Everlasting Love: The End

Bae Joohyun's Green Flag Love
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Years had passed since Seungwan and Joohyun had first embarked on their journey together. Their love had traversed the tests of time, growing stronger with each passing day. Now, as they stood hand in hand, wrinkles etched with the stories of a life well-lived, they marveled at the depth of their enduring love.

 

They sat on a porch swing, rocking gently back and forth, their eyes filled with a lifetime of memories. Their children and grandchildren played in the yard, their laughter and joy filling the air. Seungwan and Joohyun looked at each other, a silent understanding passing between them—a testament to the love that had weathered the seasons.

 

Seungwan's voice broke the silence, filled with gratitude. "Joohyun, our love has transcended time, evolving and blossoming into something more beautiful than we could have ever imagined. It's an everlasting love that has shaped our lives and the lives of those we hold dear."

 

Joohyun nodded, her eyes b with emotion. "Seungwan, our journey has been filled with ups and downs, but our love has remained constant, unwavering in its commitment. It's a love that has brought us immense joy, comfort in times of sorrow, and the strength to overcome every obstacle."

 

They reflected on the chapters of their love story—the laughter that had echoed through their home, the tears shed during difficult moments, and the unbreakable bond that had sustaine

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Riscark #1
Chapter 8: Bruh that first line, before the comma, almost got me, I thought it was gonna turned into angst
Riscark #2
Chapter 3: Communication is the key, in the relationship it's easy to get lost in your insecurity or your past memory, but if you can communicate with your person, it won't be hurdle anymore
Cyrell #3
Chapter 4: I wish I can have their relationship. You make me envy with the story. Good writing. It gives me positivy as well. Your story is something to look forward to.
Riscark #4
Chapter 2: The perfect morning doesn't exi-
*BAMMM this chapter exist
Riscark #5
Chapter 1: For a sec I thought it was gonna end with angst 😅As usual tho, you manage to wrote beautiful story authornim
Nat25nat #6
It's weird, it's stated that the word count 5475 words however after I open the first chapter it's only 633 words
shadowhunter1640 #7
Chapter 1: Foreword made me anticipate the journey of Joohyun as was said. And the 1st paragraph piqued my interest. But i was kind of disappointed with how the story flowed. It was too quick and didn't feel like a journey at all. Quite unrealistic since it's unlikely that someone would take a chance with a stranger though a one night stand would be possible. And their spoken words were too cringey to say the least.

I've contemplated leaving these negative comments here because i thought the author would feel bad. But i've decided to push it instead for i believe it will help develop your writing. Too good comments may make you feel good but i believe negative ones can push you through greatness. So author please don't feel offended by what i've written.

On the note of the positives, i've liked your adjectives and how you constructed your sentences. Please continue writing and thank you for sharing your work with us. Fighting!
rizkybae
#8
Chapter 1: Padahal cerita nya bagus tapi terlalu pendek
rizkybae
#9
Izin baca
Joanajade
#10
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