Chapter Eighteen

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
The Great Prank War Of 1986

The Sunday after their first Hogsmeade trip was one that Myr had hoped would be rather quiet. His roommates would be busy with their new purchases, or perhaps exhausted from the excitement of the previous day, and he would get some time to hear himself think.

However, with a group of roommates like his, there is such a thing as too quiet. The sort of quiet that comes just before everything goes to heck.

The Sunday after their first Hogsmeade trip is exactly this kind of quiet, and it's putting Myr on edge.

Both Brandon and Charlie are conspicuously absent when he wakes up that morning, and more concerning is that Remi has vanished as well. Drake at least is still passed out in his bunk by the window, snoring softly, which Myr is rather glad for once he's processed the otherwise empty room and immediately begins to worry.

He can't believe he'd forgotten that Hogsmeade means Zonko's. And knowing his dorm mates the way he does, he's confident they all have plans for the day that in no way include Myr's sanity being maintained.

He wonders if he can somehow fall back asleep and avoid the day all together, but now that the thought has crossed his mind he know it will keep him awake and worrying regardless of what he wants. So he heaves a sigh and swings his legs out of bed, nearly kicking Owen in the face in the process.

"Oh jeez, sorry buddy. I didn't realize you were there." He apologizes, though Owen doesn't seem to mind as he mewls happily and winds around Myr's feet in greeting. "Yeah, hi to you too. You enjoying your new freedom?"

Owen of course doesn't respond, instead turning and bouncing back out of the room, his tail held high, apparently having accomplished what he'd come in to do.

"Good to see you too." Myr can't help but grin wryly at his cat's antics. He's missed seeing his kitten every day, but from the times he's run into Owen the cat seems quite pleased with his new lot in life, so Myr doesn't regret the decision too much. He's just hopeful getting Owen home won't be a problem when Christmas break rolls around.

Myr dresses quickly and heads down to the common room, hoping to find his roommates there, playing chess or Exploding Snap, but of course he has no such luck. Only a lone toad, one of the fifth years' he thinks, sits on a table near the couches.

"Great." He mumbles to himself. "Now I have to go find them and make sure they don't lose any House points."

He makes his way down to the Great Hall to grab something light for breakfast before beginning the hunt for his roommates in earnest. He checks their usual haunts around Filch's office and in an abandoned seventh floor classroom as well as a few more general locations like the library and courtyard, all with no luck. He's starting to genuinely fret when he hears Aidan's voice coming from one of the many dungeon corridors and he rushes to locate the source. Where one ABC member is, usually all of them are.

Sure enough, and thankfully, Brandon and Charlie are present. However, the usual air of mischief and curiosity that surrounds the boys is noticeably absent, and Myr slows down as he approaches them, his momentarily appeased nerves flaring up again.

"Come on, it was just a prank Aidan. You engage in plenty of those yourself." Brandon grumbles, clearly annoyed.

"Mine don't involve hurting innocent animals!" Aidan snaps back. "And you're really lucky I'm second in the year because goodness knows your Transfiguration abilities would have never been able to undo the damages you caused!"

"Hey!" Now Brandon is getting angry. "Just because I'm not a huge nerd-"

"Guys, it was a mistake, yeah? Can't we all just apologize?" Charlie asks hopefully. "Brandon, you messed up, you get that, but Aidan, you can see he really didn't mean any harm, right?"

But both boys continue glaring at each other, either oblivious too or purposefully ignoring Charlie's attempts at mediating.

"Um, is everything okay?" Myr finally speaks up, and Charlie looks over thankfully.

"Myr! Hey, yeah, it's fine. Brandon transfigured Cerid into a teacup and then couldn't get her back, but she's fine now." He explains quickly. "Any chance you could talk to them? They keep expecting me to take a side."

Myr chews at the inside of his lip. He doesn't really want to get in the middle of a fight, especially not a fight between best friends, but at the same time he doesn't like the idea of just walking away either.

"Um, it sounds like it was an honest mistake?" He ventures uncertainly.

"Myr come on, you of everyone should understand my side! What if this had happened to Owen?" Aidan protests, and Myr holds up his hands in defense.

"Look I don't want to get into a fight okay? I'd be mad if something happened to Owen, but as long as the person responsible owned up and promised not to do it again, and Owen was safe, I think that would be enough?"

"Excuse me? 'Owned up'?" Brandon mimics, and Myr knows he made the wrong choice when he decided to try and get involved. "It was just a prank. No one got hurt, he just can't take a joke!"

"Your joke could have killed Cerid!" Aidan snaps, and just like that they're locked back into their glaring contest.

Charlie sighs. "Okay, I'm going to leave you two alone to figure this out. Come on Myr, I think I saw Remi and Tyler going towards the Quidditch pitch, and I don't trust their intentions."

Myr is surprised to hear Charlie worrying about potential rule-breaking, and he can't help mentioning it as they head outside.

"Oh, well, the twins became absolute monsters this summer and it got me thinking about how we might be perceived by other people, and how our pranks might accidentally hurt others instead of helping them." He waves vaguely. "I mean, don't get me wrong, Fred and George are pretty funny most of the time, but I've had to calm Percy down from near panic attacks a few times because they took things too far. So yeah. It got me thinking."

Myr raises an eyebrow. "Wow, that... sounds like a lot of work. Didn't Bill help at all?"

"He was usually helping Mum and Dad with Ginny and Ron. Percy helps them out too, but he's only ten you know? He can only do so much really." Charlie looks a bit down, but before  Myr can push for more information on the Weasley family they hear several explosions that has both of them rushing towards the Quidditch lockers.

"That was awesome!" Remi cries out just as the two boys arrive at the scene. There are several burn marks across the grass, and Remi Longbottom and Tyler Abbot stand on either end of the pitch, holding the smoking remains of what appear to be several firecrackers, though as they get closer Myr can see that they're slightly different from typical Muggle kind.

"What are you two doing? Aside from the obvious property damage, you could have set something on fire!" Charlie yells at them, his voice loud enough that even Tyler looks up from the other side of the pitch. "What were you thinking?"

"That next game the whole stadium is going to see 'Slytherin Stinks' scrawled across the grass." Remi replies cheekily, and if he squints Myr thinks he can make out the words even from ground level.

He frowns. "Perhaps, but that's not worth possibly killing someone over. And the game might be cancelled because of this." He adds pointedly, his brow furrowing at the thought. He's really been looking forward to the upcoming match against Slytherin and he'd hate if Remi manage to ruin it. Not that he'd be surprised - Remi has a knack for destroying everything he touches.

Remi scoffs, but the approaching Tyler looks nervous.

"Do you think?" He asks. "I mean, no one plays on the ground so it shouldn't matter, right?"

Charlie shrugs. "Who knows? But you obviously didn't stop to actually think this through, did you?"

Tyler looks rather ashamed, but Remi sticks to his guns as always.

"It's just a bit of fun Charlie, I thought you could enjoy something like this. Way to ruin him Myr." He adds pointedly, and Myr just rolls his eyes.

"I had nothing to do with it, Charlie matured all on his own." He replies shortly, as willing to deal with Remi as he ever is, which is not at all.

Remi rolls his eyes in return, and Charlie sighs.

"Well we're going to have to report you two for this, and I expect Slytherin won't be happy either." He grumbles.

Remi is immediately protesting. "You don't have to tell anyone! Nobody is making you! Tyler could get suspended from the team if you tell!"

Myr spots Tyler going pale at the possibility, but he back Charlie up. They should have thought about potential consequences before doing something so reckless.

"And someone could have been killed by your little stunt here, so we kind of do have to report it. Next time maybe stop and actually think before being stupid." He can't help being just a little bit smug, and the flash of fury in Remi's eyes is just a little bit enjoyable.

"He's right. You made the choice, you have to live with the consequences." Charlie adds, shooting Myr a look to tone it down.

Myr shrugs at him, surprised at how unapologetic he feels. Maybe he just has less patience than usual because he's been sleeping next to Remi for over a month now and he's about ready to commit murder for just one day when he doesn't have to come back from dinner to find Remi's things all over his bed.

"We'll get you back!" Remi says threateningly, but Charlie and Myr ignore him as they turn around and head back for the castle.

"Where do you think the teachers would be right now? I just realized we don't really see most of them on weekends." Charlie frowns, and Myr blinks.

"Um, maybe their offices...?" He suggests uncertainly. "Professor McGonagall definitely lives in the castle, so she must be around here somewhere, right?"

The two head to their Head of House's office, and Charlie knocks politely. After a moment, their professor's voice calls them in, and they share relieved looks before pushing open the door.

"Um, hello Professor. We thought you should know that Remi and Tyler vandalized the Quidditch pitch with illegal stuff they bought at Zonko's yesterday." Charlie says politely. "Nothing burned down and no one was hurt, but there is a message scorched into the ground now."

McGonagall raises an eyebrow. "Thank you for informing me Mr. Weasley. I'll see to it the both of them receive proper punishment. What exactly is the message?"

"'Slytherin Stinks'." Myr tells her, and he's surprised to see his usually somber teacher crack a small smile.

"Well they aren't wrong, but it was quite reckless of them to do such a thing. Alright, you may go. Thank you again for informing me of this."

Both boys quickly leave the room, and Charlie is grinning.

"Okay, I have to admit, that felt good. I haven't had many teachers praise me other than Professor Kettleburn." He admits. "I get why Bill likes being a prefect so much."

Myr laughs. "Welcome to my world. Being the good kid isn't so bad after all."

Charlie shoves him lightly with his shoulder. "Yeah yeah, I'm still going to have some fun though. Can't be all rules all the time - then what would your job be?"

"Hey!" But Myr can feel himself grinning. "Fair enough, but without me how many more detentions would you have gotten?"

"Point made. Say, speaking of avoiding detention, wanna hit the library and actually do the Muggle Studies reading? I know Quirrell never checks if we've actually done it, but it's probably worth going through for the exams."

Myr shakes his head with a grin. "Yeah, that would be good. Have you not already been doing that? You've missed out on a whole lot of ridiculous nonsense."

The two boys spend the rest of the afternoon in a quiet corner of the library reading their Muggle Studies textbook, and Myr is quick to point out incorrect assumptions and poorly understood traditions, causing both boys to laugh enough times to bring the wrath of Madame Pince down on them. They manage to not be thrown out of the library, but they do have to struggle to keep their voices down.

They head down to dinner that evening, and are greeted by a glaring Remi, who remains furiously silent throughout the whole meal. Brandon is also noticeably grouchy, and Myr is glad that Evera and Drake have stories of an Exploding Snap game gone very, very wrong to keep the overall mood of the table light.

Remi's stubborn silence ends up being a good thing for Myr, as that night he's able to go through his nightly routine with absolutely no interruption from the other boy, something he hasn't experienced since the start of the year. He falls asleep that night incredibly content, his morning worries a distant fading memory.

A memory that's brought into sharp focus again when he's awoken by a shriek from the common room the next morning.

Myr normally gets to sleep in on Mondays, but his concern wakes him up very quickly, and he stumbles down the stairs along with the rest of the House - and stops dead in his tracks when he sees what caused the commotion.

The entire common room has been turned yellow and black, and most of the students in the room are similarly dyed as well.

"My hair!" One girl sobs, tugging at her black and yellow locks, as a boy stares mournfully at his newly colored textbooks.

Bill Weasley is in the center of the commotion, his usually red hair now Hufflepuff yellow, and when he spots his brother in the stairway he storms over.

"Care to explain what's going on here?" He demands, holding up a black and yellow note, which Charlie takes gingerly from his brother.

"'Consider this a little payback. Next time you keep Cerid out of it.'" Her reads, and then turns to glare at Brandon.

Myr is terrified when he sees the look on the youngest Gryffindor third year's face.

"He wants a war? Fine. He's got a war."

The worst part, Franziska thinks, about Aidan and Brandon getting into a prank war isn't actually the war itself, though it's a close second. The worst part is that Aidan had gotten Saundra Caldwell and her band of disaster makers involved in the initial retaliation prank and now they're off waging their own unprovoked war with the school in general.

It starts when the Ravenclaw's table turns into jelly during dinner on Monday night, and Saundra very loudly takes credit when she exclaims that the charm "wasn't supposed to do that". She of course loses Hufflepuff twenty house points, and Franziska can practically feel the Ravenclaws' scheming their revenge.

Sure enough, the next morning all of Hufflepuff House find themselves swarmed by illusory eagles upon exiting the barrel to the common room, resulting in several people screaming and running for cover from the perceived bombardment, Franziska included.

She talks to Brandon in Ancient Runes after breakfast that day, and his suggestion is to up the anti.

"I could help! I'm a master prankster after all, I'd love to show you the ropes of my craft." He sounds so hopeful that Franziska very nearly takes him up on his offer, but she ultimately shakes her head firmly.

"No, I don't think continuous retaliation is the best answer." She says. "Saundra should have just apologized."

Brandon frowns at her. "It was a harmless prank Badger, and really quite funny. Ravenclaw is just overreacting."

She gets the feeling he's not completely talking about the newest set of pranks, but she doesn't push it. She knows whatever happened between him and Aidan is a sensitive topic for both boys, and she has no interest in being forced to choose sides.

So she just shrugs in response and turns her attention back to Professor Bathsheda, studiously copying down the day's runes and trying to not pay attention to the glare that Brandon is leveling at the back of Aidan's head.

Lunch finds her utterly disappointed when Kiera immediately asks her if she wants in on their planned return prank on Ravenclaw.

"We're already at war with Gryffindor, do we really need to do this?" Franziska questions, but she knows it's pointless. Tonks and Kiera even have charts drawn up of the architecture of the Ravenclaw Tower, with assistance from an equally enthusiastic Leona.

"Oh it's all in good fun Frannie! Lighten up, join the shenanigans!" The young  brunette grins at her. "I hear even my stuck up sister Sarah is getting into the mood, which means the apocalypse is probably approaching, so you may as well enjoy yourself while you can."

"The fact you actively recognize that these are shenanigans and are still partaking in them worries me even more than the pranks." Franziska sighs, and her three roommates laugh at her expense.

She ends up moving seats to sit by Roderik, who seems just as unimpressed by the prank war as she is.

"It isn't always like this, is it?" He questions bitterly. "I can't focus on my homework half the time because my roommates are all trying to think of pranks they could do. We don't know nearly enough magic to even do anything useful yet!"

"There is no such thing as a useful prank." Franziska sighs. "Just less hurtful ones."

Roderik frowns. "Maybe. Could you show me the Levitating Charm's wand movement again? I can't seem to get it right."

Thankfully the rest of the afternoon is calm. Franziska spends her free period after lunch in the library, writing essays and keeping a cautious eye out for anyone looking suspiciously innocent. Then she's off to Muggle Studies, eyes still peeled for trouble.

Professor Quirrell begins the lecture with as firm a warning as the quiet man is capable of.

"Now I know that some of you have gotten the idea to play pranks on the other Houses, and I admit I do like some of the creativity I've seen! But, please, this is class time so please no pranks while in my classroom."

Franziska glances around at her classmates and is relieved to see that no one looks disappointed. Hopefully this means that class time will be off limits for pranks, as she's certain she won't be able to pay proper attention if she's worrying about being hit with a dungbomb.

"Well, then, that's settled. So, um, today we're going to talk more about electricity and it's impact on Muggle living." Professor Quirrell says, clearly relieved that no one had tried to argue with him about the pranks. Franziska thinks if anyone had he likely would have crumbled. As much as she likes the man, Professor Quirrell is not the hardiest of people.

Class passes far faster than Franziska wants, and she's soon back in the treacherous halls, twitching nervously at every sound.

"Calm down Frannie, no one is going to attack you." Leona teases. "You really need to learn how to relax."

Franziska pouts at her miserably. "How can I relax when everyone is breaking school rules and causing general chaos like it's no big deal?"

As if on cue, there's the sound of a massive explosion nearby, and Franziska flinches.

Leona frowns. "Okay, I wasn't expecting that, our plan doesn't start for another twenty minutes." After a moment her grin is back. "Let's go check it out!"

"Let's not." Franziska groans, even as she reluctantly follows her friend towards the sound of destruction.

They emerge in the courtyard to find that the Slytherin and Gryffindor Quidditch captains engaged in a glaring contest, both consumed by an awful stench.

"What's your problem Kiddell? You can't just throw dungbombs at people with no provocation." Mayra Byrne snaps, and Laurel laughs incredulously.

"No provocation? You're really going to tell me that your players didn't leave a mess of dungbombs in the Gryffindor lockers this morning?"

Mayra's raises her chin defiantly. "You only think that because of the vandalism to the field from this weekend - you think we'd stoop to such petty revenge."

Franziska can't help noticing one of the Slytherin third years lingering in the shadows, watching the fight with a faint smirk, and Franziska gets the feeling that even if Mayra didn't have a hand in the bombing, it probably was a Slytherin who perpetrated it.

Leona's eyes a wide. "Oh man, looks like Slytherin just got pulled into the prank war! That would mean all four Houses are in on it now! That must be a record of some sort!"

Franziska sighs. "It's been two days Leona, this is probably going to have calmed down by the end of the week at the latest. Surely students have better things to be doing with their time than coming up with overly elaborate pranks." She points out.

She is terribly, terribly wrong.

A week and a half later finds her hunkered down in a fifth floor corridor behind a haphazardly erected protection spell.

"This is getting utterly ridiculous." She groans miserably as she deflects yet another bat. The hall is swarming with the stinky critters, and Franziska is just trying to get to Defense at a somewhat reasonable time, though with the endless pranks being activated around the castle daily being late is the new normal for everyone in the school.

Several of the Professors have taken to giving out unusually harsh punishments to anyone caught, in hopes of discouraging people from continuing to partake in the war, but it's only spurred them on, adding an extra layer of challenge to the situation. Worse are the professors that are actively amused by the situation.

And the poor caretaker Argus Filch is struggling to get everything cleaned up even as the castle falls apart around him.

Franziska has helped him a few times with cleanup, and has found that although grouchy, the man is actually quite thankful whenever students don't cause him extra work. She's even earned a few House Points, which she didn't know the caretaker could give.

But it's a very narrow silver lining in what is shaping up to be an unending back-and-forth of revenge pranks around the school. There are several personal grudge matches, as well as the two larger full-House ones, and Franziska is pretty sure some people are just making trouble for the fun of it.

Among the latter group is the perpetrator of her current predicament - Saundra Caldwell.

Franziska likes to think that she doesn't judge people very often, and never without reason. But she's never really like Saundra, and the younger girl really isn't helping her case with her endless disasters.

"Sorry! That wasn't supposed to do that!" The blonde calls unhelpfully from the other end of the corridor. "I'm actually not sure why it's doing this. Eloise, take a note! We'll have to study this further!"

Her ever-present Ravenclaw friend nods excitedly and pulls out a quill and parchment, dutifully scratching down whatever it was they did to summon the hailstorm of bats.

"I'll go get Professor Addington! I bet he can fix it!" Saundra calls. "Peach, go get Professor Addington." She instructs another of her group of friends, and immediately the brunette runs off down the hallway. "Just wait a bit more! Sorry again!" Saundra shouts to her.

Franziska just sighs and swats another bat away from her hair.

Eventually Peach - if that is her name, as Franziska vaguely remembers it being something more like Ella - returns with a clearly frazzled Professor Addington in tow.

Franziska sees the teacher take in the chaos of the hall before sighing and banishing the never ending hoard of bats with a single flick of his wand.

"Ten points from Hufflepuff, and five from Ravenclaw." He sighs. "Franziska, are you alright?"

Franziska brushes off her cloak and stands up. "Yes, I'm fine. Almost used to this sort of this now." She smiles at the Defense professor. "I am sorry it made me late to class, and that you had to be interrupted."

Professor Addington tuts lightly. "Nonsense, I'm glad you're alright. Now let's get back to class, today we're studying boggarts and those will most certainly be on the final exam!"

Franziska smiles tiredly at the professor and follows him back to the class, where she takes the only remaining open seat next to Aidan.

"Your hair is a mess." He informs her with a grin as she settles in, and she levels him with the most vicious glare she's capable of.

"This whole mess is your fault." She replies flatly. "And I am not going to be happy with you until it's over with."

Aidan shrugs. "Alright Ms. Stick-in-the-Mud."

"Aidan, unless you have something to share with the class I ask you stop distracting Ms. Reindhart." Professor Addington says loudly, and the whole class laughs at Aidan's expense, though he chuckles as well.

The rest of class goes smoothly if a bit stiffly as Franziska stubbornly avoids talking to Aidan. When class is over she packs up and joins up with Leona and Jemma as they exit the classroom.

"Hey, what happened? You ran off to use the bathroom and then came in late with your hair a complete disaster." Leona greets casually, and Franziska sighs and fills her friends in on the Saundra incident.

Kiera and Tonks catch up with them as she's talking, and Tonks releases a low whistle when she finishes explaining.

"That girl could really be going places. I mean, yeah, she's being super reckless but how many of us could have summoned a swarm of bats last year?" The metamorphagus says, and Franziska groans.

"No, don't encourage her! And she didn't mean to summon bats. Every time she does something it's usually followed by her or one of her friends saying 'that wasn't supposed to do that'. That isn't impressive, it's seriously concerning. What if they accidentally kill someone someday?" Franziska frets. "I swear one day I'll wake up and be in Ireland or something because they screwed up."

"Valid concerns, valid concerns," Kiera nods. "But Hogwarts probably has magical protections in place, and it's not like the teachers aren't telling her to stop all the time, she just isn't listening. There's only so much you can really do after all."

Franziska grumbles but lets the topic drop. She rather thinks there is plenty more they could be doing on the Saundra front, but with the current ongoing prank war she really is a minor concern at the moment.

No sooner has she had the thought than Tonks is dragging her out of the way of a giant illusion of a snake winding down the corridors and attacking anything that's red or gold.

"Well, that's overkill." Kiera raises an eyebrow at the departing snake's tail.

Leona shakes her head. "Not really. The Gryffindors painted the wall leading to the Slytherin common room with a lion murdering a snake, and then animated it. It took five days to come off." She grins. "I'm sure Franziska knows all about that considering rumor says it was Brandon who masterminded the prank."

Franziska rolls her eyes. "It was one date you guys, and I'm as much talking to him as I am to Aidan right now. They're both being stupid babies and have sent the whole school spiraling into permanent chaos over a petty personal rivalry."

Leona pouts. "No second date then? Who am I supposed to live vicariously through?"

"Can't you just get dates yourself?" Jemma offers with an amused smile, and Leona gags.

"No thank you, boys are gross. I don't care about the dating part, I want the gossip! And everyone knows couples make for the juiciest gossip." Leona says eagerly, and the group of girls roll their eyes.

Kiera pats Leona's shoulder, being unable to reach her head. "Leona, I think you may have a problem. Would you like to talk about it?"

Leona shoves her off with a grin and the other girls laugh as well.

They have the rest of the afternoon free, so the girls agree with Franziska's suggestion to go visit Hagrid for some tea. She's been to see the Gamekeeper several times already during the school year, and she's begun bringing her friends along with. She's found that despite it's small stature Hagrid's hut more than comfortably fits all of them, and the whole group can very often be found there on the weekends.

They spend the rest of the day there, and Franziska is happy for the chance to continue relaxing. Hagrid's hut tend to be a prank-free zone. She's not sure if it's because most people are rather wary of the large gamekeeper or if they just respect his space in a way they don't anywhere else on the school grounds, but it's meant she's been having a lot of tea recently.

Eventually they do have to say goodnight to Hagrid and head back for dinner. Franziska crosses her fingers that maybe they'll avoid running into any pranks before reaching the Great Hall at least.

Of course she'd never be that lucky, and not moments after returning to the castle the group is hit face-first with a pre-set prank.

Covered in goop, Franziska hopes that the war is nearly over. Her nerves can really only take so much.

Rajani has to admit she's kind of enjoying the prank war.

Sure, she's not setting any of the pranks herself, but she can admit she's stood watch and made a few suggestions to the people who are a little more active in the situation. It's all good fun after all, and no one is getting hurt.

Plus she's noticed that Slytherin seems to be on the receiving end some of the nastier pranks, and she figures it's really only fair that they get even. You don't mess with a snake unless you want the fangs after all.

That's how she finds herself on the ground floor of the castle on a Tuesday night, well after curfew, keeping watch for Elspeth and Ed as they rig a series of potions to fall onto Hufflepuffs exiting their dorms. Rajani's excuse should she be caught is that she wanted to grab a snack from the kitchens before heading to Astronomy, as she does have the class in a couple of hours.

"All clear?" Ed checks as he and Elspeth hurry back over, grinning wickedly, and Rajani nods with a return smile.

"All clear. If I can ask, what prompted this prank? I'd thought Hufflepuff and Slytherin weren't fighting yet." She observes quietly as the three sneak back towards the dungeons.

"Hunter Vaughan." Ed replies flatly. "Currently seventh year prefect and a right prat, always bossing around the fifth and sixth years as if he's Head Boy. I figured he could use some humiliation."

Rajani frowns. "But... this will probably not even hit him." She points out. Sure she'd gone along with the prank - it's an awesome idea and honestly she's excited to see the results - but at the same time she's starting to worry now that it may affect her secret Hufflepuff friend Donaghan Tremlett.

She and Donaghan have met up a few times so far during the year, mainly to study potions though a few of their meetings simply led to talking about their lives and classes in general. They're both taking Ancient Runes as well so they occasionally struggle through some translations if they get through potions quickly, though Rajani usually does that with Queenie and Finn - the other two Slytherins in the class - in their common room after dinner.

Ed shrugs cheerfully. "Eh, we're the only ones not fighting Hufflepuff anyway, where's the harm? The war is all in good fun really."

Elspeth rolls her eyes but doesn't say anything, and Rajani doesn't push though she's curious as to her quiet roommate's opinion on the situation. Elspeth has been one of the most active Slytherins in the prank war and Rajani doesn't want to drive her roommate back into her shell when she's only just starting to peek out of it.

The three only just make it to the common room entrance, narrowly avoiding a couple of prefects on their rounds, and they slide in, tossing the customary glares at the vandalism still sitting, half-faded but still discernible, on the entrance.

"Well that was a rush." Ed grins and offers both girls a high-five, though only Rajani obliges him. "Anyway, you two act innocent and I've got to get ready for my rounds. Have fun in astronomy." He waves and then hurries towards the dorms to presumably get his prefect badge.

"There you two are. And was that Ed? What were you-" Nia interrupts herself when she figures it out, and she grins. "Never mind. You didn't get caught, right?"

Elspeth and Rajani shake their heads, and Nia grins.

"Who'd you hit? Do we get to see the results? Details! Share! Now!"

"We have to go to class in ten minutes, they shouldn't talk about it where they could be overheard by non-Slytherins." Lenox points out. Rajani hadn't noticed her friend sitting on the couches, but he doesn't look very happy and she wonders if she'd done something. Normally he'd have greeted them along with Nia and Clary, who's standing next to the other girl and looking quite disappointed that prank stories will have to wait.

"Lenox is right." Queenie says decisively, "You can tell us later. For now we ought to be heading for class."

Of all her friends, Queenie is the least amused by the prank war, having often pointed out the complete needlessness of the entire situation. The counter she always gets is that it's not about having a point, it's about having fun.

And Rajani at least is having plenty of fun, so she has to side against her best friend on this one.

They head up to astronomy as a group, running into a prefect patrol on the way. Rajani has to share an eye roll with Queenie at the suspicious looks they get from the two sixth years. They're allowed to be out to go to class, but the green on their cloaks makes them immediately suspect. Rajani can't help but snort when Clary fires off a tripping spell at the guy when he's not looking.

"Don't be so obvious next time." Is Queenie's only rebuke, and Clary gives a Cheshire grin in response.

Class goes by rather slowly for Rajani's taste, but the hour eventually ends, their star charts are handed to Professor Sinestra, and they quickly make their way back down the Astronomy Tower and to the dungeons.

Rajani is honestly exhausted, but she has a sleep in the next morning so she stays up to fill the others in on the prank she'd assisted in setting up, with details filled in by a rather proud Elspeth. If all goes according to plan, the Hufflepuffs will smell like wet fur for most of the day unless they have spare robes, though even then their hair and skin won't clear up for a set amount of time.

Rajani lets Elspeth go over the exact formula she'd used for the potions as she showers and falls into bed. She's worried the others' conversation might keep her up, but she's fast asleep within a few minutes.

The next morning she ends up waking up at a normal time despite the sleep in and her own exhaustion when she'd fallen asleep, so she decides to go to breakfast with the rest of her House and see how the prank had gone.

One thing the trio hadn't properly thought through, that she realizes as soon as she walks into the Great Hall, is that smell travels.

"Oh gag. Well, we know the prank worked." Clary makes a face and delicately plugs her nose. "I'm not sure how I'm going to eat with this stench lingering in the air."

Rajani feels her stomach roll and she thinks she might delay eating until the Hufflepuffs have evacuated the premises. The entirety of the great hall smells of wet fur and manure, and Rajani can see quite a few irritated and rather ill-looking students sitting at the Hufflepuff table table.

Among them is the actual intended target, Hunter Vaughan, which Rajani can't help but smirk at a bit, but then she notes that one of the other victims is Donaghan, because naturally her luck couldn't hold out forever.

She resolves to apologize to him as soon as she's able, but for the time being she escapes back to the Slytherin common room with Queenie and Eugene, who both have the same sleep in that she does.

"Well, that was both a victory and pretty gross. At least both Elspeth and Ed also have to suffer with the rest of us." Queenie laughs as they approach the Dungeons. All three glare at the graffiti as they pass it, though Rajani honestly barely registers that she's done so as the wall closes behind them.

"We don't really have to suffer actually." Eugene notes thoughtfully. "How long does that stuff have until it wears off?"

"Should be gone a little after lunch time." Rajani recalls. "You're right, we don't see any Hufflepuffs until Ancient Runes this afternoon, and the smell should be gone by then." She grins over at her friends. "Curse dodged then."

"This is just going to encourage you isn't it?" Queenie notes with clear amusement.

Rajani shrugs as innocently as she can manage. "Well there is a war on yon know." She replies, and Eugene laughs.

The three go to breakfast late, along with Cadfael and Alasdair, both of whom had actually used the sleep in to sleep are are rather put off by the lingering stench in the Great Hall.

Cadfael and Alasdair sit well down the table from Rajani and her friends, which suits Rajani just fine. She and Cad have had an icy relationship since she'd accidentally gotten him detention the year before, but she refuses to feel bad about it. If he didn't want to get in trouble he shouldn't have left the dorms in the first place after all.

Breakfast is a rather calm affair, with more focus put on swallowing and breathing in as little as possible rather than talking. Eventually the five third years head for Transfiguration with the Ravenclaws and a blessedly clean classroom.

Queenie and Eugene naturally sit together, so Rajani claims the seat next to Elspeth, who despite having to deal with the awful smell all morning seems quite chipper.

"It worked like a dream!" She whispers to Rajani as the latter settles into the seat. "We hit even more Hufflepuffs than I expected!"

Rajani can't help but grin at her roommates' enthusiasm. As messy as the prank ended up it's worth it if it can get the usually somber and bitter Elspeth to smile.

"It did go pretty smoothly." She agrees with a small smile.

They don't get to talk much after that, as Professor McGonagall is quite strict on full attention being given in her classes, with points being deducted heavily for anything that can be classified as goofing off. However, as soon as class is over Elspeth begins talking again, her voice low and her eyes skittering suspiciously towards the Ravenclaws.

"So I'm thinking we can hit Gryffindor with something similar, but it makes their clothes disappear instead!" She whispers eagerly. "I've looked into how that would work and I think Zonko's has something we could use. We'd need to sneak out of the castle of course, since Hogsmeade trips are being banned until the war stops."

Rajani hesitates. "Couldn't we just turn their clothes silver and green or something? Making them vanish seems like it's a bit much. And could potentially backfire in some pretty bad ways." She points out uncertainly.

Elspeth frowns. "It's just Gryffindors." She replies. "But fine, you don't have to help. I'll ask Ed."

Rajani hesitates again, but then sighs. "No, it's fine, I'll stand watch. You'll need someone to get you out of trouble if you're caught, and Ed is terrible at that."

Elspeth grins. "Great, I knew we could count on you!"

"Wait, you did this Raj?"

Rajani freezes at the all too familiar voice behind her. She'd of course known she'd be seeing Donaghan in Ancient Runes later in the afternoon, but she hadn't really been intending on him knowing about her part in the prank that has him currently stinking up the hallway, nor had she expected him to confront her on anything in front of their classmates.

Two of his Hufflepuff friends are standing behind him, one looking bored and the other distinctly confused. A quick glance towards Elspeth finds her staring at Donaghan like a cornered animal, ready to lash out at the slightest provocation.

Rajani chews at her lower lip. "It's just a prank, it will wear off in a couple of hours."

Donaghan blows out an angry breath. "You know I've been defending Slytherin all day? Saying you guys had no reason to make such a broad attack on our House? What the heck Raj?"

Rajani has always had an inkling that Donaghan isn't the type to anger very loudly, but his quiet hurt is somehow worse than if he'd been yelling.

"It's a prank war Donaghan, no one has reasons anymore."

"You think you all would be more careful though!" He snaps, and Rajani feels rage flash through her veins.

"Why? Because we're Slytherin? Because we're naturally evil and shouldn't get to have the same sort of fun as the rest of you because it's so much worse if it comes from us somehow?" She fires back, and beside her she sees Elspeth stepping forward.

"Why don't you just back off and leave us alone. If you can't handle a prank you definitely can't handle me when I'm mad." She hisses angrily, and after a moment Donaghan deflates.

"Fine. Sorry to bother you." He says bitterly. "We're leaving."

His two friends follow him as he walks away from the two girls, leaving them alone in the hallway.

Elspeth makes a face. "Great choice of friend there." She notes flatly. "Any other nasty surprises you wanted to get out of the way?"

Rajani isn't sure if the tone indicates that Elspeth might be closing up again, and she finds herself shaking her head almost frantically. "No way. And if he's going to be like that about a stupid prank he obviously wasn't worth keeping around, even if he was decent to study with."

Elspeth nods, and then uncertainly pats her shoulder. "People are real presumptive jerks just because of which House we're in." She states solemnly. "So you still in to hit the Gryffindors?"

Rajani nods firmly. "More than ever. And actually, do you think you could show me how to do it? I figure if I'm getting blamed anyway, I want to actually have a hand in the fun stuff."

Elspeth actually grins at the comment, and Rajani idly thinks maybe she should do that more. "Alright! I can't say out here, but come talk to me tonight in the dorms, I'll give you a full rundown."

Rajani nods firmly and the two girls have to hurry to make it to Herbology in time, though they do lose ten points for cutting it disruptively close.

"Hey, what happened back there?" Queenie asks quietly as Rajani stands in the open space next to her best friend. "I thought I heard arguing but Nia told us Elspeth is good at ending those and not to get involved. But is everything alright?"

Rajani opens , then suddenly feels close up. No, she probably isn't alright. She had actually really liked being friends with Donaghan, but she realized now that Nia had been right about making friends outside of the House. It just isn't possible - people always make assumptions regardless of who she actually is just because of her House.

"Raj?" Queenie looks worried, and Rajani pushes on a smile.

"I'm fine, really. Just learned the hard way why Slytherins have to have each other's backs is all."

Queenie frowns slightly, but doesn't push and Rajani is glad. She'll tell Queenie the full story someday, but right now she still needs to process it all herself.

What she does know is that she needs to do more to have her friends' backs. After all, no one else is going to have them.

Aside from the obvious juvenility of the entire situation, Ana finds it's rather easy to just ignore the ongoing prank war altogether. So long as her protective spells hold up, and they only failed once (and wasn't that the worst Wednesday in the history of her life), she's content to continue on with her life and only take note of the chaos around her if she's actually impressed by a prank.

Generally the ones that catch her attention are from Ravenclaws, so she usually gets to ask the mastermind behind them about their methodology. She's learned some very interesting spells and potions that could be used defensively if she ever finds herself in a situation that might require it.

Otherwise, Ana is just hoping that the whole thing will be over by the thirty-first so she can spend her fourteenth birthday in peace.

At least, she thinks to herself rather bitterly as she gets dressed on Monday the week of, her period will be over by then, if nothing else.

She'd started 'becoming a woman', as her mother delicately put it, at the end of the summer. And ever since it has been a right nightmare to deal with.

She at least has it somewhat scheduled, so she knows that since she'd started today she'll be done by Thursday, and thus be free for her birthday.

And even luckier she has older female friends who have been life savers on several occasions. Josie especially has proved a fountain of convenient products since Ana is still getting used to the extreme annoyance that comes with maturing.

Once she's finished in the bathroom, she erects her usual protection spells and heads down to breakfast, effectively warding off the rain shower of invisible ink pelting everyone exiting the Tower, courtesy of Slytherin if the green stains her less fortunate House mates' cloaks are anything to go by. She's just glad their clothes aren't vanishing completely, a problem Gryffindor had faced the previous day.

Most of the targeted pranks happen right around the entrances of the common rooms, so Ana isn't at all startled by the attack. The real challenge comes from the general pranks, which are scattered all around the school and tend to be activated at the most inopportune times.

Still, she manages the rest of the walk to the Great Hall with no surprises, and she lowers her spell guards as she sits next to Eric, who's taken to sitting at their table everyday since the prank war started rather than jumping back and forth between sitting with them and Laurel at the Gryffindor table.

"Good morning." Sarah chirps from across the table. For being Head Girl, she's enjoying the prank war a little too much, even coaching some of the younger Ravenclaws in advanced spells to help them with their pranking. "I see you avoided the snakes' surprise."

"Getting around the pranks isn't exactly difficult if you know how to counter them." Ana replies as she begins filling her plate. "And considering there's always something outside the Tower at the start of the day it's probably the easiest one to avoid."

"Tell that to Ace." Josie grins. "He had to go change."

"Hey, I didn't think we'd pissed anyone off yesterday. Slytherin and Hufflepuff are going at each other and Gryffindor still has to retaliate on Slytherin from yesterday." Horace defends himself, but even he's grinning. "Though I suppose Slytherin never needs a reason to go after someone."

Josie shakes her head in amusement. "How you're a Ravenclaw I'll never know." She teases.

The group drifts into discussing school for a while before the topic returns to the ongoing war, during which Ana speaks up about her own hopes that it will end soon.

"It was perhaps a bit amusing to start, but between exams and Quidditch season approaching I'd say it could get dangerous and could even cause people to fail their exams if we don't wrap it up soon." She observes. "I have a first year I'm tutoring on the weekends and he's not paying attention in classes at all anymore, just trying to think up pranks. And he can't afford to be doing that, his grades were terrible even when he was paying attention."

Sarah nods. "I get that for sure, but the professors aren't sure how to stop the war entirely. For every prankster they punish, five more pop up. I think the only way to end this is for there to be a clear winner. And who knows how long it will take for that to happen."

Ana frowns as the rest of the group nods in agreement with the Head Girl. Eric speaks up again after a moment.

"I'd say of anyone though, Ravenclaw is the House that could pull off a clear victory, if we actually worked together for once. I've always thought this House's biggest failing was the fact we're all a little too resistant to working as a team."

Josie and Hannah both nod in agreement, and Sarah looks contemplative. Horace just looks lost.

"I've never thought that though." He says uncertainly, and Josie snorts.

"You aren't smart enough to sweetheart. Plus you're the rare Ravenclaw with surprisingly good people skills." Josie grins at her boyfriend, who looks uncertain whether to be insulted or flattered.

Ana spends the rest of the day thinking about what Eric had said. She can of course acknowledge that she herself has never been good at making friends, the seventh years and now Aidan notwithstanding, but upon thinking about her year mates she realizes Eric might have a point about the anti-teamwork sentiment in the House. Between her, Evie, and Amelia only the latter has ever tried to be particularly friendly, with very limited success, and of the boys Ana has only really spoken to Shaun, who's really more of a listener than a conversationalist. Fitzwilliam is too flighty, Jerome too distractable, and Finnigan simply too antisocial, though the latter had made the Quidditch team as a Chaser so she wonders if he may come out of his shell more in the future.

She also thinks about what Josie had said about lacking social skills being specifically a Ravenclaw trait, and wonders if that had somehow drawn her to the House without her realizing it. She's seen how close the Slytherins are with one another, and she can't imagine ever being that friendly with that many people.

Her musings are interrupted by a flying canary attempting to attack her. She deftly transfigures it into a brick for one of the professors to deal with later and shakes off her contemplations in favor of mentally going over her Arithmancy notes from the previous week.

The rest of the week passes much as the first one had, at least until Wednesday evening. Ana had been studying in a corner of the Ravenclaw common room when Sarah Poole rushed in, grinning in a way that immediately put Ana's guard up.

Sarah tapped her wand twice against the wall and then pressed it to her jugular. "Attention all Ravenclaws! We will be having a mandatory House meeting at twenty o'clock tonight, just after dinner. Do not be late, and tell any Ravenclaw who isn't here right now as there will be attendance taken. That is all, apologies for the interruption."

Ana doesn't think Sarah is sorry at all, but she is curious enough to go check if Amelia and Evie are in their dorm room, or if she'll have to tell them later about the meeting. Their shared dorm room is empty, but as she reenters the common room she runs into Shaun just as he enters.

"Hey, meeting tonight in the common room, all House members have to be there." She tells him briskly. "You should check if your roommates are here, otherwise you'll have to tell them later.

Shaun looks surprised, then shrugs. "Alright, I'll tell them. I actually know where Amelia is right now so I can go tell her as well. Do you know what the meeting is about?"

Ana shrugs. "Knowing Sarah? It could be absolutely anything."

That night at dinner, Ana makes a pit stop next to where the rest of her year sit together to inform Amelia and Evie, the latter of whom makes a point to ignore her, of the impending meeting.

"Shaun mentioned it earlier, but thanks." Amelia smiles a bit shyly. "Hey, uh, did you want to sit with us tonight? I was hoping to go over that theory we talked about in Arithmancy, you seemed to really understand it."

Ana is honestly surprised by the invite. She and Amelia have been talking a bit more this year than they have in the past two, and she's always had something of a rapport with Shaun, but she knows next to nothing about the rest of her year mates other than the fact Evie hates her and is generally a trouble magnet.

She glances at Evie once, and then shakes her head. "The seventh years will be expecting me. I'd be happy to talk to you about Arithmancy tomorrow though. I have a free block after History tomorrow morning?"

Amelia nods. "That works. Meet me in the Clock Tower Courtyard? I know a good, quiet study area."

That piques Ana's interest. As much as she loves her corner of the library it does get crowded during exams, so it would be nice to have other options available to her.

So she agrees to the study session and then turns to sit with her usual group.

The seventh years greet her somewhat distractedly, and Ana soon realizes that they're quite focused on attempting to make Sarah share whatever it is her full-House meeting is going to be about.

For her part the Head Girl is staying resolutely silent on the matter, and eventually the group gives up and talk NEWTs for about thirty minutes before dinner wraps up and the whole of Ravenclaw make their way into the common room.

Ana manages to snag a seat on the topmost step into the girls' dormitory that still allows her a view of the common room, meaning that despite the heavy crowding in the common room she's not caught in the center of it.

Sarah stands by the doorway, and she waves her hand for silence as she presses her wand to . "Okay, can every one hear me? Good. So let me get right to the point: who here wants to win the prank war?"

Ana is pretty sure she goes temporarily deaf from the shouting Sarah gets in response to that comment, and the Head Girl grins.

"Great, because I know exactly how we're going to do it. And I'm going to need everyone onboard and knowing exactly what their roll is for us to pull this off, so listen up."

Ana has to admit, Sarah's idea is rather inspired, and wonderfully complex. The one downside is that each year has to work as a team to accomplish their parts, which Sarah gave only rough guidelines for, stating that they'd know themselves who would be best for which roles.

Thus, Sarah and Amelia's quiet study session ends up hijacked by the entire third year class. Even a distinctly irritated-looking Finnigan is sitting on one of the rocks by the lake, eyeing his classmates warily.

"Okay! So I didn't totally get the whole plan but I know there was a distraction part! I could do that!" Jerome is the first to break the almost awkward silence, and also seems to be the only one utterly oblivious to said awkwardness.

Ana sighs. "Sounds about right to me. I think Evie should help with that, she's a walking distraction honestly."

"Hey! Just because you don't like me-"

Ana waves a hand distractedly. She's almost done with her period, but she still finds that she has even less patience for her roommate than normal, a common monthly side effect. "Nothing to do with that. Things tend to explode or generally screw up in your vicinity. Therefore, you are literally a walking distraction. Between that and Jerome's attempts to help being counterproductive you two will have the prefects running circles for hours."

The rest of the group nods in agreement, leaving Evie no real room to argue. So she grumpily nods and slouches back on the ground.

"Ana, I think you, Amelia, and Finnigan ought to be the ones assisting the seventh years." Shaun observes quietly. "Fitz and I can stand guard."

Ana nods briskly, trusting that Shaun knows what he's talking about and also not wanting to have to spend any more time with the group that strictly necessary. "Sounds like a plan. Well then, I'll see you all tonight for Astronomy then." With that she excuses herself, not wanting to have to awkwardly wait for everyone else to leave, and telling herself she'll help Amelia the next day with Arithmancy.

That evening, after a successful day of ignoring her classmates (except for talking with Aidan in Arithmancy), Ana braces herself to head up to Astronomy. The entire Ravenclaw class has been buzzing for most of the day, an a majority of the plan has already been set into motion. Their class, along with the sixth and seventh years, are involved in the final stages of the prank, and the nerves have clearly been eating at her year mates since they all look extremely nervous.

"Everyone just stick to the plan. And stay focused in class, we don't want Professor Sinestra picking up on any suspicious behavior." Ana reminds the group as they traipse towards the Astronomy Tower.

Class passes agonizingly slowly, especially as Fitzwilliam turns out to be terrible at faking innocence, so the rest of the class spends more time covering for his stuttering than actually paying attention to the lesson. However, they manage to survive it and finally get their part of the plan rolling. The seven students sneak down the Astronomy Tower stairs, but instead of heading for their dorms, they go down to the Great Hall, with Jerome and Evie splitting off to provide the needed distraction.

They meet with the seventh years at the arranged point outside the Great Hall, and the third year guards are joined by Eric and Hannah. They follow Sarah's directions exactly, and the whole group slips back to the common room, where they're joined by Evie and Jerome about twenty minutes later, both of whom have new detentions but confirm the distraction went perfectly.

From there it's just a matter of waiting. And Ana finds the anticipation of the event makes her birthday the best one she's had since arriving at Hogwarts. The whole school is tense, as everyone has somewhat picked up that Ravenclaw has something planned. However, it isn't until the Halloween Feast that night that they finally learn what's coming.

Everyone has just settled in to eat their food, when the sixth years enact the final part of the plan. And with a few flicks of their wands beneath the tables, every other House finds themselves drenched in their own meals at the tables erupt in a volcano of food.

At the Ravenclaw table, Ana grins and digs into her meal as the chaos unfolds around them. Definitely the best birthday since getting to Hogwarts.

And thus concludes a portion of the story I've had planned for the better part of a year now! Next chapter it's back to boring old exams, and Christmas Break has arrived.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!