I asked. Oh wait … he liked me so maybe he wants someone who’s like me.    “Hmm…She should be pretty like you, nice like you, cool lik
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-2Mirae-
14 streak #1
Chapter 83: Wow that was a surprised wedding.... the script before he proposed to her sounded like the story between him and her with a few twists and changes. Wasn't jonghyuns character name in their first performance daehyun too?????? I thought that mee kyung and minho would end up together and rei na would end up with taemin. I didn't think that kenji would end up being obsessive and did that thing to her ):
Issdnn
#2
Chapter 83: Wow this story is absolutely awesome! But honestly at first I thought this story is not really interesting but guess I was wrong! I read it nonstop hahaha
I thought Mee Kyung will end up with Taemin:( andd I also thought rei na will be with Minho lol I'm so sad Taemin and Minho both are still singles XD
Ermm... it's actually confusing at first to read the chapter without writing the POV but then I get used to it and to think about the good side, it'll train the readers to be more concentrate while reading the story:)
Oh, I thought you were gonna make Ye Rin hates Yun Hee but gladly she is not:')
Job well done, dear!:)
(Hope u will consider a Minho/Taemin sequel tho:D)
atowah #3
Chapter 81: Woah! I really like this story. And i enjoy my time when i read it ♡♡♡♡
asmasouma #4
Chapter 63: omg you just made my day :D
Lexi14 #5
Chapter 83: This story was extremely good and I'm very happy I found it thank you for sharing it you should definitely write another jjong fanfic thank you ^.^
tyrakeyss
#6
Chapter 81: This story is so good! u never fail to create a beautiful story..they got married on a stage. hahha i never thought of that.


keep writing ♥♥♥!!
Minah_sarang #7
Chapter 81: Damn ... i really enjoyed this story!! ... the plot was really good :DDD
darkbandit01 #8
Chapter 81: Awwwww <3 so cute!! Alright comments time. So I like the ending a lot, but it's wierd that she starts crying, it's a bit histrionic, I mean that was such a cute move I would have loved it and like been open mouthed not crying on the stage. Also, I think you should wrap up a bit more with other characters, like what happened with rei na, she kinda just disappeared. And following up near the end with min hee would have been cool too, she's a pretty complex character. Also, I think a little part from kenji's pov would have been cool, to see how he thought, like why did he start getting angry, what were his reasons for beginning the problem. I think a side-romance would have been cool as well and added to the story and made it more fun to read, like with mee kyung or taemin. And I know you didn't mean it in a not nice way, but if you could not use the line of something being "gay" like "that sounds gay", (you only did it in chapters 40 and 54) that would be great, b/c it's a little offensive, even though I know you didn't mean it to be :) it's only those places it's an easy change. But overall, I really enjoyed the story, it was great! And I'm impressed with how much you wrote! Awesome job!! Keep writing!
realamal97
#9
Chapter 81: It's Kind of too long but i like it ^^
Thnx a lot :) you're a good writer xD
<3 and i'm Really happy Because they got Married :)
DanShortyShort #10
Chapter 42: well some parts of this fic did happen in my real life so it feels like kinda read my own diary ㅋㅋㅋ authornim, you did great! :D awesome :)