Chapter Twenty-Five

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Changing of the Seasons

Clary had asked Lenox to Hogsmeade and he'd said yes. Rajani tells herself she doesn't really care, but listening to her roommate excitedly recount the day makes her stomach twist uncomfortably.

It's been doing that a lot recently.

So she throws herself into school and making herself look good to the Professors so she'll improve her chances at being selected as a Prefect. This means especially making an effort in Potions class, which she's never been particularly outstanding in.

"Well done Ms. Misra, you improved this week." Professor Snape notes on a Thursday, when he hands back the potion she'd made with Finn in their double-block on Monday. "Perhaps you should continue to work with Mr. Lopatkina-Paluch."

Rajani nods politely. "Thank you Professor." She smiles with everything she's learned from years watching adults interacting and pretending to like each other. "I'll be sure to partner with Finn in the future."

Professor Snape nods briskly and then turns to scold a couple of Hufflepuffs who had apparently done terribly on the assignment.

"I prefer switching partners." Finn observes. He's seated behind her, which Rajani hadn't been aware of but she's become so adjusted to Finn showing up randomly where you least expect him that she barely jumps at his words.

She checks that Professor Snape is still growling at the Hufflepuffs before she turns to face her year mate. "Yes well, Professor Snape says we should work together, so for the time being we'll be working together. Besides, everyone else in our House has paired off rather comfortably." She adds, glancing to where Lenox and Clary are sitting together. Normally Rajani likes teaming up with one of them during Potions, but with that option off the table she's stuck with either Finn or a Hufflepuff so it's not like either of them really has a choice.

"So I'll work with the Hufflepuffs. I've done it before."

Rajani instinctively finds her eyes skirting towards a certain shaggy-haired blond from the other House before yanking her focus back to Finn. She's done it before as well, and it had not turned out pretty for either of them.

"I suppose but wouldn't you rather work with a fellow Slytherin?" She points out, hoping her nerves aren't showing as much as she feels like they must be.

Finn raises an eyebrow. "You know, we'll never be able to make the rest of the school like us if we don't talk to them."

"And your constant switching friends because the current group is boring certainly gives a great impression." Rajani can't help it. It's rare she uses honesty as a weapon against her classmates, but she's just a little bit desperate to not have to work with a Hufflepuff in the one class she desperately needs to improve in. And nothing else seems to work on Finn from what she's seen.

Finn blinks, clearly caught off guard. "Huh. That is surprisingly insightful Raj." He tilts his head, and Rajani feels uncomfortably like he's trying to look through her, somehow map her brain with just his gaze.

She flicks her hair to distract herself. "That isn't an answer Finn. Are we partners or not?"

He grins. "You know what? Sure, we can partner up. I think it will be interesting."

And that's not ominous or anything, but Rajani figures she can handle her weird Housemate just fine. Regardless, it's better than the alternative.

Queenie and Eugene catch up with her after class, and Queenie elbows her lightly.

"I see you up to the Professors Ms. Misra. Don't think I'm going to make getting Prefect so easy for you."

Rajani adopts an air of innocence. "I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about." She responds primly, and Queenie laughs.

There's still definitely a tension between them when it comes to the Prefect badge, but they mostly try to play it off as a joke between them and Rajani is glad for it. The last thing she needs at the moment is extra drama with her best friend.

"All seriousness, want to work on the essay after Defense today?" Queenie adds.

Rajani sighs. "We could probably work on it during Defense and learn more than if we paid any attention." She responds morosely. "It feels like we haven't had a good Defense professor since first year."

"Well our luck is bound to change eventually." Eugene points out optimistically. "Next year's professor will probably be fantastic!"

"Don't jinx it." His girlfriend warns with a small smile. "But I hope so. I wouldn't mind trying for a NEWT in that class but it's not much fun to learn the material outside of class."

"I feel terrible for the fifth and seventh years this year, having to deal with so many terrible professors in a row." Rajani observes. "I'd imagine any of them who do well on the standardized tests have had to put in a lot of extra effort since the teachers certainly aren't helping."

Despite the complaining all three of them do pay attention when they get to their Defense class, which can't be said for all of the Hufflepuffs who share the class with them.

"And that was useless. Did any of you catch what she was talking about with the Grindylows?" Clary and Lenox join them as they exit the classroom and head down towards the dungeons to study together. "Honestly teachers should have to take a class in being loud enough for the back row to hear."

"Projection." Queenie supplies. "And nope, I didn't hear a thing, not for lack of trying. She could at least use a spell to throw her voice, that's what Coach Crowell used to do."

"Coach Crowell didn't even need to do that. Say, speaking of have any of you met the new Coach?" Eugene adds, and from there Lenox ends up taking over most of the conversation, talking about the odd new teacher and her yellow eyes while Clary and Eugene pester him with questions.

Queenie rolls her eyes at Rajani in amusement, and Rajani responds with a weary smile of her own.

The next day boasts even more stressful classes for Rajani, starting straight away with Ancient Runes.

She sits beside Queenie of course, and takes careful notes the way she's learned to from working with Ed the past few months. The class drags on, and Rajani feels ready to sleep at multiple points, but she manages to pull through and she's pretty sure she didn't miss any parts of the lecture due to zoning out.

She'll check with Queenie during lunch though, just to be safe.

Unfortunately she'll have no time before or after then to really check in with her friends. Fridays are absolutely relentless for the fourth year Slytherins. While some of them do have a break after breakfast, when Rajani has Ancient Runes, from that point forward it's back to back classes straight through the day, plus Astronomy at night.

"I hate our schedules this year." Nia grumbles as she and Els hurry into the greenhouse with only moments to spare before class begins. "Some days we have next to no classes. Other days it's an endless slog through all the worst ones."

"Shh. Class is starting." One of the Ravenclaws hisses, and Nia rolls her eyes at the group.

They have a double block until lunch, and Rajani finds herself partnered up (Professor Sprout almost never lets them pick their own partners, much to the Slytherins' collective chagrin) with Leona Poole, a brunette Hufflepuff and Ed's little sister. Which isn't the worst case scenario, but it certainly isn't the best either.

Leona at least stays mostly quiet, which is unusual for the girl but Rajani isn't complaining. It's a long two hours regardless, but they're slightly less exhausting than they could have been.

It's only in the last thirty minutes of class that Leona finally attempts conversation outside of making comments about the Flitterbloom they're tending.

"So you and my brother. Is that happening or what?"

Rajani is very briefly taken off guard at the abrupt inquiry, but she quickly recovers and fixes Leona with an irritated glance. "What's it to you either way? It's not your business."

Leona shrugs. "It's my brother, and I'm just curious. I can't get a read on you, but if you are interested he'd say yes."

Rajani carefully maintains her expression. "Great to know, I absolutely needed your confirmation on that." She responds primly, with what she knows is an underlying current of dismissiveness. She's not talking about Ed with his little sister. "If that's all I believe we're ready to transplant the Flitterbloom."

Leona rolls her eyes but complies and drops the topic.

Internally Rajani is reeling. She has been thinking about maybe asking Ed to Hogsmeade, but she isn't sure if it's because she's actually interested or if it's a result of the weird feelings she gets from seeing Clary and Lenox together. Getting confirmation of Ed's interest from his sister, who must know since she seems to know almost everything, just makes things that much more complicated.

Rajani solves it the way she's been solving all her unpleasant and confusing feelings recently and shoves it to the back of her head to be fretted over when she's trying to sleep. Once class ends she latches on to Queenie and focuses entirely on reviewing Ancient Runes during the proceeding walk to the Great Hall and for all of lunch.

Queenie lets it happen, but Rajani knows she'll be getting questions later that she's not going to want to answer.

Sure enough, that night while they're all gathered in the common room waiting to head up to the Astronomy Tower, Queenie pulls her down the hall to their dorm room.

"Okay, what's going on?" She demands. "You've been jumpy for a while now and today was it. You're telling me what's going on. Is it the Prefect thing? Because if it is-"

"It's not!" Rajani immediately interrupts. "It's not that at all, whoever gets it will have earned it fair and square. It's... Leona Poole said some stuff about Ed in Herbology today and it freaked me out a little."

Queenie's eyes light up slightly in excitement. "Oh really? And what did Poole have to say about our Eddie, hmm?" She grins and leands closer. The two of them have settled on Queenie's bed and the shifting of the mattress causes the girls to almost fall on top of each other.

Rajani finally lets herself relax slightly when Queenie laughs and backs up again. "Nothing much really. I'm just thinking about asking him to Hogsmeade is all and I guess it's freaking me out a bit."

Queenie shows extreme restraint as she pats Rajani's shoulder. "It can be super nerve-wracking to ask someone out." She agrees. "Take your time, and if he's a jerk I'll sic Clary on him."

That gets Rajani to laugh. Clary has recent taken to teaming up with Elspeth to go after people who bad-mouth their fellow Slytherins. The most recent attack had a Gryffindor boy walking around with hot pink skin for an entire day before the Professors reversed the charm.

"Thanks Queenie. I mean it, if you make Prefect you'll deserve it."

Queenie bumps her shoulder lightly as they stand up to rejoin the rest of their friends back in the common room. "Same to you Raj. Snape is going to have a tough time choosing prefects this year."

Rajani is glad that they talked, as it makes the weekend's study sessions a lot easier to focus through. Then Monday arrives and her stress levels ratchet right back up.

"Happy birthday!"

She's woken by Clary pouncing onto her bed from across the room, which is honestly not a very enjoyable way to wake up.

Rajani groans and pulls her pillow over her head. "No." She responds flatly.

Clary pokes her relentlessly until she finally rolls back over and moves the pillow so she can glare balefully at her friend, who just grins and hops off her bed.

"Up and at 'em Raj! We let you sleep in a bit but you need to get dressed now." She announces.

That wakes Rajani up. "What? Why didn't you say so, what time is it?" She quickly swings her legs over the edge of the bed and gets up, only to have to lean against the wall at the head rush the quick position change causes.

Queenie puts a hand on her shoulder. "Not so late that you don't still have plenty of time, chill girl. We wanted you to be well rested for the big one five."

Rajani grumbles under her breath as she grabs her robes and hurries to their bathroom to change. So far being fifteen is markedly worse than being fourteen.

They do make it to breakfast with plenty of time to spare, and she gets gifts from her parents, Sahana, and Mayra in the post that morning which does cheer her up slightly.

"Happy fifteenth, Raj." Ed stops by their group on his way out with his friends, and Rajani smiles up at him.

"Thanks Ed. But how did you know it was my birthday?" She asks, rather certain she's never told him.

He grins. "Your owl dropped off presents. I put two and two together."

Queenie nudges her as the sixth years leave. "He was watching you." She giggles, and Rajani groans.

"Merlin Queenie, not today please." But privately she's quite pleased.

Monday is Rajani's second favorite day schedule-wise since she has the entire afternoon off, and only two classes in the morning.

"How did you do on the essay?" Eugene asks as they exit the Muggle Studies classroom later that day.

Rajani grins. "I can't complain. You?"

He makes a face. "I could. It's an A, but he made a lot of corrections so I'd say it was probably a close call."

"I did pretty well. We can work together on the next one." Lenox offers as the group make their way towards the dungeons for their double Potions block.

Eugene nods. "That would be great! Hey Alas, how did you do?"

Alasdair is trailing behind the group, studying his own returned essay. He looks up at his name.

"Decently well but he took points off that I disagree with. I'll likely arrange to speak with him about it, he's quite good about giving back points if we can make a solid argument."

"Good to know for the future." Rajani observes, offering a smile at the Asian boy when he looks her way.

Double Potions goes rather well, though Rajani will have to get used to Finn comparing potion-making to some strange Muggle nonsense called Chemistry. She thinks she manages to feign polite interest while he's talking though, so she chalks it up as a win.

Then class is over, and Rajani is only too happy to decide to take the rest of the day off from worrying about school.

It is her birthday after all.

It will be the first time since coming to school that Ana hasn't celebrated Halloween with her now-graduated group of friends. She taps at her bracelet distractedly as she lets her current group of acquaintances chat around her during breakfast.

It's also the first year she hasn't had school on her birthday, and she's not quite sure what to do other than study. But the moment he'd found out the she's turning fifteen - which had been exactly a week before - Jerome had insisted the group of them should do something to celebrate.

Honestly Ana dreads whatever Jerome might be able to think up that he would term a 'celebration', but both Shaun and Amelia had agreed so she's stuck with it now.

The one positive is that they are all still Ravenclaws, and Amelia insists they spend at least the morning studying and working on assignments for class before doing anything celebratory. Ana is only too happy to work on her Divination essay, which both Shaun and Jerome join her on as they're both also in the class.

"Which symbol is the one for good fortune again?" Jerome asks, looking over at Shaun in clear confusion. "I know it's not the clover because I always think that's it and I'm always wrong."

"Horseshoe." Ana supplies. "The clover foretells of an imminent loss of wealth. Which really feels more like racial bias against the Irish to me."

Shaun snorts. "I thought the same."

Jerome meanwhile is eagerly scribbling down their conversation. "Cool, thanks Ana! Hey, do you think you could help me study for the midterm examination? I barely passed the class last year but I really want to take the NEWT level."

He looks up at her with wide-eyed honesty that catches Ana a bit off-guard. She's always thought that Jerome must have to put in effort to mix things up as much as he does, but apparently he really is trying. The new information pushes her to nod in response.

"Sure, I did rather well in that class last year. May I ask why you want to take it in NEWTs?"

Jerome beams. "Thanks! I really want to work in the Department of Mysteries and you need a NEWT in Divination for that."

Ana hadn't expected that, and she wonders if Jerome is really qualified for such a high-intensity job. But she doesn't voice her concerns and instead merely nods again and returns to the essay.

Jerome leaves the library about an hour before lunch, saying that he'll meet them in the Great Hall later. Ana knows he's off to prepare the 'celebration' and she sighs to herself, still not sure if she's looking forward to it or dreading it.

"Where did you get that bracelet? If I can ask?"

Amelia's question startles Ana, and she realizes she'd been once again fiddling with the bracelet Eric had given her. "Oh, it was a birthday gift a couple of years ago from a good friend. It assists with Occlumency."

Shaun tilts his head curiously. "I wonder how that works?" He muses aloud. "I've heard of certain objects assisting certain branches of magic but none of the books I've read on the subject have explained it very well."

Ana blinks, and finds herself shrugging slightly. "I'm not quite sure either. Perhaps we could find Aidan, he tends to be well-versed in things like that."

Making the suggestion that someone else knows something better than she does - and a Hufflepuff at that - leaves a bit of a bad taste in the back of , but it's not untrue. Magical objects have always just been part of her life - she's never really considered too deeply how they function on a theoretical level. It makes sense that a Muggleborn unaccustomed to such things would have more in depth questions on how they work.

Ana will have to correct this particular blindspot when she has time.

For the time being she quietly returns to her essay and does her best to push away the part of her mind that's currently cataloguing everything she currently knows about magical objects and which books she has that may provide more information on the topic.

She doesn't get much further in the essay despite her attempts to stay focused, so she puts up no resistance when Shaun declares that it's time to head to the Great Hall. The three of them pack up their textbooks and leave the library, along with most of the students who had also been studying there.

"Hopefully Jerome got everything organized. He went a little crazy on the planning." Shaun sighs.

Ana's worry increases ten fold, but she resolutely stays quiet on the topic.

Jerome ends up getting to the Great Hall nearly twenty minutes after they arrive, and he's covered in dirt.

"Everything looks good! I can't wait to see your face, you're going to love it." Jerome flings himself into the open seat next to Shaun that they'd saved for him and starts scrubbing at the mud on his arms. "I know seventeen is the really big birthday, but this is the first one we're celebrating with you so I figure going all out is perfectly reasonable."

Ana disagrees, but the brunet looks incredibly pleased with himself and she figures that he is trying to do something nice, so she shouldn't rain on his parade.

Even if it is her birthday that he's comandeering.

After they finish lunch Jerome herds them all out onto the grounds. It takes a moment for Ana to orient herself - she's not often outside so she's not as familiar with the landscape - but she realizes they're heading for the Groundskeeper's hut located just next to the Forbidden Forest.

"You know we're not allowed into the Forest unsupervised, right?" She notes, not slowing down. If they're caught it will be easy enough to blame Jerome, and she hasn't been in the Forest yet so she is curious.

But they don't quite reach the forest, instead turning towards the ramshakle hut at the edge of it. She frowns but remains quiet. At least if this turns out to be an awful waste of time she at least still has the Feast and all it's spooky decorations to look forward to in the evening.

"Okay, close your eyes now!" Jerome instructs excitedly. Ana levels him with an irritated look.

"Really?" She asks dryly, and Jerome wilts slightly.

"Okay, don't close your eyes." He agrees quickly. "But um, anyway, tah-dah!"

They round the side of the hut, and Ana actually stops in her tracks, stunned at the image that greets her.

Several Magical Beasts are corralled in the garden behind the hut, and Ana stares at them in genuine surprise.

"What... is this exactly?" She asks once she's recovered. She notices that the giant groundskeeper standing off to the side, beaming. What was his name again?

Jerome looks so incredibly hopeful. "Well, I know you're teaching yourself about Care of Magical Creatures so you can take the OWL next year, but I thought maybe some hands on experience with an expert would help? There's only so much you can learn from a textbook."

He's not wrong, and Ana is honestly touched that he'd actually put thought into what she would like when planning this. She'd assumed he'd just do whatever he would expect for his own party.

"This is... this is actually really nice Jerome. Thanks."

The brunet beams and bounds over to where the groundskeeper is waiting. "Well then, let's get learning!"

Ana has to admit that the idea is really ingenious. While plenty of things most certainly can be learned from a textbook, she'd be the first to agree with Jerome that some things need to done practically to understand the full extent of them.

The groundskeeper - Hagrid, she learns is his name - does his best to be helpful by explaining how to handle the creatures, but for the most part Ana finds him rather annoying, constantly telling her things she already knows.

Amelia and Shaun are having fun at least, and despite herself Ana is as well. She particularly is taken with the Fire Crabs.

"They seem ta like yeh!" Hagrid observes as she sketches one of the crabs on the extra parchment that she's almost certain was slipped into her bag by Amelia when she wasn't looking that morning. She's thankful for it now of course, but she thinks her roommate could have given her more of a heads up since she apparently knew what Jerome was planning.

"Yes, well, I quite like them as well." She responds distractedly, trying to get the curve of the crab's tail correct. "This one isn't full grown yet, is it." It's not really a question, more an observation to herself, but Hagrid takes it as an invitation to tell her all about Fire Crab development.

"They star' out qui' small yeh know." He explains happily. Ana tunes him out for the most part, having read plenty on fire crab development already. 

They spend the entire afternoon studying (or really playing in Jerome's case) with the creatures, and they bid Hagrid goodnight only when the sun has completely dipped below the horizon and even the beasts are starting to look tired and hungry.

"So? Good birthday surprise?" Jerome prompts hopefully as they walk back up to the castle.

Ana gives him a half smile. "It was excellent, thank you Jerome."

"Jerry." He corrects, even though they both know at this point she's never going to use the nickname - it's habitual on both sides.

"I can't wait to see the decorations they've put up this year." Jerome continues chatting as the group reaches the castle doors. "The professors really go all out for Halloween!"

"Fitz says they do the same during Christmas." Shaun adds. "I admit I wouldn't mind seeing that at least once before we graduate. Maybe next year I'll stay over Winter Break - I can study for OWLs at the same time."

"That's smart." Amelia nods in agreement. "I bet the library is much quieter during break, you could probably get a lot more done."

Ana hums her own concurrence. It actually wouldn't be the worst idea to stay over break, though she gets plenty enough done at home as well so it's less of an issue for her than she knows it is for some others.

"Hey, we should all stay next year! We could all study together!" Jerome suggests excitedly, but Ana quickly shuts him down before he can get too invested in the idea.

"I more than likely wouldn't be able to. My parents more than likely won't like the idea much. Perhaps seventh year when I'm an adult, but fifth year is likely pushing it."

Jerome deflates slightly, but he nods in understanding. "Yeah, I guess I'd want to see my little brother too. He's just turned seven and I bring him his gifts over break - he'd be sad if I sent it by owl."

This comment of course sets Shaun off on the one topic he's happy to ramble on about - his siblings. Ana really can't relate so she and Amelia stay quiet as the boys eagerly talk about their younger siblings, and instead admire the decor lineing the corridors.

This year the halls are painted in conjured shadows that flicker with the hint of something moving within them. Ana thinks she spots eyes a few times, and she quite likes the simple yet appropriately unsettling atmosphere that it inspires.

The Great Hall is of course the centerpiece of the decorations, and even the boys pause their conversation to admire the floating jack-o-lanterns and divebombing bats that hover overhead against a blood-red moon that's just large enough to be uncomfortably close.

"I love this holiday. Nothing like a good fright." Jerome says happily as he ducks one of the incoming bats. "I hope that one day we'll have Charms on Halloween and Professor Flitwick will teach us how to conjure some of this stuff ourselves."

"Some of it is likely just variations of things we already know." Amelia observes as the group settles themselves at the Ravenclaw table. "And conjuration is a branch of Transfiguration, not Charms, which is NEWT-level. We wouldn't be taught it until our last two years regardless of whether our classes occurred on Halloween or not."

"Aw poo, no way am I going to manage a high enough OWL to make NEWT Transfiguration." Jerome sighs.

Shaun pats his shoulder. "That's not true, you've improved a lot! And there's still a whole year to get better."

Ana doesn't say anything, as she's rather inclined to agree with Jerome on that particular front. At least he recognizes his own incompetence in classes now - Ana remembers in their first year how eager he was to answer questions that he didn't actually know the answers to, embarrassing the entire House in the process.

"Well whether or not you make it, you can always study on your own." Amelia points out. "Or ask one of us to tutor you. Teaching is the best way to learn after all."

"That is true." Ana admits. "Going back through old lessons with Marcus during our tutoring sessions has helped a lot."

The food appears just then, the usual mouth-watering array of Halloween-themed treats, and conversation is placed aside in favor of eating for about thirty minutes. Once they've finished off the pumpkin pie cooked up for dessert, the four head back up to Ravenclaw Tower, and Ana all in all thinks that it was a satisfying birthday all around.

At least until she heads up to the dorms to drop off her bag before joining the others for a mini chess tournament and finds herself face-to-fact with Evie Jones, her until now surprisingly scarce roommate.

Ana tenses slightly, hoping against hope that her birthday won't be ruined now by one of Evie's explosive accidents, after everything has gone so well.

"Um, hey." Evie shuffles slightly. "So I heard it's your birthday?"

Ana sighs and steps past the Muggleborn so she can deposit her bag on her bed as she'd initially intended. "It is, I'm officially fifteen as of three fifty six this afternoon."

"Third oldest Ravenclaw in our year then!" Evie attempts a smile, but quickly drops it at Ana's annoyed look. "Not the point, right. Look, I got you a book?" She holds out what looks like a rather worn copy of a book - Ana can't quite make out its title, "And um, I was hoping we could call a truce? I know you don't like me and everything and you were kind of mean to me a lot, but I was hoping-"

Ana cuts her off before she can really start rambling, taking the book out of her roommate's hands so she can properly examine it.

"Fairy Tales by Hans Christian Anderson?" She reads the title, and Evie nods hopefully.

"I've seen you reading the Grimms' stories and I thought you might like to read the other half of the writings that make up basically all Muggle children's stories?" She looks hopeful. "So, um, truce?"

Ana admits that it's a well thought-out gift - Evie clearly does have some Ravenclaw merit after all. "I didn't think we were fighting," She responds instead. "But of course. I'll see you tomorrow Evie."

Franziska has never been made quite as aware of the Quidditch season starting as she has been this year. Between her boyfriend still being quite enthusiastic about the sport despite no longer pursuing an interest in playing and Leona excitedly counting down the days she'd have a much harder time not knowing the exact date and time the first match between Gryffindor and Slytherin will kick off the season.

Leona still wakes her up the morning of November fourteenth excitedly shrieking that the first game is that afternoon. As if the entire House didn't already know.

And okay, Franziska is on her period right now so maybe that's not helping, but Leona's enthusiasm is grating on her nerves ever so slightly as the brunette proceeds to wake their roommates in the same manner that she'd roused Franziska.

"All of you are coming of course, it's my first match as the announcer!" Leona insists excitedly as the girls groggily get dressed for the day.

"Of course we will Leona." Jemma assures the other girl. "We would never miss something so important to you."

"Just maybe let us get some food in our system before expecting us to be quite as awake as you are." Tonks requests, yawning hugely. "Some of us were up way too late writing essays."

Jemma looks over at the pink-haired girl scoldingly. "You wouldn't have been if you actually did your homework before the day it's due." She points out with a sigh.

Tonks waves her off with a grin. "I never get lower than an 'A' though, the professors are encouraging my bad habits! Really it's not my fault."

Jemma just sighs again while Kiera giggles at her friend's declaration. The five girls then head up to the common room, where the boys of their year are already waiting.

Tyler rushes straight over to Leona. "You excited about the game?" He asks. "I bet you're gonig to be awesome! Easily better than the last guy."

"That won't exactly be hard, he was an to anyone who wasn't Slytherin." Cian points out, and Franziska is surprised to see him there. He's one of the few Hufflepuffs who usually doesn't go to games, unless he's physically dragged by either Henry or Donaghan.

"He was nice to us and Ravenclaw whenever we beat Gryffindor." Tyler offers. "But yeah, he wasn't great. I don't think announcers should be allowed to be so biased."

"Is it possible to ever have a truly neutral announcer though? Whoever it is will always be rooting for their own House." Aidan points out as the group starts moving towards the barrels to exit the common room. "That's the problem with having students as announcers. Although," He amends, "I suppose teachers probably retain their House biases as well, if Professor McGonagall and Professor Snape are anything to go by."

"Professor Sprout and Flitwick too." Henry pipes up. "They're just not as obvious about it, but I've seen them get really crazy at games before."

Franziska doesn't hear whoever responds as it's her turn to crawl through the barrel out of the common room. She joins Donaghan, Kiera, and Tonks who are already outside and waiting for the rest of the group.

"You all are going slow." Tonks whines pitifully. "I require nutrients to function and I am being denied."

"They've started in on a Quidditch debate." Jemma announces as she emerges a minute or so after Franziska. "We may want to go ahead to the Great Hall without them, you know how long those can go on."

They wait a minute longer and are joined by Cian, but when no one else comes they give up the last four of their yearmates and head to breakfast without them.

"You think Gryffindor or Slytherin is going to win this year?" Kiera wonders after a moment of silence. "It's been back and forth so far, so technically the lions are due for a win."

"Yeah, but the Slytherin seeker is a demon on his broom." Tonks points out. "Charlie is my bro but I'm not sure he'll be able to keep up. He couldn't last year."

"Are we seriously having a Quidditch debate? I thought we'd ditched the others to avoid that." Cian grumbles, and the others laugh - even Franziska, who had been thinking the same, cracks a smile.

Jemma takes pity on him and does steer the conversation towards talking about their studies and her progress with the first year study group.

"Oh, and Frannie I've been meaning to ask, I'm thinking of starting a similar group for the second years. You're friends with Roderik, right? Could you ask him to see if his yearmates would be interested in something like that?"

Franziska blinks, then gives a half nod. "I can ask, but he's kind of introverted, I'm not sure how comfortable he'd be asking people about that."

Jemma hums. "I understand it's no pressure. I just don't know any of the second years - I've already asked Saundra to talk to the third years about it."

Franziska pushes down the need to make a face at the name. Saundra Caldwell, to her credit, has managed to keep everything it's proper color and shape so far during the year, but Franziska knows that sooner or later one of the third-year's 'experiments' is going to go wrong again and somehow Franziska will end up being in the middle of it. Like always.

Thankfully her impending doom-by-third-year doesn't happen at breakfast. The rest of their group join them about halfway through and Leona spends more time talking than eating so when they're getting ready to leave Jemma shoves a few pastries into the excited girl's hands.

"No announcing on an empty stomach. Now go meet with Madame Hooch for the pre-game check we'll see you later." The blonde instructs, and Leona dutifully shoves an entire donut into before saluting and running off. Jemma sighs.

"You are such a mom." A voice teases from behind them, and Jemma smiles brightly as she spins around.

"Hi Drake, good luck today." She gives her boyfriend a hug in greeting. Drake grins in response and returns the hug.

"What, no good luck hug for me?" Evera pouts, and Jemma laughs but gives her other best friend a hug as well.

"You guys will be great, I'll be cheering from the stands." Jemma promises.

"Are you joining me and Badger in Gryffindor or staying in Hufflepuff?" Brandon, who'd been with Drake and Evera, questions as the now slightly larger group continues their walk to the Great Hall. He grabs Franziska's hand as he speaks, and she squeezes it in greeting.

Jemma looks conflicted. "Well, I was planning to stay in Hufflepuff to support Leona since it's her first game, but I guess I could sit in Gryffindor." She offers uncertainly.

Franziska clears . "Actually I was going to sit in Hufflepuff this time Brandon." She informs her boyfriend, who looks disappointed. "Sorry, this is a huge deal for Leona. I gotta support my friends."

Brandon looks miffed, but doesn't protest. He's spent enough time with Franziska's Hufflepuff friends at this point to know full well how much the first match means to Leona and that Franziska's logic makes sense. "Fine, but next Gryffindor match you have to join me in the Gryffindor stands." He says, and she nods.

"Of course, that's the deal." She gives him a quick peck on the cheek as they reach the Great Hall. "Now you lions go eat, you need your energy. I'll see you after the game." She adds directly to Brandon.

Jemma stays behind to talk a bit longer with Drake and Evera as the rest of them head for the Hufflepuff table. She joins them a few minutes later, accompanied by the four Housemates they'd left in the common room earlier.

"You know it's fine if you sit in Gryffindor." Leona is saying as the five sit down. "I totally get supporting your boyfriend over your friend-friend. I don't want to cause a rift between you guys so early in the relationship."

Jemma sighs and shifts uncomfortably. "I'm not sure I want to sit in the Gryffindor stands." She admits. "I like sitting with you guys during games, it's fun. And I really do like the Gryffindors but it's not really the same."

"You get used to it." Franziska offers. "I was nervous my first time sitting there last year but Holly and Brandon were good company. You can sit with us next year at the Gryffindor - Ravenclaw match, that way you'll at least have one Hufflepuff with you." She offers.

Jemma offers her a smile, but Franziska can't tell how genuine it is, a rarity coming from her most open classmate. "I'll think about it. Anyway, Leona, don't you have to do a pre-game check in thirty minutes? You should probably hurry up with breakfast."

Leona swears, and both Jemma and Franziska tell her off for the language earning laughs and some teasing from the rest. Breakfast slips into it's usual comfortable routine after that, with the one exception of Leona sprinting off earlier than the rest of them.

They spend the hours between breakfast and the start of the game pretending to study, though not much actually gets done with the exception of Cian's music theory since he still refuses to engage very much with the rest of them. They then move en masse to the Quidditch pitch along with a majority of the school, and the fourth years find themselves about halfway up the Hufflepuff stands.

"Well, they're not the worst seats." Aidan observes with a slightly frown. "I hope we'll be able to see everything though."

As if on cue one of the older students - a seventh year if Franziska remembers correctly - sitting behind them passes down a spyglass. "Here, we've transfigured enough for most of us at the top here." She smiles at them warmly as each of the accepts their own spyglass.

"Thanks Mary." Jemma says as she accepts her gift from the seventh year girl. "You really didn't have to."

Mary shrugs easily. "Hey, it's no problem, it was really good practice for NEWTs this year."

They chat with the older students for a bit as the rest of the school gets settled, and then a familiar voice sounds over the entirety of the pitch.

"Good morning Hogwarts! Are you guys ready to get this Quidditch season started?"

The crowd cheers, but none louder than the Hufflepuff section, some who even stand up and whistle their approval.

Leona sounds quite pleased by the response to her very first announcement. "That's what I like to hear! My name is Leona Poole and I'll be your commentator today. Now let's welcome our teams! From Gryffindor we have Sylvester, Fawley, Jarvis, Sylvester, Cadwallader, McKay, aaaaaand Weasley!"

The Gryffindor team parades onto the field, waving at the crowd as most of them cheer.

"From Slytherin we have Quinton, Flint, Taylor, Macmillan, Lindsay, Tatum, aaaaand McLeod!"

The Slytherin team doesn't get quite the same fanfare as Gryffindor, mostly being booed and hissed by the other three Houses though Franziska admires that Leona had introduced both teams with no bias. She wonders if that will hold up when it's Hufflepuff's turn to play.

The team captains - Kent Sylvester and the female Beater that Franziska thinks might be Tatum - shake hands, and then Madame Hooch releases the snitch.

"The snitch is in the air!" Leona shouts happily. "And now the teams are mounting their brooms... Madame Hooch has thrown the Quaffle, and Flint snags it away from Sylvester! Not a great start for Gryffindor, but that was a clever play by the snakes."

"Boo, don't encourage them!" Franziska hears someone shout from the Gryffindor stands, but Leona pays them no mind.

"Sylvester isn't taking that sitting down though, she's right on Flint's trail. She hates not getting what she wants, which is actually useful here!"

And that's when Franziska realizes exactly what Leona, the girl who knows everyone's secrets, being the Quidditch announcer is going to mean for the players. Through her spyglass she sees Evera flush angrily and flip the bird towards the announcer's stand as best she can without falling off her broom.

"I get why you came now." She hears Donaghan say, and turns to find he's speaking to Cian.

"A bit of schadenfreude never hurt anyone." Aidan observes cheerfully.

Franziska gives him a look. "No one here knows what that word means Aidan, we're not going to be able to pick up whatever set up you just gave." She informs him dryly.

"You're tetchy today." Henry notes. "Time of the month?"

Franziska might strangle him.

Jemma quickly pushes at Franziska's spyglass to stop the impending attack. "We ought to keep watching the game guys, it's a big day for Leona." She reminds them. That gets everyone to settle back down and refocus on the game.

It's tight, but it's clear early on that Slytherin has a slight advantage over Gryffindor that the lions are struggling to overcome. The two new Chasers on the Slytherin team - Macmillan from their grade and a trollish-looking boy who Franziska doesn't know - aren't shy about using borderline illegal moves that Madame Hooch can only call every so often despite Leona all but ranting about the cheating.

Aside from them though, the Slytherin seeker McLeod is holding up well against Charlie as the two swoop overhead with their eyes peeled for the snitch, matching each other swerve for swerve.

"What a play by Fawley and Sylvester! Ten points to Gryffindor and the lions keep possession of the Quaffle!"

The one positive is that the Gryffindor team is improving their plays as they go, adapting to the new Slytherin tactics and, Franziska notes, overcoming the apparently insurmountable rivalries they'd had at the start of the game. She's relatively certain Evera has never passed to Fawley or vice-versa in any of the games they'd played the year before.

Still, it's not enough to overcome Slytherin's early lead, and in the end Gryffindor loses, though Charlie does manage to grab the snitch.

The Hufflepuffs leave the stands generally less enthusiastic than when they'd walked on, and Franziska decides to go find Brandon to offer some comfort. She's feeling a bit bad now about not sitting with him, but honestly she prefers sitting in the Hufflepuff seats so the guilt peters out rather quickly.

"Tell Leona she did great for me." She says quickly to Jemma who nods and smiles in response, and Franziska hurries off to find her probably crushed boyfriend.

She does feel a little bad that she doesn't actually feel that bad about not already being there when the game ended.

The defeat by Slytherin isn't the best start to the Quidditch season, but Myr finds that their team is actually playing better now than they had been before the loss. A common enemy seems to be more binding than team spirit.

Evera and Jacob in particular have somehow managed to successfully put aside their petty disagreements (that Myr is ninety eight percent certain Jacob engages in just to rile Evera up) while on the pitch, if not off of it. They're passing to each other with no snark, and Jacob even gives Evera a compliment after a successful maneuver between her and Drake that had been rather difficult to pull off.

But once they've landed, it's back to squabbling.

"Honestly those two are ridiculous." Kent sighs as he collects the brooms at the end of their last practice of the year, watching his sister and Jacob sniping at each other as they head for the locker rooms to shower and change back into the school robes. "They get along brilliantly while playing now - I think their dynamic is even better than Evera and Drake's and those two have been inseparable since the first year train ride." He shakes his head. "I'll never understand girls."

"That's why you're still single." Brandon announces cheekily. He'd been watching the practice from the stands and now joins them on the pitch. "How long are you guys going to take because I need Charlie for a thing."

"Is it a thing Charlie's older brother might want to know about?" Kent checks.

Brandon smiles innocently. "I don't think so." He insists, and Myr knows immediately that the two of them will be up to something they don't want the prefects - and thus the teachers - to know about. "It's harmless really."

Kent just sighs. "Sure it is. Don't burn the school down."

"I'm pretty sure that's not possible but okay!" Brandon agrees with a grin that Myr doesn't trust at all. But as there's really nothing he can do about it without knowing what exactly 'it' is, he simply sighs and head into the locker rooms himself.

Fifteen minutes and a hot shower later he's changed back into his school robes and is heading to the Great Hall for dinner, accompanied by Fiona and Evera who had waited for him to finish.

"Do you remember anything from the first half of History of Magic because I can't." Evera whines. "Why did that have to be our first exam, why not Charms or..." She frowns. "Aw jeez, I'm going to fail everything but Charms."

Fiona pats her on the shoulder sympathetically. "No you won't, we'll study together. It's just exam stress making you forget everything right now."

"I'd be happy to help with Transfiguration if you like. I'm actually doing well in that class for once." Myr offers as they reach the Great Hall and head to where most of their year has already settled at the Gryffindor table.

"Proper wands." Holly blurts out as they sit down. "That's why you're doing well. Just saying." She grins cheekily at Myr's eye roll. She's told him the same thing every single time he's mentioned his improved spellwork, and it is getting slightly stale.

"I think we could all stand to practice a bit more what with mid-year exams approaching." Nabila points out. "I could help anyone who needs it with Care of Magical Creatures."

"Excuse you, I can help anyone who needs it with Care of Magical Creatures." Charlie very quickly replies, and Myr sighs as he starts putting food onto his plate. While quiet most of the time, Nabila becomes almost comically animated when it comes to magical creatures, and there's been a constant and unspoken competition between her and Charlie over who's doing better in the class ever since they both scored perfectly on their mid-term exams the year before.

As Myr doesn't need help in Care of Magical Creatures he tunes out the war of passive-aggression that starts up and focuses on eating, hoping that for once it will be a peaceful meal.

His hopes are dashed within minutes by two certain first years.

"Myr, tell Oliver that sneaking a broom onto campus is always illegal, even in a hypothetical situation."

"Myr, tell Percy to stop having a stick up his arse!"

Myr pushes down a groan. Ever since the first time he'd interceded in one of Percy and Oliver's spats months ago, the two boys have latched onto him as a mediator for their arguments. They don't get as bad as they had at the start of the year, but the duo are still far from cordial.

"Oliver calling people names isn't going to help anything. Percy, if it's just a hypothetical it doesn't hurt anything to entertain it, so long as it's clear that it's just hypothetical."

"And if it's not?" Percy frowns fiercely over at his roommate, who responds by sticking out his tongue.

"Then you tell Bill and wash your hands of it. You've got no authority here Perce." Charlie pipes up cheerfully, and his younger brother sags slightly.

"Alright." He mumbles, pushing his glasses up despite them already being snug against his face. "I'm sorry Oliver." He adds, and it sounds like he's physically in pain as he gives the apology.

"You don't sound it." Oliver replies irritably. "Honestly, how you're related to Charlie bloody Weasley-"

Charlie laughs as the two first years walk away, starting in on another quarrel. "It's good to see Perce making friends outside of the family."

Holly raises a skeptical eyebrow. "You call that being friends?" She states dryly as Oliver pushes Percy into one of the second years.

Charlie laughs. "Perce likes debating, kid's a total nerd. We all thought he might end up in Ravenclaw honestly, I'm pretty sure he's read more of my textbooks than I have." His tone is teasing, but Myr recognizes the brotherly affection as Charlie talks about the youngest school-aged Weasley. "And Oliver is a good kid, and very adaptable. Once they get past this bumpy stage they'll get on great I rekon."

"Or you're being optimistic because you're his brother and have a blind spot when it comes to him?" Fiona asks knowingly, and Charlie laughs and shrugs.

"Also a possibility." He concedes. "But I doubt it. I'm brilliant at understand magical creatures after all!"

And with that the debate starts back up again. Thankfully Myr manages to finish the rest of his meal with no further interruptions.

By the time they've all finished eating the mostly playful arguing has settled down and the group has decided to spend their time before Astronomy class that night planning a study schedule for the upcoming midterms.

Since Myr finishes his meal first, he volunteers to go up to the common room early and grab the seats by the fireplace before anyone else can grab them. They're the best spot in the entire Tower and as such they're almost always occupied.

There are a few people already in the common room when he arrives, which isn't unexpected as it's really only at absurd hours of the morning that the room is completely empty, but thankfully none of them are using the fireplace area, and Myr quickly spreads himself out so as to reserve as much of the space as he can.

The rest of the evening is a blur, but a productive one he's rather sure. At the very least they solidify a study schedule for the upcoming week before they have to start the trek up to the Astronomy Tower.

Myr is glad that fourth years have Astronomy at eleven at night - after the one AM classes the year before the extra hour of sleep is greatly appreciated.

They get to the top of the Tower just before eleven and wait patiently for the sixth year NEWT students to finish their class and head down.

Bill Weasley ruffles his brother's hair as the siblings pass each other. Charlie swats at him lightly and then tries to ineffectually fix the mess Bill had made of his hair as the fourth years file out onto the top of the Tower where Professer Sinestra is busy ordering start charts, as she always is at the start of class.

While she gets organized the Gryffindors talk amongst themselves, mostly about upcoming exams but also plans for winter break.

"We're going home of course, but mum said we should invite some friends by for the New Year." Charlie says. "So if any of you are interested just tell me so I can tell her how many people we're expecting."

"Does that include me?" Remi asks suspiciously. He very rarely spends time with the group anymore, only lingering when they're in class with the Slytherin or Ravenclaws and he doesn't have his cousin Tyler to talk to.

Charlie shrugs. "Why not? I bet the twins would love to hear about that prank you tried a couple weeks ago. I only ask that you don't teach them anything, they're enough of a handful as is."

Remi looks surprised by the response, and honestly Myr is a bit startled as well. Although he's a generally nice person, Remi has never really been able to mesh well with the rest of their group, always being a little too self-focused and destructive for the others to want to deal with him.

Charlie grins at Remi's expression but doesn't comment. "Just tell me sometime before we all leave." He addresses the entire group.

Myr knows his mother and Cadi would likely encourage him to go, but as much as he likes he friends he's rather certain he still likes spending the holidays with his family more.

"Well I'll be there. Anything to get away from my family for a bit." Holly declares. "Is it okay if I bring Willow as well? I know you guys don't know her well but I think she's as tired of wedding plans as I am."

Charlie shrugs. "Sure, she's a Ravenclaw right? My brothers might ask some inappropriate questions about her House but if she can handle that she's welcome to come along."

"Alright class, come get your star chart for the evening!" Professor Sinestra finally finishes with the sixth years' star charts and begins the fourth years' class, which effectively brings the conversation to a stop as everyone focuses on listening to the lecture and charting as many stars as they can during it.

They head back down the Tower, passing the first year Gryffindors as they go. Charlie reaches out to ruffle Percy's hair as they pass, but the younger Weasley ducks out of the way, swatting Charlie's hand as he does.

Fiona laughs. "Didn't you complain when Bill did that to you?" She points out when Charlie starts pouting.

Charlie sticks his tongue out slightly. "Yeah, but it's older brother privilege." He insists.

Fiona shakes her head slightly in amusement. "Siblings." She observes to Nabila. "I'll never understand them."

Nabila shrugs and yawns in response.

They get back to their dorms just before midnight and Myr very quickly fades into sleep.

Myr sleeps in about thirty minutes the next morning, as he doesn't have class after breakfast and thus can afford to arrive to the meal a bit late. The food never vanishes until every student has left, which Myr has learned to take full advantage of on days when his classes don't start until ten.

Almost everyone is still waking up and getting dressed when Myr rolls out of bed, save Brandon who's the only person with a class at nine and is as such already down in the Great Hall, likely sitting with his girlfriend at the Hufflepuff table and conspiring with Aidan on his latest potion. Myr still isn't exactly sure what it is that Brandon is trying to brew, but so far all he's succeeded in doing is losing several House points and nearly singing his own eyebrows off.

"Last day before midterm studying." Drake groans as they walk down the stairs to the common room.

"If you studied regularly during the year midterms wouldn't need their own week specially set aside for studying." A voice behind them notes, and Drake shoots Myr a long-suffering look as the two glance back at Percy Weasley, who had apparently exited his room behind them just in time to hear Drake's comment.

"Perce, don't lecture the older students, it's bad enough that you told off Snape yesterday." Oliver groans, appearing behind his roommate.

That gets Drake's attention. "You did what now?" He asks, eyeing the third Weasley incredulously.

"Is that why we're suddenly fifty points lower in the House Cup race?" Myr asks, and Percy flushes slightly.

"He was making fun of one of the Hufflepuffs, which really isn't going to help the poor girl learn anything!" He grumbles. "I simply told him that bullying students isn't a particularly effective teaching method."

Oliver laughs. "You said a heck of a lot more than that." He grins, punching his roommate's shoulder and causing Percy to stumble and fall onto Myr, who thanks Laurel and her Quidditch training for his ability to catch the boy and not fall down the stairs himself.

"Sorry." Percy mumbles as Myr helps him straighten back up. Drake and Oliver have gone on ahead, their conversation very quickly turning to Quidditch and fading into the ambient noise always present in the Gryffindor Tower.

"Not your fault. Are you alright?" Myr answers automatically. At Percy's nod he turns to continue down the stairs himself, the still-flustered Weasley close behind him.

Myr scans the bustling common room and makes his way over to Fiona and Nabila, who easily allow him to join their conversation about the Care of Magical Creatures midterm paper as they make their way out of the common room and towards the Great Hall.

"Which creature are you doing your essay on?" Nabila asks, animated as ever when speaking about creatures. "I'm doing mine on Erumpents. I know we haven't gone over them yet, I don't think we do until the end of next year or maybe early sixth, but Ohus has to be sent to a reserve this year and I really wanted to write about him since I'm going to miss him." She frowns sadly as she speaks about her own pet erumpent - though honestly Myr had never understood how her parents had gotten the go-ahead to give their extremely young daughter an endangered, XXXX classified beast as a pet and thinks the relocation is a good idea.

It's nice to talk to the girls though. Although both certainly have the familiar Gryffindor fire, it's a little more toned down than the rest of the House, and Myr has been feeling rather overwhelmed by his friends as of late. He's definitely ready to go home for the holidays and have some time to himself away from all the magic.

Okay. So. This is a HUGE milestone for me guys, and I admit I got pretty teary writing the final 1k of this chapter. Because we are, officially, half-way through this story! Fourth year will be finished before the end of 2018, and the story will be done by October 27 next year, and it honestly feels tangible now. I've never written anything on this grand a scale, and while there are definitely things I'd do differently now I feel like I've developed a lot as a writer since first posting our four POVs excitedly preparing for their first trip to their new school. These kids have grown a lot in the past 25 chapters, and  they'll grow even more in the next 25. I'm looking forward to sharing where the rest of their adventures take them!

Also, I'd like to give a special shoutout to everyone reading this. You guys are the ones who made it possible for someone like me, who had never finished anything longer than a few thousand words, to get to 250,000 words and counting for this, so thank you. Comments or no, I can see  that people are reading and that means the world to me <3

Extra special shout out to luv_kero for commenting on every single chapter - some of your comments have literally gotten me out of bed on bad days <3

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2491 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!