Joohyun's Caring Nature

Bae Joohyun's Green Flag Love
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The sunlight filtered through the curtains, casting a warm glow upon Seungwan's face as she woke up in the morning. Her eyes fluttered open to find Joohyun already awake, a soft smile gracing her lips. Joohyun's caring nature shone through every gesture, making Seungwan feel cherished and loved.

 

As Seungwan stretched and yawned, Joohyun rose from the bed, moving with a graceful elegance. She padded over to the kitchen and returned moments later with a tray adorned with a steaming cup of coffee and a plate of Seungwan's favorite breakfast.

 

"For you," Joohyun said, her voice filled with tenderness. "I know mornings can be a little rough for you, so I thought this might help brighten your day."

 

Seungwan's heart swelled with gratitude as she accepted the tray from Joohyun. The aroma of freshly brewed coffee enveloped the room, and the sight of the carefully arranged breakfast filled her with warmth.

 

"Thank you, Joohyun," Seungwan murmured, her voice laced with affection. "You always know how to make me feel special."

 

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Riscark #1
Chapter 8: Bruh that first line, before the comma, almost got me, I thought it was gonna turned into angst
Riscark #2
Chapter 3: Communication is the key, in the relationship it's easy to get lost in your insecurity or your past memory, but if you can communicate with your person, it won't be hurdle anymore
Cyrell #3
Chapter 4: I wish I can have their relationship. You make me envy with the story. Good writing. It gives me positivy as well. Your story is something to look forward to.
Riscark #4
Chapter 2: The perfect morning doesn't exi-
*BAMMM this chapter exist
Riscark #5
Chapter 1: For a sec I thought it was gonna end with angst 😅As usual tho, you manage to wrote beautiful story authornim
Nat25nat #6
It's weird, it's stated that the word count 5475 words however after I open the first chapter it's only 633 words
shadowhunter1640 #7
Chapter 1: Foreword made me anticipate the journey of Joohyun as was said. And the 1st paragraph piqued my interest. But i was kind of disappointed with how the story flowed. It was too quick and didn't feel like a journey at all. Quite unrealistic since it's unlikely that someone would take a chance with a stranger though a one night stand would be possible. And their spoken words were too cringey to say the least.

I've contemplated leaving these negative comments here because i thought the author would feel bad. But i've decided to push it instead for i believe it will help develop your writing. Too good comments may make you feel good but i believe negative ones can push you through greatness. So author please don't feel offended by what i've written.

On the note of the positives, i've liked your adjectives and how you constructed your sentences. Please continue writing and thank you for sharing your work with us. Fighting!
rizkybae #8
Chapter 1: Padahal cerita nya bagus tapi terlalu pendek
rizkybae #9
Izin baca
Joanajade #10
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