Chapter Ten

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
A Familiar Routine

Hufflepuff only gets six new students, but they're all loud enough that it seems like more.

Franziska had opted to situate herself at the end of the table so she could meet the newly sorted first years, and most of her yearmates had joined her, leading to quite an active dinner. The one unfortunate in the otherwise enjoyable meal was that one of the new students was none other than Saundra Caldwell, the hyper and irritating chatterbox from the Ministry and Diagon Alley.

And Saundra was just as endlessly frustrating as she had been when they'd first met. Franziska is always happy to give the benefit of the doubt, but even her yearmates concede later that Saundra is just a little off-putting.

"Overall though the first years seem really fun! I can't wait until this weekend, I bet they'll be good sports about the initiation." Leona Poole grins widely. All ten of the second year Hufflepuffs have crowded into the boys' dorm, sitting two to a bed.

The group would usually spend their time in the common room, but the prefects had told them they had to be out of sight when their head of house Professor Sprout checked in at ten o'clock. And as the boys were magically barred from entering the girls' room they'd ended up bunking with the guys.

Kiera grins. "I can't wait to see what the seventh years have cooked up. Last year's puffapod fight is gonna be a hard act to follow."

"I'm sure they'll have something memorable. They've had several years to think about it after all." Donaghan Tremlett points out mildly. He's sitting beside his best friend, John "Cian" Donne, who is attempting to ignore the conversation as best he can.

"Whatever it is, we'll have to get through the first week first." Henry Davies sighs. "I hope our schedules aren't too hectic."

Aidan Ward shakes his head, red locks flopping into his face. His hair had grown out somewhat from the bowl cut he'd had the previous year, and Franziska admittedly almost hadn't recognized him. "We don't have any new classes, right? Plus no flying this year, so we should actually have even more free time." He makes a face. "I just hope we get to sleep in after our astronomy classes."

Franziska nods in agreement, along with everyone else in the dorms.

"I'm sure they will - they did last year." Jemma points out with a small smile. "It wouldn't be very good if we didn't get enough sleep, especially during exam periods."

"What about next year though? They can't possibly account for all the electives." Tyler Abbott frowns.

Franziska gives the whole group a bright smile. "Well that can be worried about next year, right? We've only just started second year, and I haven't seen you guys in months! Tell me what you've been up to!"

That does the trick, and the atmosphere immediately lightens up as everyone begins talking over each other, explaining everything they'd gotten up to during the summer.

Surprisingly it's the normally soft-spoken Donaghan who's voice rises over the others. "Cian wrote a song over break!" He nudges his friend. "It's really good, you should play it for everyone."

Cian immediately shakes his head, but the whole group is looking at him now.

"Oh would you? I love music." Jemma smiles hopefully at the curly haired boy, who firmly shakes his head again.

However, the Hufflepuff class is nothing if not persistent, and Franziska laughs as they finally pester Cian into pulling out his guitar and strumming through a few bars. The song is actually quite good, and Cian looks surprised when the room bursts into applause at the end of his short demonstration.

"That was awesome! You should talk to Professor Flitwick after charms sometime about taking one of the Music extra-curriculars next year!" Tyler says excitedly. "Lola says the school choir has been awful the past couple of years, I bet you could get them back into shape!"

Cian looks surprised. "There's a music program here?" He sounds almost hesitant, and Franziska realizes that it's the longest sentence she's heard Cian speak since she's met him.

Tyler nods. "Obviously! Music is awesome - it even has magical properties that you can harness if you know about them. Maisie's ex used to talk about it all the time - he's graduated now but he was in the choir last year."

Tonks frowns. "Wait, ex? Did she and Harrison break up?"

The two begin conducting their own conversation on the romantic goings-on of their families, friends, and eventually the entirety of the student body. Leona, Kiera, and Henry all get involved as well, but Franziska opts to continue talking with the other half of the room.

"There are tons of different extra-curricular options Cian, didn't you know?" Aidan grins excitedly. "There's a Magical Theory course open to all years - I go every week if I can. It's really quite fascinating, the technical knowledge behind how magic actually works." He laughs. "And really helpful in the exams! Knowing why something works makes it easier to do, you know?"

Donaghan shakes his head in awe. "How do you find all these classes Aidan? I feel like I can barely keep up with seven honestly."

Aidan grins. "It's just a matter of talking to people! I'm hoping to take Ancient Studies at some point too, though it's only open to fifth year and above, which kind of . Though at the same time, I guess we'll probably have fewer classes if we don't want to take the NEWT levels."

"I know I'm not taking potions. As soon as I can get out of Snape's classroom the better." Kiera butts in, apparently having grown tired of the gossip session the others were having. "I don't care if I'm able to take the class, nothing can make me go down into the dungeons after fifth year." She pauses for a moment, contemplative, before adding an exception. "Except maybe murder ghosts."

Donaghan laughs "What the heck is a murder ghost?"

"The ghost of a murder victim seeking revenge, obviously." Kiera grins cheerfully.

Franziska can only laugh. "Obviously."

They stay up chatting in the boys' room until Hunter Vaughan, Franziska's least favorite of the prefects, comes down and sends the girls back to their own dorm.

"That was fun! The boys' room is way cozier and more private than the common room, we ought to spend more time there." Jemma notes as the five girls head down the tunnel leading to the women's side of the Hufflepuff burrow, as it's affectionately called by its residents.

Leona makes a face. "No way, I like the common room! You can overhear a lot of great stuff in there."

Tonks laughs loudly, though Franziska is quick to nudge her. It is past curfew after all - they should be quiet in the halls.

"Only you would worry about something like that Leona." The metamorphagus grins, obligingly lowering her voice. "I swear, no one can have secrets with you around."

Leona beams proudly.

Once back in their own room, no one feels like going to sleep so they quickly change into their nightclothes and sit in a circle on Tonks' and Kiera's beds, which they push together with little trouble.

"Do you think we'll have classes with the same people this year?" Jemma pipes up once they've all settled down. "I mean, like, will we still have History of Magic with the Gryffindors? I had a lot of fun passing notes with Drake and Evera last year during that class."

Franziska blinks. "That's a good point. I actually have no idea, but I mean, it would make sense to keep the same groups, right?"

Tonks nods. "For sure. Although, I will say I wouldn't mind having Defense Against the Dark Arts with a different House than Slytherin." She adds after a moment. The other girls nod, some more uncertainly than others.

For her part Franziska doesn't quite get the distrust everyone seems to have for the Slytherin house. Sure some of the older Slytherins are definitely mean - even Hunter is bearable by comparison - but the ones in their year for the most part seem nice enough, if standoffish. Nonetheless she nods as well, not wanting to rock what is clearly a well-established boat.

"That said," Tonks once again amends her statement, "I do like that we get Slytherin in potions. I'm pretty sure Snape is a much nicer grader to his house and we end up getting some of the benefits from that."

That breaks the tension and the girls begin happily chatting about the professors and who they're excited to see again. Naturally the topic of the new Defense professor comes up.

"I saw him at the Feast, did you? Tiny old guy at the end of the table. At least, I assume that must be him - I recognized everyone else." Leona declares. "Unfortunately I don't have any other information."

"Inconceivable!" Tonks teases. "Leona Poole not knowing something?"

Leona shoves her playfully as the other girls laugh.

"Really though," Franziska pipes up thoughtfully. "It is strange how Professor Whits knew she'd be leaving but didn't tell us, or prepare us for the new teacher. I do hope he knows what we learned last year. It would be awful to have to study the same things all over again because of differing curriculum."

Leona looks genuinely insulted. "Wait, she did? And you knew about it? How did you know but I didn't?"

Franziska pats her friend's shoulder awkwardly. "My mom works with the department that arranged the whole thing. I didn't know until the end of the summer anyway, so I promise I wasn't keeping anything from you."

Leona pouts be accepts the answer. "Well I would have found out eventually." She consoles herself with. "My big worry is that an old teacher like that isn't going to let us do anything practical since we're 'too young' or whatever."

Tonks groans. "Oh god, now I'm worried about that! The theory stuff last year was so boring. I couldn't take an entire year of it!"

Franziska had actually found the theory sections rather interesting herself, but she's saved from having to say so by Jemma.

"The theory is important though. Like Aidan said, if you know why it's supposed to work it makes it easier to actually accomplish." She points out with a smile.

Tonks grumbles in agreement, though it's clear her stance on how engaging theoretical magic is hasn't changed a whit.

Eventually the girls have to admit to exhaustion, and they return the beds to their proper places before curling up in their own bunks and passing out.

Unfortunately their decision to stay up as late as they had is not without its consequences.

"I'm exhausted." Kiera groans at breakfast later. "I hope we have History first period so I can nap a bit longer."

"We really shouldn't have stayed up so long past curfew." Franziska agrees, punctuating the thought with a drawn out yawn that she covers as best she can.

"Lessons for the future." Tonks mumbles drowsily, half asleep in the pile of pancakes in front of her.

"Good morning ladies! Here are your schedules." Professor Sprout is as chipper as ever as she hands the exhausted girls their timetables.

Leona groans pitifully as she looks it over. "Charms first thing today. I'm going to blow something up, guaranteed."

Tonks grins tiredly. "Just pair up with that Jones girl, everyone will assume it was her."

"Or Boot, he messes up a lot too." Tyler chimes in from where he's seated across the table with the other second year boys. "You know, for Ravenclaws they have a lot of mishaps in class."

"Well stereotypes aren't facts." Franziska points out, and both Jemma and Aidan nod in solidarity. "I mean, Hufflepuffs are supposedly duffers, which is really a load of-" She cuts off, blushing at the fact she'd nearly sworn.

"A load of bull." Cian mumbles the end of her sentence.

"Precisely!" Aidan butts in before they can spend time marveling at Cian willingly participating in a conversation. "The Houses are way more than just one thing. I mean, the hat considered putting me in Ravenclaw you know, but I ultimately ended up here. I'm sure there are others who went the other way."

"Slytherins are just no good though. They say there isn't a single witch or wizard who went bad that wasn't in Slytherin. There's something slimy about that house." Tonks points out.

Aidan shrugs. "I mean, ambition is an ugly thing in a lot of cases so it kind of makes sense." He concedes. "Though I'm sure there are exceptions."

"Not in our class." Tonks grumbles. "That Nia girl glares at me all the time - I've never even talked to her! And the rest of them act like we don't exist. As if they're so much better than us."

"Wasn't your mom a Slytherin?" Kiera pipes up, clearly having lost any sense of self-preservation in her sleep-deprived state.

Tonks sticks her tongue out. "I guess she's that exception Aidan was talking about. My aunts are the absolute worst though. I'm forever thankful that I don't have to ever spend time with them."

They move on to lighter topics for the rest of breakfast and then head off to the Charms classroom when the plates vanish from the table.

"Luck's on your side." Henry nudges Leona playfully. "We're still with the Ravenclaws. If you hurry you can sit with Jones."

Franziska just shakes her head in a amusement as Leona and Henry quickly grab seats next to Evie Jones and another Ravenclaw second year who Franziska thinks is called Kingsley, though the girl is always so quiet in class that the Hufflepuff honestly can't remember.

"Hey Frannie, mind if I sit by you?"

Franziska is only too happy to shift over and make room for Fitzwilliam Selwyn. "Hi Fitz! It's been forever, how have you been? Are you going to join the study group again this year?"

Fitzwilliam smiles shyly as he takes the proffered seat. "I've been good, and yeah, I'd definitely like to study together again." He blushes a bit before adding, "I mean with everyone, obviously, I haven't seen anyone over the summer..."

Any further conversation is cut off when Professor Flitwick bounds into the room, as energetic as ever. He hops up onto the stacks of books he has to use to see over his podium and clears his throat.

"Alright everyone, I know you're all excited to see each other again, but remember you are back at school! So if you would please pull out  your textbooks and turn to page nine. It's time to start learning again!"

Ana at first isn't quite sure how she feels about their new schedule. Having three classes each day is of course all well and good, but it means that Fridays are completely open until their twenty-three o'clock astronomy class, which leaves her with the dilemma of what to do with the rest of the day.

However, by the time she's heading for Charms after Monday's breakfast with the sixth years she's decided that having an entire extra day apart from the weekends to focus on studying is actually going to be quite useful indeed. And there's still ample time the rest of the week to get reading done in between classes.

Charms goes about as well as she'd expected it too, going off the multitude of incidents that had occurred the year before. The Hufflepuffs had decided to intermingle a bit more at least, so Ana manages to partner up with Shaun Roberts instead of being grabbed by Evie as she normally, unfortunately, is.

They spend the forty-five minute period reviewing the material from the year before, and Ana is rather put out at how little some of her classmates remember. She hopes they won't cause the entire class to be held back - she remembers everything perfectly and really doens't want to spend more than one class on review. Thankfully, Professor Flitwick says they'll be doing something new on Wednesday so her worries are assuaged.

After the hour break, during which she reviews the first few chapters of the new potions book, she heads down to the dungeons with the rest of the class. She can't say she's looking forward to potions, but some of the brews they'll be learning this year do pique her interest and she's hoping that maybe Professor Snape will be less intense now that they're no longer his youngest students.

Of course, this flimsy hope melts along with the bottom of Evie Jones' cauldron, though Ana is proud to say that at the very least she and Amelia had managed to complete the assignment with no incident.

Lunch is spent excitedly poring over her Transfiguration textbook. Not only is it easily her favorite class, Professor McGonagall is easily her favorite teacher, and she wants the first class back to be as flawless as possible.

She sits with Alasdair, of course, right at the front of the room, wand lying ready on the desk in front of her and book flipped open to what she's certain will be their first lesson.

Professor McGonagall is exactly on time, of course, and begins the lesson with her usual sharpness that Ana adores. However, as the forty five minutes begin to wane, so to does McGonagall. It's little things, things Ana is certain no one else is noticing, but there's an exhaustion in the way the Professor is carrying herself that had never been present the year before, no matter how aggravating the class had gotten (and with Evie as a classmate the aggravation levels were, more often than not, exponential).

Ana wants to stay after class to ask if the Professor is alright, but she doesn't think it's her business really, and it's clear McGonagall had been intending to hide the fact she was feeling a bit off. And so Ana instead goes to the library and studies alone until it's time for dinner.

After a fitful night's sleep - she kept getting up to reread sections of her Herbology textbook, not wanting to be caught flat-footed in their first double block - the day starts with Defense class and the mysterious new teacher.

He introduces himself as Professor McCormack. He's got to be at least eighty by Ana's observations and she's not encouraged by his slow, stumbling pacing around the room or his shaky voice.

He spends most of the period rambling about personal anecdotes from the war, which while somewhat interesting really don't have much to do with the subject as far as Ana can tell. When he finally pulls out his wand there are only ten minutes left in the class, a fact that he seems quite surprised by. Ultimately he just lets them leave early.

The Gryffindors seem just as put out by the new teacher as she is from the sounds of some of their grumbling, though Ana herself ultimately decides she'll hold out judgement until the next class. Perhaps Professor McCormack was just nervous about his first interaction with them.

The rest of the day is rather standard by compare. She uses the free period before History of Magic to review the defensive spells they'd learned with Professor Whitts the year before, and does her best to stay alert and take diligent notes once she does head to Professor Binns' classroom. As usual, she's one of the few who doesn't nod off before the bell signals lunch.

There hadn't been any review in History, which really she's thankful for, but it does mean she spends most of her lunch period going back over her notes from the previous year, just to be sure she still recalls it all correctly. She gets some friendly teasing from the sixth years for her troubles but she mostly ignores them.

After lunch it's time to trudge out onto the grounds to the greenhouse and Ana's least favorite subject. She of course completely understands the importance of Herbology, but she just doesn't seem to have a knack for the class. As such she's rather glad that they share the period with the Hufflepuffs, who for some reason seem to do better in the class than the rest of the houses. Ana puts it up to having the professor as their Head of House.

She pairs up with a petite blonde girl who introduces herself as Jemma, and the two work quietly for most of the period. It's more review work, but this time Ana is quite thankful for the refresher, and for the fact they have an hour and a half with which to work their way through the assignment.

Jemma proves herself surprisingly tolerable considering how loud the Hufflepuffs tend to get. The blonde seems to recognize that Ana doesn't much feel like talking and only makes a comment if it has something to do with the class.

All in all things go well enough the first two days, but Ana knows the real challenge will be the rest of the week, when they actually get started on new material.

She's proven correct the next morning, when they're back in the Charms classroom and Evie manages to set her desk on fire halfway through an attempt at the new spell they're learning. How she managed such a thing when attempting a spell that's supposed to stop other spells Ana doesn't know, and she honestly doesn't care. She's just glad she's sitting well away from her destructive classmate, unlike the unfortunate Hufflepuff that had been sharing Evie's desk.

Naturally Ana has nearly perfected the incantation by the end of the period, earning ten points for Ravenclaw and giving her a confidence boost going into Transfiguration.

Professor McGonagall seems better than she had on Monday, though Ana isn't quite sure what to believe. She'd remarked on the Professor's exhaustion to Alasdair after History of Magic the day before but he claimed he hadn't noticed anything. Ana has to wonder if the entire thing was just her imagination.

It still feels off, though perhaps she's just a bit down that she once again is leaving the classroom without getting points for her House, despite being confident she'd done quite well with the incantation they'd been working on.

She mulls over it during lunch, but all thoughts of Transfiguration are chased away when she enters the Defense classroom for their second lesson with the new teacher.

Professor McCormack is as rickety and shaky as she remembers, and his voice as reedy and distant. But Ana does have to admit it's clear he's quite passionate about the subject.

"Good afternoon everyone, welcome back, welcome back." He smiles, eyes closing entirely to make room for his sagging cheeks to rise. "Today we start on the most important spell. Truly, truly it saved my life many many times during the wars so pay very good attention, yes?"

After another five minutes of lead up, Professor McCormack finally begins actually explaining the disarming charm. For the first time ever Ana isn't able to cast the spell before the end of class, but she puts that up to the fact the professor kept going off on tangents instead of just explaining the spell.

All in all she isn't optimistic about Defense Against the Dark Arts being a very engaging subject this year.

Evie has a completely different opinion however, and of course she decides that Ana absolutely must want to hear it as she follows her roommate to the library chattering loudly.

"I mean, Professor Whitts was fine but Professor McCormack actually tells you why you should care! He's done so much cool stuff, living through two wars and everything, we're gonna learn so much this year!"

"We didn't even finish the intended curriculum for today." Ana points out, hoping that Evie will magically get the hint presented in the dismissive tone Ana chose to employ and leave her alone.

Of course Evie is never so easy to shake as that.

"But I learned way more than I did with Prof Whitts last year! No one talks about the war, like, ever. It's way cooler than boring old school stuff!"

"People died in the war Evie. Maybe the ones who lost loved ones just don't want to talk about it yet. It was less than a decade ago you know." Amelia interrupts, her soft voice almost harsh. She pushes past her roommates with a bit of a huff and continues down the corridor, leaving both Ana and Evie stunned for a moment.

"She isn't wrong." Ana says once she's recovered. "Death and loss are sensitive subjects. You ought to treat them with more respect."

Evie glares. "I know that! I wasn't talking bout death and loss!"

"No, but you were talking about a war, which entails both. Maybe start using your brain Evie, you supposedly have one or you certainly wouldn't be in Ravenclaw."

The atmosphere in the dorm that night is awkward at best and downright hostile at worst, though honestly Ana doesn't care as long as it means it's quiet and she can actually go to sleep at a normal time.

Naturally it's the one time she actually goes to bed at  reasonable hour that she can afford to sleep in the next day. Their double potions period doesn't start until ten, but she gets up at seven anyway because she's not tired enough to return to bed.

And regardless, she does rather enjoy breakfast with the sixth years. They spend most of the time talking about spells and concepts she doesn't understand yet, but Eric and Hannah do their best to explain things to her when they aren't engaged in intense discussions with their yearmates over whether or not the Quidditch betting pool should be opened to the second years. Ana is of the opinion that none of her yearmates are smart enough to be trusted to make informed bets, but that only encourages some of the sixth years.

The hour she has between breakfast and Potions is spent in her favorite corner of the library, skimming through her potions textbook and triple checking that she has every possible ingredient she might need in her bag.

Of course no amount of preparation can cover for every possible situation that could present itself in a Potions class that involves her classmates, not to mention the second year Gryffindors. So naturally barely twenty minutes have passed in the hour and half period when things go completely sideways.

Someone had thought it was a perfectly good idea to let Evie and the Gryffindor version of her - Remi Longbottom - partner up for the assignment. The resulting explosion proves exactly how poor a decision it had actually been.

Ana wouldn't have minded so much if part of the explosion hadn't ended up in her and Shaun's cauldron, ruining their hard work as well.

"Ms. Jones, Mr. Longbottom. Twenty points from Ravenclaw and Gryffindor." Professor Snape drawls, eyes narrowed dangerously at the sheepish pair. "This mess better be cleaned up in the next ten minutes or it will be detention for both of you."

Both students pull out their wands but Snape is very quick to inform them there will be no spell work in his classroom, much to the relief of the other students. Any attempted cleaning spells would likely just cause even more explosions.

Unsurprisingly both students end up with detentions, and Ana is rather glad that she'll have her evening Evie-free to study in peace.

Herbology and History of Magic pass quickly and easily after that - Ana does stumble a bit in the former but overall class goes well - and Ana is happy to retire back to the dorms to start on the essay Snape had assigned that is due the next week.

The evening passes quickly as she buries herself in her work - something she'd quite missed if she's being honest - and she's eventually told to go to bed by Eric almost an hour after curfew.

She sleeps in the next day. It's not by any stretch intentional, but after staying up late and with none of her roommates stirring either it's all too easy to let the warm sunlight filtering in from the windows keep her drifting in the thin space between the waking and dreaming worlds.

She grabs a late breakfast just after nine and then sets up in the library, intent on not moving until it's time to go to Astronomy that night. Of course, she does have to relent and go to dinner upon a very loud protest from her stomach, but she returns to her position as soon as she can.

Madame Pince lets her stay past curfew, along with a few other diligent students that Ana has seen before but not spoken to. The librarian shoots her a knowing smile, and Ana is glad that she's been deemed hard working enough to have earned after-hour library privileges. It's a well-kept secret that the librarian will get students special permissions to be out after hours if they're studying, one that can only be learned if you're as diligent as Ana is.

As midnight approachs, Ana bids goodnight to the librarian and begins making her way to the Astronomy Tower. While she doesn't love the class in quite the same way she enjoys Transfiguration or Charms, it's still one of her best subjects.

Professor Sinestra is as animated as ever and they spend the hour locating certain stars and planets that they'd found the previous year, with the Professor discussing each at length, providing information they hadn't had the year before, such as what the locations of the stars and planets in relation to one another indicates. Ana finds it absolutely fascinating, and she's still thinking about it when they return to the dorms just after midnight.

She falls asleep trying to decipher the stars on the ceiling above her.

The first week of classes passes almost too quickly for Myr's tastes.

It's not that he isn't looking forward to the Quidditch tryouts on Monday, it's just that thinking about them makes his stomach tie itself up in knots and his throat choke around a very large ball of nothing is all.

It doesn't help that the tryouts are just about all anyone is talking about. For the first time since he's met her he's thankful for Holly Kiddell's ability to spend hours talking about wands - he sets her off on purpose multiple times over the week just so he can hear about something that doesn't involve quaffles or broomstick makes and models.

Of course, with every single one of his roommates planning to try out there's only so much he can do to get away from Quidditch talk in the dorms.

The worst part is listening to Charlie and Remi arguing over who's going to be the Seeker. Myr spots Drake and Brandon exchanging eye rolls on multiple occasions when the topic comes up, and he knows it's because neither of the two is going to replace the current Gryffindor Seeker, seventh year Patrick Poole.

"Honestly, they ought to know you're probably the only one with a chance of anything that isn't reserves." Brandon remarks to him Sunday morning as they follow the arguing pair down towards breakfast. "Every spot other than the second beater is filled from last year, and it was a really good team. The chances of anyone being replaced is pretty low."

Myr just shakes his head. "Second years in general don't often make the team anyway. The spot will probably go to one of the older years. I'm just hoping to make reserves this time around. Maybe I'll get on the field in fourth year after Laurel graduates."

Brandon shoots him an inquisitive glance. "Fourth year? Nah, you'll get on next year at the latest. You and Charlie are the best flyers in the year, everyone knows that." He pauses, and then grins. "Well, everyone but Remi, and Evera probably wouldn't be caught dead admitting it, but you know what I mean."

Myr gives him a smile in thanks. Brandon may be a troublemaker and often too blunt for his own good, but it does mean when he says things you know he honestly means them.

"Hey, Myr, Brandon, are you two in?" Charlie is suddenly in their faces, and Myr realizes he's completely missed the conversation the rest of their roommates had been having.

"Sorry mate, we weren't paying attention." Brandon grins, his American accent even more noticeable when applied to the typically British word.

Charlie rolls his eyes but he's grinning. "We're going to do a pickup game to practice this afternoon. We're inviting the girls too, so we'll have exactly enough for a team."

"I'm going to ask Jemma if any of the Hufflepuffs would want to play the opposing team." Drake adds in, and Myr starts. He hadn't realized Drake was even with them, which considering how loud Drake always is was something of a feat. "I mean, I don't think any of them are that good but it's hard to play with only one team on the field."

Myr frowns. "Why don't we ask some of the older Gryffindors? I'm sure they'd be interested as well." He points out.

Drake shrugs. "We only know Bill." He points out. "And he's studying today according to Charlie."

Brandon snorts. "Yeah right, 'studying'."

Myr ignores the American. "What about Kent? Evera could ask him, and I bet he knows some people who would play with us."

Charlie nods. "Oh yeah, that could work. I keep forgetting that he and Evera are siblings, they don't really hang out all that much."

"Mainly because he's boring. What're you lot talking about?" Evera's sudden appearance in front of the group as they reach the Great Hall causes nearly all the boys to startle. Evera laughs in delight.

Charlie recovers fastest. "We're going to have a pickup Quidditch game today to get ready for tryouts tomorrow! Do you think Kent could help us assemble an opposing team?"

Evera is only too happy to volunteer her brother's services, as well as her own, for the game, and with help from various people they manage to scrape together two teams.

There is naturally a rather extensive fight between Charlie and Remi over who should be the Seeker for the Gryffindor second years' team, and eventually Remi joins the other team as their Seeker, resulting in Kent Sylvester joining their team instead.

Fiona McKay, the one second year who doesn't have a preference for position, ends up playing opposite Myr as their team's second beater. Their opposition is an odd conglomeration of older Gryffindors, second year Hufflepuffs, and of course Remi.

The game goes for nearly three hours, and Leona Poole from Hufflepuff is happy to shout the scores from the stands, her voice carrying even without any charms to amplify it.

"Great save from Sylvester there! And he hands it off to his sister - she's got a clear shot across the field - ah, here comes Abbott with the save - Tyler I said save it! Letting her get past you isn't saving it!"

Myr can't help laughing as Tyler makes a face at his House mate. A moment later his attention snaps back to the game and he takes off across the field to parry a bludger that had been fired at Evera courtesy of a Gryffindor fifth year whose name Myr can't remember.

"Thanks!" Evera calls as she fires on the opposing goal posts. Jemma Finnegan, who had ended up playing Keeper due to no one else wanting the role, attempts a save but as usual misses rather spectacularly. She smiles easily and shrugs at her teammates.

"That puts the score at three hundred and ten for the Gryffindor second years! Still no sign of the snitch, but at this point it's pretty clear whose going to win." Leona declares cheekily.

Charlie grins over at Remi where they're circling above the field. "It's too bad you don't have a chance at catching the snitch, you might have at least saved your team the embarrassment of being completely crushed." He calls to the brunet, who swears back.

"Tension rising between the Seekers as Abbott flies the Quaffle back across the field." Leona reports, clearly enjoying the increased animosity between the two Gryffindors.

Myr stays focused on the game, swooping to fire off a bludger to redirect Tyler towards Brandon, who attempts to grab the Quaffle away from the Hufflepuff. Tyler neatly dodges out of the way - only to run immediately into a bludger courtesy of Fiona.

"Sorry!" The red head calls, looking half apologetic and half pleased that her maneuver had been successful.

To Myr's surprise Tyler manages to hang onto the Quaffle, using the momentum from the encountered bludger to propel him to an area where he's clear to pass to Aidan Ward, who immediately makes a shot on the hoops.

Remi shoots Charlie a look of superiority.

The game has gathered a small crowd of onlookers, and Myr recognizes a few of the Ravenclaw second years from his study group, as well as Holly and her sister Laurel. He's also pretty sure the Hufflepuff Quidditch captain is seated beside Leona, but he doesn't know the older boy well enough to be certain.

The game goes for another hour and a half, and Myr is sweaty and barely hanging on to his broom when Charlie finally manages to snag the Snitch, much to his excitement and Remi's irritation.

The two teams circle back down to the field and shake hands cordially.

"Great show out there." Laurel Kiddell grins as she and her sister clamber out of the stands to join the group on the field. "Ignoring the obvious imbalance in Keeper ability you guys really did hold your own pretty well. I'd say the Gryffindor Quidditch team has a bright few years ahead of it."

"Especially with you at the helm!" Holly adds with a proud smile.

Laurel ruffles her sister's hair affectionately. "Well, I'll look forward to seeing all of you at tryouts tomorrow." As she speaks a Ravenclaw who Myr vaguely recognizes as a prefect comes over to join them, and Laurel smiles.

"Well, I'm off. You all keep out of trouble until at least Tuesday alright? Too many incidents can make you ineligible for the team." She nods to them and then hurries to greet the Ravenclaw with a quick kiss to the cheek before they head back into the castle together.

Holly makes a face. "Ew. If I ever get all gooey like that someone smack me please."

"I think it's sweet." Jemma pipes up. The Hufflepuffs and a few of the older Gryffindors had drifted over to join their congregation.

"Well she's not your sister." Holly declares in a tone that very much suggests she'd like the topic to be changed.

So they start talking about Quidditch again. Several people comment on Tyler's excellent playing and one of the Gryffindors playing Beater for the other team compliments Myr's skills as well.

"Thanks. I'm still learning though, you were better than I was."  Myr replies to the praise modestly.

The older boy just shakes his head. "Well I am a year older, so I've had more time to practice. You're a natural, I can tell." He holds out his hand a moment later. "I'm Emery Grant by the way."

"Myrddin Cadwallader. But most people just call me Myr." He returns the handshake firmly. "Are you going to be trying out this year then?"

Emery nods. "I'm thinking about it, though I'm not sure I like Quidditch enough to get up at five in the morning for it." He admits.

"Laurel only does that during game weeks." Holly notes, casually sliding over to the two of them "Hi, I'm Holly Kiddell, Laurel's sister. I think we met briefly last year?"

Emery blinks, momentarily blindsided by Holly's abrupt appearance, before he nods slowly. "I think you're right. We talked about Herbology at the Halloween feast, right?"

Holly beams a confirmation and Myr decides to leave them to it as they begin talking about Mandrakes in earnest.

Charlie and Remi are bickering again, with Brandon, Evera, and Drake all unhelpfully egging them on, so Myr finds himself turning to Jemma and Fiona, the only two remaining on the field who are otherwise unoccupied.

"That was fun! I see why you decided to try for a Beater position." Fiona greets him with a bright smile. "Though I think I'll probably stick with Chaser at tryouts tomorrow, since that's what I practiced mostly over the summer." She tilts her head. "Or maybe Keeper. I think I could be a pretty good Keeper if I practiced."

"Keeper is hard." Jemma laughs. "But if you have the fortitude for it I could see it being fun."

"Not your cup of tea though I assume?" Myr can't help but add, and Jemma laughs.

"Not quite my cuppa, no." She confirms. "I'm always happy to help Drake and Evera out of course, but I'm not big on Quidditch, or really flying in general." She shrugs lightly, still smiling. "I'm happy to cheer from the stands though."

The group eventually trickles off, and the second year Gryffindors relocate to the boys' dorm room where the Quidditch talk persists until it's time for dinner.

Myr opts to retire a bit earlier than normal that night, knowing he needs to be well-rested in order to give his best the next day, and he's incredibly thankful for his foresight when tryouts roll around just after dinner and Laurel kicks things off by having them do sprints around the Quidditch pitch.

Once they finish the torture that Laurel refers to as 'warm-ups' the tryouts begin in earnest.

Myr sits beside Charlie while Drake, Evera, and Brandon all run several maneuvers with the other students trying out for Chaser. Fiona meanwhile is in the goals, having decided to give the Keeper position a try.

"What do you think she'll have us do?" Myr wonders aloud as Evera makes a rather dangerous dive to catch a Quaffle that Fiona had blocked. "I mean, will she just let out a snitch and see who catches it first? And how can you audition Beaters?"

"Maybe she'll have you fire bludgers at Remi." Charlie remarks cheekily. "Whoever makes the most contact gets the open spot."

Myr pushes down an urge to laugh. "Charlie that's awful. I know you guys don't get along-"

"He almost killed your cat that one time Myr, you don't get along with him either." Charlie interrupts, unrepentant. "Anyway, it's just a joke."

Myr doesn't get a chance to respond as Laurel dismisses the Chasers and Keepers with a quick 'thank you' that gives away nothing and calls the Beaters up.

Myr can feel the tension rising as the five Beater hopefuls line up on the pitch. Every one of them knows that there's only one spot open, given that Laurel is the other Gryffindor Beater, and that the previous Beater had graduated the year before. One of them is absolutely getting on the team.

Laurel takes to the air with them, Beater bats in hand. "Alright recruits, you've got the tough job of showing you can work with me as a team. Grant, you're up first." She tosses one of the bats to Emery Grant, and Myr gives him a quick thumbs up before Laurel summons the bludgers from where she'd tied them down on the pitch below.

"Think fast!" She fires the bludger straight at Emery's head, and he quickly deflects it.

Laurel dives and fires it off across the field, and Emery takes off to intercept it. After a few minutes, Laurel indicates for Emery to pass the bat off to the next participant.

Myr ends up the last person to get the bat, naturally, and he ends up having to fling himself across the entire pitch to reach the first bludger sent out. His first hit is thus less than impressive, but he thinks the rest of the tryout goes rather well despite the weak start.

He hangs around to watch Charlie and Remi's Seeker tryouts. They're the only two who even attempt for the position, and Myr wonders whether the Seeker position might not be as highly sought after as he'd initially come to believe from all the fuss his roommates made about it.

That night the tryouts are naturally all they're talking about.

"I think Patrick should be worried." Remi declares proudly. "I was on fire out there."

"There's no way I'll get less that reserves." Evera declares confidently.

Myr keeps quiet as his year mates continue singing their own praises.

Brandon is the first to break the self-congratulatory chain. "I though you did really well in goal Fiona. Since all the others trying out were at least fifth years I bet you'll be on the team in the next couple of years as they all graduate."

Fiona looks surprised for a moment, and then grins. "You think so? I mean, there might be a better Keeper among the first years that we don't know about."

"Seniority usually wins out when there's a close call." Charlie notes. "So you'll get a few years for sure."

"Well you'll all know next week." Holly announces loudly from the hallway leading to the girl's rooms. "Now would you all go to sleep before you lose us house points for still being in the common room at twenty three hundred!" Laurel's sister looks distinctly sleepy, and the group grudgingly removes themselves from the couches, Laurel's warning the day before about not causing trouble prompting them to make their way up to their dorm rooms.

Myr knows he's going to have a hard time falling asleep tonight. One week seems a long ways away.

Whoever had thought putting the Slytherin Quidditch tryouts on a Tuesday evening is officially on Rajani's list.

Of course Rajani knows full well that Gryffindor had the field reserved the evening before, but having tryouts and then having Astronomy later the same night is a bit of a nightmare scenario for the second years subjected to it.

There are only three of them there though, so really it does make sense that they're the ones inconvenienced over any of the older years, who each have plenty more people trying out.

The three second years opt to sit together on the benches. Rajani is in the middle, with Eugene to her left and Alasdair to her right. She'd been surprised when the quiet Asian boy came with them to the pitch after dinner, but then she'd remembered how enthusiastic he'd been during the games the year before and it made a bit more sense.

"So what position are you going for Alasdair?" Rajani prompts once they've all gotten comfortable.

"Chaser."

It's about how she'd expected him to answer - Alasdair has always been one of the quietest people in their year, so Rajani pushes on.

"Hey, same here! Eugene is trying out for Beater, right?" She's still not sure what her friend finds so interesting about smacking aggressive balls of metal with a wooden bat but she's glad that it means they aren't in direct competition.

Eugene nods cheerfully. "Yep! Beaters have the most fun - they're still part of the action without any of the pressure to score."

"Seekers kind of have that?" Rajani notes, though admittedly she isn't completely sure since she rarely pays attention to the Seekers unless they're racing for the snitch.

Both Eugene and Alasdair shake their heads, and Eugene, looking pleasantly surprised, gestures for Alasdair to explain.

The quiet boy shrugs. "Seekers aren't really part of the action. They just hover over the pitch until they see the snitch, and then they get to actually do something. And if it's caught the first time it's spotted, well," He shrugs again. "I just think it would be pretty boring to be Seeker. In professional matches they are often completely redundant too, since points get way higher than they ever do here. All the Seeker does for the most part is determine when a game ends."

Rajani rolls the information around in her head, nodding slowly. "Makes sense." She acknowledges after a moment.

They don't get any more time to talk as Mayra strides onto the field.

"Alright everyone, we have three spots officially open, but if you impress me I'm flexible. We'll start with the Chasers." Her eyes land on Rajani and her strict facade cracks just long enough to offer a faint smile before Captain Byrnes is back.

Rajani and Alasdair both grab their brooms and take to the sky after Mayra, along with about seven other students. They do a few simple drills, pass the ball around, and finally Mayra calls up the Keepers and they make shots on the goal for about thirty minutes before Mayra lets them leave.

Alasdair heads straight back to the dorms, but Rajani decides to stay and watch Eugene's tryout.

She's surprised when Mayra sits down next to her a moment later.

"Shouldn't you be watching the beaters?" She asks in confusion. Mayra laughs.

"I trust Gwenog will tell me her opinion. She's far better equipped to properly evaluate beaters anyhow." Her grin becomes somewhat feral as she adds, "And she'll put the fear of Salazar into the newbies. If they can't handle her, they aren't ready for the team."

Rajani of course knows about Gwenog Jones, one of the most ruthless beaters in Hogwarts history. The Welsh girl is scary even by Slytherin standards, and Rajani knows Slytherins don't scare easy.

She winces. "That seems a bit harsh."

Mayra just laughs again. "If you make the team this year you'll have to work with her you know. You saying you couldn't?"

Rajani shakes her head. "Of course I could. I'm just saying that forcing the guys to acknowledge that they'll never be half the man Gwenog is this early in the season seems a little mean."

Mayra gapes at her for a long moment before laughing so hard she nearly chokes herself.

"You alright captain?" Jones calls from above them, looking down with clear annoyance. "I'm trying to conduct tryouts here but you apparently dying is causing some distraction for these kids."

Mayra waves her off. "Rajani here was just observing your powers of emasculation." She replies, and Gwenog smirks.

"They are rather impressive. Alright ya poofs, let's try this again, with less being terrible this time."

Once she moves on from Gwenog's coarse language, Rajani finds herself absolutely enraptured watching the woman flying. She was taller than most of the guys she was auditioning, and far more muscular as well.

"She's like a big cat." Rajani decides aloud. "Or something equally graceful."

Mayra nods. "Too bad about her personality though." She grins shamelessly and they watch the rest of the tryouts in companionable silence.

Eugene is utterly beat when he and Rajani finally pack up their brooms and head straight for the Astronomy Tower.

"So how was Ms. Jones?" Rajani can't resist teasing the blond boy, and he only groans in response, making her laugh.

"She obviously knows what she's doing though. Rumor says the Holyhead Harpies are already courting her to join their team next year."

Eugene grunts as they begin the ascent to the top of the Tower. "I'd believe it. She's ruthless, but definitely good. I'm not very optimistic about my chances."

Rajani pats his shoulder lightly. "I'm sure you did better than you think." She encourages.

Eugene merely shrugs in response and they lapse into silence as they trudge up the stairs, focused more on breathing as they continue to climb.

They naturally are the first ones to arrive for the class, and they settle themselves on the floor and pull out their star charts.

Professor Sinestra arrives shortly afterwards, and she greets them far too cheerfully for the hour.

"I saw you down on the pitch this evening." She comments once she's arranged the telescopes around the tower's edge. "It looks like Slytherin's team is going to be quite a force this year!"

The two weary second years merely smile in response, and the rest of their classmates arrive soon after, sparing them from the professor attempting any further awkward conversation.

"How did tryouts go?" Queenie whispers once they've started scanning the skies for the week's star formations. "Do you think you made the team?"

Eugene shakes his head while Rajani merely shrugs.

"There were a lot of people there, and all of them were older." She responds quietly, glancing over her shoulder to make sure the professor isn't looking at them. It wouldn't be good to get caught gossiping when they're supposed to be working.

Queenie shrugs in return. "Well there's always next year. Or reserves is possible, there are three chaser positions after all."

"A lot of players act as reserves for each other though, like how Byrnes is the reserve Seeker in case Blackthorn ever can't make a game." Alasdair points out from Rajani's other side.

Rajani raises an eyebrow. "I didn't know that. It makes sense though, I suppose. Minimizing the reserve team allows practice time to be better utilized for efficiency."

Alasdair nods. "Exactly." He appears to consider saying more but ultimately he just shrugs and returns to plotting out his star chart.

"I hope you do make the team Raj. You'd be an excellent captain." Queenie decides, a note of finality in her voice that has Rajani smiling faintly.

They head back down at midnight, passing a group of excited Hufflepuff first years as they go.

"Man, I remember being like that." Nia sighs, and Clary laughs.

"Of course you do, it was only a year ago." She teases, and the two banter playfully back and forth all the way back to the dungeons.

The next day the Slytherins have time to sleep in until their Transfiguration class at eleven, a luxury that Rajani takes full advantage of. When she does finally deign to get out of bed and face the day around ten o'clock she discovers she's terribly sore and still rather sleepy despite the extra rest time.

"You look awful." Nia declares as Rajani ascends the stairs to join the other second years where most of them are occupying the couches in the common room.

"So still better than you?" Clary pipes up cheerfully, earning herself a stuffed sheep to the head.

Rajani just shakes her head and perches on the arm of the couch next to Lenox. "Where's Els? I didn't see her in the dorm when I woke up."

Elspeth Selwyn, while rarely an active part of their conversations, is usually hovering somewhere in the shadows whenever they hang out, especially since Winter Break the previous year. It was almost disconcerting to realize she wasn't nearby.

Nia shrugs. "She was with us at breakfast, but I haven't seen her since. Maybe the library? We do have that potions essay due." She makes a face. "I should probably start that."

Finn frowns over at the girl. "You haven't started yet? Honestly Nia."

She sticks her tongue out. "Well unlike you I actually have a social life so meh. I don't recall you spending any time with us yet this year." She retorts.

Finn just shrugs, unaffected. "I've had better things to do so far." He replies easily, and Clary is only too happy to provide a dramatic gasp. She gets the sheep thrown at her head again.

"I'll help you with the essay during lunch." Queenie says decisively. "Now quit your bickering, we need to get to class."

She shoos the group of them out the front, and then falls into step next to Rajani.

"You really do look like you might be  ill." She comments, not unkindly. "Maybe get to sleep a bit earlier tonight, I think it would do you a world of good."

Rajani smiles wearily at her. "I probably was going to do that anyway, I'm still dead tired from last night."

"Understandable, Eugene isn't feeling in top form either." Queenie notes sympathetically. "Here, you can pair up with me in Transfiguration - I'll cast a copy spell so you don't miss any notes."

Rajani smiles thankfully. As much as she does like Transfiguration, and as much as she'd normally not want to steal someone else's work, at the moment she's not sure she'll be able to focus enough to process any information, nonetheless write it down while simultaneously listening to the professor.

"What about Eugene?"

Queenie waves dismissively. "He'll be fine. I'll study with him later."

Rajani hesitates, and then lowers her voice slightly. "Is the whole arranged marriage - thing - confirmed?" She doesn't really like the phrasing but the entire situation still makes her a bit uncomfortable.

Queenie grins. "Not complete but my parents are pretty optimistic. Eugene is cool with it too so we're probably just waiting until we're fifteen and of 'appropriate age'." She rolls her eyes slightly. "Honestly the Blacks arranged all their most recent marriages by age ten."

"Didn't the oldest one run off with a Mudblood?" Rajani points out. "That doesn't seem to exactly be a ringing endorsement."

Queenie shrugs easily. "There's always an exception." She grins. "Don't worry about little old me Raj, I'll be fine. You on the other hand still don't know who sent you that pin in February, do you? You might have a stalker or something equally creepy."

Rajani can only laugh. "I can't believe you remember that. And it's probably just from one of the guys and they're too embarrassed to say anything."

"Not from Eugene." Queenie says immediately. "He would have told me." She grins wickedly. "Maybe it was Cadfael." She teases.

Rajani can't help laughing. "Oh I'm sure. His standoffishness and general rudeness come from a place of deep, unwavering affection."

"You never know." Queenie grins. They arrive at the Transfiguration classroom just then, and Rajani is happy to sit down again, placing her head on the table.

Queenie looks a tad put out at being at the back of the classroom, but she obligingly sits beside Rajani and hurriedly places the copy spell on her friend's quill before McGonagall arrives.

"You owe me now you know." Queenie lightly elbows Rajani in the ribs.

"I know, I'll make good." Rajani promises into the desk.

"Alright class, wands out." Professor McGonagall's voice is sharp, and Rajani reluctantly raises her head from the desk.

"I suppose I don't owe you after all." She mumbles to Queenie.

They spend the lesson attempting to turn beetles into buttons. Or at least, that's what they're supposed to be doing. In reality most of the class is rather grossed out by the squirming insects and are attempting to complete the spell without actually having to touch the scuttling bugs.

Rajani is definitely in the latter category, and she as well as several of the other girls in the class end up dismissed early when Evie Jones' beetle ends up growing instead of turning into a button and begins skittering around the room.

"That was absolutely disgusting." Queenie moans, having been one of the others to excuse herself from the room to avoid the giant insect. "Honestly that girl is a danger, I'm shocked all she did was enlarge the thing given what I've heard. Makes me glad our other class with the Ravenclaws is History of Magic - at least she can't cause too much commotion there."

Rajani smiles weakly. "True enough." She yawns then, and Queenie laughs a bit.

"Girl you look like you're ready to pass out. Come on, let's get some food in you before you fall over."

The rest of the day is something of a blur for Rajani, though she's pretty sure Potions was, thankfully, uneventful. She heads straight down to the dorms once dinner is over and she's thankful to whoever keeps the other girls in the common room.

She showers quickly and is asleep almost before she reaches her bed.

 

Bleh, I did not know how to end this thing. Anyway, lots of Quidditch here, and more to come in the next few chapters! Who do you think made the teams? Who's on reserves? Heck, do you think anyone made it, considering how uncommon it is for second years? Answers to all this and more coming up next chapter ^^ :P

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
2491 streak #3
Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!