Adventure and Laughter

Bae Joohyun's Green Flag Love
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Seungwan and Joohyun stood at the edge of a cliff, their eyes filled with excitement and anticipation. The wind gently tousled their hair as they gazed out at the vast expanse of the ocean before them. The crashing waves below echoed the thrill pulsating through their veins.

 

Seungwan turned to Joohyun, a mischievous grin spreading across her face. "Joohyun, let's make a pact to infuse our relationship with adventure and laughter. Let's embrace the spirit of exploration and create memories that will make us laugh for years to come."

 

Joohyun's eyes sparkled with delight as she caught Seungwan's infectious enthusiasm. "Seungwan, I couldn't agree more. Life is meant to be lived to the fullest, and I want us to experience the exhilaration of new discoveries and share in the joyous laughter that fills our hearts."

 

With their pact sealed, Seungwan and Joohyun embarked on a series of adventures that would become cherished chapters in their love story. They traversed mountains, hiked through dense forests, and ventured into unknown territories, hand in hand, their laughter echoing through the air.

 

They went camping under the starry sky, telling stories around a crackling campfire and sharing hearty laughs as they roasted marshmallows. They challenged each other to try new activities, whether it was skydiving, surfing, or learning a dance routine. Together, they embraced the thrill of stepping out of their comfort zones, supporting each other with unwaverin

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Riscark #1
Chapter 8: Bruh that first line, before the comma, almost got me, I thought it was gonna turned into angst
Riscark #2
Chapter 3: Communication is the key, in the relationship it's easy to get lost in your insecurity or your past memory, but if you can communicate with your person, it won't be hurdle anymore
Cyrell #3
Chapter 4: I wish I can have their relationship. You make me envy with the story. Good writing. It gives me positivy as well. Your story is something to look forward to.
Riscark #4
Chapter 2: The perfect morning doesn't exi-
*BAMMM this chapter exist
Riscark #5
Chapter 1: For a sec I thought it was gonna end with angst 😅As usual tho, you manage to wrote beautiful story authornim
Nat25nat #6
It's weird, it's stated that the word count 5475 words however after I open the first chapter it's only 633 words
shadowhunter1640 #7
Chapter 1: Foreword made me anticipate the journey of Joohyun as was said. And the 1st paragraph piqued my interest. But i was kind of disappointed with how the story flowed. It was too quick and didn't feel like a journey at all. Quite unrealistic since it's unlikely that someone would take a chance with a stranger though a one night stand would be possible. And their spoken words were too cringey to say the least.

I've contemplated leaving these negative comments here because i thought the author would feel bad. But i've decided to push it instead for i believe it will help develop your writing. Too good comments may make you feel good but i believe negative ones can push you through greatness. So author please don't feel offended by what i've written.

On the note of the positives, i've liked your adjectives and how you constructed your sentences. Please continue writing and thank you for sharing your work with us. Fighting!
rizkybae
#8
Chapter 1: Padahal cerita nya bagus tapi terlalu pendek
rizkybae
#9
Izin baca
Joanajade
#10
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