Chapter Eleven

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Discoveries

Sleeping past seven AM the Sunday the tryout results go up is an absolutely impossible task in the Gryffindor Tower. People are up by six, pounding down the stairwells and waking up anyone unfortunate enough to have a bed near their room's door.

A bed that Myr happened to occupy in the second year dorm.

"Good morning sunshine." Charlie Weasley is already up and entirely too chipper in Myr's humble opinion as the Welsh boy struggles to untangle himself from his sheets. "Ready for the big reveal?"

"Ready to cry when you lose out to my awesomeness?" Remi counters from his bed across the room, where he's already dressed and ready to go.

"Patrick is still going to be the Seeker guys, best you'll get is reserves." Brandon grumbles. "Now wouldya keep it down I'm trying to sleep." He rolls over in bed and pulls the pillow over his head pointedly.

Charlie laughs. "Sleep trumps Quidditch. Duly noted." He grins down at Myr. "How about you?"

Myr slings his legs over the side of the bed. "Well I'm up anyway. May as well go see what the fuss is about."

Drake grins, appearing beside Charlie as if by apparation. "That's the spirit! Meet you down there!"

Myr dresses in a sleepy haze and follows his roommates down to the common room, which is already crowded with almost everyone else who had tried out on Monday.

For the most part people are slumping off to the couches in disappointment, but a few of the lucky ones are hugging their friends or jumping around the common room in excitement. Among the celebrators are Charlie and Fiona, while Remi and Evera are both pouting on the couch with a somewhat put-out Drake beside them.

Fiona spots Myr first and waves him over excitedly. "Myr! Come see, you made reserves!"

Myr picks his way over to the notice board, and sure enough he's listed at the bottom with five other reserve players, one of whom is Fiona. However Myr is surprised to see another second year listed in the reserves who isn't Charlie.

"Wait, if Remi is the reserve Seeker why is Charlie..." He trails off when he sees Fiona grinning and pointing higher up on the team roster, where Charlie is listed as the primary Seeker for the team.

Myr takes a moment to process before he turns in confusion towards Charlie. "What happened to Patrick?"

Charlie shrugs. "Maybe he's focusing on school this year? I dunno, you'd have to ask him or Laurel." He then returns to dancing around the common room rather obnoxiously while Remi sinks further down into the couch, glaring at the fireplace and refusing to look at Charlie.

"Bit of a sore winner." Myr comments, looking again at the team list. "Hey, you're reserve for both Keeper and Beater? Good job!"

Fiona just shrugs modestly. "Gives me more of a chance at getting on the pitch sooner, right? Maybe we'll get to be beaters together!"

Myr grins over at her. "Sounds like fun." He looks one more time at his name on the list, and then walks over to join the three on the couch.

"Congrats." Evera sighs when he sits beside her. "But next year for sure you guys will be eating my dust."

"I'm sure." Myr replies honestly. "It was tough competition this year, but a lot of the spots will be opening up in the next two years as people graduate. No way you won't make the team soon."

Evera just sighs again.

"Rough luck little sister." Kent drops down beside them a moment later, tossing an arm around the back of the couch and looking rather like he's not sorry at all. "There's always next year, though Patrick was really the only seventh year and since he apparently left there probably won't be any spots next-" He gets effectively cut off by a sharp elbow to the gut by Drake. Rubbing his stomach and glaring he puts his other hand up in defeat. "Oh alright I'm sorry. I'm sure you'll do fine." He mumbles something else to himself but Myr can't hear it.

"First practice is this Thursday." Laurel's voice rises above the cacophony of mixed excitement and disappointment filling the common room, and everyone pauses their conversations to look over at the team captain, who's standing in the stairwell leading to the girls' rooms. "Eighteen hundred sharp. Anyone who's late will be replaced so look lively. Congratulations to everyone who made it. Now all of you can shut up and keep it down so the rest of us can actually use our sleep in." With that she's vanished back up the stairs.

There's a long moment of silence, but it fills up rather quickly, if not as loudly as before.

"Do reserves have to go to practice?" Myr leans over so he can ask Kent around Evera and Drake.

The Keeper nods. "Yeah. You guys will do warm ups with us and Laurel will usually set you to do some exercises on your own while she works with us. Sometimes you'll sub in but it's pretty rare."

Myr nods. It makes sense that as a reserve he won't really get to practice as much since he probably won't be playing at all during the year, but he's glad he'll still get to be involved somewhat, even if not as much as he'd hoped.

He ends up a bit less enthused when the first practice actually rolls around however. The warm ups prior to the tryouts were easy compared to what Laurel actually puts the team through when they all arrive at the pitch Thursday afternoon.

"Come on people, move it! Cardio won't kill you!" Laurel is jogging backwards nearly two meters in front of the group, shouting what Myr assumes she thinks are encouragements but aren't doing much in the way of making him feel any better about the whole situation.

He is somewhat proud of the fact he's somewhere in the middle of the group rather than at the back. He's never thought of himself as particularly athletic, so the fact he's not struggling quite as much as some of the others is a slight ego boost.

Eventually they complete their three laps of the pitch and Laurel leads them in a few stretches before they begin some stationary exercises.

Halfway through their second set of squats, Remi falls over. "Can I have water?" He requests hopefully from the ground.

Laurel pauses, thinks, and then reluctantly nods. "Right, it is only the first practice for some of you. Alright, take a water break and then we'll get in the air. But next week we're getting through the whole routine, so drink your water before or keep it on hand." He tone is sharp, and the group moves quickly so at to not further irk her.

The primary team takes to the air afterwards, and Myr waves to Charlie as the latter takes off. They'd been ribbing him about 'representing the second years' all week, but as Myr watches the team do a series of aerial maneuvers he can't help but be impressed. Charlie would definitely be doing them proud from the looks of things.

His attention is pulled away from the group in the air when one of the older reserve players clears his throat.

"Alright you three, you're new, so today we'll go easy, but in the future know that I can be as much of a hard as Laurel." The boy in front of them, a fifth year Myr thinks but he isn't quite sure, is rather short, with dark hair and mocha-colored skin that Myr guiltily thinks is the main reason he recognizes the boy  at all. "My name is Connor, and I'll be keeping you all in shape in the case of one of our teammates getting hurt or otherwise disqualified from playing a match."

The other reserve player that Myr doesn't know, a willowy blonde who definitely does not look like she'd be much good on a broom, claps her hands together cheerfully. "Oh don't freak them out this soon Con, that's not very nice." She turns to the three second years and beams. "I'm Rosie, I'm a reserve Chaser and Connor here is as well." She smiles warmly again. "Why don't you three introduce yourselves? We're going to be spending a lot of time together this year after all!"

Once introductions are over, Connor gets them up onto their brooms, though they stay well below the main team's practice. They do a few laps and work on balancing, which proves much harder to do when only using their leg muscles.

"And that's why we never skip leg day." Connor grins after Remi falls off for the sixth time. None of them are having great luck with their balance, though Fiona is definitely the best, having only fallen twice so far. "Laurel will get you three in shape in no time though, and I'd recommend doing some of the squat exercises in your dorm rooms during the week whenever you have time. It helps a ton - just ask Kent."

Rosie rolls her eyes and Myr figures there's a story behind the comment that he doesn't know about. Fiona's giggling supports his suspicions as well.

"Alright, that's enough of that for now. Let's do some speed work, shall we?" Connor decides abruptly, dropping one hand to the broom and waiting for Remi to clamber back onto his before explaining the new task.

"We'll be racing across the pitch. Yes it seems rather easy on the surface, but as you get better at balancing we'll stop holding onto the broom." He grins at the faint nervousness all three of the second years show at the warning. "That won't be for a while though. We can only do so much this low, but being able to increase speed rapidly at a steady altitude is a useful skill in and of itself. Rosie, would you like to demonstrate?"

The blonde girl smiles brightly and flies over so she's hovering next to Connor.

"Alright, go!"

Myr blinks and Rosie is already halfway across the pitch, leaning low over the handle of her broom with her long hair whipping back behind her. She's back beside Connor within five seconds, smiling as carefree as she had been before.

The three second years exchange glances, and then Remi, predictably, pulls up next to Connor.

"That was nothing! I'll do better!"

Connor laughs. "Kid, Rosie's set world records on her broom, no one expects you to beat her."

"Why are you only on reserves then?" Fiona pipes up curiously as Remi takes off across the pitch.

Rosie grins, a faint blush staining her cheeks. "I can't catch the Quaffle. Total butterfingers. I'm going to stick with racing I think, and eventually I hope to carve brooms with the Nimbus Racing Broom Company."

Fiona smiles back. "That's really cool! I have no idea what I want to do."

"Well we're only twelve." Myr points out as Remi makes his turn at the far end of the pitch. "I don't think we need to know yet."

"To be fair Rosie's known since she was seven and got on a broom for the first time." Connor observes, his eyes never leaving Remi as the latter flies back to them. "She's one of the lucky ones who's path is super obvious. I have no idea what I'm doing."

Remi's lap finishes at twenty three seconds, and Connor waves Myr over to do his lap next.

Myr leans low over his broom, excitement sparking through his chest. He hadn't gone as fast as he had during their races the year before in flying class, and he's looking forward to going all out now. As soon as he hears Connor say 'go' he takes off, practically flat against his broomstick.

Everything falls away but the broom and the pitch, and Myr lets himself really get lost in the feeling of flying. He briefly considers slowing down to make the turn at the end of the pitch, but instead he pulls a hairpin turn that sends him skidding a bit to the right. He course corrects and he shoots back towards the other reserve players and he nearly falls off his broom after he has to pull up abruptly so he doesn't slam into Fiona.

Connor raises an eyebrow. "Seventeen seconds. Not bad for a newbie. Alright Fi, let's see what you've got."

As Fiona takes off, Myr takes a moment to reorient himself. Once he does he finds Rosie grinning at him unnervingly.

"Um, hey?"

She giggles. "Sorry, you're quite fast. Have you considered Quidditch or racing as a profession? Just thinking about what we were talking about before."

Myr shrugs. "Maybe. My sister wants to go into politics so I might look into that, but I haven't really thought too much about it."

"I'm going to be a professional Quidditch player!" Remi butts in loudly. "I want to fly for Puddlemere United."

Connor gives a slight side-eye towards Remi from where he's still timing Fiona's lap. "That's a pretty elitist team, they only accept the best. You'll need to get off reserves for that, and no offense but I don't see that happening if you stick with being a Seeker. Bill's little brother has that spot locked in."

Remi glares mutely, and Myr is grateful that Fiona returns moments later.

"Twenty eight seconds. We'll work on it." Connor declares. "Alright, moving on for now, I want to get through all our exercises today."

They spend the remaining fifteen minutes of practice playing what essentially boils down to monkey in the middle, tossing a Quaffle around and trying to keep it away from whoever is closest to them, forcing long passes and plenty of attempted interceptions.

Myr has to admit it's pretty fun, especially when he manages to block a pass between Connor and Remi and subsequently make a successful one to Fiona.

Charlie joins them as they're putting away the equipment, sweaty but grinning. "That was awesome! Laurel had us run a bunch of different exercises and we're going to do more next week! How was it for you guys?"

"Just as awesome!" Fiona responds, eyes still bright with the adrenaline from the game. "Connor says we're going to work up to using bats in that last game by the way." She adds to Myr. "He said to warn you since you ran off as soon as time was over."

Myr shrugs. "I need to finish my Charms essay. I haven't edited yet."

"Sounds like reserves aren't that bad then." Charlie notes as the three of them head back inside. "Where's Remi? I would have thought he'd be here complaining."

"He was talking to Rosie last I checked. I'm sure he'll be up soon."

Myr expects that Fiona may be being a bit optimistic, but he's honestly too jittery from practice to worry about it too much just then. If Remi wants to get himself another detention he could go right ahead.

"So tell me what you guys did!"

Myr has more important things to do.

Really second year isn't all that different from first year for the most part. Rajani isn't sure if she's happy about that or not though.

The first month drifts by rather forgettably, filled with the usual schoolwork and time spent lounging on the common room couches with most of the rest of her year. She wouldn't say it's a bad thing, but she does miss the thrill that came with everything being new.

She of course is on reserves for the Slytherin Quidditch team along with Alasdair, but they don't do much and have only been to one of the five practices the team has held so far.

The others have voiced similar frustrations, and that's what pushes them to finally decide to sneak out after curfew, just to alleviate their own boredom.

Rajani is in charge of getting them around safely - as Nia had put it, "you're the best at schmoozing teachers, so you'll be fine if you're caught." Rajani isn't sure she agrees completely but she does think she's the best option out of the group, aside from maybe Eugene.

They meet in the common room after the prefects finish their final sweep, just past midnight. It's a Friday night,  chosen so that they can sleep in the next day without suspicion. Rajani leads the girls down, including to her surprise a rather enthusiastic Elspeth, who they had thought would decline, as Alasdair and Cadfael had.

Eugene, Lenox, and Finn are already in the common room when the girls arrive. Eugene and Finn look excited and relaxed respectively, while Lenox looks ready to back out.

"Are we sure this is a good idea? I'm not a big fan of rule breaking." He mutters as Rajani pushes open the door and checks both ways before waving the rest of the group out.

"You don't have to come." Finn notes. "Cadfael and Alasdair are both still in the room."

Lenox grimaces and steps past Rajani and into the corridor without another word. She smiles at him supportively.

Truth be told Rajani isn't normally the type to do things like this either, and she can feel her heart pounding against her rib cage as they begin to make their way out of the dungeons. But Nia had been so excited when she'd proposed the idea, and everything sort of spiraled from there. And it's really all harmless fun.

They make it halfway up the stairs to the main hall when they come across the first cat. It's dark brown and stares at them curiously through wide green eyes.

Rajani tenses slightly. She's heard rumor about a cat that apparently reports back to the caretaker and gets students like them into trouble. She's never actually seen Mrs. Norris, but she's been assured by several older students that the cat is real.

"Don't worry, that's just Casey." Nia whispers from behind her. "She's my cousin's cat - he just started at Hogwarts this year."

They continue past Casey, who stares at them blearily, half curious and half bored.

Rajani's heartbeat is pounding in her ears and clogging , a mix of excitement and nervousness eating away at her insides as they stray farther and farther from the safety of the common room and into the heart of the castle.

However, despite her brain's insistence that every shadow is hiding a teacher and every noise is the scraping of Mrs. Norris's claws on the stone floors, the group manages to remain unhindered on their midnight romp for nearly an hour.

Around one in the morning they run into their first actual problem of the night in the form of a vanishing step on one of the fourth floor stairwells. Lenox nearly falls through, and is saved only by Clary and Eugene's quick responses. As the three of them scramble the rest of the way up the stairs, Queenie makes the executive decision to start making their way back towards the dungeons.

Rajani takes a rear position this time, keeping her eyes and ears peeled for even the slightest hint of trouble. It would be rather ridiculous to get this far in their adventure only to be caught in the final stretch. It's only when they're back on the first floor that they realize Elspeth has gone missing.

"I'll go find her." Rajani isn't sure why she volunteers for the task, though she thinks it may have something to do with the flattering idea that she'd be find if caught where the others wouldn't be.

So she splits off and heads back into the castle, wondering where exactly Elspeth would even have gotten to this late in the night.

She starts by carefully retracing their steps, keeping to the shadows as much as possible. It's a lot easier to move around silently when not in a group and she takes full advantage of every possible hiding place available.

She passes a few more student cats, and even a few frogs, and she idly wonders how they even get out of their respective owner's common rooms in the first place. It's not like they have the dexterity to open doors after all.

She makes it all the way back to the fourth floor and the vanishing step without running into anyone - Elspeth included. Sighing she turns around and begins making her way back again. She had tried at least, and the longer she's out the more likely it is her luck will run out and she'll come across a teacher or Mrs. Norris.

Though perhaps she already had crossed the custodian's cat - it's not like she knows what the feline looks like.

The thought has her picking up her pace ever so slightly, and maybe it's because of this that she doesn't spot the other person in the passage until it's too late.

The collision isn't so much painful as it is surprising, and Rajani needs a moment to recover from it and regain her bearings.

Once she does, she's honestly a bit stunned to find the person she's run into is one Cadfael Ashburner. Despite being in the same year and House, Cad was one of the few Slytherins who mostly kept to himself, rather than relying on his fellow snakes as the rest of them tended to.

His eyes narrow as he watches her. "There you are. Everyone got back ages ago, you're going to lose us points."

Rajani narrows her eyes right back. "Well I didn't, and I was just trying to find-" Movement from over Cadfael's shoulder draws her attention, and in a heartbeat she switches the last word. "-you."

Cadfael looks confused, until he turns to follow Rajani's line of sight and sees Professor McGonagall standing at the end of the hall. Rajani can see the boy paling slightly, but her focus remains on the professor in front of them, mind whirling as she attempted to figure out exactly how to worm her way out of this one.

Before she can even begin to formulate a script, McGonagall speaks. "Ten points from Slytherin for being out after hours. Now what exactly are you doing out of bed?"

Cadfael starts to speak, but Rajani beats him to it. She may not have an exact plan yet, but she knows letting Cad talk first would not help her cause in the slightest.

"I'm sorry Professor, I just didn't want Cadfael to get into trouble." She ducks her head in shame. "I had a nightmare so I went to go find my sister - I thought she might be in the common room if she just came back from her rounds. But instead Eugene was there and he said Cad wasn't in their room and he was worried..." She trailed off and ducked her head. "I'm sorry, I know I should have gotten a prefect." Not her best work, but she thinks it may just do the trick. She's immensely glad she's already wearing her nightclothes - it makes the lie that much more believable.

"Quite right." Rajani keeps her head bowed politely as the Professor speaks. "Mr. Ashburner, is this true?"

"No!" Cad quickly denies, looking honestly scared, and Rajani feels a slightest tinge of remorse for pushing the blame onto him. But really, he should have known the risks leaving the common room, and she certainly didn't plan on taking the fall for this.

"She went out, they all did, but everyone else came back! I was looking for her not the other way around!" Cadfael sounds desperate, like he's actively trying to make McGonagall believe him. Rookie mistake number one.

McGonagall raises an eyebrow, clearly unconvinced. "Detention tomorrow with Mr. Filch. And Ms. Misra?"

Rajani looks up uncertainly, chewing subconsciously at her lower lip.

"Next time get a prefect. Now, back to your dorms."

Cadfael can only gape for a moment before Rajani grabs his arm and hauls him back to the common room, thanking the Professor as they go.

Cadfael gets his voice back just as the wall closes behind them. "What the hell Misra?"

Rajani just rolls her eyes. "You should have gotten a prefect if you didn't want to get into trouble. It's one detention, you'll live." With that she heads back up to her room, leaving a spluttering Cadfael behind her.

The other girls were still awake in their dorm room, and Rajani is relieved to see Elspeth lounging on Nia's bed.

"Oh thank goodness, did you get caught?" Clary is almost immediately in her face.

Rajani shakes her head, gently pushing the other girl away so she can get to her own bunk, which she promptly collapses into. "Had a run in with McGonagall but I only lost five points. Cad got the short end of the deal, but really I don't know why he was out of bed in the first place." She yawns loudly. "And now I would like to get some actual sleep before dawn."

They end up sleeping until almost noon, and even then they only wake up because Gwenog Jones kicks the door in and snaps at them about some sort of commotion in the common room.

Queenie wakes up first, with Rajani rousing herself shortly after, and they venture down the stairs together to determine what exactly Gwenog was on about.

To Rajani's surprise, the commotion in question is centered around an absolutely infuriated Cadfael. She's never heard the blond boy shouting - or really seen him show any sort of emotion other than simmering irritation - so she's a bit taken aback at first.

When he spots her standing in the passageway leading to the girls' dorms, Cadfael storms over. "You! You knew!" He accuses, finger stabbing forward angrily.

Rajani just stares at him in confusion. "What are you on about Ashburner? Knew what?" Her mind is still processing things a bit slowly as she hasn't fully woken up yet.

"You knew about the stairs, you were the one who did it! Why else would you be out later than the others? And you knew I'd get blamed for it when you told McGonagall that I was the one sneaking around last night!"

Rajani at this point is completely lost, and she glances over at Queenie to see if she's having any more luck with decoding the situation. However, her friend seems as bewildered as she is.

"What are you on about Cad? What stairs? We only just woke up, you're really going to have to be more specific than that." Queenie instructs, surprisingly decisive despite her clearly still-sleepy state.

"A couple of the stairs leading to the Gryffindor Tower were vanished and a first year nearly fell through. Cadfael got in a ton of trouble but he wasn't actually out there long enough to get all the way to Gryffindor and back." Eugene explains carefully. "Only Rajani was."

Rajani stares, once again needing a moment to mentally catch up with the accusation. "You think that I..." She trails off as a sudden realization hits her. She shakes her head firmly, taking a few steps further into the common room and noting that there are several other students scattered around the room. Most are at least pretending to not be listening in, but Rajani can tell that every one of them is ready to step in if needed, and she fees a strong rush of affection for her house. Snakes always stick together.

"I didn't do anything to the stairs. We were out last night and we thought someone might have gotten lost so I went back to look. It turned out to be a false alarm and I ran into you on my way back. That's the truth of it - Lions may be annoying but vanishing the steps on purpose like that could have actually killed someone, and I'm not the sort of person who finds that amusing." She stares Cadfael down, and he glares back, clearly not accepting the response.

But Eugene backs her up. "It's true Cad. Whoever vanished the stairs it wasn't her, so she didn't mean to frame you for that. It was probably just one of the Gryffindors being stupid - we all know that Longbottom kid would probably do something like that accidentally no problem."

Cadfael keeps glaring, but he slowly sits down on one of the couches. "Fine. But I've got my eye on you Misra."

"Okay whoa, that's enough. You're both Slytherins, and we snakes will always have each other's backs, alright? I'm sure whatever happened, no one intentionally meant for anyone to get hurt." One of the prefects finally cuts in, and Rajani grins when she recognizes Kingsley standing by one of the windows, an essay left forgotten on a table in front of him. "No threatening each other, alright? We get enough of that from the rest of the school."

Queenie grins at her brother as well. "Preach! And hey, since all you older years got some entertainment out of this, who wants to help me with my Charms essay in repayment?"

That gets most of the onlookers to either book it out of the room or become immensely engrossed in their own work, which causes Queenie to burst out laughing.

"Didn't realize Charms was so abhorred. Raj, have you started on it yet? We're up anyway and there's still some time before lunch."

Rajani agrees and trots back up to the dorms to grab the half-parchment of writing that she's scratched out so far. While she's there, she glances towards the bunk furthest back from the door and frowns.

Elspeth is still fast asleep, dark hair casting a messy halo across her pillow, looking as peaceful as Rajani has ever seen her. But Rajani can't help but wonder if the missing stair and Elspeth's disappearance the night before might be connected.

She shakes off the suspicion and heads back down to where Queenie is waiting. Surely Elspeth wouldn't intentionally hurt anyone, and regardless, no one had actually come to any harm. Whatever the truth, snakes stick together, and Rajani doesn't want to cause a rift with Elspeth when the other girl is finally starting to come out of her shell.

And anyway, it probably was just a Gryffindor being stupid.

It's easy to lose herself in her studies. Ana finds herself practically living in the library, and the months drift by out the window as she buries herself in textbooks and additional readings that she finds while perusing the shelves.

It's almost a surprise when the end of October arrives, along with a present from her parents.

"Oh hey, is it your birthday?" Hannah, who Ana has taken to sitting beside at every meal, asks as she eyes the parcel that has been dropped next to Ana's plate as part of the morning mail.

Ana nods distractedly. "I'm thirteen now." She responds. She already has the entire day planned out, including ways to avoid seeing the Great Hall before dinner so that she can fully enjoy the Halloween spirit.

Hannah grins. "Oh man, lucky. I'd kill to be born on a cool day like Halloween. Did you know, some people believe historical events that occurred on their date of birth in the past effects who they become?"

"That sounds like utter pigswill." Sarah sniffs from across the table. Though she holds herself somewhat separate from the rest of the sixth years, she always has an opinion on whatever topic they happen to be discussing. "You can't be affected by events you aren't present for, regardless of their timing in history."

Hannah grins. "Well obviously. I just thought it was interesting how backwards Muggle beliefs can get."

Ana nods. "They're a rather superstitious lot for sure."

"Hey, wizards and witches have plenty of odd beliefs as well I'm sure." Josie Entwhistle, who Ana knows is the only Muggleborn in the sixth year Ravenclaw class, defends from where she's seated on Hannah's other side.

"Like what?" Her boyfriend challenged playfully. Ana is rather certain his name is Horace, but if she's honest she's never spoken to him directly so she isn't quite sure.

Ana is curious to know Josie's answer as well. While she's heard of plenty of strange superstitions and practices among Muggle communities, the Magical world tends to run on a more logical path from what she's seen.

Josie stutters slightly, thinking, when Eric suddenly speaks up from his spot on Ana's other side.

"Well what about the Grim? The idea that a black dog symbolizes death?"

"It does though." Sarah counters smoothly. "It's well known amongst divinators, and I've heard stories about people who died after seeing the Grim. It's well documented."

"Well it seems as silly as thinking a black cat means bad luck to me." Eric shrugs. "Though to be fair I never took Divination." He adds after a moment.

"Divination is a well documented and effective branch of magic." Hannah declares. "Unlike Muggle horoscopes and their other poor attempts at mimicking our abilities."

"I didn't take you for a purist." Josie grumbles, clearly annoyed that she can't think of any wizarding customs that make no sense.

Ana smiles slightly as the group bickers about what qualifies as racism and what is simply stating facts. She bites her own tongue on the matter, knowing that simply being a pureblood will naturally bias some of them against anything she has to add to the conversation (though she's tempted more than a few times to speak up). Instead she turns her attention to the still-wrapped parcel sitting on top of her silverware.

It's obviously a book, unsurprisingly, and Ana hopes it's not one that she already has, or has found in the library during the year.

She tears away the wrapping as she chews on one of the sausages that's she piled onto her plate. Their turn out to be two books inside, both rather thin but when she rifles through the top one she's pleased to see that the writing is rather small and there are no pictures anywhere in either book.

The first one she looks at is a detailed outline of hag culture, which she's rather certain was picked out by her mother. She stores it in her bag and turns to the second tome, which is slightly thicker than the first.

She's thrilled to find that it's a theory book, and not one she's found in the library, discussing higher level spells such as the patronus and the complicated emotional elements of casting. She finds herself becoming immersed in the opening chapters as the debate continues around her.

Thirty minutes later the plates clear themselves and Eric taps lightly on Ana's shoulder to say goodbye. Ana distractedly waves to the sixth years as they head for their classes while she continues studying her new book. After almost an hour however, she reluctantly puts it into her bag and heads down to the dungeons for her double potions block.

She had hoped against hope that Evie and Remi would somehow not cause any catastrophes in class that day, but unfortunately for her she actually ends up partnered with her least favorite house mate.

"I saw you got a present this morning! Is it your birthday? Happy birthday!" Evie grins excitedly as they start in on their hair-raising potion.

Ana just nods shortly in answer to the question as she double checks they have the right amount of rat tails before she begins mincing them.

"Now we're both thirteen! Isn't it cool, being teenagers now?"

Ana doesn't really find it to be particularly different so far, but she chooses to focus on the tails in front of her in hopes Evie will talk herself into exhaustion and perhaps give Ana at least some peace and quiet before the end of the period.

The hour and a half drags by as Ana works on the potion, doing her best to keep Evie far away from the cauldron or any of the ingredients. She refuses to get a detention on her birthday.

Finally the class ends, and Ana rushes to lunch without a second glance back at Evie, who she thinks had been in the middle of a sentence but honestly Ana hadn't been listening. She just wanted to escape the whirlpool of destruction that followed her dorm mate everywhere before it could ruin what was supposed to be the best day of the year.

She sits with the sixth years again, of course, and settles in to continue her new book as the older students discuss essays and other assignments.

"Good book?" Eric guesses with clear amusement as he joins the table about fifteen minutes after everyone else has settled in.

Ana nods distractedly. "Quite intriguing. The intricacies of love potions are really quite astounding."

"Oh hey, we've been studying those in Potions this week, you think you could lend me that book when you're done?" Horace pipes up hopefully. "I honestly don't understand anything Snape told us about them and if history has taught me anything it's that the next essay will be about whatever I understood the least."

Ana finally looks up from the book. "Well, I suppose I could. As long as I get it back."

Horace grins. "Awesome! You're the best Ana, really you are."

Josie rolls her eyes from where she's perched next to her boyfriend. "I'll make sure he doesn't lose or damage it." She adds. This sets of a playful quarrel between the two, something that's rather common though Ana doesn't understand it herself. If they like each other, why would they always be arguing?

She gets through the rest of the chapter during lunch, marks her place, and then hands the book to Horace who once again promises to take excellent care of it and return it by Sunday at the latest. Josie helpfully confirms that she'll hex him if he fails to do so.

Ana then heads out to the greenhouses for Herbology, hoping she can get Jemma as a partner and avoid the agony that Potions had been.

The blonde Hufflepuff has proven a rather tolerable partner for Ana's least favorite class, so Ana has done her best to situate herself nearby the girl each class in case the task requires partners.

On this particular day Professor Sprout spends most of the forty five minute period talking about fluxweed and it's properties of mutability. Ana takes very careful notes, remembering that fluxweed is a prime ingredient in Polyjuice Potion, something she'd read in her new book.

Quite pleased that her worst class had gone rather well, Ana retires to the library for the hour break until History of Magic and works diligently on the assigned essay Professor Sprout had given them just before the end of the class.

Finally the final class arrives, and she quickly locates a seat beside Alasdair. She hasn't unfortunately, seen as much of her Slytherin friend as she would like, but they're both busy with school and Alasdair seems to have become closer with one of his dorm mates, something Ana won't begrudge him even if she is a bit bitter that she's now the only person with a terrible seven year living arrangement.

"Hey, happy birthday." She's surprised when he hands her a small package. "Something I saw this summer, thought you might like it." He adds nonchalantly as she turns the gift over in her hands.

"Well thank you, you really didn't have to do that." While flattered he'd thought of her, Ana feels a bit badly. She isn't even sure when Alasdair's birthday is, nonetheless how she'll be able to get him anything being stuck at school most of the year.

"It's nothing big." He replies, and the discussion is left there as Professor Binns begins droning through yet another lecture on the Medieval Assembly of European Wizards. It's their third week on the subject and Ana can honestly say she isn't quite sure what else there is to talk about. She's read the entire chapter in their textbooks dedicated to the assembly three times already and she's growing quite tired of the material.

The lesson drags more than usual due to her being more distracted than she normally would be, and she's glad when Binns dismisses them.

"Say, would you be interested in studying together until dinner?" She asks Alasdair on a bit of a whim. His gift is making her feel a bit guilty that she hasn't done much to spend time with him so far, even if he's been as active as she has in maintaining their friendship.

"I can't, Cadfael and I are going to work on the Herbology essay. Maybe some other time." He replies, and she nods and heads to the library on her own. She ought to keep working on her own essay as well.

The halls are starting to echo with cackles and groans as the castle prepares for the Halloween Feast, and Ana can't help smiling as she hurries to the library, wanting to save all of it for later when the effects aren't ruined by the sunlight streaming through the full-length windows that line every hallway.

She very determinedly loses herself in her Herbology essay, and in no time at all the sun is sending beams of golden light over the wooden tables, indicating that it's about to depart for the day and the real festivities can begin.

Ana rolls up her scroll almost in the same second after the sun has fully vanished below the surrounding mountains. She waves to Madame Pince as she exits the library, and the librarian smiles in return.

And just like that Ana is swept up in the creepy atmosphere that is saturating the Hogwarts halls. Every corner echoes with wails and the clanking of chains, and she swears she can feels the brush of bat wings just over her head.

She reaches a hand up curiously, wondering if she could grab one of the squeaking creatures, but her fingers only brush air and she grins. She'll have to learn how they do that so she can charm her own house in the future.

The castle cats seem to be more active as well, and she spot several of them darting between the shadows lining the passageways leading to the Great Hall.

And the Great Hall itself is a fantastic sight. The House Ghosts are swooping through the tables while Peeves shrieks joyfully and upends several goblets over top students' heads. Jack-O-Lanterns float menacingly from the ceiling, lighting the hall with a flickering orange glow.

Ana happily perches herself in the darkest corner of the Ravenclaw table and watches as the rest of the school files into the room.

She's startled when someone taps her on the shoulder, and she spins around, wand at the ready, in case Peeves is thinking of ruining her birthday by dumping something sticky in her hair.

Eric puts up his hands, grinning slightly. "Whoa, hey, just me. I'm going to be sitting with Laurel at the Gryffindor table tonight since she's a big Halloween fan, but I wanted to give you your present now."

Ana slips her wand back into her sleeve, feeling her face heating up slightly, and she's glad the shadows are hiding her embarrassment. "Oh, um, thanks. You really didn't have to get me anything."

He smiles easily. "It was honestly nothing, just something I saw down at Hogsmeade last weekend that I thought you might like. And when i remembered that your birthday was coming up I figured why not."

She nods slightly. "Well, thank you again. Have fun with Laurel."

He grins and cross the room to join his girlfriend and what appeared to be the rest of the Gryffindor Quidditch team. Ana honestly isn't sure of the full story behind how Eric and Laurel Kiddell had ended up dating, but honestly they seem happy and Ana won't begrudge her friend a social life. Even if she does feel a little put out that he won't be spending her birthday with her this year.

She looks down at the present that she'd accepted from Eric. It's unwrapped, but the shadows make it difficult to tell immediately what it is. With a sigh she pulls out her wand again and mutters a quick Lumos. With the light from her wand, she notices that Eric has stuck a note to the present with muggle tape, something he'd taught her about during one of their study sessions earlier in the month. She pulls it off gingerly, still not trusting it as much as a sticking charm.

Ana, I remember you mentioning that your mom is going to start teaching you Occlumency soon, and I thought this might come in handy. I know you're not a jewelry person, but supposedly wearing this will help calm your mind, which will definitely come in handy for Occlumency.

Ana tilts her wand to get a proper look and finds a simple wooden box. She sets it down on the table and pulls off the lid, curious as to what exactly was supposed to improve her Occlumency.

Inside sits an unassuming silver bracelet. It has a simple enough clasp, and after regarding it for a moment Ana slides the object onto her wrist.

She somewhat doubts it actually will help with anything, but she appreciates the gesture nonetheless. She flicks her wand off and stows the box and note in her bag next to the rest of her birthday gifts. And finally the Feast begins.

Franziska hadn't really intended to go to the Gryffindor-Slytherin Quidditch match, but when the first weekend of November dawned bright and surprisingly warm she found herself unable to resist her friends' insistence that she accompany them in support of Charlie Weasley.

The mass of second year Hufflepuffs arrive for the game early, to get the best seats according to a very excited Aidan. He's naturally seated right at the front, with Tyler next to him. The blond boy has a quill and parchment with him, much to Leona's amusement.

"Scoping out the competition then Abbott?" She teases, but he only nods seriously.

"I want to know exactly what I'll be up against so I can practice over break!" He confirms. "Captain Ainsley says that knowledge is as important as skill in the game."

Franziska smiles at his enthusiasm. Tyler had been on a high ever since he made the Hufflepuff team as a Chaser at the start of the year, and his dedication to impressing the captain was honestly kind of cute. "I think that's really smart Ty." She offers with a smile, and he beams back.

Franziska opts to sit behind the two, and she's joined by Tonks and Kiera, who flank her on either side.

"This is going to be awesome! The first match is always the most intense since Gryffindor and Slytherin hate each other so much. Remember last year? One of the seventh year Gryffindors threw that inkwell at Laurel Kiddell for losing." Kiera grins excitedly. "I hope something as dramatic as that happens this year!"

"I don't think you can get more dramatic than Lola's killer game-winning Snitch catch last year." Tonks points out. "But the lions and snakes can try."

"Why thank you!" Everyone jumps as Tyler's older sisters sit down beside them. Lola is grinning wickedly. "I do think I did rather well myself, though it's lovely to hear others in agreement."

"Hey Lola, hi Maisie." Tyler jumps over the benches so he can hug his oldest sister, nearly stabbing himself in the eye with her Head Girl badge in the process. "Are you guys excited for the game?"

Maisie smiles warmly. "I admit I'm more inclined towards the next match. I can't wait to see you two up in the air together."

Tonks rolls her eyes dramatically, but Franziska can't help smiling, a bit jealous if she's honest. The Abbott siblings have always been close, and she sometimes wishes she had a sister to be friends with the way Tyler had Lola and Maisie.

They settle in shortly after, Tyler returning to his spot by the railing. Franziska finds herself getting swept up in the atmosphere swirling around the stands as the two teams take to the field. She shouts along with the other second years when Charlie waves to them before the teams mount their brooms and Coach Crowell releases the Snitch, signaling the start of the game.

Franziska can't help shrieking slightly when the buzzing golden ball pauses only centimeters from her nose, hovering there for a heartbeat before zipping off into the hazy glow of the noonday sun. Kiera nudges her in the side teasingly, but they're both quickly distracted by the action on the pitch.

Franziska has to admit, she doesn't really know any of the players other than Laurel and Charlie on the Gryffindor team, and she only recognizes the captain because she's good friends with her little sister Holly. As such she ends up really only cheering for the two of them and remaining politely enthused by the rest of the players.

And really, it's a very impressive game.

Both teams are clearly out for blood as they race around the field. The beaters are utterly merciless, though Franziska notes that the new Gryffindor beater isn't quite as effective as the other three on the field.

It's mostly all good fun until one of the Slytherin beaters - Franziska hears the commentator call her 'Jones' - knocks the Gryffindor Keeper right between the eyes with a well-placed bludger and he tumbles almost fifty meters to the sandy ground below.

Crowell is immediately back on the pitch, whistling to pause the game as he conjures a stretcher for the downed player. Across the pitch, Franziska can just make out Holly in the Gryffindor stands, trying to restrain one of the other second years from jumping over the railing to get to the pitch.

"That was low, even for Jones." Maisie frowns slightly. "You two keep an eye on her when you play Slytherin next year, please."

Her siblings nod. Their group has gone mostly silent as they watch the keeper carried off the pitch by Crowell and the school matron Madame Pomfrey, someone that Franziska up to this point had only ever seen at mealtimes in the Great Hall.

"Will he be okay?" She asks nervously as she registers that most of the spectators are actually still yelling, and some of the words being used make her wince. "I mean, that looked really painful, and the fall was pretty far."

"Coach Crowell likely had a cushioning charm placed before he even went back onto the field." Lola assures her firmly. "He doesn't around with player safety.

"Lola, language." Maisie reprimands, though it doesn't have much bite as she's clearly still shaken from the injury.

The game has started back up again, but Franziska can't seem to focus on it. She remembers defending Lola's insane game-winning stunt to her parents during the summer, and something in her stomach twists. She suddenly gets why her parents hadn't been quite as excited as she had been.

She notices belatedly that Jemma has vanished from her seat beside Tyler, and she vaguely remembers that the girl Holly had been restraining was one of Jemma's Gryffindor friends - what was her name? Franziska can't quite seem to remember it as the players continue swooping around the field as if a teenager hadn't just had his face bludgeoned in by a magic metal ball.

"I have to use the restroom." She mumbles suddenly, standing up and squeezing past Tonks, who has become completely reabsorbed in the game.

She makes it almost back to the common rooms when she runs into someone she knows.

"Brandon?"

He turns, clearly surprised. "Oh, hey Frannie. Didn't expect to see you down here. Not at the game?"

"You aren't?" She counters curiously, and he shrugs with a mischievous grin.

"For all intents and purposes my lady, I am." He replies cryptically and she can't help but smile slightly. While she and Brandon don't speak much normally, they'd developed a pretty good friendship over the previous Winter break, and she's rather pleased it seems to be in tact despite neither of them really trying to maintain it once school started back up again. "So what brings you down here?"

She shrugs. "Honestly? Your keeper fell fifty feet and I found it kind of hard to stay enthusiastic after that."

Brandon frowns, whatever he was up to clearly forgotten in light of the new information. ", Kent? That's Evera's older brother. How bad?"

She can only shrug again. "He took a bludger to the face and gravity did the rest. I couldn't really get a good look but yeah, sort of ruined the mood."

Brandon nods lightly in understanding, one arm raising for half a second before he reconsiders and pulls it back. "Well, this is a magical school after all. I'm sure he'll be right as rain soon enough. So um, you think you could not tell anyone I was down here?" The abrupt topic change is rather obvious, but Franziska thinks it's just Brandon's awkward way of trying to make her feel better.

"Sure Brandon. I never saw anything." She says, though really it's quite out of character for her to agree to something resembling breaking school rules.

His grin is worth it. "Thanks Frannie! I owe you one." And with that he's bounding down the halls and out of sight, and she's pleased to find she does feel a bit better.

She spends the rest of the day in the library alternately working on homework and getting distracted by interesting books she finds while searching for reference materials. When she joins the others for dinner that night no one comments on her abrupt departure from the game, but Aidan does casually mention that Kent is recovering well, and that somehow the entire Slytherin team's clothes had been doused in itching powder so he had been properly avenged.

Franziska manages to bite down on a knowing smile at that particular bit of news.

The next two weeks she does her best to focus on school and the impending exams, but although she enjoys meeting up with the study group in the library - and Brandon is starting to come more often now which makes her rather pleased - and working on essays with the other Hufflepuffs in the common room, as the Hufflepuff-Ravenclaw match approaches she feels an ever increasing weight of concern in her gut.

She can't opt out of going - it's Tyler's first game and he's been talking about it nonstop for two weeks now, constantly switching between ecstatic and terrified which Franziska thinks is fair enough. It wouldn't be fair of her to not be there to support him with the rest of their friends, as queasy as looking at the Qudditch pitch makes her feel now.

Kent is fine now though. She comforts herself as the second years and Maisie Abbott all settle themselves right at the front of the Hufflepuff stands again for the second game of the season.

"Don't look so worried Maiz, Ravenclaw play more than fair. Your siblings will be fine."

Hunter Vaughan, the sixth year prefect, is the last person Franziska wants sitting behind her right at this moment, but there isn't much she can do about it, and at least it seems like he's trying to be nice for once.

Maisie glances back at him. "Oh, I'm not worried about Ravenclaw playing dirty. I'm more concerned that Lola will put herself into the hospital wing. She's not exactly a shining beacon of survival instincts."

Hunter laughs. "Fair enough. She's always been a wild child."

Franziska tunes out the two prefects in favor of turning to Donaghan, who's occupied the seat next to hers and who always radiates an aura of calm that she hopes will help her nerves during the game.

"So, are you excited?"

He shrugs with a small smile. "I'm mostly here to support Tyler if I'm completely honest. Quidditch is fun but not really something I'm enamored with."

Franziska is relieved to hear it. "I really like it myself, but that last game scared me a bit." She admits. "I think it's going to be a while before I'm completely comfortable watching games again."

His smile shifts to one of support. "You'll get there. For now we'll focus on Tyler, yeah?"

She grins in return. "Sounds like a plan."

The teams come out onto the field then, and Franziska shouts encouragingly when Tyler waves up at them, the familiar look of mixed nerves and joy still resting across his features.

"Let's go Abbott, show them what for!" Leona shouts, loud enough that her voice somehow manages to carry over the cacophony surrounding them and getting Tyler to laugh despite his obvious tension.

Coach Crowell releases the snitch and tosses up the Quaffle and the game begins, both teams taking to the air in tandem.

One of the Ravenclaw chasers snags the Quaffle, but Tyler and one of the other Hufflepuff chasers (and Franziska thinks perhaps she should try to properly learn their names at some point) are hot on her heels as she takes off across the pitch.

The actual announcer is less animated than he is during Slytherin matches, but Leona decides to begin narrating herself and Franziska finds that she rather prefers her friend's enthusiastic blow-by-blow recount, littered with jokes and personal insights, to anything that usually comes from the current announcer.

"Brilliant deflection by Heartwell just there - I hear she's good at deflecting the boys in her year as well so lay off with the terrible attempts at flirting Johnson, she's way out of your league anyway -"

One of the boys sitting further up the stands shouts something angrily while on the field Franziska can swear she sees Heartwell laughing at the comment even as she knocks back yet another Quaffle from entering the hoop furthest from the Hufflepuff stands.

Tyler catches it on the rebound and is off like a rocket, keeping below the other players and neatly completing a pass to one of the other Chasers just before jerking to a complete stop to avoid being smashed in the side by one of the Bludgers.

"He's really good." Franziska can't help but noting as Leona spends a full minute bragging about being friends with Tyler.

"He's the first second year to make the team since I arrived." Maisie responds lightly. "He's always loved flying though, seems like second nature to him. I'm not surprised that he's taken to Quidditch as well."

But despite her confident words, Franziska can tell Maisie feels the same pull of relief that she does each time there's a near miss between a Bludger and Tyler's head.

Hufflepuff wins, and Leona's shouting something about Lola continuing her perfect catch record as the stands around Franziska roar in celebration. She knows that the common room is going to be a bit louder than normal for the next few hours, so once she's managed to catch Tyler for a quick congratulations she decides to head for the library to continue preparing for the exams that are starting on Monday.

All in all, not a bad day, but Franziska honestly is looking forward to taking some time off during the Winter Break.

 

A week late, but in my defense finals were a this year. I hope all of you still stuck in exam hell are holding up alright, and I hope everyone enjoyed the chapter! Next time: exams and winter break!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!