Black Hole Sun (On Hiatus)
Description
It's the year 2242, and mankind couldn't be evolving faster. Teleportation, Mind Reading, controlling the elements, becoming faster then the speed of light, unbeatable strength-all discoveries made by scientists after a collection of strange rocks was brought back from a different solar system during a space expedition. The scientists had mixed and matched various mixtures, all with pieces of those strange rocks added-the end result was the creation of the Powers. Simply inhaling or drinking a powder or drink containing said rock particles, people could gain those abilities for several hours at a time. The morals and goals of humans had reached an all time high and everyone was in awe of what humans could do.
Years later, the year 2253, and the world was enveloped in chaos. The Powers, all those wonderful and strange Powers, had become something taboo and forbidden. Countries had begun to turn on each other using the Powers, trying to gain more territory and strength for themselves. Cities burned, society crumbled, and the majority of human kind lived in fear. It seemed as if the world was truly going to Hell.
Time passes, and the year is now 2264. The war seemed to worsen in areas all over the world over time, while in others it faded away. But just when the supply of rocks and consumable Powers was beginning to be cut off, a new species arose from the crumbling foundations of Earth, a species that was greatly feared by everyone.
They were mutations, specifically S4S16 Mutations-born from human parents that had consumed too much of the alien rock over their life times, there was little to know about the S4S16's except that their population was now so incredibly low from being exterminated and from being captured by world govenments and armies. It was a rare sight to even see one, not that anyone wanted to. It was also know that these Mutations had given themselves a variety of names.
But the most well known and recognised one: 'Infinite'.
Foreword
I've decided to make a rewrite of Black Hole Sun. I was planning on abandoning this story, but because you guys still seemed to enjoy it so much, I'll finish it while I create the rewrite.
Here's the link to the new story:
Eve of Destruction
I hope you all continue to enjoy Black Hole Sun!
-WhosThere13
A/N (This is the exact note that was placed as the 34th 'chapter' )
Dear Black Hole Sun Readers,
I sincerely apologize, but this story with be going on hiatus until further notice. I’ve been thinking about it sometime (and I know I have done a lot of unofficial hiatus’, which I also apologize for), and I realized I couldn’t continue with the story at the moment. It’s too chaotic and messy, which kept irritating me whenever I would go back to it. The plot is irregular, it’s very boring at times (I felt bored typing it, I don’t know about you guys), there’s too many people (I thought it would be fun to throw more and more people in, like Beast, UKiss, Super Junior, TVXQ, blahblahblah, but it just got hectic and bogged down with its characters. Too many names makes too many focal points.), and there are plot holes and inaccuracies galore (I meant to make it futuristic, but I got so excited with the plot and everything that kept picturing and writing everything as if it was in the present day. Eventually I never really got around to fully taking advantage of making it set in 2264 because of my stubbornness to not go back and fix it.).
I apologize for all the breaks between the chapters. The most recent one was due to a very serious personal and hurtful issue that resulted in these stories being the furthest thing from my mind. As I learned to deal with the problems, I found I had drifted away from this story too much to full understand what I was doing. I also found I didn’t have the passion that I had for it before because of all the problems I found in it as a reader (as I had to read it to remember what I was doing).
Black Hole Sun is only about 5 chapters away from ending; an incredible thing. It’s come so far, and I’m so happy all of you joined me for this ride. I hope one day, when my life is less disastrous and I become more interested in this again, I will finish this for you all.
Thank you so much for joining me on this journey. I will resume writing its remake, ‘Eve of Destruction’, and would be incredibly honored if any of you decided to join me as I develop it more. It has similar ideas and themes as Black Hole Sun, however I hope to fine tune it quite a bit more and change the plot so it’s not so scattered and vague. The OC characters, (Sanghee, Soojung, Jinri, Ji Ae, Mei, Fran, and Tae Joong) will be introduced much earlier (but still in a memorable way) so that they interact with the other much more. All I ask is that if you decide to join me over there, don’t spoil Sanghee’s secret to any of EoD’s readers just yet; I kept that plot twist (and added a bunch more!) and I hope they like it as much as you all did.
Once again, thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope to encounter you all again in the future!
Love,
WhosThere13
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