Chapter V Part I

Exposed: Secretly Dating
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"Pretend to be my girlfriend, Yewon ah.." She said while looking directly into Umji's eyes. She grew uncomfortable as seconds passed because of Umji's lack of response. She laugh awkwardly. "I-it's okay. I shouldn't have asked you that." She said and rub her nape due to embarrassment. "I think I'll just ask my friend for a he.." "Let's do it." Umji cut her off which earned Sinb's wide eyes. "Re-really?" She asked. "I actually came here to korea not just to met your parents Eunbi. I am going to study here." Umji said while standing up to sit properly beside Sinb. "Oh. Have you decided any University to study? She asked while Umji's hair. The latter laid her head on Sinb's shoulder due to sleepiness. " Not yet. I might consider going to your school instead. Since your father stayed there most of the time, it would be easy for us to show him that we're really in a relationship. A fake relationship. " Umji giggled at her own remark. "I was supposed to ask you that." Sinb looked at Umji and smiled when she saw the latter with her eyes close. She stood up and carefully lift Umji bridal style. The latter was slightly taken aback but she just let the older one since she was really tired and the jet lag was slowly kicking in. Sinb place her carefully on her bed. Her apartment has two rooms but she wouldn't let the latter to sleep alone. (Excuses, lol.) She lay down beside her and fix their blanket. Umji scooted closer to her and place her head on Sinb's chest. The older one automatically wrapped her arms around Umji's waist. "Goodnight, Umji." She said and Umji just hummed.

 

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The next day.

 

It was a hobby of Eunha to just barge in to Sinb's apartment, since the latter gave her the pincode on her door. And today was no different. She decided to go to her friend's house with her girlfriend Sojung. "Do you think she's still sleeping?" The taller of the two asked. "Maybe. It's weekend, she would normally woke up around 9 am." She said and slowly opened the door. They went inside and the bunny place her bag on the coffee table. Sojung sat on the couch but had her eyebrows raised when she saw an unfamiliar smartphone on the table beside her girlfriend's bag. "Do you think she bought a new phone? It was the same model of the phone she just bought but I'm pretty sure it's black." She held the phone and showed it to Eunha. "Isn't that black?" Eunha asked as she walk closely to Sojung. "Nope this is a deep colore

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Thinking of starting a twitter au but wondering if readers will support it at the same time.

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Inhann
#1
Chapter 11: Still hoping for an update TT
Kang_Seungmin1997 #2
Chapter 11: Ohweeeeeeee Yewon must've had a bad relationship before its sad but im glad that Eunbi is already there to assure her though...

My question might be rude to ask but I'll ask it anyways hehe will ypu be continuing this story? Umb stories are pretty hard to find eh and yours is progressing good and it does also have a good plot, im hoping for it to continue but if not then its fine you also do have other priorities in life and im totally fine with it, thank you!
MAYDAYY11
#3
Chapter 11: I wandered into this UmB AU and I just- I’m so soft uwu I just- AN UMB AU! My rare-pair is hard to find and it’s so sad ;u; This was super cute, the interactions they have with each other just make me D’AWWWW! I enjoy the fake lovers AU and to see it with UmB is AMAZING HUHUHU MY BOI. THIS IS GREAT.

Though points of improvement! Spacing. Most of the story is huge blocks of text that I sometimes find hard to read because I get lost HAHAHA Another thing is the grammar. Things like a sentence wandering into past tense when it should be in present or future present tense- Yeah I’ll stop there with the technical terms HAHAHA But ya get me right? Tense’s are important. For example in the last paragraph of this chapter- “and wiped the lone tear that HAD fallen from her eye.” That’s only one example but you do tend to be careless with that. There’s also the ellipsis, which should be three dots not two lmao Off the top of my head these are your most obvious mistakes.

I hope this helped? It’s honestly a really good story imo. If you don’t mind the mistakes it’s a really enjoyable concept and a wonderful story! I REALLY REALLY LOVE the fake lovers AU and UmB is one of my faves ;u; I’m glad I was able to read it! Even if you discontinue this author-nim, I hope the criticism helps you in your future endeavours!
TongdariTtororong #4
Chapter 11: I need an update ??
ohairiyu
#5
Chapter 11: update please ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Slowhands
#6
Chapter 11: Update please :(
Hwang_Eunbi #7
Still waiting:((
ohairiyu
#8
Chapter 11: still waiting for the date authornim ㅠㅠㅠ hope youre still there!
BuddyBunBun
#9
Chapter 11: ur stories are great author~nim. I hope you can update soon~~