Chapter IV

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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For the first time in Sinb's whole life, she wished and prayed for the time to stop, or to at least slow down. She had been trying her best to forget about the upcoming meeting with the Kim's but Eunha, together with her girlfriend Sojung keeps on reminding her about it. Not to mention her childish father too. And now, the time has come. She wasn't able to get a proper sleep last night because of how nervous she was. She surely wants to meet her friend but knowing that Umji's parents will be there too, her frantic heart couldn't even calm down. Her brand new smartphone started ringing. She look at the caller ID and swallowed a big lump of an invisible saliva (eh? Whatever. Lol) as she answered her mother's call. "Hello? Mom?" She nervously started. "We're on our way now. Where are you? Your girlfriend's father doesn't like waiting. I don't want them to keep waiting for you." Her mother stated. She slapped her own forehead. Even her mother believed to those rumors? She's surely finding her family's reactions weird. Instead of a cold treatment from her, she just reminded her about their dinner later casually. And she even addressed Umji as her girlfriend. "For the nth time, Mom! She's not my girlfriend! And how in the world did you know that her father doesn't like waiting?!" She questioned, annoyed."Everyone doesn't like waiting honey, I'll see you later~ Drive safely, okay!" Her mother then hung up.

 

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Sinb was nervously sitting on a restaurant with her mother and father in front of her. She'll meet Umji anytime soon with her parents. "Don't be nervous honey, I'm sure Mr Kim won't eat you." Her mother reassured her. Minutes later, her father excused himself to answer an important call. Due to her nervousness, she kept on drinking water which causes for her bladder to be full. She excuse herself and goes to the restroom. After using the restroom she went out and saw her father standing not so far from where she is. It's not her intention to eavesdrop but her curious mind force her to listen to her father's conversation.

"I just need to confirm her true relationship with this rumored girlfriend of hers. If the girl will say it directly to me that they weren't really in a relationship, then let's start talking ab

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~