Chapter Fourty-Two

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Falling Forwards

Franziska invites Evie and Fitzwilliam to join her and Tonks on their Valentine's Hogsmeade trip, which both agree to. If she's honest Franziska is surprised that Fitzwilliam agrees at all considering it's three women, one of whom he doesn't really know, but all it takes is a bit of wheedling from Evie and he caves. Franziska is glad for it - he needs to get out more in her opinion.

Tonks invites Leona and Aidan as well but the former shiftily declares she already has plans (which Franziska is hoping don't involve stalking people on their dates but she's not optimistic on that front) and Aidan cites a need to study. Tonks complains at him a bit but he remains unmoved and she eventually gives up.

"Just the four of us then. I'm going to feel like a fifth wheel." She complains as they wait for Evie and Fitzwilliam. "I even asked Cian this morning to come with us, considering he's lost his buddy to the love bug with Jemma, but nope. He's staying to work on production or some other such nonsense, though without his band I dunno how that's supposed to work."

"You don't have to have the group immediately on-hand while composing." Franziska responds thoughtlessly, and then blinks. She's been sitting with Cian and Donaghan more often during meals since Jemma is sitting with them more but she hadn't realized she'd been internalizing Cian's music rants well enough to parrot out the many facts he provides. "It helps though." She adds after what is definitely too long of a pause.

Tonks either doesn't notice or tactfully doesn't comment - Franziska is leaning towards the former of the two if she's honest - and a moment later it doesn't matter either way as Evie rounds the corner, dragging Fitzwilliam along behind her.

"Hey guys! Sorry we're late, Amelia was fretting about stuff that I still don't totally get and so I was trying to help but I don't think I did? Anyway, we're here! Let's do this! Into the slush my friends!"

Tonks laughs and accepts Evie's arm, linking together at the elbows. "I changed my mind, this is going to be fun!" She declares as she grabs Franziska into the chain while Evie does the same with Fitzwilliam.

They end up having to unlink rather quickly when Tonks inevitably trips over something that's invisible to the rest of them and nearly drags them all down into the half-melting February snow cover.

Franziska is more than used to Tonks' horrific balance so she manages to extract herself and avoid falling into the snow, and Fitzwilliam is far enough away that he manages to stumble backwards away from the disaster zone without tripping himself. Evie unfortunately ends up on her knees in the slush, though she's laughing.

"What just happened?" She asks once they've all caught their breath - whether due to laughing or the shock of the near fall.

"I'm a bit clumsy." Tonks admits sheepishly.

"A bit is an understatement. You'll see by the end of today." Franziska warns with a grin.

Fitzwilliam takes a step away from the Metamorphagus as she shrugs cheerfully, her bubblegum pink hair matching the pink of her cheeks. "It's a gift."

It's thankfully a gift that doesn't throw them into anymore snowbanks on the rest of the walk over to Hogsmeade. Tonks and Evie chat eagerly about a variety of topics - mostly classes as far as Franziska can tell though she really can't keep up - while Fitzwilliam and Franziska mostly just follow behind them.

"Butterbeer first!" Tonks  declares when they arrive in the village. "I'm freezing."

"Because you're soaking." Fitzwilliam supplies. "Why didn't you dry yourself off?"

"I'm still sixteen, duh. No magic outside of school until March." Tonks explains as they step into the Three Broomsticks and are greeted by a cheery but frazzled Rosmerta.

Franziska blinks. "I somehow didn't register that you're the youngest one here." She declares as Evie casts a drying spell on Tonks. "But you weren't in the Apparition class so that would make sense."

Tonks laughs. "I'm tall so I think a lot of people forget I'm one of the younger ones in our year." She grins. "Henry was really surprised to see me in class when our Apparition lessons started last week, it was pretty funny. I mean, his girlfriend wasn't impressed but everyone else was cracking up."

Franziska assumes it must have been the sort of situation where you had to be there as she can't quite see what would be so amusing about it. "Sounds like you've got a good class at least?" She offers. "Although, don't you have most of the Slytherins in your group? How is that?"

Tonks makes a face. "That black girl - Princess or whatever - is really loud and really aggressive and it eats into practice time a lot. But otherwise they keep to themselves so it's not so bad. Kiera is taking it with me, and Jemma is in our class too though she can't take the test. So it's a good bunch, I'm enjoying it."

They get one of the booths and go through several rounds of butterbeer as they chat about Apparition classes and then move on to more general school topics, eventually ending up on the Weasley twins and their sudden laying low after a full semester of consistent pranking.

"I'm worried personally. They must be planning something." Fitzwilliam mutters. Franziska nods in agreement.

Evie shakes her head. "Are you kidding? That's what makes it exciting! I bet they do something grand right at the end of the year - a big send-off, you know? Wouldn't that be so cool?" She beams.

Tonks laughs. "They'd have to do something bigger every year until they graduated though." She points out. "It wouldn't be very practical."

"They are only eleven, and they've spent all year pulling pranks on everyone with no apparent regard for their own safety. Or anyone else's. They don't strike me as very practical." Franziska grumbles, mostly good-naturedly.

"Well then obviously you've never pulled one yourself! Practical jokes have it right there in the name!" Evie jokes cheerfully. "Seriously though, can we go to Zonko's this time? I know you have some weird vendetta against pranks-"

"They aren't funny!" Franziska insists. "They've only ever caused disruptions. Really, even in our class we used to have a ton of people who pulled them but only Remi does that anymore and he's also the least mature person in the class."

"That's not inaccurate." Tonks concedes. "But pranks themselves aren't immature or harmful, it's all in how you use them. I'm with Evie, we should go to Zonko's!"

Fitzwilliam looks downright terrified of the idea and Franziska attempts to dig her heels in.

"Then you two can go and we'll go to Honeydukes. We can meet at the post office, I need to mail Rosa."

Tonks frowns. "Boo, you're seventeen already Frannie, and you've never pulled a prank! You've got to!"

"Come on Fitz, I'll even let you have final say on what we get~" Evie wheedles, poking Fitzwilliam's arm repeatedly.

Fitzwilliam still looks nervous but Franziska can tell he's starting to crack. So she doubles down.

"No means no - you don't have to pull a prank Tonks, that's just peer pressure."

Tonks sighs. "Oh fine, you guys go do your thing and we'll do ours, whatever." She grumbles. "Just trying to have some fun, try something new. You're only here for one more year Frannie, what if you discover you actually like Zonko's and then never get to come back because you live all the way in Germany?"

Franziska knows exactly what Tonks is trying to do.

She hates that it works.

"Okay, fine. Zonko's, then the post office, then Honeydukes." She sighs and Evie and Tonks cheer. Fitzwilliam still looks nervous and Evie slings an arm around him.

"Don't you worry Fitzy, I'll protect you." She teases. The four of them make the short trek across the street through the light snow flurry that had started while they'd been warming up in the Three Broomsticks.

Franziska hasn't actually ever been inside of Zonko's and it's somehow both exactly how she'd imagined but also not quite as bad.

"There are usually more people in here, but I guess most people don't think Zonko's is the most romantic Valentine's date spot." Evie observes cheerfully. "Which means we don't have to deal with the crowds! Nice day for browsing."

"Right? We thought the same."

Tonks immediately loops an arm around the newcomer. "Kiera! How's the date going?"

Kiera grins and waves behind her where Tyler is studying a display rack. "Pretty good I think, though you can ask Ty his opinion, it might be different. I don't think it will be but you never know." She laughs. "How about you?"

The two girls begin chattering away and Franziska excuses herself to browse the shop's inventory, curious despite herself to see if there is anything she might actually find amusing.

She fails on that front, but does discover a display of non-explodable luminescent balloons which catch her interest. She plucks a box off the shelf and turns it to read the instructions and try to figure out why the honestly pretty, lit up balloons would be sold in a joke shop.

"Ooh, if you're getting those I'd recommend the belt to go with, it helps a ton. There are ten in that box." Tyler recommends, causing Franziska to nearly drop the box in her surprise.

"Shouldn't you be with Kiera?" Franziska asks when she's recovered enough to speak.

Tyler laughs. "Dating doesn't mean attached at the hip. And it's only a first date anyway, we agreed no pressure despite the fact it's technically Valentine's weekend. And since we both like different styles of prank it makes sense to split up." He declares, listing each point proudly. "And Kiera suggesting all that just made me more confident that this is gonna work."

Franziska laughs slightly. "So you agree that the date is going well." She concludes, smiling slightly. Despite the unexpected new couple she's happy for her friends.

Tyler beams. "Maizie told me over break - gosh do you even remember my oldest sister? She graduated our second year, was a Hufflepuff prefect for two years? Anyway, she's the one who told me I ought to ask Kiera out and she was right. Always trust your sisters, they know best." He grins. "Except Donnie's. They told him to move on from Jemma and that turned out just fine didn't it?"

"Depends on how you define 'fine'." Kiera comments, walking over to the pair along with Tonks. Franziska idly wonders where Evie and Fitzwilliam have gotten to and hopes her female Ravenclaw friend doesn't traumatize her male one while they're unsupervised.

"What do you mean by that?" Franziska asks, deciding she's more worried by the potential of what Kiera might say than the potential of Fitzwilliam being freaked out by Zonko's.

To her surprise it's Tyler who responds. "We don't know for sure but it seems like Evera and Drake might not know yet? Again, I don't know for sure, but we had the Quidditch pitch after Gryffindor yesterday and I overheard them talking when they left. They seem to think that the reason they apparently haven't seen much of her outside of class in weeks is because she's studying so much."

Franziska chews her lower lip uncertainly. "That doesn't... guarantee that they don't know?" She says slowly, though in her gut she has a feeling Tyler is correct. She knows Jemma now and knows the blonde girl probably doesn't even know where to start with telling her friends about the new development in her love life. Especially considering she never really patched things up properly with Drake in the aftermath of their breakup.

"Still they must know now right? She came with Donaghan to Hogsmeade for Valentine's weekend." Tonks points out. "Jeez, this romance thing is more complicated than I figured. Why is just being forthright so hard?"

"You're asking the wrong people." Kiera laughs. "I think all three of us have always been pretty forward."

Franziska can't help but laugh - Kiera isn't wrong with that observation at all. "I'lll probably talk to Jemma about it tonight. The longer she waits the worse that fallout is going to be."

"Fallout from what? Ooh, are you getting those balloons Frannie? Good choice." Evie and Fitzwilliam finally reappear, with the later thankfully looking minimally terrified and carrying a Zonko's bag.

Franziska looks down at the forgotten box still in her hands. "That's what everyone has said but I still don't know what they do exactly." She replies, opting to move the conversation away from Jemma for the moment. And she really is curious about the balloons.

"They're unbreakable and they bounce around all lit up. You want an easy, harmless way to drive Filch nuts they're you're go-to." Evie explains with a grin that's entirely too knowing. "Conversely the cats love batting them around which is also super cute. If you want some non-prank alternatives."

Franziska glances down at the box in her hand, and then puts it back on the shelf. "I'll think about it. We've got other Hogsmeade trips, I can always get it later."

"Boo, be one with the pranks." Tonks teases, and promptly knocks over a display of Ever-Bashing Boomerangs and the group makes a very hasty retreat before the twenty-something running the register can notice and make them round up the violent toys.

"I think that was a little too close to being one with the pranks." Kiera teases once they're all back out in the show, panting. "Well, we'll leave you lot to your shopping, Tyler here owes me a butterbeer."

They wave as the new couple depart, and then Evie eagerly steers them all towards Honeydukes.

Franziska walks next to Fitzwilliam and eyes the bag he's holding. "Evie didn't bully you into buying any of that, did she?" She double checks, not putting it past her overeager friend to have unintentionally done so.

Fitzwilliam shakes his head. "No, she was good. I saw a couple interesting things that seem harmless so I figured why not? I'd already gone into the store, may as well go all in."

Franziska grins. "Evie is rubbing off on you." She notes with amusement. She doesn't add that she thinks it rather suits him.

Honeydukes is thankfully much less chaotic than Zonko's had been. The group of four all purchase tooth-rotting amounts of sweets and immediately break them open, eating as they start walking back towards the castle.

"Not bad for being alone on Valentine's." Tonks jokes around a licorice wand.

Evie hums, popping a Bertie Bott's every flavor bean and immediately gagging. "Garlic." She announces, "Not the worst I've gotten but man that's unpleasant."

The walk back is fun, and Franziska is quite happy at how the day had gone. Not bad for being single on Valentine's at all.

The March Hogsmeade trip is scheduled for the second weekend of the month, and Ana isn't too proud to admit she counts the days. She's already confirmed with Alec when and where they're meeting, and she's gotten to know his personal owl Inti quite well due to their correspondence no longer being quite so long distance.

Amelia has been openly suspicious of the letters but Ana has provided no answers and hasn't bothered to keep up her old cover story for the owls either. If Hogsmeade goes well (and considering their letters have continued comfortably for over a month she's optimistic on that front) she'll have a serious boyfriend and won't have to bother with half-truths anymore.

Finally the day arrives and Ana is one of the first out of the Great Hall after breakfast, Jerome hot on her heels.

"Okay, you're okay? No stress, no nerves? No second guessing?"

Ana smirks slightly. "I think you're more worried about this than I am." She points out as they exit the castle and head towards the village. "Alec and I have been talking for two years, more even. It's just the next step of the relationship."

Jerome looks unimpressed, though the impact is ruined slightly by the fact he has to dart around a puddle of half-melted slush. It's surprisingly warm for early March but Ana isn't complaining at all - she can get away with not wearing her winter cloak which she rather hates due to how heavy it is and how it makes her look like a formless lump.

"Isn't this also the first time you've seen him face-to-face in two years?" He points out when he recovers his balance.

Ana rolls her eyes. "Yes but I don't understand why you think that's supposed to change things. He's still Alec. Do you freak out seeing Shaun after breaks?"

Jerome flushes. "Okay one, I told you that in confidence so don't go throwing it back at me and two I'll have you know I'm spending the Hogsmeade trip with someone who I think actually likes me and I actually like him but I can't say because he's not out."

Ana glances over at her blushing friend, eyebrow raised. "Sorry, didn't mean it like that. And congratulations, I won't push. You're sure he's gay though?"

Jerome shrugs. "I mean, I think he likes me at least. I couldn't say if he doesn't like both. Guys and girls I mean."

"That was a grammatical mess and you ought to be ashamed of yourself." Ana can't resist the slight mockery, and Jerome lays off about dates, instead laughing and then switching to chatter about the History of Magic presentation he's working on.

They reach Hogsmeade rather quickly and are among the first to do so. Jerome waves her off and saunters away towards the shrieking shack, while Ana meanders her way over to the Hogsmeade station. Alec isn't taking the Express, obviously, but there are several Floo and Apparition points at the station as well. Scrivenshaft's is also right across the street so she decides to wait there for the decided on meeting time, which isn't for another thirty minutes.

She examines a display of new quills and even debates buying a self-inking one for her father, who she knows often forgets to refill his inkwell. Ultimately she leaves without making any purchases, reasoning that the quill isn't going anywhere and it would be an annoyance to have to keep track of during the day.

Alec hasn't yet arrived at the station, though Ana isn't surprised as she's still about eight minutes early. Not that she's counting.

She sits on one of the benches positioned near the apparation points - she figures that will be his most likely point of entry - and waits, fidgeting half-heartedly with her pendant as she does.

It only takes three minutes before Alec arrives, and she would never admit it but Ana actually stops breathing for a moment.

She really hasn't seen him in two years, and she hadn't realized exactly how different he'd look. Or how she'd apparently been remembering his height incorrectly. Or-

Jerome was right, I should have been more nervous.

And then he spots her and the fact that he looks as stunned as she feels puts a bit of wind back in her sails. So she waves.

He blinks and then grins, walking the short distance over to her.

"Hey, it's been a while in person, hasn't it?" He observes with a slight laugh. "You look really good." He glances down slightly and smirks and Ana flushes. He couldn't possibly-

"You're still wearing the necklace."

Good. I would hate to have to hex him on our first date.

She touches the pendant lightly. "I've grown rather attached to it." She says, smiling slightly. "Remind me to show you my Animagus form before the end of the day." She shifts uncertainly in place hands clasped behind her back. "So, where were you thinking we could go? Three Broomsticks?"

Alec shakes his head. "Actually, I was thinking the Hog's Head. It's a bit run down, I know, but it will be much quieter than anywhere else in Hogsmeade today. Easier to talk."

Ana nods thoughtfully. He has a good point, and as she's legally old enough to drink they can no longer stop her from entering the premises. "Alright, that sounds good." The start walking together towards the other end of the village. "The trip wasn't too bad?"

Alec shakes his head. "From London to here is nothing, though the Portkey from Peru was a doozy. Honestly that's half the reason I'm so rarely home, I absolutely despise taking those things."

Ana glances over at him in amusement. "And here I though Curse-Breakers weren't scared of anything."

He laughs. "Scared no, but avoidable discomfort should be avoided at all costs in my opinion."

"Fair enough. How are things at the dig site? Everyone get back safely?" Ana thinks to ask as they reach the pub and Alec holds the door for her.

Alec nods. "The outbreak was further south than our head quarters but we're all on paid vacation time until things clear up a bit more. I should be back to work by the summer since our immediate area wasn't affected." He assures her. "How about you, how are your classes going?"

Ana shrugs. "There's a lot of work, obviously, but I honestly don't understand how people taking fewer than at least six classes are spending their time. I'm taking eight and I still have some free time." She pauses to think more carefully on each individual class. "I will say that Ancient Runes is starting to get harder now so I'll likely study ahead over the summer break in order to maintain my grades."

Alec nods, settling in one of the corner booths. Ana slides in next to him and takes a look around the pub as Alec responds, sharing some anecdotes from work about how important knowing Ancient Runes is for the job.

It's even more dodgy than she'd expected, though it's also emptier with only one other patron sitting at the end of the bar furthest from her and Alec. The figure is hunched over so she can't make out a face or even assign a gender due to the baggy robes the patron is wearing.

"It's sort of unwritten law that everyone minds everyone else's business in here." Alec interrupts himself when he sees her wandering gaze. "But I told you it would be more private."

Ana nods, turning back towards Alec. "You weren't wrong. So what's on the menu here? Anything you would recommend?"

Alec hums. "Well it's been a while but I seem to recall a pork dish that waas surprisingly good despite it's appearance."

Ana skims over the menu. "I'll try that then, and perhaps a small glass of firewhisky as well." She adds boldly. She's legal and on a date with a twenty-three year old who probably drinks regularly. She can handle a glass.

Alec grins. "Alright then, I'll go put in the order."

Ana sits at the table watching Alec chat with the bartender, an old and rather disagreeable looking man who looks less than pleased to see Alec which Ana finds amusing. After a minute or so Alec returns, beaming.

"Missed that old bastard, I used to spend time here with my mates back in school. We'd cause a right rukus and old Aberforth likes his quiet."

Ana tries to picture what Alec might have been like in school but she can't imagine it, and says as much. "I mean, you certainly have an attitude but adults seem to like you a fair bit these days."

"You say adults like we aren't among them." Alec points out. "But you're right, I've learned some diplomacy, though it's easiest with purebloods. Other people just don't seem to have the same grasp of manners that our families do."

Ana hums. "Most of them yes, though my friend Jerome Boot's parents were quite well behave at the New Year's party."

Alec's eyes darken slightly at the mention of the party. "I'm sorry I couldn't be there. This year for sure."

Ana smiles. "I'm glad you agree because I would have been rather irritated if you decided to stay in Peru over the break again, especially considering I'll be home for the holidays."

Alec grins. "Bold of you to assume that would make a difference." He teases lightly and Ana rolls her eyes.

"It's not an assumption." She replies flatly, though she smirks slightly. "I know for a fact my presence makes a difference for you."

The drinks arrive before the food and Ana requests a glass of water as well. "Mother always says to have twice as much water as wine when drinking. I presume it shouldn't be too different for firewhisky."

Alec nods. "Your mother is a smart woman. Never drink on an empty stomach either, I learned that one the hard way." He grins. "You're lucky I'm here to teach you all these things - you can avoid the pitfalls early drinking often brings."

Ana just rolls her eyes again, attempting to suppress her smile.

Conversation is thankfully easy - she talks about her classes and he shares stories of his coworkers and their dig site. Their food comes and the chatter dies down slightly, and Ana finally takes her first sip of the firewhisky and immediately winces and coughs.

"It burns." She observes once she's chased the drink with a few swallows of water. "The taste isn't terrible, but I'm not sure it's quite worth it."

"You have to get used to it, and everyone has their drink preferences. Firewhisky might be a bit too strong for your taste." Alec suggests. "I admit it's not my favorite either, though I'll have a shot with the guys every now and then."

Ana shrugs. "I'm sure I'll find something at one of our parent's parties."

Alec pays for their food nearly an hour and a half later and the two take to meandering around the village as they continue their conversation. Ana spots Jerome a little after one though she doesn't stop to say hello knowing his parter likely woudln't appreciate the interruption. Not that she sees the mysterious boy anywhere.

She does end up stopped when Amelia waves her over to where the other Ravenclaw and her Hufflepuff boyfriend Henry are seated just outside Madame Puddifoot's.

"Friend of yours?" Alec asks, and Ana knows he's taking note of Amelia's Ravenclaw tie.

"Dorm mate." She responds lowly as they approach the bench. "Hello Amelia, Henry. Enjoying the weather?"

Amelia waves vaguely in lieu of an answer and fixes sharp, analytical eyes onto Alec. "Hello Ana, I don't think we've met your friend."

Ana recognizes the look on Alec's face - it's the one he takes on when he's about to turn on the charm and for the first time she realizes exactly how handsome it makes him look. She suppresses a grin and glances over at Amelia, curious to see how her roommate will react.

Sure enough Amelia is blushing slightly, though clearly trying to pretend she isn't.

"I'm Alec MacMillan, my younger brother Alasdair is in your year." He takes Amelia's hand and bows slightly, and the flush across the other girl's cheeks gets darker. "Ana is a sort of mentee of mine, perhaps she's mentioned me?"

"Um, I'm familiar with the letters." Amelia clears . "It's good to meet you, we all thought Ana had a secret boyfriend or something. So, um, you're a Curse Breaker then?"

Ana looks over at Henry, who looks rather upset as he watches his girlfriend awkwardly attempt to make conversation with Alec, blushing all the while. Ana decides to take pity on him - plus it's no longer all that amusing to watch Amelia tripping over her own tongue.

"Alec, we really should be going." She prompts lightly. "See you back in the dorms Amelia, and good to see you Henry."

Henry nods distractedly, still eyeing Alec almost nastily though from her limited contact with Amelia's boyfriend Ana is pretty sure it isn't in him to really be mean.

Alec nods politely to both Amelia and Henry before taking Ana's arm and letting her steer him away from the couple.

"Not to seem presumptive but I think that relationship might be heading towards a break up." Alec comments once they're out of earshot. "That Amelia seems interesting. Should I have clarified the romantic aspect of our relationship?"

Ana waves vaguely. "I don't mind either way. When you meet Jerome and Shaun they can know but Amelia has been rather pushy on that front so I rather like the idea of making her wait for it a bit longer." She pauses slightly to glace up at him, smirking. "So there's a romantic aspect to our relationship?"

"I believe you're the one who started it." He responds, just as smooth.

Ana shakes her head. "Fair enough. Today hasn't changed  your opinions? We haven't seen each other in person in quite some time after all." She points out. "It hasn't for me." She adds as an afterthought.

"Well I feel rather comfortable as well, so it seems there's nothing to be concerned about." Alec replies, and Ana smiles.

The rest of the afternoon is comfortable, and Alec takes her hand at some point and she doesn't protest. She sees him off from the station and then purchases the quill for her father before walking back.

Jerome waves her down at the entrance to the village and Ana waits for him to hurry over so they can walk back together.

"Good date? You've got a boyfriend now?" He prompts eagerly.

Ana hums. "I believe so. We agreed to not label it until I've graduated - the age difference could be cause for some concern as long as I'm in school." She looks over at Jerome hums in acknowledgment. "And you? How was your day?"

Jerome grins. "Went pretty well all things considered. He's sitll super closeted but definitely into guys." He blushes and Ana rolls her eyes.

"No more details, thank you. But congratulations."

Jerome laughs and they walk back to the castle, content to remain quiet and enjoy the weather and each other's company in the lingering happiness from the trip.

Slytherin had defeated Ravenclaw in their February match, a disappointing end to Myr and Amanda's second date which had otherwise been just as enjoyable as their first one. But on the upside it's only shortly thereafter that it clears up enough to start flying comfortably, so Myr follows up on his promise to go flying with her.

She's a bit shaky, clinging to the broom with both hands and flying a few meters lower than Myr is used to and quite a bit slower, but she's laughing and that's really what's important.

"How you do this while swinging a bat around is beyond me." She shouts over to him about an hour into the flight. "I can barely keep myself straight as is."

Myr shrugs, acutely aware of the fact he's not using his hands or arms at all to balance. "It takes practice. We did a lot of exercises on the reserves team and Laurel - the Captain before Charlie, did you go here before she graduated? Anyway, Laurel made sure we were in really good shape."

"That I've noticed." Amanda says flirtatiously, though she blushes as she does. "And I honestly don't know if I knew Laurel or not, I wasn't really into Quidditch until last year. I mean," She quickly corrects, "Into the non-Ravenclaw teams. I watched most of the games."

"What about Melody? Did you not go to support the Hufflepuff teams too?" Myr asks curiously. He hasn't gotten to talk to Melody all that much but he has managed to learn that she's a massive Quidditch nerd who has hopes of being the next Quidditch announcer after Leona graduates.

"She's the one who got me more interested - she's constantly stealing dad's radio to listen to the games when we're at home, it drives him nuts." Amanda laughs.

Myr grins. "You know I've never actually seen, or listened to, a game outside of school. Our radio doesn't get the wizarding channels."

Amanda blinks. "I keep forgetting you're Muggleborn." She admits. "You should come over for a game some time! OOH!" She suddenly sits up in excitement and nearly throws herself off the borrowed school broom in the process. Myr moves to catch her but she balances herself without assistance. "Whoops. But seriously it's the Quidditch World Cup this summer! Turkey is hosting, we should listen to it together! Seriously, professional games are a whole other level from student ones. England didn't make the cut but Scotland's team did so I'm going to root for them."

Myr laughs. "You're a terrible Brit, are you supposed to hate Scotland on principle?"

Amanda sticks her tongue out. "You're from Wales, what do you care?" She teases right back.

The next Quidditch game Myr is on the field facing off against Hufflepuff and Amanda is sitting with Holly and Percy Weasley in the Gryffindor stands happily waving a support banner she'd charmed herself.

"Alright team, Slytherin is back in the running so we need a solid win against Hufflepuff today." Charlie instructs firmly. "I want communication out there, we've been suffering in that area in practice recently." He looks suspiciously over at Evera and Drake, neither of whom acknowledges the implications.

Myr sighs silently. Ever since their Hufflepuff friend Jemma had revealed her new relationship - with help from a couple of her Hufflepuff friends and her new boyfriend - Drake has been aggressively moody and withdrawn, and Evera, while not nearly as bad, has also become rather pouty and it's impacted their game.

Combine that with the fact that Remi has never been good at teamwork and their entire lineup of Chasers is a cumulative weakest link, putting extra pressure on the rest of them to be at the very top of their game. Oliver especially has been stressing heavily - Percy had worriedly mentioned to Myr a week before that his roommate had been coming in late and leaving early to practice almost every single day and could Myr possibly talk to Oliver about that because it's really not healthy and his grades are probably being affected.

Myr had followed up with Oliver who had promised to limit his extracurricular practices to the weekends and immediately before and after their team practices after complaining that Percy worried too much.

Myr isn't sure Oliver completely kept the promise but at least he seems to be alert as they wait in the change room for Leona to announce their team.

He jogs onto the field when his name is called, broom gripped in one hand and the other raised in a half wave towards the Gryffindor stands. He catches sight of Amanda's banner and grins slightly, probably blushing and thankful that it's bright enough that it won't be noticeable.

At least, not to anyone in the stands. Fiona gives him a knowing look as they mount their brooms while Charlie and the Hufflepuff captain shake hands.

"I know you all know this but events this year have made the reminder necessary - I don't want to see any foul play up there." Madame Hooch warns, before tossing the Quaffle up and starting the game.

Myr has taken the oversight position, hovering above the action while Fiona covers below. He darts around, eyes peeled for the bludgers which are being oddly evasive in the first few minutes of the game.

He does spare a few glances towards the stands where Amanda has lowered the banner and is staring enraptured as the Chasers race back and forth across the pitch, apparently keeping up a steady stream of commentary to Percy and Holly, the former of whom is replying sporadically and the latter of whom just looks incredibly amused.

"Wow, Sylvester and Jarvis are way off their game today, Longbottom is actually out flying both of them." Leona says, sounding giddy. "Come on Macavoy! You can intercept that- Sorry professor. Yes Professor, I'll stop providing assistance to the better team."

Myr rolls his eyes and refocuses, trying to tune out the announcer who always somehow manages to be louder during Hufflepuff matches.

He finally spots one of the bludgers as it's redirected by one of the Hufflepuff beaters towards Evera and he dives down to intercept, passing it to Fiona who fires it off at the Hufflepuff Keeper just as Evera makes a shot on the center hoop.

"Nice!" Charlie shouts to him with a grin. Myr personally thinks it would have been better if Evera had actually made the goal, but he shoots back a smile anyway. It had been pretty good teamwork, even if it didn't end up paying off.

He glances over at Amanda again who's now standing up and shouting excitedly while Percy and Holly both attempt to drag her backwards away from the edge of the stands. Myr laughs and swoops up, once again patrolling over the game, showing off slightly as he weaves in and out of the other players to get to the bludgers.

Fiona helps him out, sending him several bludgers to redirect and at one point, when they're comfortably ahead by almost a hundred points, gives him a rather challenging one which he barely manages to catch. Charlie shouts at them to quit messing around and they get serious again but Myr can see Fiona laughing every time she looks over at him or Amanda.

The game is close throughout, no thanks to the Gryffindor Chasers being consistently off their game, but Oliver is absolutely on fire which keeps them in the running.

Then one of the Hufflepuff Beaters knocks Drake off his broom with a well-timed bludger and things spiral from there.

Angelina Johnson, a second year and one of the most promising members of the reserves team, is subbed in while Drake is taken, loudly complaining that he's fine and the world is only spinning a little bit, to the hospital wing. She's a fantastic flyer but she simply isn't on the same wavelength as the main Chaser team usually is, even when they're faltering.

Myr can tell when Charlie realizes that the only way they'll win is if he can catch the snitch before Hufflepuff pulls ahead more than a hundred and fifty points. He stops calling plays and giving encouragement and instead pulls several meters higher than the others, scanning determinedly - and almost desperately - for any sign of the snitch. The Hufflepuff Seeker - a new player who Myr doesn't recognize - follows him closely, clearly nervous.

But unfortunately Charlie doesn't find the snitch in time, and Myr thinks he hears Oliver swearing when the Quaffle sails past him, officially putting Hufflepuff one hundred and sixty points ahead of Gryffindor.

What happens next seems to go in slow motion for Myr. Behind the hoops Angelina grabs the Quaffle and takes off at top speed back across the pitch, just as Charlie spots the snitch and makes a break for it, the Hufflepuff Seeker close on his bristles.

Angelina dodges one of the Hufflepuff Chasers but collides mid-air with another, dropping the Quaffle in favor of not tumbling hundreds of meters through the air.

Myr winces but Evera is suddenly there, snagging the Quaffle before it gets to far and taking off, Angelina swerving away from the Chaser that had blocked her and shadowing Evera. As the girls move Charlie closes in on the snitch, clearly completely unaware of the mini drama happening elsewhere on the field.

The Quaffle passes through the hoop - ten second after Charlie closes his hand around the snitch.

Gryffindor loses by ten points. No one is very happy in the locker room, though Evera compliments Angelina on her final play attempt.

"Sorry for not noticing what you were doing, I didn't want to lose the snitch and risk losing by any more." Charlie apologizes for the hundredth time as they exit the change rooms.

Angelina shrugs, smiling. "It was still fun getting to play." She says, rather cheerful despite the circumstances. She's tackled into a hug a moment later by her friend Katie Bell, another Quidditch team hopeful who hadn't quite made the cut during tryouts.

"You. Were. Awesome." She informs her friend breathless and the two girls wander off, chatting excitedly. Myr only has a moment before he's similarly tackled by Amanda - can he call her his girlfriend? They haven't talked about that yet - who's grinning.

"You were amazing! I've never really paid attention to the Beaters before but oh boy do I need to start always doing that." She says breathlessly, blunt as ever but still blushing.

Charlie laughs. "Don't let the twins hear you say that, their egos will only get bigger."

"And Merlin knows that's the last thing we need." Percy gripes, coming up behind Amanda with Holly. "Speaking of the terrible two they snuck off right after the game ended so I'm taking Oliver to go find them before they lose us even more House points."

"That's a long lost cause but I admire your persistence." Oliver declares cheerfully, linking arms with Percy and dragging the bespectacled red head away.

"And I'll take Charlie since it seems Evera and Remi have already vamoosed." Holly decides cheerfully. "Don't make out too much you two."

Amanda laughs and her coloring starts to go back to normal. "My sister will probably come by to be a brat so we can't start that until she's left anyway." She replies cheekily, and now Myr is blushing fiercely.

Melody actually does come jogging around the corner a minute later, followed as usual by a few of her Hufflepuff classmates. This week boasts an admittedly very pretty dark-skinned girl and a short ravenette, both of whom hang back near the end of the stands while Melody walks up to her twin and Myr.

"Good game." She declares, sticking her hand out formally.

Amanda glances at the two girls standing by the edge of the stands. "They not coming over?" She asks in amusement, clearly knowing the answer.

"Farrah and Clara aren't big Quidditch people, they didn't even watch the game." Melody pouts pointedly for a moment before perking up again. "We're going to try and dye our hair magically! I just wanted to come say hi and warn you about being a gentleman." She pokes Myr's chest pointedly and then prances off, rejoining the other two and all three girls rush off giggling excitedly.

"How people mix you two up I'll never know." Myr says, half amused.

Amanda shrugs. "I mean neither of us is great at making friends, we're just different with it. I just don't hang out with people, she hangs out with everyone. I swear three weeks ago she hated those two and now I guess they're best friends." She grins at him. "So everyone has been talking about kissing..."

They haven't kissed yet, and they don't now, instead holding hands and taking a walk by the shores of the Great Lake, discussing the game and sharing sibling stories. Amanda doesn't push it but in the back of his mind Myr is worried that one day she'll grow fed up with waiting for him to be ready to do more.

"It that you guys lost. I know rooting against Hufflepuff is like rooting against my sister but honestly you guys had the better team. Red-hair, um shoot I've forgotten his name but glasses-kid, year below me?"

"Percy, Charlie Weasley's younger brother." Myr supplies with a faint smile.

Amanda nods. "Yeah him, he was giving me a run down of the stats for all the teams - he can really go on if you let him - and it seems like your team is way better than Hufflepuff's." She grins. "He says Ravenclaw has a decent chance though considering Slytherin cheated during their match. So be warned, I may celebrate if you lose your final match."

Myr laughs. "Perce and Oliver put together those stats themselves, they're both really proud of them. Oliver gave us the rundown at the start of the term but he's constantly reminding us."

They get almost halfway around the lake before realizing that the sky is starting to turn violet and turning back towards the castle. Only a few minutes after they turn Hogwarts lights up and Amanda pauses, looking up at the castle with unmasked awe.

"Remember first year? Coming over the lake and seeing the castle just like this for the first time?" She breathes. "Amazing how it's still magical, even after all this time."

Myr looks up at the castle and smiles. "It really is." He pauses, and then glances towards the shore where a rock is jutting out slightly from the sand. "You know what? We still have time before curfew. Want to do dinner out here? I can summon food from Drake's stash that he thinks no one knows about."

Amanda laughs delightedly, and when they've settled on the rock with an assortment of junk food scattered around them Myr thinks that even if she is a bit younger, he's quite glad he met Amanda.

It is exceedingly strange to not have any final exams to study for in April, especially since Trevor is drowning in NEWT stress.

"Honestly we may as well just go home." Nia complains one day half way through the month when a group of sixth year Slytherins are relaxing in their common room. "We have, what, maybe one thing due in each class between now and the end of the year? We could hand those in this week and call it good enough."

"We'd miss the closing Feast though, and winning the House Cup again." Queenie points out with a grin. "Six years in a row, that has to be some sort of record."

Eugene hums agreement. "A rather satisfying one at that." He adds with a grin, arm draped casually around his fiancée's shoulders. "Considering how the other Houses think they're so high and mighty."

"Extra pressure to try and get it again next year though." Cadfael mutters.

"If nothing else we're taking the Quidditch Cup." Alasdair says firmly. There's still two matches left in the season, one which includes their team, but Alasdair seems to have already written off the year and is focused on the future.

"I don't get why you're just writing off this year." Nia says, voicing Rajani's own questions. "Aren't we first place right now?"

Alasdair nods. "We are, but Ravenclaw is going to win it. No way Gryffindor beats them and our win over the eagles likely will have been too narrow to secure us first place. Plus Lennox is still off, it's driving us all nuts. He was better than any of the other teams' Seekers before this mess with Clary." He makes a face. "Remind me to never let romantic nonsense get in the way of my game."

No one touches that one. Lennox and Clary are still both having a difficult time post-breakup and Rajani honestly doesn't see much of either of them these days.

"Anyway, there's only a few weeks left." Queenie says after a moment. "I think we can survive. If nothing else it's extra time to make sure we know our stuff from this year so it's less stress over NEWTs next year."

"I'd imagine NEWTs will be stressful no matter what but that is a good idea." A new voice points out and a few of the group jump - namely the women.

"Hey Finn, you still need to work on that sneaking around thing." Eugene grins.

Rajani barely ever sees Finn Lopatkina-Paluch around these days - there had been a moment in fourth year when she'd been spending a bit more time with him but he seemed to lose interest in her and she hasn't spoken much to him since, not considering trying to reach his ridiculous standards a worthwhile endeavor to expend energy on.

Now though he sits right next to her as if it's perfectly normal. "Somehow sixth year feels both harder and easier than our first five." He declares. "Anyone else get that feeling?"

"What do you want Finn? You only talk to us when you want something." Alasdair says instead of answering, his voice flat and somewhat annoyed.

Finn frowns at him, and both Cadfael and Eugene roll their eyes so Rajani assumes this must be common in their dorm room.

"Rude much Macmillan? I merely wished to join the conversation." Finn replies with a rather catty grin that has Rajani recalibrating her interest in the mysterious boy.

Finn is an anomaly among the Slytherin House in that he doesn't really abide by its unspoken rules, nor does he have any particularly close friends among the other snakes. Even Elspeth, the most anti-social of their class, is close with Nia, and Rajani has no doubts that Els would have her back no questions asked if a situation were to arise where her support was needed.

Rajani couldn't say with the same certainty if Finn would be so blindly supportive. Before that had caused her to dismiss him outright, but now she finds herself curious - she's bored anyway, it could be something to do in the last few weeks of school.

"The course work is harder," She states, replying to Finn's original question, "Which is to be expected, but with fewer classes there's less overall stress about completing assignments on time which in theory could make school seem easier in some ways, provided one schedules accordingly."

Finn glances at her almost disinterestedly, and she's personally insulted by the look. "I'm sorry, does my analysis not please you?" She grumbles snarkily.

Alasdair rolls his eyes. "That's his default face, you'll learn to ignore it. You're lucky you haven't had to yet, we're all inoculated in the guy's dorms."

Finn grins. "You just don't have very thick skin, which is odd considering you're teaching the Quidditch team to cheat it's way to victory. Rather hypocritical that you'll dish it out but can't take it."

Alasdair looks about ready to murder, and Cadfael ends up dragging him out of the common room, shooting a glare at Finn as they go.

"That was uncalled for. Alasdair is using every angle to the team's advantage is all." Queenie snaps once the common room door has closed behind the two.

Finn shrugs unrepentantly. "Even if that is the case other people will say as much. He ought to be able to ignore it."

"He can when it comes from people who aren't supposed to have his back." Eugene points out quietly. Finn scoffs.

"You guys are less interesting than I thought, I'm going to steal some food from the kitchens." Finn sighs dramatically before bouncing up off the couch and wandering away.

Elspeth hisses at his back, earning a laugh from Nia.

"Sums up my thoughts exactly." She agrees. "How do you guys deal with sharing a room with him?"

Eugene sighs. "He wasn't so bad our first few years, we had some disagreements about things but I didn't think anything of it. It's only recently he's really started enjoying riling Alasdair up, and Alas keeps giving him what he wants because he's stressed about school and the team. And something about his brother too? He didn't want to share details with me but I guess he stole one of Alas's old friends or something along those lines. Point is he has enough going on without Finn being so... so abrasive." He huffs slightly, his posture having gotten more and more tense as the rant went on.

Queenie places a hand lightly on his chest, pulling him back down so she can lean against him. "Obviously the Sorting Hat made a mistake with him, it makes sense that it could happen." She says soothingly. "On a happier topic I'm going to Peru in a month and a half. What souvenirs does everyone want? I'm spending the whole summer down there and traveling to different parts so all requests are valid."

Her blatant railroading does the trick and soon they're all debating whether Queenie could legally ship them cursed Incan artifacts or not after Elspeth requests one "to ward off Gryffindors."

Cadfael and Alasdair return at some point during the discussion and Alas worriedly speaks up after a rather moving declaration by Nia about why defensive charms against Gryffindor should be given to all Slytherin students.

"My brother works in Peru - he's a Curse-Breaker - and there was a dragon pox outbreak there this past winter. Is it safe to travel?"

Queenie nods. "Don't worry, my cousin warned us about that but the travel ban is lifted and we're avoiding the areas where the majority of the outbreak happened. You'll have to deal with me for another year." She teases, kicking out at his ankle but missing by quite a bit.

Rajani grins. "Of course, no Shacklebolt would go into anything unprepared, least of all this one."

Alasdair nods. "Fair enough. My brother was fine, it wasn't too big an outbreak. I just wanted to make sure you knew."

Queenie vaguely pats the air in Alasdair's direction. "I appreciate the concern Alas, thanks." She beams at him and he flushes, glancing away self-consciously. "But anyway, I'm still pretty sure brining cursed artifacts back into the country without a Curse-Breaking license would get me instantly arrested and probably expelled. Which would be less than ideal considering I need my NEWTs to join the Wizengamot."

Between more regular group meetings like that one and final essays proving a bit more difficult that Nia's predictions, the last few weeks of the year pass faster than Rajani thinks she was ready for.

All too soon they're getting ready for the End of Year Feast and it hits Rajani that they only have one more year left in school.

"Is it weird, knowing you're graduating?" She asks Trevor the afternoon before the last day of term. The two of them are in his dorm room, relaxing on his bed. "Ed seemed to have everything figured out when he was leaving last year but no offense you don't seem to really have a clear path."

Trevor hums and leans back against his head board. "I don't think it's completely hit me yet, if I'm honest." He decides after a moment. "I'm still coming down from NEWT stress, I don't think I can process anything else right now."

Rajani laughs, turning onto her stomach to look at him more easily. "Fair enough. Do you know what you're doing though? We don't talk about that much and I'd think it's something you should have at least partly hammered out by now."

Trevor shrugs. "My dad has a few connections in the Department of Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures so I'm going to work as a Secretary in the Office of Misinformation starting in July. I don't know if I'll stay there ultimately but it's a job."

Rajani rolls her eyes. "My boyfriend, the Slytherin with no ambition." She teases.

"Really that says more about your standards than it does about me." Trevor teases right back.

They officially break up the next morning, quite amicably as they'd both known they wouldn't continue past Trevor's graduation.

"Well m'lady it has been fun. Perhaps I'll see you around the Ministry after you graduate." Trevor bows dramatically and kisses the back of her hand. Rajani laughs even as she blushes.

"Why have I put up with you for an entire year again?" She grins. "Come on, the Feast will be starting soon and I need to squeeze as much Queenie time in as I can before the brat goes off to Peru all summer instead of keeping me company."

"You poor thing how will you ever survive?" Trevor mocks.

Rajani says goodbye to Gabi as well, the older prefect giving her a list of things she has to do as the top Slytherin prefect next year.

"Eugene is about as useful as this clod, Alana means well but is far to temperamental and Hector is half-focused on the Qudditch team so you're the role model for the incoming prefects." The dark-skinned girl instructs. "Don't let me down, we need to make sure Slytherin is well represented among the student power."

Rajani salutes. "I won't let you down."

Gabi finally relaxes, grinning. "I know you won't. Tell Lennox he's welcome to stop by the International Magical Office of Law if he ever wants to play a round of Exploding Snap. I'm doing a paid internship there this summer which will hopefully get me a full-time job."

"Best of luck, and if he's up for talking to me I'll be sure to pass on the message." Rajani promises before leaving the two seventh year to chat with their yearmates and walking over to where the other sixth years are gathered.

"Happy six years in a row!" Queenie greets her a bit louder than Rajani thinks is necessary. " it everyone else, Slytherin rules!"

Clary, who's emerged from the woodworks to sit with them, makes a face. "Language." She says primly, not looking at Rajani as the other girl takes the seat across from her.

"Are you drunk?" Rajani can't help asking, incredibly amused.

"A bit tipsy." Queenie confirms. "We did a toast this morning! Six years in a row! Woo!"

Eugene laughs but places a hand on top of her head. "Shush love, you're getting stares and I'm pretty sure if one of the professors finds out about our stash we're going to get into trouble."

"Your stash?" Nia raises and eyebrow and Queenie giggles.

"Their stash." Cadfael confirms.

"Feel free to come steal some next year, they share if you ask." Alasdair adds with a grin. His predictions about the Quidditch Cup had come true and he'd gotten absolutely sloshed after Ravenclaw beat Gryffindor - now Rajani knows how that happened.

Queenie tuts. "We share only if there's a good reason, no need to go drinking all the time, that's how addiction starts. And that leads down a path of completely ruining your public image." She declares primly.

"And we couldn't have that." Elspeth mutters from where she's hunched over the table, poking at the wood with her butter knife.

Nia nudges her. "It doesn't hurt to have good street cred, that's how the stinking Malfoys get away with everything." She points out, grimacing. "Anyway, I think the Headmaster is about to make his speech. Bring on the Slytherin decorations."

Dumbledore's speech goes on about House unity and the strengths of all the Houses, and Rajani is more than ready to throw something (not that she ever actually would do such a thing, but the idea is certainly enticing) by the time he gives in and announces Slytherin's sixth consecutive win of the House cup. Their table erupts into cheers, and Alasdair calls several taunts towards the other tables, targeting the Quidditch players particularly.

It's a celebratory Feast, and Eugene even sneaks a small bottle of firewhisky out of his sleeve to spike everyone's drinks with.

"Urgh, this is awful." Elspeth complains before immediately downing the rest.

Clary is a giggling mess, clearly unable to handle any sort of drink, though about halfway through the Feast she looks like she's about to start crying when she tries to say something to Lenox only to remember that he hadn't sat with them. Cadfael ends up stepping in to distract her by talking about Potions, to everyone's relief.

It's not a perfect ending, but Rajani still thinks it was plenty of fun. And the real end still isn't for another year, so they have time to get things just right.

For the moment, she simply enjoys herself.

Guys. That's it. Sixth year is over. We only have one year left and let me tell you it's a doozy. We get our Head Boy and Head Girl (and SHUSH we're going to pretend we don't know who they'll be and this is legitimately tense xD), there will of course be more romantic nonsense but these kids are about to get ready to enter the real world so expect a bit more job-related angst and stress as well! Eight chapters, sixteen weeks, and 80 thousand words left before we leave these kids to their lives and jump forward in time to when things are a lot less laid back! So let's enjoy the ride~

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
#2
Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2491 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!