Chapter Twenty-Two

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Walking on Sunshine

Of course she'd told her parents about Brandon, how could she not? Franziska was so giddy the day they made it official that she'd sent Rudi off immediately with a hastily penned letter. He'd only just returned a few days before the train was scheduled to head back to London.

Of course that means it's all she hears about when she meets her mother on the platform.

"Is he here? I'd love to meet him!" Pannidda Reinhardt scans the station platform eagerly and Franziska feels her face rapidly heating up.

"Mom! No, he's probably already off with his dad. We should go, don't we have a Portkey to catch?" She asks hopefully, but her mother is determined.

"We have some time, and I want to meet your first boyfriend!" Pannidda insists, and Franziska feels herself flushing at the word. "He's American, so I suppose listening would be better than watching."

Franziska finally sighs and gives in. "Okay okay, I'll look for him. Please don't embarrass me." She begs, and her mother laughs.

"Never intentionally." She promises, which really doesn't make Franziska feel better. But she just sighs again and scans the area for her boyfriend (and okay, even just thinking the world gives her an excited little thrill down her spine).

She spots him easily enough, and she waves him over with some lingering reluctance.

"Brandon, this is my mom. She wanted to meet you." Franziska introduces them quickly, studying her feet intently as she does so.

Brandon gives a sweeping bow and despite her continued embarrassment Franziska can't help but grin at the cheesy gesture. "A pleasure to meet you Mrs. Reinhardt." He smiles politely and Franziska can tell he's fully won her mother already.

"Well aren't you a gentleman." Pannidda says warmly. "Penny is fine dear. Franziska mentioned your father is around as well?"

Franziska catches the brief look of nervousness on Brandon's face before it's gone again, and she's glad she's not the only one anxious about meeting the parents this early in the relationship.

"Um, yes ma'- Penny." He quickly corrects himself. They walk a few feet over to where a man is leaning against the wall, and he looks up with slight surprise.

"Well hello there! I don't believe we've met before." He smiles brightly at both Pannidda and Franziska, offering each a handshake in turn. "Richard Young." He has the same heavy American accent as Brandon, and they have the same smile as well - Franziska finds she rather likes him already.

"Franziska Reinhardt." She introduces herself politely, and his eyes light up in recognition of the name.

Thankfully the adults get caught up chatting about recent politics, temporarily saving Brandon and Franziska from parental-based humiliation. They wait a few feet away, leaning against one of the walls.

"Your father seems quite nice, I don't know why you dislike him so much." She observes after a moment. Brandon makes a face.

"He's nice I guess, but he's the reason we moved out here after the divorce." He mumbles.

Franziska frowns and takes his hand. "Well he's the reason we met then, right?" She points out, and he smiles a bit.

"Yeah, that's true. You're the best part about this place."

She laughs at the cheesy line. "Don't let Charlie or Aidan hear you say that, you'll never hear the end of it!" She teases lightly and he chuckles as well.

Franziska and Pannidda have to leave shortly after in order to catch their Portkey which Franziska is grateful for. Despite her nervousness, there hadn't been nearly enough time for Pannidda and Richard to properly embarrass her and Brandon.

Of course then she remembers how much she hates Portkeys and she spends the ride to the Portkey offices debating which fate is worse. Ultimately she decides she's in the best case scenario as-is since the Portkey was inevitable anyway.

"You ready to go?" Her mother is holding Rudi's cage in one hand and a torn sock in the other.

Franziska hefts her trunk so that she can lean on it after the landing, and then reaches out with a nod.

"As I'll ever be."

The trip is as terrible and nauseating as it always is, and Franziska makes good use of her trunk as a stabilizer as she recovers from the trip. Pannidda waits patiently, chatting with Rudi as if he could actually understand anything she was saying.

Once Franziska has her bearings they make their way to the car, and Franziska happily naps on the drive back to their house.

Her father isn't home yet, so she and her mother prepare dinner in anticipation and Franziska attempts to dodge questions about Brandon to the best of her abilities, which prove rather poor. By the time her father arrives home she's pretty much told her mother everything about the year - Brandon included.

Of course, her father wants to hear it all too and Franziska finds herself resigned to recounting the whole tale over again at dinner. Her father is more wary of the new romance and insists on meeting Brandon before the school year starts again.

"We'll see about going to London a few days early, maybe spend some time with his family." He says it jovially but Franziska can tell it's not a request. Not that she can really complain - she and Brandon had hoped to do exactly that after all.

"Sounds good to me." She grins. "Oh, we should bring Rosalinde along too! She's been bugging me about seeing London for months now, every single letter has hinted at it." She'd kept in contact with Rosa through the Muggle post in Hogsmeade and her friend's attempted subtle hints had been as blatant as a freight train.

Pannidda smiles brightly. "That sounds wonderful! Be sure to tell her tomorrow so she can ask her mother, this isn't the sort of thing that should be planned at the last minute." She adds, her tone slightly warning, and Franziska nods eagerly.

"Don't worry mom, I'll tell her first thing!"

Franziska was good on her word, and shortly after Rosalinde and her had headed to the park to kick a football around she brings up the idea of the end-of-summer trip to London.

Rosalinde is sold even before she hears that Brandon will be there. After learning that she become determined that neither hell nor high water will stop her from going along.

"Honestly I can't believe you've got a boyfriend before me." Rosalinde gripes lightly as they pass the football lightly back and forth to warm up. "I asked out three whole people this year and no takers." She sighs dramatically in the way Franziska knows means she's mostly joking but is slightly upset.

"Most guys our age are dumb." Franziska declares firmly. "You can't ask them out, it bruises their fragile egos."

Rosalide bursts out laughing and misses Franziska's pass. "Oh my god Frannie. Is Brandon like that?" It's teasingly said, but Franziska nods solemnly.

"Definitely. He's absolutely awful sometimes." She responds, completely deadpan, and Rosalinde nearly drops the retrieved ball from laughing again.

"Oh my gosh I can't wait to meet this loser." She gasps as she finally recovers. "If he's not good enough for you I'm gonna dump him on your behalf, just so you know."

Now it's time for Franziska to miss the ball as she loudly protests this plan, though any bite in her words is rendered completely useless by her laughing at the same time.

"Fine, I'll get your dad's permission first." Rosalide jokes as Franziska hurries after the ball. Franziska honestly considers flipping her off but then thinks better of it. There's a chance it's a different gesture for Muggles, or perhaps just English and Rosalinde won't understand it.

It also would be incredibly inappropriate, and she quietly muses at how Brandon has clearly had more of an influence on her than she'd initially thought.

She passes the ball back and spend the morning patiently answering Rosalinde's questions about Brandon and firing off a few of her own about the three boys her friend apparently had made moves on.

They're still discussing the complications of trying to have a love life as they head to a small café near the park for lunch. Pannidda had given Franziska quite a bit of Muggle money in order to pay for the food so the girls had decided to splurge a bit.

The café feels much fancier than the fast food place a few doors down that they usually go to, and Franziska suddenly thinks she must look terribly out of place in her jean shorts and t-shirt with the name of some football player she doesn't actually know written out across the back. She'd only gotten it so she and Rosalinde could match while they played.

However the servers are just as polite to the two sweaty teenage girls covered in dirt as they are to the rest of the clientele and Franziska soon relaxes and she and Rosalinde are back to giggling about how strange teenage boys can be.

"He always insists on holding the door for me, did I tell you?" Franziska says grandly as she takes a sip of her sweet tea. "It's both adorable and completely ridiculous, like we're still in the time of kings and knights."

"Aw that's sweet!" Rosalinde sighs. "I wish more boys would be like him. Johan Fehrendorf dropped a door shut right in my face once like a right ."

Franziska nearly chokes. "Rosa don't use words like that!" She yelps, blushing even as she laughs.

Rosalinde sticks out her tongue. "It's a new generation! The gays are in Parliament! Ronald Regan wants to tear down the Berlin Wall! Young ladies are swearing! It's total anarchy now Frannie love." She grins cheekily and Franziska just rolls her eyes.

"I have no idea what half of that even meant." She says with a small smirk. "But considering it came from you I assume it's utter ridiculousness."

She gets a forty-five minute lecture on politics for her troubles, but she can't really complain. Rosalinde is so passionate about her topic that it's not hard to stay engaged.

When the two finish their lunch they head back out to the park, this time grabbing their sketchbooks from the bag they'd brought with and settling themselves on one of the benches.

"You should draw Brandon, that way I'll know him when we meet!" Rosalinde declares excitedly a few minutes later, abandoning her own starting sketch of a man sleeping on one of the other benches.

Franziska shakes her head firmly. "I'm no good at drawing people Rosa, you know that." She replies distractedly, retracing an edge of the outline she's working on.

Rosalinde pouts lightly. "Fiiiine." She finally sighs, whining faintly. "I guess I'll just picture him as a gawky, ugly nerd until you give me something better."

Franziska shrieks in protest but there's not much she can do. She really isn't great at drawing people.

The girls go home around mid afternoon and Franziska hangs out at Rosalinde's house, chatting in her best friend's room until she needs to go home for dinner.

That night she pens her first letter to Brandon and asks her mother if they can go into town the next day so she can mail it. She's surprised when her father offers to take her instead, but she doesn't argue.

After dinner she opens Rudi's cage so he can hunt and then settles into bed with her well-worn copy of Tales of Beedle the Bard. She does have some summer homework, but it's only the second day back. She can absolutely do it later.

The next day she goes into town with her dad just as he'd promised. She ends up sitting in his office in the Ministry of Magic, sketching the objects scattered around the room as her father chats with his coworkers and works on a report concerning his most recent mission.

They get lunch in the Ministry cafeteria and Franziska is a bit shy as her father proudly parades her around, introducing her to each of the people they meet and explaining their job. Franziska is happy to ask everyone questions as well, and they seem happy to have an excuse to elaborate on what they do.

One older woman asks her if she interested in working for the Ministry someday. Franziska answers honestly that she isn't sure yet, but she thinks she wants to work with Muggles, like her mom does.

"Or I could be a librarian. I think that would be a lot of fun as well." She adds after a moment of thought. Madame Pince, when not yelling at students for breaking library rules, seemed to have quite a nice time. And Franziska can't imagine a job where one is surrounded by books could really have all that many downsides.

The woman she's speaking to keeps smiling but Franziska can tell that it's a bit strained now. Her father quickly ushers her away so they can sit down to eat.

"Dad why was she so set on my being in the Ministry?" She asks after she's certain the woman has moved on.

Her father laughs, but it's an uncomfortable one. "Ilse is... a bit old-fashioned is all." He replies. "She lived through two wars, muggle and wizard, and it's made her just a bit cranky in her old age."

Franziska can't help but giggle. "That's fair I suppose."

Her father quickly changes the topic. "So you want to work with Muggles? I know your mom won't be giving up her position anytime soon so what were you thinking?"

Franziska shrugs. "I'm not completely sure. Perhaps Muggle Liason? Or something lower on the Muggle Relations ladder. I like the idea of living with Muggles - I can't imagine not seeing Rosalinde at least somewhat regularly." She admits.

Her father laughs. "I'm glad you have such a good friend. It's a rare thing Ziska, be sure to cherish it."

She smiles at him happily.

The rest of the afternoon her father lets her walk around the Ministry a bit, and she stops to sketch interesting architecture choices in the building. She politely introduces herself to anyone she comes across, and ends up engaging one of the interns for the Office of Misinformation in a lengthy discussion on the legality of wizards joining muggle wars.

They ultimately decide to agree to disagree, and Franziska adds the Office as one she might be interested in working for in the future.

She asks her dad about it when they're taking the bus home later that afternoon, and he laughs.

"It's certainly a prestigious office, and if you really want it I'd say go for it. But it's less focused on really interacting with Muggles as it is hiding our world from them."

Franziska grins up at him. "Exactly why I'd be so good at it, right?" She points out, and her father laughs again.

Franziska gazes out the window of the bus happily. The summer is looking bright.

Convincing her parents to let her stay with Sahana for even a week during the summer proves significantly more difficult than Rajani had anticipated.

"You have summer studies to focus on - don't think we didn't notice your A in Ancient Runes. Sahana received an O her first year." Her father says briskly when she asks for the third dinner in a row, his patience clearly running thin.

Rajani takes in a slow breath. "Wouldn't it be good for me to have her nearby to help then?" She points out hopefully, but sees the flaw in her argument as soon at it's left her lips.

Her mother shakes her head. "Your sister is starting her new job! And I'm sure her roommate will be busy as wellm- what is she doing again?"

"She's a starting Chaser for the Wimbourne Wasps mother." Rajani supplies automatically, despite knowing that Mayra being a Quidditch player will only make it harder to convince her parents.

Her mother makes a face. "Right. I never understood why Sahana insisted on being friends with that girl." She sniffs. "But it is saving her money on a flat and goodness knows London prices are absurd. Hopefully she'll rise quickly and be able to afford her own place soon enough."

Rajani stares at her food, trying to formulate anything that might get her parents to change their minds. "What if I finished all my summer work this month? And then only spend a week sometime in July?" She offers hopefully.

Her father frowns. "It is unbecoming to be so whiny Rajani." Is his only response, and Rajani steels herself internally before responding.

She's never tried to sweet-talk her parents before. Other adults of course, all the time really, but her own parents have never been on the other end of her attempts in the past. Of course, she's never lied to them until now either, so there's a time to start everything.

"It's just, Queenie was so looking forward to it, said we should make a day and perhaps spend time with the Slughorns as well - Eugene's uncle does love talking with promising young students. But I suppose you are right. I apologize father. Mother." She tilts her head down demurely and keeps her eyes focused on the table, the picture of submission.

They don't say any more on the topic that night, but the next morning her mother instructs her to give Sahana a time frame and let their eldest decide when the most opportune time would be for Rajani to visit.

Rajani immediately hurries to write her friends about the good news. Then she pulls out one last parchment and begins to pen her first letter of the summer to Ed, thinking how proud he'll be that she's been so rebellious.

You are really a terrible influence. Rebelliously yours, Raj

She grins as she finishes Ed's letter and immediately ties it to Laksmi's leg. "This one first girl, but there's a bit of a pile. You can take Eugene and Queenie's letters at the same time at least." She promises as her bird looks at the pile of deliveries with clear disdain. "And i'll give you your favorite treats tonight." Lakshmi tilts her head, and then nips at Rajani's hand and she laughs.

"Oh alright, I'll give you some after each successful delivery, how does that sound?"

It seems to please the owl well enough as she takes off out the open window almost immediately.

Rajani lays out the rest of her letters, already placed into envelopes and addressed, and pulls out her summer homework. She had promised to finish it after all, and it's in her best interest to do so anyway.

There's naturally more to do this summer than in the past, so deciding what order to accomplish things in takes slightly longer than usual, but ultimately Rajani opts for a pattern of starting with something difficult and then doing something easy before going back to something hard again.

Naturally this means she starts with her Ancient Runes translations. And almost immediately regrets it.

She ends up spending as much time actually working as she does staring blankly at the window waiting for Lakshmi to return, and she doesn't get very far in the worksheet.

Sighing as her owl returns from the first delivery, she gets up and puts her homework away. She'll work on something else and come back to Ancient Runes later. She gives Lakshmi a treat, as promised, and then sends her off with Eugene and Queenie's letters. Better to give her the heavier loads when she's still at least somewhat fresh. Rajani will send Sahana's letter next.

She pulls out her Muggle Studies assignment and gets to work on the essay, skimming through her textbook on occasion to ascertain she's remembering things correctly but for the most part it's a simple task. She already has the required two feet finished when Lakshmi returns again and starts pecking at Sahana's letter.

Rajani laughs. "Okay girl, chill. Here, have your treat while I tye this on."

Lakshmi is happy to oblige and shortly after is taking off towards the city center. Rajani knows this one will be a short trip so she settles by her desk, thumbing through her potions text and halfheartedly jotting down notes for the assigned essay.

Everything, including her homework, is finally settled after far longer than Rajani has the patience for, and Rajani finds herself flooing to Rajani and Mayra's new apartment on July twelfth with a small bag, and a ton of plans.

Mayra greets her, sweaty but grinning broadly. "Hey Raj! Your sister is still at work, some emergency meeting. Sorry I'm a bit of a mess, I had to rush back from practice to make sure you wouldn't arrive to an empty flat."

Rajani smiles easily. "I think I'd be more surprised if you weren't a mess Mayra. How are practices going?"

She listens to Mayra's descriptions of playing pro as she unpacks her bags and gets settled in the small guest bedroom of the apartment.

They then retire to the kitchen and Mayra starts whipping up dinner. Rajani clears uncertainly as she watches.

"So... I assume when my parents visit you pretend the room I'm using is yours?"

Mayra laughs. "Naturally. Sahana is really worried about what they would think if they knew." She looks over at Rajani. "Honestly, no offense, I'm surprised she told you. When I first asked her out in fifth year she was insistent that none of you ever find out."

It's weird to hear Mayra speak so casually about something that took Rajani almost four years to work out, and even weirder to hear what really is her first confirmation of her suspicions that her sister and Mayra might be more than friends.

"Fifth year huh? That actually explains a lot." Rajani responds, attempting to stay casual, though from Mayra's smirk she thinks she's failed.

"I'm guessing she still hasn't told you everything?" At Rajani's embarrassed nod Mayra laughs. "We're used to it being more of an open secret I guess. People know but no one says anything."

"It doesn't bother you?" Rajani can't help asking. It would bother her if she couldn't bring home someone she was dating, especially a relationship as serious as Mayra and her sister's seems to be.

Mayra shrugs. "I'm aware that I'm pretty lucky that my parents are okay with it. I can take being secret until we're both secure enough financially to risk properly coming out."

Rajani nods in understanding, and Mayra invites her to come learn how to use the stove top. Rajani is a bit embarrassed at first about her own incompetence with something so simple until Mayra shares the story of the first time she tried cooking with Sahana.

The two of them are still laughing and sharing stories about Rajani's sister when said sister returns from her meetings.

"I don't think I want to know." She announces after staring at the scene for a long moment, a faint smile the only indication that she's not upset.

Mayra puts down the wooden spoon she'd been stirring with and goes to greet her girlfriend with a chaste peck on the cheek. Rajani grins as Sahana looks over at her nervously.

"Hey Raj, sorry I wasn't here. Work emergency." She greets her sister, dropping her bag and shrugging off her Ministry robes.

Rajani nods. "I get that. Mayra has been teaching me how to cook in the meantime so it's been fun."

They settle in for dinner and though Sahana is clearly still nervous about Rajani being fully aware of her status as Mayra's girlfriend she does slowly relax as the meal goes on.

"So you're out with Queenie and Clary all day tomorrow right?" Mayra checks as she waves her wand to set the dishes to clean themselves.

Rajani nods excitedly. "We're doing the full Muggle experience." She grins.

Sahana raises an eyebrow. "We won't be telling mother and father about that I presume." She notes, and Rajani laughs.

"Definitely not." She agrees.

That night Rajani has a hard time falling asleep from excitement, but eventually she manages to drift off.

She's awoken by a racket in the kitchen, and is amused to find her sister and Mayra rocking out to a song Rajani has never heard before as they make breakfast together.

"You two are adorable." She observes cheekily when Sahana finally notices her and, bright red, turns off the music.

"We are." Mayra agrees promptly. "Also your bedhead looks like a wasp nest."

Rajani laughs and heads to the bathroom to get cleaned up while her hostesses finish cooking. Breakfast is a casual affair, with Sahana running off after speeding through it in order to get to work and Mayra heading out shortly after, asking Rajani to just leave the dishes in the sink for later.

Rajani hurries through the rest of her food, dumps the dishes where instructed, and races out the door, only pausing to lock up with the spare key she'd been given the day before.

She's the first one to arrive at the meeting point, and she sits on one of the benches and observes the Muggles wandering past, happily noting that her black lace skirt and top don't stand out at all.

"Well look at you, looking like a normal. I've never seen you in anything but perfectly pressed robes."

Rajani grins and spins to face Clary as her friend walks up and hops over the back of the bench in order to sit next to Rajani. She's dressed in jeans and a shirt that has an image of four men crossing a street on it. Rajani assumes it's a Muggle reference.

"I always dress like this out of uniform." She responds with slightly exaggerated primness. "And I'm perfectly pressed now as well."

Clary laughs. "It's cute. I figured you'd be wearing, like traditional Indian clothes or something."

Rajani snorts. "Only for family functions, which we haven't had in a while thank goodness. My sari is beautiful but far too warm and heavy for a day like today."

"A rare sunny day in London." Clary quips. "It's like the universe knew we needed it to be nice today."

"Hey girls!" Queenie waves excitedly from the other side of the square and the three meet in the middle, where Queenie drags them both into a hug.

"Alright, I've got our whole itinerary planned out." She announces once she's released them. "We're starting here, obviously, and working our way across the Thames and ending in the West End."

The other two nod, and after a moment Rajani clears . "Um, where exactly is 'here'?" She asks, embarrassed when both Clary and Queenie laugh.

"Welcome to the Tower of London Raj, home of some of the bloodiest history in the city." Queenie grins. "It's a ton of fun, you're going to love it."

Oddly enough, Rajani actually does. The three girls take one of the guided tours of the tower (Queenie was smart enough to bring a purse full of Muggle money for the day). The Tower's history is absolutely fascinating and Rajani has fun drawing parallels to events in wizarding history. They linger in the halls, looking around and revisiting their favorite spots for another twenty minutes after the tour ends before moving on.

The walk across the Tower Bridge and Clary makes an absolute fool of herself when a Muggle recognizes whatever her shirt means and they both starting singing a song - terribly - very loudly for almost a minute before their respective groups drag them away from each other.

"Beatles forever!" Clary declares happily. "Man I love Muggles. You could never do something like that with wizards, we're way to stuck up most of the time."

Queenie and Rajani both berate her for that comment which only has her laughing harder.

The wander down the South Bank of the Thames after that, taking in the sights and even popping onto an old war ship turned museum that Clary absolutely falls in love with. She insists on one of the short tours available and so the girls end up spending nearly an hour learning about Muggle war history, which Rajani has to admit is rather interesting.

The eventually reach the London Bridge where they stop to grab lunch before Queenie drags them across the street to where the Parliament buildings are located.

"It's basically the Muggle Ministry." She informs her friends. "And it's where I'm going to work as a liaison probably."

"'Probably'? You're not changing your mind on that are you? All this Muggle stuff put you off?" Clary teases and Queenie flicks her lightly on the forehead.

"Not even close. I'm just keeping an open mind - you never know if a better opportunity for cooperation and equality will come up." Queenie states firmly.

They end up spending hours in the Parliament buildings, as Queenie's control of the money means they go on every single different tour available.

"I'm pretty sure you could be a senator at this point from everything we just went through." Clary groans as they finally make their way away from the Houses of Parliament and towards Buckingham Palace.

"If only politics were that simple." Queenie laughs. "Come on, lets go look at pretty people wearing pretty things in a pretty building. That'll cheer you up."

Clary is in a distinctly better mood as they leave the Palace and its gardens a little over an hour later, and Rajani is sad to see the buildings of the West End approaching, lit from behind by the setting sun.

The three girls end their day sitting on the banks of the Thames, admiring the sunset and debating the best parts of their adventures.

"And don't forget tomorrow is dinner at Eugene's!" Queenie reminds them as they get ready to head back to their homes.

Clary and Rajani reconfirm that they'll be in attendance, and the three part ways. Rajani skips slightly as so goes, quite content with the state of her life.

She'll have to spend the summer with her sister more often from now on.

For once Ana doesn't complete all of her summer homework in the course of a few weeks. Instead, she sketches out a study plan that has her completing her final essay about a week before the start of the new semester.

"This way I'm still fresh when I return." She explains to her parents over dinner, quite proud of the neat schedule she's just shown them. "And it leaves room for extracurricular studying as well."

Her mother raises an amused brow at that comment, and her father grins. "Or for reading, or playing games. Life isn't all about studying Ana." He points out.

She shrugs. "I enjoy learning new things. And regardless, life is very dependent on how much you know. Knowledge is power as they say."

What she doesn't mention is that her extracurricular studying is focused on something very specific, though she's certain her Leglimens mother probably has figured it out. She's not exactly hiding her thoughts, and she's told them both already about her interest in becoming an animagus.

She's owled Professor McGonagall to confirm that she'll be able to start her training upon returning to school, and she's confident she'll be receiving a positive response any day now. After all, she'd done perfectly on her final exams.

She digs up any and all books she can find on the topic of becoming an animagus and spends her allotted free time studying up and practicing the incantation she comes across in one of the older tomes.

Her Baba pays them a visit during the time she's waiting for her professor's response, and the hag is quite taken with the idea.

"If the old biddy says no you just teach yourself, understand? In fact, you ought have done that from the start really." Baba grumbles as they practice spying with Ana's crystal ball. "Don't let anyone know about your being one. That's the best way to do it really."

"That's against the laws Baba." Ana replies calmly as she observes her Housemate Finnigan casually pick pocketing someone as he wanders through what looks like a Muggle market.

Baba sniffs disapprovingly. "You could learn from this one. Laws are confines to protect the weasels and cowards in charge."

"Yes Baba." Ana sighs, letting go of the crystal and letting the image of Finnigan fade. "Are we moving on yet? I believe I have demonstrated I'm quite proficient at this by now."

She used to love when her Baba visited, yet in the past year the hag has become rather irritating. She's happy to see the woman leave two hours later with a promise to be back later in the summer.

Finally an owl returns, with the expected confirmation and accompanying warning from her Professor that should McGonagall find any reason to stop the process she will do so without hesitation.

Ana wouldn't have expected anything less.

And so she alternates her time between school work and animagus studies, with the occasional break to sit with her mother's tea circles or accompany her father to work where she spends her time looking over employment pamphlets.

Then the time inevitably comes when they head to the MacMillan mansion for a dinner party.

Ana tugs at the sleeve of her new dress, shifting uncomfortably. She absolutely hates wearing new things to events away from her own home, as if they turn out to be itchy she can't discretely slip away to change into something more comfortable.

And this new dress is certainly itchy.

"Ana quit fussing." Her mother scolds after she shifts for the third time in as many minutes.

"Apologies mother, but this dress is uncomfortable." She responds, knowing she's being rather rude but unable to bring herself to particularly care when half her body is begging to be freed from the awful fabric it's encased in.

Winona frowns. "Well it's just a few hours and you look lovely." She replies curtly, and Ana grimaces. Her mother obviously isn't in the best mood either.

The one good thing about the evening is that Alec is still off curse breaking somewhere in South America so Ana doesn't have to suffer through his bragging in addition to the dress.

She ends up in Alasdair's room at one point, sitting stiffly in his desk chair and making awkward small talk. Mostly she just lets him go on about his Muggle football while her mind wanders over her study schedule for the week.

She does tell him a bit about her animagus research, and though he's not particularly insterested he's polite enough to listen until Ana gives him a break and asks about Quidditch instead, knowing that the Slytherin team is in for a major reshuffling thanks to their captain having graduated.

All in all she's quite pleased when the evening is complete and the Vulchanovas return home. Ana immediately showers and puts on her coziest nightgown before plucking Dracula from his terrarium and leaving him to lounge on her pillow as she settles down with one of the thicker tomes she's found to aid her animagus studies.

She's not sure when exactly she falls asleep, but she awakens with the book on the floor, still on top of her covers, and Dracula burning a hole into her pillow.

"Drat." She groans, quickly plucking up her fire salamander and dropping him into his cage before grabbing the pillow and patting it out against the floor. She frowns as she assess the damage - she'll likely need an entirely new pillow and her mother certainly won't be pleased.

Sighing, she cleans up what she can and then proceeds through her usual morning routine, mentally planning how to broach the subject of the pillow with her mother at breakfast.

Surprisingly, her mother just sighs. "I've been needing to go shopping for a few days now, I suppose this is my push." She smiles tiredly at her daughter. "Would you like to accompany me Ana? I'm sure we'll see a few of the ladies from our tea circle and perhaps even a few of your school friends."

Ana rather doubts she'd run into Aidan in the middle of magical London considering he's a Muggleborn Irishman, but she doesn't say that to her mother, instead nodding politely. No need to push her luck.

"That would be lovely. Perhaps I can find a new book as well."

"Nothing on animagi please." Her mother responds lightly. "I think you need some more causal reading in your library. Life isn't all about studying you know."

Ana sighs at the familiar refrain. "Yes mother, you've informed me. And I maintain that I enjoy learning new things."

"And why can't you learn them from a novel?" Winona suggests. "Information is everywhere, and knowledge isn't only in textbooks Ana."

Ana blinks. Her mother has never countered her on that before, and she wonders how long Winona has been plotting this counter. "Um, well, I suppose that's not inaccurate." She admits, thinking about the Grimm anthology sitting hidden at the back of her bookshelf. "Perhaps I could use some lighter reading for just before I go to bed." She acquiesces, and Winona beams.

"Wonderful! We'll leave after I've cleaned up. It won't affect your study schedule?" She adds, clearly not having considered it before.

Ana is surprised her mother even remembers her schedule, nonetheless is actually concerned about interrupting it. "Not at all. I can rearrange the couple of things I had intended to complete today easily." She states, and it's true. All she has planned is editing her Divination assignment and writing another few paragraphs for Potions.

Her mother beams. "Excellent, we'll make a day of it then! There's a lovely little Bistro I've been wanting to try-"

Ana lets her mother ramble on about their plans, helping clean up from breakfast as best she can without magic. She thinks she'll be rather pleased when she turns seventeen and is no longer constrained by the Statute of Limitations.

"And I believe that's everything! I'll just leave a note for your father in case he gets home early." With a quick flick of her wand Winona summons some parchment and sets a quill scribbling away. "Well then, shall we?"

Ana isn't quite sure how to feel about spending a full day with her mother out and about in wizarding London, but as she hasn't had much of a chance to explore the city since they'd moved in she figures it will at least be educational.

She thinks she rather underestimated exactly how chaotic London can get.

"Mother! Mother slow down I can't keep up." She huffs, slightly louder than she's reasonably comfortable speaking but her mother hadn't heard the first three attempts at gaining her attention so Ana has to make some sacrifices.

Winona finally turns, looking apologetic. "Oh I'm sorry dear, I forget you're not used to this. I'll watch my pace." She offers a hand for Ana to hold, but Ana is fourteen-almost-fifteen and not about to go wandering around the city holding onto her mother's hand like a e to distraction.

She instead brushes down her dress and nods briskly. "That would be preferable, thank you."

Winona smiles in defeat and drops her hand. "Well we're very nearly at the store anyhow. I think you'll quite like it, they've an entire section dedicated to rare potion ingredients." She perks up then, and her smiles brightens. "Oh, you could find anything you need for your animagus potion! I imagine there would be some odd ingredients for that, yes?"

Ana can't help that the corners of turn up at that. "Actually that sounds wonderful. A Death's-head Hawk moth chrysalis isn't exactly commonplace here in the British Isles."

"Well they are non-native." Her mother notes wryly, and Ana glances over at her.

"Have you been reading my books or my mind?" She asks, slightly irritated that her mother might be invading her privacy so much.

Winona laughs and shakes her head. "Neither dear, I promise. I did some research on my own just to make sure you wouldn't be in any serious danger. I don't much like the idea of you being stuck in half-animal form if something goes wrong, but Professor McGonagall sounds like she'll be extremely cautious."

Ana nods eagerly. "Professor McGonagall is the best teacher in Hogwarts." She assures her mother. "With her as my mentor I'll be transforming before I get home for Christmas Break."

Ana does manage to find a dried chrysalis for the potion, and her mother stocks up on several foods that Ana doesn't know the names of but she's somewhat dreading having to try them. They send their purchases back home with the magical delivery service offered by the store and then head over to the bistro her mother had been so excited about for lunch.

"Margaret says their scones are absolutely to die for here. Share a plate with me?" Winona asks as they look over the menu.

Ana shrugs. "I suppose I'll try them." She hesitates, rubbing lightly at the bracelet around her right wrist that's sat there for two years - ever since Eric had given it to her for her twelfth birthday. "So mother, I was thinking."

And it's something she's been thinking about for some time, but she'd never been sure her mother would be willing. At least, not until she'd hear Winona give her full support for Ana's animagus training.

Winona looks up, slightly worry clouding her features at Ana's abruptly serious tone. "Yes dear? Is everything alright?"

Ana nods. "Oh yes. Actually, I was thinking I might reassign some of my free study time. I think I'd like to learn Leglimency. If you would want to teach me?"

Winona looks stunned, and then bursts into a smile, a hint of tears making her eyes shine. "Oh sweetie of course! All you had to do was ask! Well, we'll have to add some more stops to our list for today!"

Ana wishes she'd known her mother would be so excited about the prospect sooner, but at least the entire summer hasn't been lost. She may yet get the basics down before the start of school.

Training with her mother is a bit stiff and uncertain at the start, to put it politely. Really Ana just doesn't know how to handle her mother in a teaching role, and Winona has never been a teacher before.

"No, you just- Okay, just forget what I said, we'll try it differently." Winona sighs. "You read the book I gave you, right?"

Ana huffs out an irritated breath. "Of course I did mother. Perhaps you should look through it again yourself."

"I am a fully fledged Leglimens young lady, and I don't appreciate what you just thought."

Ana just narrows her eyes and looks away before her mother can see her next, equally rude thought. She should brush up on her Occlumency if they're going to continue doing this - she clearly isn't blocking her thoughts as easily as she used to.

Winona sighs. "Alright, why don't we take a break for now? Perhaps some time to clear our heads would be beneficial."

Ana nods shortly in agreement and heads up to her room. Occlumency had come to her quite naturally and she'd foolishly assumed Leglimency would be the same. Clearly she had been wrong.

Pulling out the book her mother had given her to study, Ana sits primly at her desk and starts rifling through it, looking for anything she might have overlooked in her reading the night before.

"I don't understand it Dracula." She sighs to her pet. "I mean, I understand the concepts but execution just isn't coming." She shakes her head and puts the book down. "Perhaps... perhaps I should actually... relax during this break." She says slowly.

She taps idly at her bracelet and walks over to her bookshelf, retrieving the Grimm Anthology from it's hiding place and flipping it open at random.

"'Doctor Knowall'." She shakes her head with a faint smile. "Isn't that just ironic." She sits back down and reads through the familiar story of a man becoming renowned through a series of randomly lucky incidents.

She taps her bracelet again thoughtfully. "I wonder Drac, if Occlumency might have come so easily because of this?" She tugs at it until it comes off and places it lightly on her desk.

Her wrist feels oddly bare, but it's a worthy experiment to make. And regardless, it's not like her lessons could be going any worse.

"Hopefully animagus training goes better." She remarks to Dracula with some amusement as she heads back downstairs.

Than again, it would be rather difficult to be worse than this. She's looking forward to getting back to school.

Cadi officially moves into her little apartment in the city in the first week of August. Myr follows her out a week later to give her time to settle in.

"Welcome to Casa Cadi little bro." She greets him with a grin and a spin, gesturing around at the tiny space she now calls home. "You'll have to take the couch but I promise it's comfy. I've got school stuff later this week so I figured we can go to Diagon Alley tomorrow or Thursday if that works. Oh, just dump your stuff anywhere for now, we'll find a place for it later." Cadi is babbling away excitedly and Myr can't help grinning despite the fact he's been feeling uneasy about this next step all summer.

He drops his trunk and lets Owen out of his carrier. The black cat immediately begins nosing at his new surroundings in curiosity, and Myr leaves him to it.

"Tomorrow is fine. Between-"

"Noon and one don't worry I remember." Cadi grins over at him. "We'll have to exchange our money of course, since Uncle Cyril won't be with us this time - how much do you suppose we'll need? - anyhow I'll get your books and such, you focus on the wand. I hear from Holly it can be a long process finding the best fit."

Myr nods. He's heard that from Holly as well. "She says I should be a bit quicker since she knows me so it'll help her narrow it down. Ollivander takes forever since he has no idea about any of the people walking into his store."

Cadi laughs. "I've heard that complaint too."

Myr remembers a time he thought it was weird his sister is pen pals with Holly Kiddell, but now it just feels normal.

One more blurred line between Hogwarts and the rest of my life. He thinks, his amusement tamped down by the realization.

"Myr? How much will we need?" Cadi waves her hand in front of his face with a frown.

Myr blinks. "Sorry. Um, two hundred pounds maybe? Just to be safe." He adds quickly at his sister's startled look.

Cadi shakes her head in amazement. "Wizarding economics are nuts, and I feel awful for Muggleborn students who are poor in Muggle money." She states. "But alright, I can swing two hundred and get mom to pay back whatever we spend. You good heading over around ten tomorrow? We can get Owen some stuff before you head to the Kiddell shop."

Myr agrees easily and the rest of the day is actually quite enjoyable. They spend a few hours working out how to get Myr unpacked - since he'll be staying with Cadi until the end of the summer - and then go out for dinner at a pub just across the street.

"Fish and chips just aren't the same away from the sea." Cadi laments later as they're paying the bill. "But London does keep trying. I suppose that's worth something."

Myr just grins and shakes his head. "If you say so."

Honestly he agrees, but it's fun to provoke rants from his sister. She makes a point to learn things before developing strong opinions so whenever she makes broad statements she often has a lot to say on the subject.

Sure enough he spends dessert (ice cream from a small shoppe a few doors down) listening to the intricacies of the preservation process for fish and how it impacts the flavor of the food.

By the end of it he's pretty sure he knows more about that than anything he's learned in History of Magic so far, and he observes idly to his sister that if politics doesn't work out she'd be an excellent lecturer.

Cadi makes a face. "Don't even joke. Spending time dealing with kids who have no idea what they're doing in life? I'm dealing with that enough now, I don't need to make a career of it."

Myr laughs. "Fair enough."

The rest of the evening passes rather quickly and Myr is happy to find that the couch really is comfortable when he settles down onto it for the night.

The next morning is a blur of activity as Cadi flits around the apartment, making breakfast, getting ready, and gathering everything they'll need for their day in Diagon Alley.

"Alright, I think between us we should be able to carry everything back without any of the suspicious stuff sticking out." Cadi decides once they've both eaten and grabbed the backpacks they'll be using for transportation of his school supplies. "I've got the cash - you know where to go to get it converted, right?"

Myr nods. "Gringotts should be able to do it. Oh, um, but don't be weird about the goblins please? They kind of hate humans so they're probably going to be super rude."

Cadi's eyes light up when she hears the word 'goblin'. "Don't worry little brother, I'll be on my best behavior." She promises. "Though I'm super excited to see these goblins. So far all magical people have looked pretty human to me."

Myr laughs. "Well you've mostly seen students." He points out. "When you get past the school the magical world is full of weird beasts and people."

Cadi shakes her head as they step out of the apartment and she locks up. "A whole other world that we never notice." She says. "I honestly still have a hard time believing it."

Myr makes a face. "Well trust me, it's around. And very annoying at times."

Cadi laughs. "Alright. Muggle topics now. Have you been keeping up with the textbooks I gave you?"

They keep up a steady flow of conversation about World War Two, something Myr has been reading about in his attempts to mimic a Muggle education, until they reach the Leaky Cauldron and slip into the alley behind it.

Myr pulls out his old wand and prays it will be good enough to get them into Diagon Alley before tapping the brick serving at the entrance.

He breathes out softly in relief when the wall folds aside to reveal the bustle of shoppers just beyond.

Cadi in a breath, clearly only just keeping her excitement under control. "Okay, where's Gringotts?"

Myr leads her down the center street of the Alley, to the looming bank building. He can feel Cadi vibrating with excitement as they enter, but she remains quite professional as they speak with one of the goblin tellers to have their money exchanged.

She drops the act as soon as they're out of earshot of the bank. "That was so cool!"

Myr laughs. "They were incredibly rude." He points out. "I don't see how that's 'cool'."

Cadi waves him off. "Humans are plenty rude too, at least they have something of an excuse if that war I read about in your old textbooks is anything to go by."

Myr blinks. "You read my textbooks?" He asks incredulously, and Cadi laughs again.

"Hey, if I get high enough in politics I'll have to interact with wizard anway right? And since I full well intend to get high enough, I figure it doesn't hurt to get to know my allies."

Myr grins and shakes his head. "You're incredible. Anyway, it's just about noon so I guess I'll start heading to see Holly?"

Cadi nods. "And I'll hit Flourish and Blotts. Here, take ten Galleons. I know you're getting a discount on the wand but you should pass the apothecary on your way back so grab anything you're running low on."

Myr nods. "Alright, sounds good. Meet back here by one thirty at the latest?"

"Bring Holly if you can! I haven't seen her in person for a while." Cadi confirms with a grin. "Now go get a proper wand!" She shoos him cheerfully and heads back down the road towards the bookstore.

Myr makes his way down one of the many side alleys, takes the second right, and finds himself in front of the little wand shop Holly's family owns.

He pushes open the door to find a middle-aged man working the counter. Not quite noon then, if Holly's uncle is still here.

The man smiles. "Well hello there! You're a bit old to be looking at wands - you must be here for my niece."

Myr grins nervously and nods. "Yes, um, Myrddin Cadwallader." He introduces himself awkwardly, holding out his hand.

The man shakes it cheerfully. "Rowan Kiddell. You're one of Holly's Gryffindor friends, right? Well she's just in the back now and I'm about to head out for lunch, but feel free to keep her company. It's usually pretty slow around this time of day and I know Holls gets bored!"

Myr nods mutely, and watches as Rowan checks a few things in the inventory before coming around the counter and heading for the door.

"Holly! One of your friends is here to say hello!" He calls to the back just as he opens the door. "You can finish stocking when I'm back."

Holly immediately appears from the back room, grinning brightly. "Myr! Hey you're here!" She greets excitedly, skipping the door and jumping straight over the counter to give him a hug.

Myr stumbles, caught by surprise, and looks up. "You grew." He observes. Despite his own gained inch over the summer, Holly now stands at least half a head above him.

She grins proudly. "I had a spurt. But really, you shouldn't be surprised. Laurel is almost five eight and Willow is five seven and a half. We're tall in the Kiddell line."

Myr grins. "So, um, I guess I need a wand?"

Holly claps happily. "Yup! I've got a few laid out in the back already that I think might be a good match - this should go quicker than normal since I actually know you."

Myr nods mutely, trusting that Holly knows way more about any of this than he could.

She vanishes into the back for a few minutes, and then returns juggling several boxes. "Okay, I'm also expecting Charlie and his little brother to swing by so I may leave you to wave wands around while I work with them, is that alright?"

Myr nods. "I don't want to interrupt your work." He replies, and Holly snorts.

"Myr, this is my work. I'm normally supposed to focus on one customer and then go to the next one, but since I have get both of you done in an hour to get you the discount I'll need to fudge protocol a bit." She explains, putting down the boxes and selecting one to open. "Here, try this. Rowan and Unicorn Hair, same length as your other one but stiffer flexibility."

The door swings open then, and Holly perks up. "Charlie! Hey, you're right on time! Myr wave that around a bit, see how it feels." She instructs him quickly. "If you don't like it grab whatever you want out of the pile until something clicks." She hops the counter again and bounces over to grab Charlie into a hug.

Myr turns to wave to his friend and notices the smaller boy standing awkwardly behind the Seeker.

Once Holly releases Charlie, the red head turns and gestures the other boy forward. "Holly, Myr, this is my brother Percy. He's just starting at Hogwarts this year."

Percy smiles nervously. "Um, hello, it's nice to meet you."

Holly beams at him. "Same here kid. So let's get you a wand, yeah? What sort of things do you like?" She turns to shoot Myr a quick glare. "And you, wave the wand!"

Myr laughs and complies and Holly, content that he's doing as he's told, turns to barrage and increasingly overwhelmed Percy with questions.

Charlie walks over to him. "Hey Myr! What are the chances we'd pick the same day to come shopping?"

"Not very high." Myr says, flicking the wand a few more times before putting it down. He hadn't felt anything, so he randomly grabs another box out of the pile. "It's good to see you though. How's your summer been?"

Charlie shrugs. "Normal I guess. Loud. The twins are actually getting a hang of magic and it's been awful. I don't know how mum will manage this year without Percy around to look out for Ron and Ginny while she deals with the twins."

Myr hums sympathetically, putting away the second wand he'd tried as he does. "I'm glad my sister and I get along." He observes. "And that it's only the two of us."

Charlie laughs. "Tell me about it. Bill and I get on great, and I'm happy to look out for my little siblings, but they do get to be a handful sometimes."

"Alright wait here!" Holly's excited exclamation causes them both to turn back to her and Percy, the latter of whom looks vaguely terrified. Charlie waves him over as Holly vaults the counter and races into the back room again.

"Is she always so..." Percy trails off and waves his hands uncertainly.

Charlie laughs. "Intense? When it comes to wands, absolutely. But she's honestly fantastic at this, she'll get you a wand in no time."

Myr's latest pick chooses then to send a gush of wind dancing around the room, ruffling all three boys and drawing a shriek of excitement from the back room.

A moment later Holly reemerges, pushes five boxes and Percy, who ends up dropping them on the floor in his surprise, and grabs the wand out of Myr's hands.

"Lemme see. Larch, Unicorn Hair, thirteen and a half inches and solid flexibility. Good wand, we carved this baby a little over two years ago." She grins and hands it back to Myr. "Congratulations on finally having a proper wand my friend. I can't wait to see what you do with it! Now lemme ring you up. Perce, you start waving those around."

Holly charges him half the price noted on the box and takes no arguments from him when he tries to protest that fifty percent is far too much of a discount.

"You're my friend and I have to discount anyway - I'm on the intern after all, you're not getting fully qualified service." She grins. "Alright, now that that's done lemme go help Percy."

Myr decides to wait and watch as Holly brings out several different wands for the young wizard to try. Both she and Percy get more discouraged with each failure, though Charlie encourages them both.

Finally Holly shakes her head. "Okay, we've got five minutes before my uncle gets back, so I'm going to try something. This will either work or set something on fire, so Myr I'mma need you to have Auguamenti on standby please."

Charlie looks alarmed. "Holly please don't set my brother on fire." Percy looks equally disconcerted by the thought and nods rapidly in agreement.

Holly laughs. "Don't worry, it won't set you on fire. Probably. It's fine!" She calls as she once again rushes into the back room.

Percy fidgets nervously until she returns, and then keeps fidgeting even as she hands him the wand.

"Go on, give it a wave. I need to get you rung up in the next three minutes." Holly insists, and Percy gives a nervous flick.

Something does set on fire - the end of the wand. But it's nothing as dramatic as Holly had said.

Said wandmaking intern is beaming. "Oh great, it likes you! Congrats on your new wand kid." She takes it back and wraps it up. "Hazel and Dragon Heartstring can be a pretty volatile pairing if in the wrong hands." She explains cheerfully. "Three Galleons please."

Charlie has just finished handing over the money when Rowan Kiddell returns. Holly takes her lunch break then, and the whole group of them end up meeting with Cadi and going for lunch.

In the end, despite all his worrying, the day has gone quite well. And Myr can admit he's excited to see what his new wand can do.

WANDS!!! I have so much fun with wand lore you guys, I have a whole CHART dedicated to giving people wands. EVERY CHARACTER HAS A WAND. So to make up for the short chapter last time, have a slightly longer chapter than normal (courtesy of wands). And thus we begin the kids' fourth year! This year will wrap up at the end of December if the schedule is maintained, and there's plenty planned! So strap in students, we're almost half way through this thing!

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2491 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!