Chapter V part II

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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Continuation

 

The two were walking down the stairs when Umji noticed that the television is on. She stop walking and Eunbi does too. "I thought you're living alone?" She ask and Sinb just shrug her shoulder. "I am. It must be my shorty friend. She likes to go here when it's weekend." She replied which earns Umji's knitted eyebrows. "She knows your passcode?" She asked again as they started walking again. The older of the two just laugh, not even bothering to answer Umji's question. As they reach the end of the stairs, they both saw Eunha and Sojung cuddling. Sinb cleared  to divert the attention of the two to her. "Too early huh? What's up lovers?" She started, the two fix their position and Eunha's eyes sparkled seeing the girl beside Sinb. "Omo! She's so cute!" The bunny squealed while Sinb just simply hide Umji on her back possessively. "Back off Jung." She warned. They started walking again and Sinb guided Umji to sit on the couch. She make sure that she was sitting between the bunny and her friend. Sinb introduced Umji to her friends. She didn't tell that their relationship is only for show because she knows how Sojung hate lying and Eunha's mouth is sometimes uncontrollable. After the introduction, Eunha decided to cook breakfast for them since she's good at that. While in the middle of having their dessert, Eunha's phone light up. It was a notification from their school's website. She opened it and read the content.

 

Anonymous posted:

I was walking last night on the street near Hwang Eunbi's apartment and guess what I saw!! Eunbi was hugging an unknown girl but based on the girl's hair color, I realized that she was the same girl on those leaked photos. Hwang Eunbi's girlfriend is in Korea!! She was dropped by Director Yul's personal driver and what's more cool is that, it seems like she stayed with Eunbi last night. She must be so lucky T.T I envied her huhu.. Here's some photos as a proof.

Eunha reads loudly and look at the photos. Eunbi who heard it check the school's website on her own phone. Seeing the photos just ruined her mood. She was irritated of those people who kept on talking about her. She just want to live peacefully and have her own privacy but those people are surely not giving it to her. Umji who saw the photos also is just sitting silently. "I-i'm sorry if you have to see this, when you just came to Korea." Sinb uttered. "I'll fix this soon, don't worry okay?" She continued as she held the younger's hand. "It's fine Sinb ah. I just didn't expect that it was that big of a deal for them." She smiled to Sinb knowing that the latter is bothered about it. 

 

After eating, Sinb decided to accompany Umji to the mall since the latter need to buy necessities for herself. After buying all her needs, Umji was supposed to give her credit card to the cashier but Sinb was fast and she gave hers instead. "I got it." She simply said and smile to Umji. The latter protested but Sinb just simply said that since Umji is staying at her apartment, she was her responsibility. Sinb then decided to buy some groceries also. And as they were having their lunch, Umji's phone rang. Her father was calling. Sinb who was blabbering about how her father always about Umji suddenly became silent. "Hello, dad?" She started, she put the call on loudspeaker so that Sinb would hear their conversations. "Did Mr. Yul's driver fetch you? Where are you?" He asked with his strict voice wh

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~