Chapter VI

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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*I suggest to reread the preceding chapters. You might forgot what happened.


It was just a normal Sunday for Sinb, not until Umji's father called. Saying that the problem with their passports were unexpectedly fixed early, which only means one thing.. She will meet Umji's parents later. Her anxiety about meeting Umji's strict father is just too much. She doesn't know why she was feeling like that. Was it because she disobeyed what Mr. Kim had said or she's just over reacting? Either of the two, she was just hoping that Mr. Kim will not kill her, literally.

 

"Eunbi ah? Are you ready?" Umji asked while combing her hair. Her parents are expected to be at the restaurant in an hour. Sinb, who was fidgeting with her fingers while sitting on the bed looked up to Umji. " Yewon ah.. I-I don't think I am ready to see your parents." She carefully said. "I- what if they nag about our fake relationship?" She continued as the younger stare at her. "Is it really the reason or you're just scared of my father?" Umji teased which earned Sinb's glare. "Fine, I'm sorry." She chuckled. "But no, we can't do that. My father will surely get mad for real if you won't show yourself."

She continued as she stand up and made her way towards Sinb. She ask for the older's hand which Sinb gladly accept as the younger pulled it to make her stand. She smiled as Umji wrapped her arms around Sinb's waist and place her head on her chest. "You don't have to be scared Eunbi

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~