Chapter Fourteen

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Parting Words

May, Myr is learning, is the most hectic month of the school year.

Between the looming exams and the end of the Quidditch season fast approaching there's a lot of tension to go around every grade level. However, he thinks this May is probably going to be more intense than usual for those of them even somewhat connected to the Gryffindor Quidditch team.

Laurel has taken over from Conner in their final few practices, combining the reserve team and the main team to make sure every single player is in perfect shape for their final showdown against Ravenclaw at the end of the month.

"Alright beaters, with me. Everyone else take five, hydrate yourselves."

As a sixth year, Laurel doesn't have any exams to worry about so all her energy is being put into Quidditch, and admittedly with good reason. Myr knows that they only have to beat Ravenclaw by ten points to cinch the Quidditch cup and Laurel is practically salivating at the prospect. Unfortunately that means the entire team is being worked to the bone three times a week with no end in sight.

Myr circles around the end of the pitch where he'd ended up after their previous drill and swoops over to the center where Laurel is waiting. Fiona comes up beside him, looking as tired as he feels but shooting him a wane grin nonetheless.

Laurel and the other main team beater, a fourth year who Myr thinks is called Jamison, are there as well, and the captain wastes no time explaining their next exercise.

"Quite simply we'll be trying to knock the bludger past each other. If it changes directions before anyone has hit it then that's a point for whoever had last touched it. The most important thing here is to be aware of where everyone else is - no collisions please, I don't want anyone in the hospital wing when we have a game in two days." Once she's ascertained that everyone understands the rules, Laurel flicks her wand and summons the two bludgers from wherever they'd ended up after their last game.

Fiona immediately calls dibs and the rest of them scatter as she swings and knocks both bludgers off in separate directions.

Myr finds that this particular exercise is his favorite of all the ones he's gotten to try out so far during the year. It's far more strategic than he's come to believe the beater position requires, forcing him to be acutely aware of not only the two bludgers, but also exactly where everyone is on the pitch and where they're all heading as well. It's challenging but really quite exciting, and he's almost gotten the hang of it when Laurel calls the rest of the team back up to rejoin them for the next thirty minutes.

Myr can admit that he's having trouble standing upright when the practice finally ends nearly an hour and a half later than their practices usually do, but he honestly can't complain too much. He really hopes he makes the main team in his third year though - after actually working with Laurel he's less enthusiastic about being back under Conner's command next season.

The next day is an exercise in patience as he struggles to focus on the last few lessons of the semester. He knows that he really should be paying attention to the reviews that they're going through for Herbology, but plants just aren't as interesting as passing game strategies back and forth with Charlie under the table.

Evera teases him about his rule bending as they head for lunch after the double block, and he can't really fault her for it after the number of times he's scolded her and Drake when they pass notes instead of listening to the teacher.

"Oh ease up some Sylvester, if you fluster him now we may never see him come out of his shell ever again!" Charlie jokes cheerfully as he stuffs their final play ideas into his bag.

Myr just rolls his eyes and lets them banter. However, he does feel a tugging of guilt at having been distracted all class now that Evera has mentioned it, and he resolves to spend the afternoon reviewing notes instead of plays. It's only fair.

He pays better attention in Transfiguration after lunch, though it's a bit harder than he likes to focus properly when he can seen the tops of one of the goal posts through the classroom window.  He decides to study in the safety of the Gryffindor common room, where the windows don't face anything very interesting and a lot of the older students are buckling down on their schoolwork as well, creating a surprisingly quiet atmosphere in the usually rambunctious room.

He manages to lose himself in his review, finishing Herbology and starting in on his Charms notes before Evera appears and drags him down to dinner, complaining that they don't have to start studying for another week and that he's being a buzz kill. Since his studies had gone so well, he only puts up token resistance before acquiescing and following her down to the Great Hall, where naturally the topic is still on Quidditch.

Myr finds it easy to jump back into the flow of the conversation, and he's a little embarrassed when he thinks about it afterwards that he doesn't even try to go back to studying when the food is gone and the second year Gryffindors are heading back up to their Tower. They're halfway through an analysis of the previous World Cup game and nothing else really seems to be quite as important as that is in the moment.

Myr comforts himself that night with reminders that he did study for a few hours in the afternoon, and that after the game the next day he won't have to think about Quidditch at all and can solely focus on school and studying.

Then it's game day and all other thoughts are gone.

The reserve team is held back in the change room by Laurel, who insists that the whole team should be there for the final pregame speech of the season.

"Alright team, we've been on fire this whole season and I know we're not going to have any problems maintaining that speed now. So all I'm going to say is remember to communicate, and keep the pressure up. Ravenclaw is going to be a little more on edge now because of finals so they're more likely to make mistakes when pushed. Ready?" She grins. "Let's go win that cup!"

Myr files to the side of the pitch to sit on the bench with the rest of the reserve players while the main team runs out in to the middle of the field, waving enthusiastically to the screaming crowd. Myr spots Tyler and the other Hufflepuff first years proudly sporting Gryffindor colors, and Remi waves halfheartedly to his cousin as he sits.

Myr is the primary sub for the beaters, but both Jamison and Laurel have been solid throughout the season, so he doesn't worry about being distracted when he pulls out a notebook with the intention of studying the tactics both teams employ to try and improve on his own over the summer.

It's honestly fascinating watching the players above them move. Myr can appreciate the beauty of flying a bit more now that he's better acquainted with the technique behind it, so even though a part of him is aching with the want to be in the air himself, he's more contented to sit back and observe than he had been a year ago.

The game starts off cautiously, though Myr knows the casual observer would have no idea that most of the team is holding back, assessing their opponents and looking for openings.

As Laurel had encouraged in the locker room though, the Gryffindors are pushing a bit more than the Ravenclaws in the opening moves of the game, and it plays to their advantage as they claim possession of the Quaffle and Bill makes an early game score after feinting a pass.

Myr takes note of the move, which is rather common yet still quite effective, and then returns his focus to the players over him only to find that in the minute he'd been writing the pace of the game has nearly tripled.

Ravenclaw is no longer playing defensively, pushing back against the Gryffindors with as much determination as they'd been pushed with not minutes before. The score grinds to a halt at 10-0 as the Quaffle is juggled rapidly between the two teams.

Myr loses track of the ball after about fifteen minutes, and his attention wanders towards the beaters and Bludgers.

Laurel and Jamison have fallen into a pattern, with each of them following one of the two bludgers around the field, meaning neither of the two metal balls of death is ever unaccompanied. They'll occasionally switch custody, when the balls stray too far away for them to recover in any efficient amount of time, and Myr takes several notes on the general effectiveness of the strategy. Gryffindor has near full control of the Bludgers, leaving the Ravenclaw beaters to play the defensive, and its clear they're scrambling.

Myr recalls ones of Laurel's comments during a practice earlier in the week.

"Most beaters naturally play the offense, so if you can keep them defensive you keep them off balance." She'd explained after a particularly brutal series of drills. "And the beaters are the team's defenders. If they're off balance the entire scale tips in your favor."

Myr sees the wisdom in the observation now as slowly but surely Gryffindor pushes the advantage and increases the gap in the score. Ravenclaw does make a few goals around Kent, but between his improvement and Laurel and Jamison raining bludgers down on the teams like bats out of hell Gryffindor quickly pulls into a comfortable lead.

Charlie is circling so high over the proceedings that Myr nearly can't make him out through the ebb and flow of the rest of the players darting through the air. But he's there and tense, eyes skittering over the pitch in an endless scan for something nearly invisible.

Naturally, Myr can't actually see his eyes from so far down, but he's watched Charlie during practices enough to have his roommate's habits memorized. He's remained in the same spot for the entirety of the game, barely moving except to avoid the occasional bludger that's briefly slipped away from Laurel and Jamison's watchful guard.

Despite Gryffindor continuing to fly strategic circles around Ravenclaw the other team is refusing to take it sitting down and they hold their ground relatively well, continuing to increase their score, and in one particularly reckless but still admirable move their seeker purposefully causes both herself and Charlie to lose the snitch when it's spotted halfway through the second hour of the match.

Myr notices that Laurel is paying more attention to the Ravenclaw seeker after that particular stunt. Myr doesn't recognize the girl, but she's small enough that he figures she's likely a third year and only just got onto the team and he doesn't just have terrible facial recall.

Charlie spots the snitch again after another thirty minutes and he immediately dives for it, his focus razored in on the elusive golden ball. The Ravenclaw seeker looks ready to distract him again, but Laurel is wise to her tricks this time around and knocks her off balance with a bludger to the back of her broom.

Moments later it's over, and Gryffindor wins by nearly 200 points. Charlie is swarmed by the whole team as he lands, and Myr honestly isn't sure when he stood up but he's part of the crowd surrounding the seeker.

Laurel is tearing up, though she's resolutely refusing to cry, but she's grinning as well and Myr suddenly realizes - they've won the Quidditch Cup. It hits him like a freight train and he's rather concerned that his face is going to split in half from the sheer width of the smile that explodes across his features.

The celebration somehow migrates to the Gryffindor common room, and Laurel is hoisting up the Cup and practically screaming her Gryffindor pride before her boyfriend Eric literally sweeps her up into a kiss that has the older kids cheering and the younger ones hiding their eyes.

Myr isn't sure why the Ravenclaw prefect is celebrating his own House's defeat with them, but then Myr doesn't pretend to understand or care about how dating works just now. He's too busy letting Fiona dance him around the common room and trying to not step in any of the puddles of butterbeer that the floor is collecting.

The party goes well past when lights out is supposed to be, and Myr wonders why McGonagall hasn't stopped by to tell them all off yet, but when he manages to ask one of the seventh year prefects she simply laughs and says that McGonagall is as invested in the cup as they are and lets them get away with more than usual if they win.

It still bothers Myr though, but when he tries to say something to his roommates they all shout at him to relax and enjoy.

"It's probably the last bit of fun we'll have for this year what with finals coming up." Drake points out, sloshing his drink as he waves his hands as if to illustrate his point and adding to the sticky mess on the floor.

Myr makes a face. "I guess. Still, it's past midnight already, and the adrenaline of the day is starting to hit me pretty hard."

Drake shrugs and waves him off. "You can leave then. No one is making you stay after all."

Myr frowns but chooses not to voice the fact that he feels awkward being the only member of the team to not be having as much fun as the rest seem to be. Though when he looks around he realizes that Laurel seems to have vanished at some point, so maybe it wouldn't be rude to excuse himself from the festivities earlier than the rest.

After fifteen minutes of waffling on the decision he discards his barely-touched drink next to a line of empty cups and heads up to the dorms. With the game over his mind is shifting back into full-on study mode and he knows he won't study well if he's exhausted.

He showers quickly, and then falls into his bed, thankful that he'd been given one closer to the window than the door. He still casts a quick silencing spell around his bed in hopes that his roommates won't wake him up when they inevitably come loudly stumbling in when the party finally finishes. He needs to be well rested - after all, people with poor grades aren't allowed onto the main team.

Finals, Rajani remembers all too late, are about a million times worse than midterms. Midterms are mostly used to gauge where students are in the curriculum and serve to help teachers determine what topics are understood and what needs to be reviewed.

Finals determine, for the most part, whether or not you pass into the next grade, supposing the rest of your schoolwork was up to par.

This knowledge leads to the end of May and the start of June being absolutely nightmarish for the second year Slytherins. They've claimed one of the library tables for themselves within a week of studying starting in earnest, and most of them have fallen asleep over it at least twice within the first two weeks.

Rajani is sitting at the table with Eugene and Queenie when she spots a familiar mop of blond hair vanishing between the shelves a few aisles away from them.

After a moment's hesitation, she gets up, citing a need to find one of the Potions books Snape had recommended, and hurries after the figure.

Donaghan smiles at her easily as she catches up to him. She's seen less of the cheerful Hufflepuff this year than in their first, but they still study Potions together from time to time and Rajani can admit that she enjoys his company. He's quiet where most of her friends are much more enthusiastic and it's nice to know she doesn't need to speak much around him if she's not feeling up to it.

They find a secluded area in one of the corners of the library. Rajani doesn't want her friends seeing them together and Donaghan never complains about their sneaking around so she figures he's likely in the same boat. She's not quite sure how she feels about that, but she pushes away any nagging doubts she has about their arrangement for the most part. He's a good study partner after all.

Once they get settled he finally speaks up. "So I was starting to read over the sections on the Wiggenweld potion. I know we're not covering it practically this year but knowing Snape there's no way it won't be on the exam."

Rajani nods, grinning slightly. "I may or may not be able to confirm that." She admits after a moment. "Professor Snape sometimes gives us hints when he's checking in on the common room in the evenings."

Donaghan shakes his head. "I think all the heads of house do that. At least, Professor Sprout likes to help us out when we ask her about Herbology. She doesn't tell us what's on the test but she does bring in plants from the greenhouse sometimes so we can do some practical studying."

Rajani raises an eyebrow. "I wish we had that. My Herbology grade was an embarrassment on the midterms."

Donaghan laughs. "I can help you revise if you want, but I'm afraid the common room is off-limits. Badgers only."

Rajani nods in understanding. The Slytherin dungeons are the same way after all. "Only fair. I will take you up on that offer, but maybe later. For now, Wiggenweld?"

They fall into an easy silence, occasionally checking their notes with each other or asking questions when baffled by their own handwriting or the textbook's language. It takes thirty minutes for Rajani to realize that she'll need an excuse ready when she goes back to Queenie and Eugene, and that the longer she takes the more convincing it will have to be.

Donaghan doesn't question her suddenly standing halfway through a review of the Girding potion's recipe and telling him she needs to go, simply nods and asks when would be a better time to meet.

She doesn't hesitate to request an early morning meet up. While getting up before seven isn't her ideal situation, she knows that far fewer of her friends - or any of the other Slytherins - will be up at that hour and she won't have to keep a careful eye out for anyone who might spot her colluding with a Hufflepuff.

She's not sure why she's so worried - sure Nia had shunned Clary for months after learning she was friends with a Ravenclaw, but they were certainly on speaking terms now and really, what was the big deal making friends outside of the house? - but the worry is there nonetheless and Donaghan has never said anything so she figures it's not inconveniencing anyone to leave it be.

She arrives at the library at seven thirty exactly and isn't quite surprised to find that Donaghan is already settled into a corner table with a pile of Potions and Herbology books scattered around him.

"I hope you haven't been waiting long." Rajani greets as she pulls out the chair next to her friend.

Donaghan smiles easily over at her as she sits. "Not at all. We're right next to the kitchen so I didn't have to detour past the Great Hall like I'm sure you did." He points out mildly, and she nods. He has a point.

They settle into studying again, picking up easily from where they'd stopped the afternoon before. Rajani has to admit that when it comes to Potions she seems to get more done with Donaghan than with her dorm mates. She figures it's because they get less sidetracked by conversations about what they're going to do later or debating whether they'll be able to edge out Ravenclaw for the House Cup, being only fifty points behind and gaining with each passing day.

She just has less to talk about with the Hufflepuff boy, and it works in their favor, forcing them to focus on the material.

They get through nearly all the Potions review in an hour and a half and they switch over to Herbology next. Rajani doesn't really need to start looking at Herbology just yet - it's her last exam - but she knows that she may not get another chance to sit down with someone who apparently really knows his stuff when it comes to the class.

They spend nearly two hours on Herbology, and Rajani is a bit ashamed at how much she didn't realize she didn't actually know. Donaghan is incredibly patient though, explaining things as best he can and referring back to the textbook whenever he can't verbalize things very well. By the time he glances at the clock and announces he has to go meet some of his housemates Rajani is feeling worlds better about her chances on the final exam for Herbology.

"Thanks for helping me out, and good luck on all your exams." She says as they gather their respective notes and textbooks from the table.

Donaghan looks like he's going to say something, but he instead blinks and nods. "You too."

When Rajani walks over to the Slytherin table she's unsurprised to find Lenox already there, though she's a bit more startled by the presence of Alasdair as well.

"Hey, are you guys going over the History notes?" She asks as she pulls up her own chair.

"Potions actually." Lenox supplies. "It is our first final tomorrow morning after all." He smiles wryly. "Though I guess you feel ready for that one?"

Rajani has a moment of panic where she thinks Lenox might be on to her friendship with Donaghan, but she dismisses the thought quickly and nods. "I've been here since seven thirty actually. Did you want some help? I'm feeling pretty good about Potions if I'm honest."

Lenox shifts so that Rajani can sit between him and Alasdair, and she proceeds to once again go over potions, spending more time teaching her dorm mates than actually reviewing the material herself which she's heard is helpful anyway so it's no time lost on her part.

After almost two hours - and the addition of Clary and Nia to the table - they finally move on to History of Magic, which they have in two days and which Rajani is feeling relatively stable on but she still wants to go back over everything to make sure she's solid.

They nearly miss lunch, and probably would have if it wasn't for Eugene and Queenie swinging by to inform them of the hour.

Then after they eat it's straight back to the library and their table, this time with the addition of Queenie, Eugene, and Elspeth who's dragged by Nia with no regard for whether or not she actually wants to study with them.

She doesn't leave, Rajani notes, which is actually more than she'd been expecting. Elspeth usually only leaves the Slytherin dungeons for class and meals, so seeing her willingly sit in the library for an extended period of time is a bit disorienting.

They study until dinner, and then keep studying after, though the venue shifts to the Slytherin common room. A couple of bored sixth years even help them out by quizzing them on potion recipes and offering suggestions of what to expect based on what they remembered of their own second year Potions final.

The group breaks as soon as the water outside the window grows dark - they're determined to sleep well for the entire week. This sentiment gets some strangled laughs from the fifth years, who are all already strung out from studying for the OWLs and are surviving on wideeye potions.

Rajani can only hope she has her studies well in hand so she doesn't suffer the same fate when it's their turn to face the notoriously difficult tests.

Finals week starts with a vengeance as soon as she goes up for breakfast the next morning. The house elves always prepare extra hearty foods during finals week, and Rajani indulges a bit, not wanting to suddenly get hungry in the middle of the Potions exam.

When it's time to file down into the dungeons with the Hufflepuffs, Rajani finds herself glancing over at Donaghan, who's had the same idea at the same time. They make eye contact, and he offers a quick smile in solidarity before sitting in the opposite corner of the room with another of his House mates.

Rajani pairs up with Queenie, much to Eugene's clear disappointment, though he quickly settles himself with Lenox and a very put-out Clary ends up being the unlucky odd one out and has to work with one of the Hufflepuffs after Finn chooses to pair up with a badger as well - though for what reason he'd do so Rajani hasn't the faintest idea.

As always, Queenie and Rajani make a great team, and with how much they had drilled the potions over the past week they demolish both the written essay and the practical potion in just under two hours. Once Professor Snape has bottled and labelled their final product - with a nod of approval that makes both girls beam - they're allowed to head to lunch a bit early.

"Did you see that? We blew that exam out of the water!" Queenie lets herself giggle in excitement for a split second before regaining her usual composure. "I wish all the tests would be that easy!"

Rajani nods. "Well, all we can do is study and hope." She says.

And they do continue to study, going back over their History notes and starting in on Transfiguration and Charms, which they have on Wednesday, as well.

The rest of their friends eventually file in to join them as they finish the Potions exam, and they spend a bit of time chatting about how they think they had done. For the most part everyone is confident, though Clary grouchily announces that her partner had been an incompetent nincompoop.

"Truly, Hufflepuffs are utter duffers!" She declares.

Finn shakes his head. "I found Aidan to be a wonderful partner myself. Who were you with?"

"Some blond. The one who always hangs out with the human disaster from Gryffindor." Clary grumbles.

Rajani's brain supplies the name Tyler Abbott. She's not sure at first why she knows it, until she remembers that he's a chaser for the Hufflepuff team and she'd made a point to study up on all of their Quidditch opponents.

They retire to the library, though Elspeth neglects to join them this time and Rajani feels bad about the fact she's somewhat relieved. They go over History for a bit, and then continue on with their other classes.

The week continues to pass in a blur of studying and exams, each harder than the last. Despite her determination to sleep properly for the whole week, Rajani finds herself staying up later than might be advisable, attempting to cram things she'd forgotten to cover during the day. Her sister keeps a close eye on her after she passes out on one of the common room couches.

"Raj, you have your astronomy final tomorrow night, you need your rest." Mayra notes on a Thursday evening. Rajani is sitting in front of the fireplace, buried in the Herbology notes she'd taken with Donaghan earlier in the week.

"Five more minutes." Rajani replies wearily, but Mayra firmly closes the textbook.

"Now. Sahana's orders. And as your team captain, also mine." She grins at Rajani's look of betrayal. "If you don't know it by now then you're not going to know it kid. Trust me, sleep is more important than last-minute cramming. Go rest." She starts to leave, but then seems to remember something. "Oh, and Sahana is going to come down and make sure you've gone, so don't think you can sneak a few more minutes."

Rajani reluctantly gathers her notes and heads for her dorm. She's asleep almost as soon as her head hits the pillow.

She's begrudgingly thankful for Sahana's sudden bout of over protectiveness when she doesn't need to grab a nap after lunch like most of her friends do. Instead, she settles down with her star charts at the Slytherin library table and begins trying to sketch out what the sky will likely look like that night.

A fourth year looks over her shoulder, distracted from his own boredom. She figures he's likely finished with his exams and now isn't sure what to do with himself.

"Hey, not bad." He compliments. "Any chance you'd want some help studying? I'm bored."

His bluntness surprises her a bit. Most of the Slytherins she's interacted with are a bit more eloquent than that, but she nods regardless. Help is help.

She learns that his name is Edward - "but I prefer Ed honestly, Edward makes me sound old" - and that he's really not much better at Astronomy than she is.

He's a good conversationalist though, and while she doesn't get much studying done she still rather enjoys herself as he regales her with gossip from the other Houses that he's collected from his siblings, who she's surprised to learn aren't in Slytherin.

"I thought families usually were all in the same House?" She can't help prying just a bit.

Ed shrugs dismissively. "Well, maybe families that like each other. My siblings are awful. Actually, my youngest sister is in your year so you probably know."

Rajani does know Leona, though only because the girl is an incurable gossip and she's caught the brunette trying to lurk around her and her friends when they're talking.

Ed ends up sitting with them at dinner that night, and he gets on well with the rest of Rajani's friends. Afterwards he leaves them to study, but with a wrangled promise from Clary to sit with them again at breakfast.

Rajani heads up to the Astronomy Tower feeling confident and light as a feather. It's a good way to end the year.

"Five points."

Sarah Poole has been in a foul mood all morning, and really Ana can't blame her very much. After all, Ravenclaw had fallen behind Slytherin in the House Cup competition right at the end of the exam period.

"We lost by five measly points."

Sarah looks ready to tear her own hair out, and Eric clearly isn't pleased either. Ana supposes that none of the prefects are very happy with the situation, but she's not sitting with the other ones so she wouldn't know.

Josie pats Sarah's shoulder lightly. "Hey, there's still next year, yeah? And you're still a really strong contender for Head Girl."

Because really, that's what Sarah's meltdown is actually about. Ravenclaw hasn't won the House Cup since the sixth year's first year at Hogwarts, and she's worried that losing out on the Cup when they'd been so close will damage her chances at the position she's been coveting since she was eleven.

Eric had filled Ana in when she'd first arrived at the breakfast table, and Ana would almost feel bad for the older girl if Sarah didn't have a habit of being a bit naggy and overbearing a majority of the time.

"It's only a few points, we could still catch up over the weekend." Eric points out, though it's a weak attempt. Almost no points are ever given out during the two days between the end of exams and the end of the school year.

Sarah sighs and looks up. "Not likely. But thanks." She smiles at her fellow prefect wearily before her head drops again. "All I wanted was one year to go my way. But no, stupid Ed ruins everything with a perfect transfiguration exam."

Ana isn't quite sure who 'Ed' is supposed to be, but from the expressions on the rest of the group's faces he's someone significant.

"Sarah's younger brother. Makes it personal." Eric supplies lowly and Ana nods. That would make sense then. Based on interactions between Alasdair and his older brother sibling rivalry can get rather ugly, so it probably feels like a personal slight that her own brother had been the one to get the points that took away Sarah's hopes for the year.

"Well, it's just a cup." She tells her oatmeal later, when the sixth years have left and she's one of the last in the Great Hall, prodding halfheartedly at her breakfast. "What's it really worth in the end?"

Apparently quite a bit, because all of the older Ravenclaws seem rather dejected by the news.

The weekend after exams had been quiet the previous year as well, but it had been more of a collective sigh of relief than the stifling weight of something lost that mutes the common room now. Ana hates it, but the library closes once exams are over and Madame Pince goes home, so she's stuck either in the common room or outside, and considering there's been a never-ending game of 'provoke the giant squid' going on since breakfast had finished she has no interest in the latter option.

However, once she realizes that Evie likely is out tempting fate by the lake she quickly heads up to her dorm room.

Amelia is sitting on her bed crossed-legged, reading Dragon Species of Great Britain and Ireland. Ana wouldn't have pegged her meek roommate as a dragon lover, but people are surprising. Which is why she generally tries to avoid them.

The two girls exchange a nod of greeting but otherwise remain silent, flipping through their books (Ana has pulled out Magick Moste Evile, a present from her Baba that her mother had disguised it as a book on Quintessense - which to be fair is a book Ana probably would read). It's a surprisingly comfortable atmosphere, and Ana feels relaxed enough to let Dracula out of his terrarium to snooze in the mid-morning sun streaming through the windows.

Amelia looks over at the fire salamander a bit warily, and Ana remembers belatedly that her roommate had been uncomfortable with Dracula being out the year before.

"Sorry, I can put him back." She offers awkwardly. "I just don't like him being cooped up all the time. He likes to stretch out."

Amelia chews her bottom lip and shrugs. "It's okay." After a long moment, during which Ana nearly returns to her book, she speaks again. "He won't set anything on fire, will he?"

Ana blinks, and then can't help but laugh. "Nah, so long as he doesn't feel threatened. Drac is really tame."

Amelia relaxes immediately and a smile breaks across her face. "Well that's good. He's really handsome."

Ana accepts the compliment on her pet's behalf, and the two girls return to their reading. However, it doesn't take long for Amelia to pipe up again, a bit uncertainly.

"Um, do you think he would mind if I pet him? My dad doesn't like reptiles so I've never gotten to hold one..." She looks embarrassed when Ana glances over at her, and the Bulgarian sighs.

This certainly isn't how she pictured her day going. "No, it's fine. He likes attention. Just approach him slowly and make sure he can see your hand clearly the whole time. If you touch him and he's not expecting it you might get burned."

Amelia takes the warning to heart, and Ana is actually a bit impressed despite herself at how careful her roommate is being. Dracula appreciates it as well, as he makes a light chirping noise as Amelia's fingers ghost over his head.

Amelia squeaks a bit at the noise. "Is that okay? Should I stop?"

Ana shakes her head. "Nah, that's his happy noise. He's only ever made it for me before, you should feel honored."

Amelia's eyes widen. "Oh! Oh wow." She grins a bit manically as she returns to gently Dracula, her eyes bright with wonder. "I think I'd like a fire salamander as well. He's so well behaved!"

Ana smiles awkwardly, still not completely sure how to handle suddenly talking to her roommate after two years of barely acknowledging one another. Still, it could be good to have someone on her side when she and Evie inevitably clashed again in the future. "They are generally rather calm, but they're a bit more work than other pets." She states, closing her book and sliding it habitually under her pillow. No need to risk being caught with a book on Dark Magic, even if it is disguised. "His skin gets pretty irritated in the summers because of the temperatures, so I have to be extra thorough when cleaning out his cage so he's comfortable."

Amelia hums. "That would make sense."

They end up talking about Dracula and fire salamanders in general for almost an hour, and Ana is surprised both by her own ability to keep up with the conversation, and by Amelia's obvious enthusiasm for the subject. For someone who has barely spoken five sentences to Ana in two years, she's certainly able to be chatty when she feels like it.

Eventually Amelia's stomach growls, and she turns bright red.

"Must be lunch time." She mumbles, all her confidence from moments before evaporating into thin air.

Ana shrugs. "Must be." She checks the time with a quick tempus charm and finds there's technically fifteen minutes until the tables in the Great Hall will have food on them.

Amelia excuses herself from the room, still clearly flustered, and Ana decides she's not quite hungry enough to follow. She'll just finish the chapter she'd been on, then seen if the sixth years are eating yet.

The next day finds Ana arriving for breakfast exactly on time. The exam grades are going to be handed out and she can admit she didn't sleep very deeply during the night due to the mix of nerves and anticipation coursing through her mind.

"Good morning." Eric greets her cheerfully. The loss of the House Cup seems to have settled some and the table is a bit more chipper than it had been twenty four hours earlier. "Ready to see your grades?"

"I'm sure she did great, she's basically Sarah two point oh." Josie laughs from Eric's other side.

Ana isn't sure she wants to be compared to her least favorite sixth year, but she lets it slide. Sarah is quite a good student after all, so it was surely intended as a compliment.

"I certainly feel comfortable about my chances." She replies to Eric, opting to ignore Josie's comment entirely. "I studied well and felt I knew the material when I finished the exams."

"That's all you can really hope for." Hannah sighs. "I remember walking out of a few finals feeling like the rug had been pulled out from under me. Not a pleasant feeling."

Josie perks up. "You're talking about fourth year, aren't you?"

With that the two girls are off, reminiscing about several bad decisions they'd made as fourteen year olds, which Ana tunes out. The sixth years often do that sort of thing, and while at first it made her feel like an outsider she's more than used to it now.

So she turns to Eric. "Any plans for the summer?" She questions, more out of politeness than actual interest. She knows he's probably going to be doing something with Laurel, and frankly she still doesn't get the big deal about dating so the whole topic bores her.

Eric grins. "Quite a few, but I know why you're asking, and don't worry I'll remember to send you my OWL study books. What about you, are you planning on leaving your house ever?"

Another thing Ana doesn't like about Laurel is how ever since she started dating Eric he's gotten a lot snarkier. It's not the worst thing in the world, but Ana misses being able to talk to him without him amicably teasing her.

"I do." She replies briskly. "I'll be visiting my friend Alasdair and his family a few times at least, and my mother has her friends over every few weeks and I like to sit in with them and discuss current politics."

Sarah looks over at them from where she's seated across the table. "Is that so? I'd be interested to hear your take on the new proposal concerning Squib rights that's being passed around the Wizengamot this year."

Ana can't help but perk up. This had been a major point of contention during the tea circle during the winter break so she certainly has opinions. "Well foremost I don't think anything is going to come of it. With Idris Oakby's passing last year there's no one really pushing for Squib rights anymore. The SSS has fallen into chaos without her and I don't really see any of them able to effectively fill Idris's shoes. That said, it's a logical proposal when considered objectively. After all, we have programs to effectively allow wizards to blend into the Muggle world, why shouldn't we have programs to help Squibs settle in the Wizarding world?" She shrugs. Personally she actually thinks it's a non-issue that should be below the Wizengamot's notice and left to desk workers, but people got a bit crazy about proving how open-minded and forward thinking they were after the end of the Wizarding War, so she gets all the hype around the subject even if she thinks it's nonsense.

Sarah nods thoughtfully. "That's true, Idris was truly a force of nature. I met her once actually, lovely woman, took no nonsense from anyone. It's really too bad she was a Squib, I think she would have been quite a formidable witch."

Eric frowns. "Can you determine things like that from personality? That would suggest Prime Minister Thatcher would be a fantastic witch as well."

Ana and Sarah stare at him with equally blank expressions and he gives a flustered laugh. "The Muggle Prime Minister? Never mind."

Sarah shakes her head. "I forget that you grew up in the Muggle world sometimes. But personality more dictates what you actually do with your magic rather than how powerful it is. I just think someone as clever and flexible as Mrs. Oakby would have been very adept at using her magic in effective ways is all."

Ana nods, but Eric is still frowning, clearing debating whether or not to respond. Finally he his lips and speaks.

"But maybe it was being a Squib that caused her to develop that creativity? I mean, my mom knows a lot of people who rely too much on their magic just because they have it. She says it builds character to do things the Muggle way, and I'm personally inclined to agree."

Sarah and Ana exchange a glance, and Ana is both surprised and amused to realize they're somehow on the same page. And to think not two minutes ago she'd been thinking how being compared to Sarah wasn't very complimentary.

"Perhaps, but if a person doesn't want to be inventive they'll be that way, magic or not." Sarah points out. "Magic doesn't create laziness, genetics do."

Ana nods. "Whereas if someone already has magic to do the simple tasks, then their creativity can be applied in much grander and more widespread ways instead of having to be inventive just to achieve what magic can do easily."

Eric makes a face but drops the topic, conceding quietly. Ana turns back to Sarah, pleased with their victory.

"So what are you thoughts on the possibility of changes to the werewolf registry?"

Ana's grades arrive somewhere in the midst of an intense debate between her and Sarah, and she immediately raises a hand to pause the Prefect mid-point.

"Congratulations Ms. Vulchanova, you're the top student in your grade again." Professor Flitwick winks at her as he hands over the parchment with her results. "We're expecting great things from you in the coming years."

Ana beams at him before quickly unfolding the paper.

Eric leans over her shoulder and whistles lowly. "Wow, straight Os."

Sarah grins. "You really are a small version of me." She comments, and this time Ana doesn't need to fake the smile accepting the compliment.

"I'll have to endeavor to outdo you in the future then." She promises, and Sarah laughs.

"I wouldn't expect any less. Now, as I was saying-"

The rest of the day is about as perfect an end to the year as Ana could have hoped for.

The End-Of-Term Feast is as bright and noisy as Franziska remembers it being, and the fact that the Great Hall is fully decked out in silver and green doesn't bother her as much as it clearly is some of the older Hufflepuffs and the rest of the school.

Of course, after the stress of the day Franziska would be fine with any decorations that aren't bright pink.

The day starts promisingly enough - Franziska has breakfast with her housemates, and then heads down to visit Hagrid, who she hasn't seen since before exams has started.

"Frannie!" The half giant greets cheerfully as he answers her knock. "Good ta see ya! How was yer week?"

Franziska grins and enters the cozy little hut, settling in her favorite chair right next to the fireplace. Hagrid's wolfhound puppy Fang quickly nestles on top of her feet, and she scratches his ears in greeting.

"Absolutely exhausting, but I passed all my classes!" She announces happily. In all honesty she had been worried about failing Transfiguration, but she'd scraped by with an 'A'. "And this morning I confirmed my schedule for next year."

Hagrid is busying himself in the kitchen, putting on a kettle to make them tea. "Tha's great Frannie! Which electives are ya takin'?"

She beams excitedly despite her friend's back being turned. "Well I signed up for Muggle Studies straight away, like I told you, but since my Charms grade was high enough I was allowed to take Ancient Runes as well! I'm really excited for it, mum took it when she was here and she says it's quite fascinating."

Hagrid pulls up a chair to face her. "Well tha's great! No Care of Magical Creatures?" He sounds a little sad at the revelation, and Franziska does feel bad. The groundskeeper had been encouraging her to take the class since they'd started their weekly tea meetings in April.

"I'm sorry Hagrid, I was going to take it if I didn't get into Ancient Runes, but I just don't think I can balance three new classes on top of the core curriculum." She explains. "Though a lot of my friends are taking it so I bet I can learn a lot from talking to them. And," She smiles shyly, embarrassed that this particular thought had actually contributed quite a bit to her decision, "I thought you could probably explain stuff about the creatures just as well as Professor Kettleburn could."

Hagrid looks incredibly touched by her admission, and she beams at him as he tries to hide his fluster by pouring them both some tea.

"Well tha's real nice 'o you to say so." He accepts the compliment clumsily.

They continue chatting until Franziska has to leave for lunch, and she promises she'll stop by the hut again before the train leaves for King's Cross the next day.

Lunch is when the day starts going downhill.

Franziska sits next to Tonks at the table, and the conversation flows smoothly enough. It isn't until everyone else has settled in that things start going sideways.

A group of first years burst into the room, drawing Franziska's attention immediately. The whole group is dressed in bright pink, and some of them have had their hair turned pink as well. At the front of the group is one Saundra Caldwell, a Hufflepuff first year Franziska had nearly, thankfully, forgotten about until now.

"Hunter!" The first year Hufflepuff races over to their table and stares hopefully at the nearest prefect. Hunter Vaughan looks less than pleased to have been singled out by the pink hoard, though Franziska can't help but smirk. She never liked him much anyway.

"Saundra, what did you do this time?" Hunter sighs and scans the pink pond of people in front of him.

"I was just trying out a color spell I found at the back of a textbook someone left in the common room." The small girl announces. "It went a little wonky, but I think I know why. I just don't know how to undo it yet."

Hunter sighs, again, and waves one of the other prefects over to come with him to assess the damage.

"Is anything else pink?" He asks, his tone indicating he knows exactly what the answer is going to be.

One of the other kids in the group pipes up with entirely too much enthusiasm for the situation. "Everything in the common room! The pink spreads if you touch stuff."

Hunter's hand jerks back from where he'd been reaching out to inspect Saundra's robes. "It spreads? What spell book were you looking at?"

Saundra doesn't even pretend to be abashed. "The Encyclopedia of Toadstools." She recites cheerfully, drawing out the last 's' in a rather self-satisfied manner. "It's quite an interesting read."

Hunter blinks, his face momentarily blank. "How on Earth did you..." He shakes his head. "No, never mind, I don't care. Come on, let's go clean this-" He doesn't get to finish his sentence when one of the first years trip and plummets headfirst into one of the girls who had been sitting beside Hunter before the interruption.

She immediately turns pink - and falls over onto the boy next to her. By the time someone stops the domino effect almost a quarter of Hufflepuff house has turned bright pink, and the whole table with all it's food are colored in as well.

Franziska quickly gets up to avoid touching anything, but the corner of her robes brush against the table's edge and soon enough she's pink as well.

Tonks bursts out laughing as she casually morphs the pink out of her hair, though the rest of her is still reminiscent of a flamingo.

Hunter sighs yet again. "Alright Hufflepuff, lets go back to the common room and try to fix this up before the Feast tonight." He instructs firmly, and all of the effected students, Franziska and Tonks among them, trudge back to the common room, carefully avoiding contact with anything on the way there.

"How come the floor isn't turning pink?" Tonks observes curiously, tapping a bright pink shoe against the stone beneath their feet.

"I think it's enchanted somehow. I'm going to study it more next year." Saundra has appeared behind the two second years, and Franziska jumps, nearly hitting a painting but catching her balance in time.

The lady in the frame has a few choice words for her "juvenile posture and sub-par stride" but Franziska had learned early on that it's best to ignore the paintings for the most part.

"You-" She doesn't get past that before Saundra is chattering away again.

"I'm thinking there might be something in Hogwarts: A History, but Uncle H only got me the books explicitly required for this year and the library is closed now. Say Frannie, you wouldn't happen to have a copy I could borrow, would you?"

Franziska starts to shake her head, but Tonks beats her to the punch.

"I definitely have one somewhere! Man, if you managed to turn everything pink from a book about mushrooms I'm excited to see what comes from a text like Hogwarts a History, that book is dense."

Franziska can only gape wordlessly as Tonks encourages Saundra to cause even more chaos.

"They were toadstools actually. Completely different genus." Saundra replies happily.

The barrels to the common room thankfully also don't turn pink as the hoard of charmed students crawls through them, much to Franziska's relief. Centuries of the Hufflepuff common room's location being one of Hogwart's best-kept secrets being spilled by a reckless first year turning the entrance pink might be on par with how her day is going, but that doesn't make the brunette okay with the possibility.

Hunter looks around their common room with an intense resignation. Two other prefects have accompanied him - the seventh years, Franziska recognizes them from the first night's welcome speech - and they survey the damage with a more critical eye.

"Alright, everyone in the middle of the room." The one female prefect announces briskly, herding the first years a bit.

Franziska stays close to Tonks as they follow the instructions, hoping for conversation to distract from the absolute mess her day has devolved into.

"Well this is certainly a memorable way to end the year." Tonks laughs as the prefects set about trying to undo Saundra's mess.

Franziska can acknowledge that much at least. "I wish it was memorable in some other way honestly." She replies. "Like having lunch out by the lake or flying around the Astronomy Tower."

Tonk's eyes light up. "Oh man, we should do that next year!"

The prefects eventually manage to reverse the spell, just in time to return to the Great Hall for the Feast.

Headmaster Dumbledore rises and congratulates Slytherin for their second victory in the House Cup competition in two years, and he encourages the rest of the school to keep working hard to improve themselves in the coming years. It's a nice speech, but Franziska is distracted by her clenching stomach. She'd never actually finished lunch after all.

Thankfully, the food appears only moments after Dumbledore is seated, and Franziska immediately dives in.

"Slow down Frannie, you're going to choke." Jemma scolds lightly from across the table, though there's no real bite to the words. "I'm glad to see you back to your normal color though."

Franziska makes a face at the comment and swallows her current mouthful. "Me too. I don't think they'd have let us leave like that though, the Muggles would have seen at King's Cross."

"You'd be surprised what Muggles are capable of shrugging off." Kiera grins around her own food. "They'd probably think you were covered in paint or something."

Henry takes a moment to look offended on behalf of his Muggle family, but then he laughs. "She's not wrong, but you might stir up some alien rumors for a while."

This naturally sparks into a debate on whether they believe in alien life that draws in most of the other Hufflepuffs at the table and even gets a few comments from the Ravenclaws sitting behind them.

Franziska is glad for the House-wide discussion, something that does happen on occasion but not nearly as much as she would like considering how fun they get. The topic is carried over to the common room, and they stay up right to the edge of curfew continuing to argue for or against extraterrestrials.

"I can't believe you switched sides Frannie." Aidan shakes his head in disappointment. "I would have thought you'd be on the side of science."

"I am though! Statistically speaking, a similar civilization to ours should have contacted us by now." Franziska defends herself. She'd been pro-alien up until one of the seventh years had pulled out the probabilities.

Aidan sighs. "You were my only logical supporter you traitor."

The rest of the second years mock affrontation, having all been firmly on the side of 'definitely aliens', though mostly for the cool factor.

It takes a while to settle down enough to fall asleep, but they eventually manange it, and Franziska follows up on her promise to stop by Hagrid's hut the next morning before heading back to the train platform.

"I'll miss yeh Frannie. You'll come visit me 'n Fang when ya get back, yeah?" The gameskeeper is dabbing at his eyes with the edge of the table cloth, and Franziska gives him a hug.

"Of course! First free period I have I'll be by for tea, I promise. Have a good summer Hagrid!"

Her robes are still a little damp from Fang's overenthusiastic goodbye when she settles herself in a car with Leona, Aidan, and Brandon.

"No Charlie?" Leona questions. She'd been he last one to take her seat. "I thought you three were a package deal?"

Aidan shrugs. "He's sitting with his brother and some of the Gryffindor team. He said he'd come by later on."

Brandon is pouting by the window, clearly not happy with one of his best friends ditching him. Franziska sits down across from him and offers a smile.

"Do you have any plans for the summer Brandon?"

Aidan answers for his friend when the American continues pouting. "Him and Charlie are coming over to my house for a couple of weeks in July. They're going to learn how Muggles live." His grin is mischievous, and Franziska can only laugh.

"I'm sure it'll be plenty of fun." She agrees, relaxing back into the seat as the train starts moving under them.

"I hear you'll be back in the country earlier this summer - maybe we could arrange a group trip to Diagon Alley." Aidan suggests with a grin, and Franziska perks up immediately.

"Oh that would be wonderful!"

She'd spent most of the past month working with Kiera to figure out exactly how she could visit her friend's farm during the summer. Rudi had more than earned his treats with all the flying he was doing around Europe during the negotiations. Eventually they settled on Franziska taking a Portkey directly to the Cassidy lands on August 15th, giving her plenty of time to relax with Kiera and accomplish her school shopping while still letting her spend most of the summer with her parents and Rosalinde.

Brandon finally looks up from his sulking. "You're going to be back in England before school starts?"

Franziska nods excitedly. "Well, technically Kiera lives in Ireland, but it's still much closer than Germany! I'm excited, Kiera says her family is really looking forward to it as well which is nice. I didn't want to be an inconvenience."

Brandon blinks and then grins. "You'd never be an inconvenience Badger. So hey, someone said something about a group outing to Diagon Alley?"

When Charlie, true to his word, does come join them about two hours into the trip, he's thoroughly confused by Brandon loudly informing him of exactly when he and Bill will be going to Diagon Alley, but he takes the news in stride and says he'll have to ask his parents.

With the addition of a second Gryffindor, the already lively car gets downright rowdy, and Franziska finds herself helplessly giggling with little to actually interject into the rapid conversation. When they finally arrive at King's Cross, she hugs everyone goodbye, and even catches a few of her other friends before they leave.

"Frannie! Frannie come show my dad your face so he knows who you are!" Kiera drags her away from hugging Donaghan and a reluctant Cian before they leave with the latter's mother.

Franziska can only laugh and follow along, a familiar feeling at this point.

"You must be Franziska! We look forward to your coming down! I hope you're ready to put in some good old manual labor!" Kiera's father is a very attractive man, and Franziska actually feels her face heating up, much to her own surprise and embarrassment.

"Thank you for having me sir! I'm quite looking forward to it!" She replies quickly, hoping to hide her reaction.

Thankfully her mother finds them shortly after, and once the adults have introduced themselves and Kiera and Franziska have had a proper hug goodbye Franziska and her mother head towards the exit.

"Did you have a good year?" Her mother prompts, and Franziska can only nod.

A pretty good year indeed.

 

Guys! We're done with year two! And it ended exactly the same as year one but hey, I'm the author, I can be cheesy and unoriginal all I like xD Seriously though, we're starting to close in on the fun stuff! I have a ton planned for the next five years, including relationships both romanic and platonic, and there's going to be some drama and friendships falling out as well ;; Basically, the setup is done - you know these kids now, you know what they're like, and now we get to start throwing life and puberty at them! So hold on to your wizard caps my friends, we're just getting started!

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!