Chapter Seven

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
End of Term

The entire week has been a tense one as the hours tick down to the final match of the season. If Gryffindor wins, it will be their first Cup victory in years. if they don't, they'll be stuck in second, a fate that is apparently worse than death if the attitudes of the team and most of the older students are anything to go by.

His dorm mates are antsy as well. Even Remi is oddly less destructive than normal, swapping his usual shenanigans in favor of worrying a dent into the floor with his pacing.

"Laurel has done pretty awesome things with the team this year and Hufflepuff isn't great, but Lola has proven to be a fantastic Seeker. She's caught the Snitch in both of her games this year which means we need to bank on being two hundred and fifty points ahead of them, and I don't think we can rely on an ice storm to help us with that like it did with Slytherin." Charlie has been obsessing over strategies and player proficiency for the entire week. Myr probably knows the save-miss ratios of each of the house teams' Keepers better than he does the recipes for any of the potions he'll need for the final exam.

"But Poole has been doing really well so I don't think it's fair to completely count him out." Remi points out, still pacing the length of the dorm. He and Charlie have formed a temporary bond through worrying about the Quidditch Cup, which Myr figures is the one good thing to come out of everyone going crazy over the match. "But I see your points about Abbott. Your brother is going to have to up his game - Smith and Warren are carrying the Chasers."

Charlie bristles slightly. "Laurel pressured him into it to start with! And he's perfectly fine, meanwhile Kent's save ratio is only a bit better than the Heartwell! Maybe he should work on that."

Remi shakes his head. "Sylvester does fine considering he's only fourth year. And as you pointed out he has a higher ratio than the Hufflepuff Keeper so what does it matter? He'll save more goals than she will."

"But if his ratio was significantly higher there wouldn't be so much pressure on the Chasers." Evera points out from where she's sitting cross-legged on Drake's bed, utterly failing to defend her older brother. She's become a near-constant fixture in the boys' dorm room after classes, joining in on the Quidditch chatter eagerly.

Drake himself is sitting next to his friend, his legs resting underneath the bed and remaining as quiet as Myr is. Though Myr is certain Drake knows as much about statistics as he does at this point, he's been oddly silent in the lead up to the final match. Especially considering Drake usually never shuts up about anything.

Charlie nods aggressively, pointing at Evera in solidarity. "Exactly! The Keeper needs to do his job as much as the Chasers do! Can't put everything on one person after all."

Remi rolls his eyes. "Oh let's be honest, if we knew for certain Poole was going to catch the snitch we wouldn't be so worried. The Seeker is the most important member of any team." He scoffs.

Drake clears his throat. "Abbott caught the snitch in the Slytherin-Hufflepuff match and they still lost by almost two hundred points." He points out. Next to Myr, Owen stretches, emitting a squeaking sound as he does. Evera melts.

"Aww, I think kitty agrees with you Drake!" She shifts her position so she's braced on her hands and knees on Drake's bed so she can lean across the gap and scratch Owen's neck just where he likes it.

"You girls spoil him way too much." Myr notes idly. He's kept a much closer eye on his kitten since the Training Grounds Tower incident, which has led to the girls spending a lot more time with him to coo over the black disaster. Even Nabila is speaking with him more openly than usual - as it turns out she's a major er for animals.

Drake grins. "Well that settles it then, Owen is clearly the most knowledgeable about Quidditch after all."

This gets the group laughing, the earlier tensions dissipating somewhat just in time for Brandon to bound in, arms laden down with snacks.

"Aw man, what'd I miss?"

"The great Quidditch master Owen declared that Seekers aren't the most important part of the team." Evera pipes up helpfully, and Brandon grins and leans over to affectionately rub the kitten between the ears, earning a particularly loud purr.

"Well if the great Quidditch master Owen says so, who am I to disagree?" He foregoes his own bunk and drops his pile of food on top of Charlie's bed, which is closer to the door, and sits beside it. "Cauldron cake anyone?"

Drake and Evera both raise their hands and the next few minutes are passed with Brandon tossing food towards whoever requests it and said requester trying to snag it before it flies past them and to the other side of the room.

Once the final bits of food have been distributed they fall back to Quidditch talk, as is the new norm for the week. Myr mostly keeps quiet as despite his ever increasing knowledge of the game - he's been reading up on it since deciding he wants to try out - he's still not quite as passionate as many of his dorm mates. He thinks he'll like it a bit more when he's the one playing rather than simply spectating the sport.

The debate continues through dinner and long into the night, until one of the prefects checks in and unceremoniously banishes Evera to the girls' dormitories. With her gone, the boys begin changing for bed, moving from their clump around Charlie's bed back to their own bunks.

Myr doesn't sleep very well that night due to Charlie, Remi, and Drake all whisper-arguing about Quidditch until well past midnight. He does eventually snag a few hours sleep, and as he stumbles, sleep deprived, down to breakfast the next morning he resolves to use their two free periods to nap before potions.

Remi ends up depriving him of this.

"Myr! Hey, so turns out I totally forgot about our Potions essay that was due today so is there any chance I could copy yours?"

Myr honestly contemplates punching Remi in the face for all of two seconds, which is far longer than he'd normally entertain such thoughts, before he simply sighs and grumbles.

"I'm not letting you copy because we'll both fail then. But I can help tutor you I guess. We have two hours."

They're the most miserable two hours of his life, and if it wasn't for the fact Snape would almost certainly take points off of Gryffindor for Remi's stupidity Myr wouldn't have bothered at all. As it is Gryffindor has been upping its game to try and edge Hufflepuff out for third place in the House Cup race so he does his best to deal.

Remi's final product is sub par at best but Myr has long stopped caring about quality when it comes to his loudest roommate. Having anything at all to turn in is a rare occasion with Remi as is.

Potions is as long and disheartening as it ever is, though Myr and Holly manage to avoid Snape's usual verbal assaults as they actually complete their potion correctly and with no fuss. Lunch goes by in a blur of sleepiness and Defense Against the Dark Arts is much the same. Thankfully Professor Whits is reviewing their midterm material so Myr doesn't have to attempt any practical spells. He's certain in his state he'd just blow something up, Remi style.

After class lets out he heads straight back to the dorms and immediately flings himself onto his bed, intent on sleeping until dinner.

He wakes up to the smell of turkey and hushed voices.

"Shouldn't we just let him sleep? He's been out of it all day, it's probably good for him."

"Mum says three meals a day are vital. We'll just wake him long enough to eat then we'll let him rest."

Myr recognizes both voices, but in his sleepy haze he can't quite make out who they belong to. Blearily he forces his eyes open and rolls over in his bed.

"Hello?" His voice rasps a bit and he blinks and clears it. "I smell food."

"You missed dinner."

Ah, that's Holly. She sounds amused, and he sits up as she plops down on his comforter.

"I guess Charlie wins. Here, we brought you a plate, then we'll let you sleep again. Don't want to sleep through tomorrow's match after all!" She grins, and Myr quietly accepts the offered dinner.

Charlie sits across from Holly and shoots his own grin at Myr. "We'll keep it down tonight. Sorry for keeping you up so late. I didn't realize you don't function well on low sleep."

"Been up late a lot this week, it's probably just catching up with me." Myr admits as he eats.

Holly grins sympathetically. "Well I'll keep the boys in the common room tonight so you can rest up." She takes his finished plate and hooks her arm around Charlie's, pulling him out of the room.

"Come on, you can tell me about dragons."

Myr grins to himself as he settles back into the sheets, quickly drifting back to sleep.

He's glad for the long rest - the game is intense and it would have been horrid to be half asleep throughout it.

Bill Weasley swoops a mere half meter over Myr's head, racing after one of the Hufflepuff chasers. Myr yelps as a foot brushes dangerously close to his nose and he jumps backwards into Drake, who laughs and helps him regain his balance.

Myr shouts a quick thanks over the roar of the crowd before looking back to the players over their heads.

Being an observer isn't as fun as being in the air himself, but this particular match is more charged than the rest. If Laurel's team can win by a hundred points the house will win the Quidditch Cup for the first time in five years.

The team is playing better than they have all season, but it's clear Hufflepuff has been training as well - they're refusing to make things easy for the lions. Their seeker Lola especially has been flying circles around Patrick Poole, initiating a game of cat-and-mouse between the two seekers.

In the goalposts Kent is maintaining razor focus. He's still the weakest member of the team, having lost fourteen goals already, but he's blocked nearly two dozen which is an improvement, as Evera notes proudly during a momentary lull in the crowd's screaming.

"And Warren scores on Heartwell. Come on badgers, put up a fight!"

"Mr. Avery!"

The announcer has been aggressively anti-Gryffindor as he always is, having twice already encouraged violence and repeatedly berating any Hufflepuff players who are outflown by a Gryffindor.

Heartwell's eyes don't leave the field, but Myr swears he sees the slim ravenette shoot a two finger salute towards the announcer's booth.

Brandon spots it as well and he looks impressed.

"There's a lady after my own heart." He jokes to Charlie, who glances over at him in confusion, having missed Heartwell's demonstration.

"She would be." Myr shakes his head before once again looking to the field. He's surprised to see that the Seekers are streaking across the field - he'd thought the crowd would get louder when the snitch was spotted, but apparently it's already at it's maximum volume.

He can't help getting a bit swept up in the moment, leaning forward apprehensively. The score is tied at 140 to 140 so it's very much anyone's game. Whoever makes the catch will win the game and determine the fate of the Cup.

Myr spots movement out of the corner of his eye, but that's the only warning he gets before Laurel Kiddell streaks across the field and expertly fires a bludger at what seems like an impossible angle. The ball rockets across the field and clips the back of Lola's broom - just enough to knock her briefly off balance and give Patrick the opening he needs to pull ahead.

Myr is pretty sure his roommates won't be able to talk for the next several days from how loudly they're screaming.

Lola is attempting to make up the lost ground but it's clear from her face that she's not optimistic.

And then suddenly she's grinning and Myr feels an apprehensive twist in his gut when her legs swing up in a very familiar position. Familiar because he'd seen the Slytherin seeker make the same move in their match against Gryffindor.

In one smooth motion Lola stands up on her broom. The two seekers are only a meter and a half above the ground but Myr knows if she falls it's still going to hurt pretty badly.

Lola seems completely unphased by the threat of bodily harm as she balances on her still speeding broom. One second, two, and then she runs, launching not off her own broom but instead using a foothold on Patrick's to fling herself ahead of him.

The stadium goes dead silent as everyone strains to see what has happened. Lola tumbles to the ground, a sickening thud accompanying the landing and Myr can see her brother wincing in the Hufflepuff stands.

Then she lets out an unearthly shriek and flings up her hand - the Snitch glinting proudly in her outstretched fist.

Hufflepuff explodes, as do Ravenclaw and Slytherin who had both been rooting for the badgers. Lola grins shakily, a trickle of blood making its way down the side of her face.

The Gryffindors however are dead silent. Patrick's expression is a twisted mess of anger, disappointment, and something Myr can't quite name. The rest of the team lands near the grounded seeker, and Laurel places a hand on his shoulder, giving him a brief smile before herding the team back towards the locker rooms.

Gryffindor quickly and quietly evacuate the stands. The taste of defeat is bitter in the air and on the back of Myr's tongue. Some part of him had believed there was no way they'd lose this match. Laurel is a fantastic captain, and the team has been practicing nonstop the past few weeks.

He sighs softly once the first year boys are back in their dorm. Evera and Drake aren't with them, having instead decided to wait for Evera's brother Kent to offer what comfort they can. "Well, there's always next year I suppose. The team can only get better."

Remi slams a fist against the wall. "What was that even? That last move can't have been legal." He growls.

Myr and Charlie exchange tired gazes, not responding. It's certainly been a disappointing day, and neither wants to expend the energy to reign Remi's temper in when both of them feel similarly.

"Next year we'll be on the team." Charlie says tiredly. "And we'll know to look out for Lola's broom hoping."

Myr nods quietly, but he can't help wondering how much worse a loss feels when you're actually on the team. Next year may prove even more exhausting and disheartening if he does make the team.

Winning the Quidditch Cup turns Ravenclaw tower into a permanent party during the last week of classes.

Every time Ana returns to the common room she's greeted by streamers, balloons, and usually a faint hint of alcohol that the older years have hidden around the room. It's all rather childish but she can't help feeling rather proud of the accomplishment herself. Ravenclaw is, after all, often considered the nerdy house that spends all their time in the library, and now they've won the trophy indicating that they're the most athletically capable house this year. It's certainly nothing to turn one's nose up at.

She does wish the celebration would tone down some however, especially as final exams approach.

As it turns out, end of year exams are a bit more hectic than midterm ones, and Ana isn't very pleased with the revelation.

Studying is difficult as they're still learning new things that could be on the exam, so unlike the weeks leading up to winter break which contained material she studied on her own over Christmas she actually still has to pay close attention to her teachers and learn the new material, while additionally reviewing everything they've learned during the year.

Of course, there's an entire week set aside for the exams themselves and Ana has carefully planned out her study schedule so she can minimize the amount of cramming she needs to do. Unfortunately, the Charms final is first thing Monday morning, giving her no extra time to study for it.

At least the rest of the house is similarly frantic, making her feel a bit better that she's not alone in her scheduling conundrums. Amelia has been pushing the limits of the curfew in the library, returning to the dorms with seconds to spare before the prefects begin their rounds. Even Evie is cracking down after a very stern lecture from one of the third years when she overheard Evie complain that no one had time to hang out anymore.

Ana's usual spot behind the restricted section is busier as well, which is rather frustrating as some people don't know how to be quiet. The amount of whispering and giggling she hears when she's trying to study drives her to distraction and she's taken to studying in the Ravenclaw common room most days. It may be more crowded than the library, but at least it's dead silent. She once again is incredibly thankful for her Sorting.

The weekend is an endless flood of frantic revising as the first exams loom ever closer, and even Ana is feeling rather apprehensive about them. While she's certain she'll get an Acceptable on her Charms, she quite wants an Outstanding.

She nearly pulls an all nighter on Sunday but Eric calmly reminds her that sleep is as important to testing well as studying. So she reluctantly trudges up to the dorm where Evie and Amelia are already out cold in their bunks, and she joins them in sleep much faster than she'd expected.

She's glad for it as well when she wakes up the next morning feeling refreshed and more prepared than she had the night before. Eric shoots her a small smile at breakfast and she returns it before refocusing on the textbook lying open in front of her. There's one hour until the Charms exam and she intends to take any time she can to prepare.

The exam goes rather well, and Ana is feeling much better when she exits the examination room three hours later. Her apple's waltz had been a bit stiff, but she feels sure it was enough for an E, especially when compared against Evie or Jerry's disasters. She still has some of Evie's exploded apple in her hair she's pretty sure.

She heads straight for the library to check out a book she'd been eyeing for her potions final, which she has the next day, and is pleasantly surprised to run into Alasdair on her way.

"Hey! Haven't seen you in a few days." She greets with a smile.

He gives her a highly frazzled one in turn. "Yeah, studying is hectic. We've been pulling some pretty late nights studying in the common room."

She knows he's talking about the other Slytherin first years. They're an oddly tight-knit bunch, excluding one blond boy who seems to not get along with anyone regardless, and Ana sometimes wonders what it would be like to actually be able to talk with any of the first year Ravenclaws without developing an annoyance-fueled headache.

"I have as well. I do hope exams in the future won't be this hectic, though I'm not holding my breath on that one." She responds idly.

He nods in response and they walk quietly together the rest of the way to the library. She can feel judgemental eyes following them, as she always does when she's walking with Alasdair, from people of all houses.

It never bothered her before, after all she has better things to do with her time than concern herself with what other people think of her. But for some reason the weight of them is heavier today.

She shakes it off as exhaustion from studying and asks Alasdair if he wants to join her to study for potions.

He declines politely and turns off to head for the Slytherin common rooms, and she heads back for the Ravenclaw Tower, feeling a bit dismissed. She suddenly wonders if not seeing Alasdair recently is as much his fault as it is hers.

She shrugs it off and buries herself in her potions books, determined to do well in her worst subject no matter what Snape may throw at them. He's known for being unfairly brutal and particular with his year-end exams, so she makes sure to revise every potion they've discussed, no matter how briefly, and goes over every ingredient in the textbook even if they never used it or went over it in class.

Sure enough a good third of the ingredients they need to identify in their written paper the next afternoon are ones only found in the books. Ana feels rather certain she'll earn at least an Acceptable, which really is all one can hope for when it comes to Potions.

The practical half of the Potions exam takes two hours, and Ana very nearly mixes up two steps on the forgetfulness potion when Professor Snape stares at her critically for a solid five minutes before moving on to intimidate Fitzwilliam.

Evie is of course absent from most of the test after she managed to melt half her cauldron despite apparently having been doing the potion correctly. Ana is more certain than ever the girl must have come under a curse at some point in her life - no one has luck that horrendous without there being some reason behind it.

The excitable girl is waiting outside when the rest of the first year Ravenclaws depart and she slips back into the dungeon room. Ana wonders briefly what she's doing, and then decides she doesn't honestly care what Evie Jones is up to.

The week blurs together, a mess of studying, stressing, and occasionally sleeping or eating although Ana is rather sure she's lost a few kilos since the start of exams.

Herbology ends up being rather a disaster as it's on the same day as her Transfiguration exam, and she dedicates more study time to the latter rather than the former. This results in her accidentally dropping her puffapod and taking an entire thirty seconds to clear it up as she tries to remember the exact method needed to do so.

She considers it a fair trade off however. The Transfiguration exam goes smoother than any other exam she takes.

The written portion she finishes with twenty minutes to spare, time which she uses to edit her paper to be more eloquently worded, and then she uses the last five minutes to add on a few extra lines with additional information, not really needed but which is pertinent to the subject, that she had read up on in her own time.

The practical portion she completes in ten seconds and she nearly skips out of the examination room, high on the smile and nod she'd received from Professor McGonagall after completing the assigned tasks.

She definitely got an Outstanding, and the thrill of that carries her through the remainder of her exams.

Astronomy goes well enough she thinks, considering it's her worst subject. She actually manages to locate every star requested by Professor Sinestra and she even manages to locate what she believes are the bonus planets in the fifteen minutes she has left once her main chart is completed.

History of Magic proves just as boring in an exam format as it is when pouring monotonously from Professor Binns, and Ana spends an hour of the three hour written exam staring mournfully out the window and wishing she could ask to leave early. However the ghost had made clear that no one could leave until everybody was finished, and Ana was one of only three people to have put their quills down.

She catches Finnigan's gaze for just a moment, and she rolls her eyes slightly, momentarily feeling a kinship with the equally bored boy.

The moment passes swiftly when he ignores her attempt at connection and she remembers why no one ever talks to him. Fitzwilliam spots the exchange and offers a small smile of understanding. Ana returns it briefly before looking back out the window and starting to check off what she needs to do to prepare for the Defense Against the Dark Arts exam that they have first thing the next morning.

Professor Whits has proven to be a highly unpredictable person over the course of the year so Ana settles on going back over everything they've ever discussed just in case.

She's surprised when Fitzwilliam walks over to her when they're finally released from the History room, and even moreso when he asks if she wants to join their study group to go over everything from defense in preparation for the following day's exam.

In the end she agrees to come meet them in the library after lunch, somewhat curious and also thinking that studying with others might have some merit. After all, one should try everything at least once.

She of course still studies on her own before and during lunch and she covers quite a bit of the first section of their textbook before she decides it's time to head over to the library to check out Fitzwilliam's study group.

It's a surprisingly large group, and she decides to sit next to Shaun when she recognizes her potions partner at the edge of the group's claimed table.

He smiles in greeting and scooches his book over so she has room to drop her own armload on the table.

Fitzwilliam smiles and quickly introduces the group, though Ana forgets everyone's names almost as soon as they're said. Jerry and Ftizwilliam are both sitting across from her, so she doubts she'll really be interacting with the kids from the other houses.

The group is alright for about an hour, but Ana soon find herself glancing towards the door every few minutes as she realizes they're behind her in terms of material and she could be getting more done back in her own corner of the Ravenclaw Tower common room.

Shaun notices her distraction and uncertainly taps the table to get her attention.

"Um, Ana? If you wanted to leave you can. Sometimes group work doesn't help and I don't want your grades to suffer because you learn differently than we do." His voice is low and soft as ever, and Ana is grateful for it as the rest of the group doesn't notice the exchange.

She nods thankfully and quietly gathers her things. She's soon back in the common room, poring over her Defense textbook and working on perfecting her wand movement for the few hexes and defensive spells they've covered in the past few months. By the time curfew rolls around she's feeling confident about how her final exam will go.

She exchanges a small nod with Shaun as he and the other two Ravenclaws from the study group enter the common room just as she heads up for the dorms.

As expected, the Defense exam goes well. Her paper is neat and eloquent and though the practical portion isn't quite as flawless as her Transfiguration exam, she accomplishes everything expected of her.

With exams over, all that's left to do is wait for grades to come in, and then the final Feast will occur and it will finally be time to return home.

The entire weekend proves a rather stressful one as the members of the Ravenclaw house await their final grades. People attempt to pack up their things as distraction, Ana included, but the nervous tension remain palpable until breakfast the following Monday, when Professor Flitwick passes out grades to all but the fifth and seventh years, who Ana quietly feels bad for.

She's sitting next to Eric at the table, and he shoots her an evious gaze as her grades are handed to her.

"I already miss getting grades back so quickly." He sighs. "I'll be biting my nails all summer."

Ana smiles sympathetically at him as she unfolds the parchment in her hands - and them immediately forgets about sympathy when she sees the line of Os (and one E but honestly you can't expect more from Potions) in front of her.

"Yes!"

Eric glances down a grins. "Congratulations, looks like you're top of the class again." He compliments her, genuine despite his own voiced frustrations not moments earlier.

Ana beams, hugging the parchment close to her chest to protect it from being stained by the food in front of them. "I suspect so." She agrees happily. "Though it's all for the best. Wouldn't it be embarrassing if the top student wasn't in Ravenclaw?" It isn't really a question - Ana truly believes the answer is a yes, and beyond that she doens't honestly care. She's top of the class, and she fully intends to stay as such for the remaining six years she has.

Hogwarts hasn't turned out so badly after all. Even if it still isn't Durmstrang.

When exams finally finish there's an almost audible rush of relief among the Slytherin first years.

The group of them have been studying relentlessly for their exams, pulling several late nights until Rajani is certain her sleep schedule will remain ruined for most of the summer.

But now the crunch is over and the group is taking full advantage of their newfound freedom.

"See! Look, just past the craggy rocks over there, that's totally a merperson!"

The first year Slytherins have taken complete control of the common room. They've pushed all the chairs and couches over to the wide windows looking out into the lake and are engaged in a game of 'spot the magical creatures and/or the giant squid', something they do a lot during down time.

"No way, that's just seaweed. You need glasses."

"Actually I think she might be right."

Rajani just grins as she watches her friends debate whether Clary should get yet another point, which would officially put her ahead of Eugene who is heavily protesting this turn of events. For her part Rajani doesn't much care about the points, but more about spending time with the people she's come to consider extensions of her family. Especially considering she likely won't be seeing much of them in the coming months.

"Raj, back me up here, that was totally a merperson!" Clary pokes her shoulder imploringly, pulling her out of her reverie.

Rajani can only shrug. "I honestly wasn't paying attention."

Queenie laughs as Clary collapses back onto one of the sofas dramatically. "Rajani Misra, you wound me! Just back me up blindly, that's what roommates are supposed to do!"

"Only against teachers and lions." Rajani quips back cheerfully, which sets off an entirely new debate about when and in what contexts blind defense should be utilized. Rajani does get involved with this particular debate, and she finds herself laughing at some of the logic her friends are employing.

Queenie just shakes her head. "Clary, this is why you're at the bottom of the year." She sighs in mock disappointment.

Clary throws Nia's stuffed black sheep at the other girl's head. The little joke gift has turned into something of a mascot for their friend group and is usually present during their common room hang outs.

Queenie bats it away and Eugene catches it, placing it down on the chair arm beside him. "Now girls, no need to get violent."

Nia grabs the sheep from the chair and places it in her lap. "And no need to bring innocents into it!" She adds with a grin.

The rest of the weekend passes peacefully, and on Sunday afternoon Rajani has her final private flying lessons with Mayra Byrne.

The two have been meeting biweekly since they returned from winter holiday, and Rajani is proud to say that she's definitely shown progress. While Mayra has warned that she's not quite good enough to replace anyone next year, she'll likely be on the field in third or fourth year, and Rajani is content with that.

She's decided to try out for a Chaser position so in recent practices she and Mayra have been using makeshift Quaffles composed of wads of towels and extra sheets to throw around.

"Alright Misra, let's start out with some speed tests." Mayra greets the twelve year old briskly, tossing their practice 'ball' causally between her hands.

Rajani quickly mounts the borrowed school brooms (Mayra turns out to be a favorite of Coach Crowell's so the teen had no trouble gaining access to the broom shed) and launches into the air, hovering less than half a meter from the ground. They usually start with these, and Rajani thinks they're quite useful as warmups.

Mayra pulls out her wand, and with a quick flick the ball fires off across the field.

Rajani shoots off after it, keeping low to the ground and focusing purely on her speed. She overtakes the ball and snags it out of the air before rocketing back to where Mayra is waiting, wand up and a tempus charm glimmering in the air above it.

"Twenty two seconds. You're improving every time." The Irish girl smiles slightly, brushing a black curl out of her face. "Not better than me, or even Taylor, but you're getting there. Keep practicing these over the summer, yeah?"

Rajani nods and dismounts, handing the ball back to Mayra. "Eugene got me a broom for Christmas, so I can use that."

Mayra nods. "Excellent. It's always best to have your own broom to practice with. Honestly the fact they don't let first years bring their own brooms is ridiculous, one always flies best with one's own broom I always say."

Rajani nods respectfully, having heard this particular rant several times before, and waits for Mayra to indicate that they're either moving on or running another speed test.

They continue flying throughout the afternoon, able to stay longer than normal as there's no official Quidditch practices scheduled for the day since the season is over. Rajani wouldn't say that she adores flying around, but there is a sense of accomplishment and satisfaction when she completes a complicated pass or scores a goal - even if the hoops aren't guarded at the moment so it's a bit easier than it would be in a real game.

She returns to the dorms in dire need of a shower, which Clary isn't afraid to loudly announce to the entire common room. Rajani rolls her eyes but does make her way up to the showers - she doesn't much like marinating in her own sweat.

She's dressed and ready to go just in time for dinner and she gladly joins her friends as they head up to the Great Hall.

"Grades are in tomorrow." Queenie remarks. "I'm starting to get a little nervous. What happens if you fail something?"

"I'm sure Clary can tell us." Eugene quips cheerfully, earning a shove from said girl.

"I'm going to pass everything just fine Slughorn." She grumbles, but there's little bite behind it and he grins and slings an arm around her in surrender.

"Sorry, sorry. I'm sure you'll stun us all." He offers. She shoves him again.

Nia leans back to roll her eyes at Rajani around the bickering pair, and she laughs slightly in return. She's definitely going to miss this.

They get their grades back the next day and Rajani is happy enough with her results. They're mostly Acceptables with a few Exceeds Expectations scattered around, but she didn't fail anything which is all she was hoping for.

Clary is proudly shoving her straight 'A's in Eugene's face as the other looks properly admonished. Nia is pestering Elspeth about her potions grade while Queenie is very carefully folding her grade sheet into her bag to prevent wrinkles.

Lenox taps Raj lightly on the shoulder. "How did you do?"

She smiles over at him. "Well enough. Nothing exceptional, but there's always time to improve."

Lenox nods in agreement. "I was hoping for higher grades myself but you're right. OWLs and NEWTs are what really count in the end regardless."

They spend the rest of the day in the common room, comparing grades and teasing each other about any poor marks received. It's comfortable and familiar and Rajani is probably going to miss it when they go home for the summer tomorrow, so for now she engages as much as she can manage, wanting to create memories for the summer.

Then Queenie and Eugene corner her just before they're getting ready to go up to the farewell Feast.

"Hey, so we were talking and we wanted to know if your parents might be interested in possibly having a dinner with ours sometime this summer? Eugene's parents love throwing parties and mine love attending them and since we're friends Eugene says we'll definitely get invites if we want them." She's grinning and there's a trace of excitement underlying her usual cool demeanor.

Rajani smiles at them both in return. "My parents would be thrilled honestly, and I wouldn't mind myself. The manor does get rather monotonous at times."

Eugene grins. "Great! Clary says she'll try to come as well but I guess her parents are a little weird about socializing."

Rajani grins. "With her table manners it might be better if she didn't come." She jokes.

"I heard that and I take offense!" Clary calls from across the room where she's chatting with Finn and Nia. Elspeth is sitting with them as well, but from what Rajani can see the brunette isn't speaking much, not that she ever does.

"Why don't you invite everyone from the class?" She asks, though she's rather sure she knows the answer.

Eugene shifts awkwardly. "You know how parents are about connections and stuff. I mean, Finn was raised by Muggles - I think my mother might faint if he came over from the audacity of it."

Queenie nods quietly. "I mean, obviously he has magic blood somewhere but it's something to ease our parents into." She agrees.

Rajani nods as well. She understands the sentiment of course, though she thinks her mother would actually quite like Finn if she took time to get to know him. He's something of a sweetheart among the staff already and they like to that he's already lined up to be a prefect and then head boy.

"Hey, are you three done scheming? I want to bask in victory as long as possible over here." Nia sounds excited, as they all are. Slytherin had managed to secure the House Cup and the entire great hall will be decorated in silver and green tonight. Nia has been proudly striding around the castle, ignoring any attempts at heckling for once.

Queenie just laughs. "We're coming, calm yourself. We still have ten minutes."

Nia tuts. "Close enough. I want to be the first ones in!"

The whole first year class finds themselves herded out the front door, even a very annoyed Cadfael who had been talking with Alasdair by the unlit fireplace.

They arrive early, as Queenie had predicted, but Professor Snape allows them to enter the Great Hall regardless of some dissent from the Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw heads of house.

Rajani's respect for him grows just a bit right then. Slytherins really do always look after their own.

The Hall is beautiful, with Slytherin banners hanging from every wall space not covered by windows. Candles float in the air, illuminating the space alternately in green, silver, and their usual orange warmth. Directly behind the staff table, a huge silver snake banner sits proudly, and Rajani feels herself swell up slightly. They'd earned this.

The first years crowd their usual spot at the Slytherin table, the hall echoing with their chatter until it's muffled somewhat by the arrival of the rest of the school.

Rajani can't help the smirk that emerges when she spots the Gryffindors looking extremely disgruntled at the other end of the Hall. Not only had Slytherin come out of top, Gryffindor was right at the bottom thanks to their embarrassing Quidditch loss to Hufflepuff a few weeks prior. After all the snide comments they've exchanged it feels rather nice to be quite firmly above them now.

Once everyone has arrived, Dumbledore rises to speak. Rajani hasn't seen much of the headmaster except at meals, but she applauds proudly regardless. Today he'll be honoring her house, and that makes him incredibly important in this moment.

Dumbledore waits a moment to let the applause die before he speaks. "The year has passed, and be it good or bad you have made it to the end! Excellent job!"

Rajani spots Nia rolling her eyes and Clary biting down on a snort in response.

"Tomorrow you will be heading back home for the summer. I'd like to remind all the first years that you are not permitted to use magic outside of school until you are of age, so no one get in trouble over the break!" He pauses to clear his throat. "Finally, I must extend congratulations to The Slytherin House for showing excellent behavior and exceptional magical ability this year, earning them the house cup!"

The Slytherin table erupts in cheers and applause, which the first years happily add to. Once they calm down - and Rajani pointedly ignores the fact the other houses don't even offer polite congratulatory applause - Dumbledore nods.

"Well then, let's eat!"

The food appears on the table, a Feast to rival the one they'd had on that first night.

This one is much better though, Rajani thinks, as Queenie offers her some hot mustard for her salad.

"I'll never understand your love of that stuff." Lenox wrinkles his nose slightly. "It's a bit too bitter for my taste."

She laughs as she mixes a small spoonful of the mustard into her food before returning the bowl to the center of the table. "I don't either truth be told. I tried it thinking it might be spicy, but I ended up still liking the result."

Lenox shrugs. "Well whatever works for you."

It's a lively discussion that follows, and even Alasdair gets involved, as he does when things get really loud with their group. In fact the entire Slytherin table is more animated than Rajani thinks she's ever seen it, and it's a wonderful feeling.

They keep talking on the way back to the common room and they stay hudled around the couches until well after curfew should have sent them to bed. Eventually Sahana comes down and orders them all back to their beds, so the girls say goodnight to the boys and retire to their dorm room.

However almost no sleep happens as they chat away until the water outside the window is tinted pink with the first rays of dawn.

"I'm going to miss you guys." Clary sighs. "I mean, I have other friends obviously but this year has been the best."

Nia glances over, looks like she wants to say something, but then simply nods. "Same here. It's going to be a really long summer. You guys better write more than you did over Winter break." She adds threateningly.

Queenie grins. "I promise as long as you respond."

The two shake on it, and then Clary grabs Queenie's open hand as well as one of Rajani's and begins shaking them as well.

Nia laughs and grabs Elspeth into the group handshake. "It's decided, then, we all have to keep in contact over summer vacation." She says solemnly.

"We'll have to get the boys in on it too, when we go back down." Clary's statement is elongated by the shape of a yawn, and the rest of them follow suit shortly after.

"Agreed." Queenie mumbles. "But maybe we should try to get some rest before the trip."

Rajani curls up tight under her covers after they say their goodnights. She means to memorize the feelings since it's the last time she'll sleep here until September, but she's so exhausted she passes out moments after the comforter settles around her.

Franziska can admit that she tears up a bit when they file out of the castle to head back to the train station. Maybe she has missed home something terrible, especially recently, but she knows she'll miss school something terrible once she's home.

She'll especially miss all her friends who she won't be able to contact because of the distance. That, she thinks, is the worst part about leaving. Everyone has been agreeing to owl one another over the break, but because of the cost of international mail she can't make those same promises or ask anyone else to spend the money to write her.

So she's a bit quiet as they board the train to head back to King's Cross. Her Hufflepuff friends do their best to comfort her, but they're also wrapped up making plans with each other. Eventually Franziska bids them farewell with the excuse that they won't all fit in one car and she wants to see her other friends as well.

She decides the excuse is actually a good idea, and she manages to track down Nabila in one of the cars furthest down the train.

"Hey, mind if I join you?"

Nabila offers a faint smile and shifts over so Franziska can sit beside her.

"We haven't talked in a while, huh? How have you been?" Franziska prompts hopefully, and Nabila nods.

"It's been hectic since break. I'm rather happy to be going home. I miss Ohus terribly."

The name rings a bell but it takes Franziska a moment to place it. "Your pet erumpent, right? I bet he misses you as well."

Nabila smiles wistfully. "Mother says he does. I do wish I was allowed to bring him to school."

Franziska smiles awkwardly. She hadn't known what an erumpent was before Nabila had talked about hers, but upon looking it up she understands completely why he isn't allowed on Hogwarts grounds. "Well, I mean, where would you keep him? Erumpents grow as big as rhinos so he couldn't fit into the dorms."

Nabila sighs. "I know I know. He's still rather small now though."

Franziska pats her arm lightly, but pulls away quickly. Nabila isn't big on physical contact.

The door opens again just before the train starts moving, and Franziska grins brightly when she sees Fitzwilliam standing in the hallway.

"May I come in?"

Both girls nod and Franziska helps him put his trunk on the overhead compartment before he sits down across from them.

"Crazy year huh?" He muses awkwardly after a long moment of silence stretches between them, only broken by the rumbling of the train as it begins its long journey back to London.

Franziska nods. "Definitely. It was rather exciting though, wasn't it? The year seemed to pass by so quickly." She sighs. "I'm half-way sad it's over so soon honestly."

Fitzwilliam glances over at her uncertainly. "Only half?"

She laughs. "Oh well, I am excited to see my parents. I haven't seen them since September last year after all. But I'll miss you guys."

Nabila shrugs. "It's only three months. Not long at all really."

Franziska nods. "True enough." She grins suddenly. "Of course now that you've said that I worry I won't get enough of my family before second year starts!"

Fitzwilliam smiles faintly and Nabila sighs again.

"And I won't get enough time with Ohus." The young Saudi girl grumbles. "He's going to be full grown and off to a reserve before I know it and I'll have missed all of it."

"Why do you have an erumpent for a pet anyway? I thought they were illegal to keep as pets?" Fitzwilliam pipes up a bit uncertainly. "I mean, they are a class four beast..." He shifts awkwardly under Nabila's narrowed gaze.

"My parents got him for me when I was five." She sniffs. "And he's been a dear."

Fitzwilliam doesn't look convinced, but he doesn't dare ask any more questions and risk annoying Nabila further.

"So do you think you'll work with animals in the future Nabila? Maybe in the Beast Division at the Ministry?" Franziska quickly interjects before an awkward silence can fill the car.

Nabila perks up again. "Oh definitely. I don't know exactly what I'd do, but I definitely want to do something with beasts."

"I've heard there's a good higher learning institute for Magizoology studies in France." Fitzwilliam suggests. "You could consider going there - you'd be closer to home as well."

Nabila eyes him uncertainly for a moment, and then she smiles, clearly forgiving him for his earlier slight against her beloved pet.

"Of course you'd suggest more school after graduating Ravenclaw." She teases. "But I have actually thought about it. We'll see what happens - we do still have six years to think about all that."

Franziska is relieved that the awkward moment has passed, and the three fall into more comfortable chatter about magical beasts and which are their favorites. (Talking about animals is really the only way to get Nabila to engage in conversations that doesn't involve pissing her off, which is Brandon's usual technique.)

They eventually get onto exams and their scores. Franziska is rather surprised when they find that Nabila had actually tested better than Fitzwilliam overall, something that clearly bothers the Ravenclaw though he unsuccessfully tries to hide it.

"Cheer up Fitz, you've got six years to outclass me." Nabila offers, though she's sporting a smug grin that detracts somewhat from the attempt at comfort.

For her part Franziska has straight Acceptables and is as such the worst tester of the group. She doens't really mind though. She's just happy to have passed everything.

"Nabila is right! And we'll always have the study group too, that really helped me this year so I bet it will be even better next year!" She encourages her friend, and Fitzwilliam finally smiles.

"That's true. Hey, Nabila, you should join us next year!"

The two spend the next thirty minutes trying to convince Nabila to socialize with them but she resolutely insists her own methods work perfectly well for her, thank you very much. They eventually give, just in time for the trolley come by.

Franziska eagerly orders three chocolate frogs, whispering quiet pleas for new cards as she tears them open.

Nabila gets a Chocolate Frog and a few pumpkin pasties as well but Fitzwilliam passes on any food.

Nabila glances over at Franziska's cards as they eat their sweets. "Say, would you trade me Falco Aesalon for Tilly Toke? I already have her."

Franziska bites her lip. "I dunno, I don't have him yet. Would you take a Manticore instead?"

Nabila chews her lip. "I already have the entire Beast collection."

Fitzwilliam smiles slightly. "Surprising no one."

Nabila tosses the Tilly Toke card in the general direction of his head. "Start your own collection you nerd."

Fitzwilliam fumbles the card and it drops onto the floor. Blushing he quickly retrieves it. He fiddles with it as the girls finish eating and Franziska happily stores her new cards in her trunk for safe keeping.

"Say, are you excited about going home Fitz? You haven't said anything about it yet." She suddenly realizes, turning a warm smile on the male in the compartment.

Fitzwilliam shifts uncertainly. "Well, I suppose so. I haven't seen my parents in a while."

Nabila raises an eyebrow. "Such enthusiasm." She notes. "Not a fan of your parents?"

Fitzwilliam immediately shakes his head. "No! No, I do love them, I think I'm just used to being at school now, that's all." He quickly clarifies.

Franziska nods in understanding. "I get that as well. It will be weird being back in my own room and not in the Hufflepuff dorms."

Fitzwilliam nods in agreement, while Nabila just shrugs.

"I suppose. Personally I'll be glad to have my own room back. Sharing with three other girls is not something I've particularly enjoyed."

Franziska smiles wistfully. "Well I'm going to miss my roommates personally. Jemma is fantastic to talk to when you're lonely or sad, and Kiera and Dora are great fun. And of course Leona always has the newest gossip." She sighs. "I'm really going to miss everyone."

Fitzwilliam half reaches out, as if intending to pat her on the shoulder, but he withdraws before his hand gets very far and he settles for verbal comfort instead. "Well it's only two months before you see them again. And I'm sure Rosalinde will be happy to see you."

Franziska perks up at the mention of her long-time best friend. "That's true! Although," She frowns. "I don't love that I'll have to lie to her about school. She's a Muggle after all, and she'll definitely want to know all the details about my year and I'm not sure I'll be able to lie very convincingly."

Nabila shrugs. "So be vague. You've obviously been lying about your magical powers for years, how different can this be?"

Franziska frowns. "I guess. It feels different though."

Fitzwilliam shifts uncomfortably but doesn't contribute. Luckily for the three, the awkwardness is very abruptly tossed out the window when the compartment door bursts open to admit two blonde girls.

"Frannie! There you are, we've been trying to find you to say bye for hours now!" Kiera complains, tossing herself into the seat next to Franziska.

Dora sits next to Fitzwilliam, who is clearly uncomfortable with the turn of events, and he becomes even more tense when his new seatmate's hair turns bright red. "You just ran off without a word Fran, what's up with that?" She accuses, though with no malice.

Franziska smiles apologetically. "I did, just maybe too quietly for you to hear." She admits. "I wanted to see these guys before I left for two months"

Dora looks over at Fitzwilliam. "Fair enough. Hi, I'm Dora!" She promptly sticks her hand out to Fitzwilliam, who simply nods in return.

"Fitzwilliam Selwyn." He responds, and Dora frowns as she takes her hand back.

"And this is Nabila." Franziska introduces the other girl before Dora can say anything that might upset Fitzwilliam.

Dora turns her attention to the Saudi girl. "Hey. Gryffindor right?" She grins. "I think we met out in the forest over Easter break!"

Nabila nods. "That's possible. I was hoping to catch a glimpse of a Unicorn, I hear there's a small herd that lives there."

Franziska gazes at her friend with a mixture of shock and dismay. "Nabila I thought you were one of the sensible Gryffindors." She stutters out. "Why would you go breaking rules like that?"

Nabila raises an eyebrow at her. "I wanted to see a Unicorn." She responds, as if that answers everything.

Dora laughs. "I like this girl!" She declares happily, nudging Fitzwilliam with an elbow. He retreats quickly away from the contact, sliding down the seat so he's centimeters away from the window.

Dora gives him another look and again Franziska hurries to intervene. "So what are you two doing over the summer vacation?"

This successfully distracts the group for another two hours as Dora and Kiera happily share their plans.

"I'm going to visit Kiera's family's farm and learn about farm work." Dora grins. "We organized it all during the past few weeks so mum has already okayed it."

"July eighteenth!" Kiera agrees excitedly. "My pa is excited to show off the family business, he says he hopes you did well in Herbology."

Dora looks exaggeratedly horrified. "And if I got a Troll?"

Kiera mimes throwing something at her best friend and both girls start giggling incessantly.

Nabila shakes her head and Fitzwilliam looks extremely confused by the turn of events while Franziska just grins at the familiar shenanigans.

The rest of the ride is spent with Dora and Kiera sharing amusing anecdotes from the year as well as from their childhoods. Franziska offers a few tales herself though she ends up spending most of her stories explaining Muggle concepts to the other four, who she belatedly realizes all grew up in the Wizarding world and are unfamiliar with a lot of the things she grew up taking for granted.

Halfway through attempting to explain how exactly an air conditioner works Franziska realizes that it's getting quite dark outside the carriage, and they must almost be back to King's Cross. The knowledge that she's going to be saying goodbye for the next three months suddenly comes crashing back into the forefront of her mind, and her explanation falters as she gazes out the window.

Kiera pokes her. "Um, Frannie? You okay?"

Franziska blinks. "Oh, um, yeah. I guess I didn't realize how close we were getting." She grins but it feels strained even to her.

Fitzwilliam glances out the window as well and frowns. "Me neither." He mumbles.

Kiera on the other hand perks up. "Oh awesome! I can't wait to see pa!" She grins, eyes bright. "You guys should come say hello! Maybe you can visit the farm sometime!"

Fitzwilliam mumbles something about being allergic to farms, but it's mostly lost under Nabila's surprisingly loud agreement to the suggestion.

"You have animals, right?" She double checks. At Kiera's nod, she gives a small smile. "Then I'd love to take you up on that offer."

"I can't." Franziska frowns. "International travel is really complicated."

Kiera pouts. "Aw, are you sure? You could come at the end of the summer and go straight to school with me!"

Franziska rolls the idea round in her head. It's certainly viable, but she's not sure her parents would go for it. But still.

"I'll ask my mom." She promises, which earns a beaming smile from the curly-haired blonde next to her.

"Excellent! It's settled then. Owl me as soon as you know, okay?"

Franziska nods and Kiera goes back to discussing details about how Nabila could come visit as well. As the train pulls into the station Kiera and Dora have to run out of the car to retrieve their trunks from further down the train while the other three carefully get their own trunks down from overhead.

Franziska spots her mother almost immediately, and she waves goodbye to everyone she can see as she makes her way over.

"Lida!"

Franziska finds herself grabbed into a tight hug, and she drops her trunk to return it.

"Hi mom. I missed you."

Pannidda Reinhardt pulls back to smile down at her daughter.

"So how was your year Lida?"

Franziska looks down, her mind racing through laughing in the Great Hall with Jemma, chatting with Holly during flying lessons, and throwing snowballs with Nabila and Brandon over Christmas.

Finally she looks back up at her mother and grins. "It was pretty good."

 

HAPPY NEW YEAR! Thank you all for being amazing readers, and a special mention for everyone who has left a comment, you guys really give me the confidence to keep writing and doing my best to improve and bring you quality content ^^ I hope you'll stick with me and the kids as they continue their adventures through the next six years.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2492 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2492 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2492 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!