Chapter Fourty

Hogwarts: A History ✫*゚Completed
Family Drama

Franziska had been, to her own shame, surprised to find that Evie is incredibly organized and efficient once she has a goal. And for the past week that goal has been to get the Hogsmeade Apparition study-trip green-lit and organized.

Though she's taken point both Franziska and Fitzwilliam have been helping quite a bit with whatever jobs Evie comes up with that she can't or won't do herself. Franziska still cant quite tell which it is, though she enjoys assisting regardless and wouldn't complain even if it turned out Evie could have done it all on her own.

She's mostly saddled with getting the word out - as Evie had put it "you're a badger, you could befriend a tree stump if you wanted to so you can definitely talk to everyone in our class no problem!" While Franziska somewhat disagrees - Cian is also a badger and certainly wouldn't be okay with this particular task - she generally enjoys talking to people so she's more than happy to take on the task.

The one major difficulty has been with the Slytherins. There aren't many in their class as far as she can recall but she has no idea which ones they are and how to even talk to them. She ends up just talking really loudly whenever she sees any sixth year snakes in the halls, making sure to mention that the entire class is welcome to come.

It seems to work as two of the three Slytherins sign the parchment for the trip that Evie excitedly brings to their final Apparition lesson. In total they get thirteen people signed up and the Defense professor Aureli Whinging volunteers to accompany them.

Franziska has not yet met the new professor so she's rather curious to learn about her. Whinging is middle-aged but appears older, listing on the heavy side of the weight spectrum, but that's really all Franziska knows, and that's only from seeing the woman in the dining hall. She isn't even certain as to whether the woman is any good as a professor or not - since she's not taking the class she hasn't really discussed it with any of her friends. 

She seems enthusiastic enough the morning of the trip though, despite the snow flurries decorating the grounds in frost and the freezing wind that even Franziska's warmest winter cloak can't quite keep at bay. Franziska decides tentatively that maybe she likes the new defense professor.

That opinion changes rather quickly as the woman continues to talk nonstop from the castle all the way to the village, discussing her own memories of her Apparition class and test which would have been perfectly fine if the stories weren't horridly boring.

"She's no better in class." Evie informs Franziska under her breath when the Hufflepuff drops to the back of the group to try in vain to escape yet another tale. "She's like Binns with s."

Franziska nearly chokes on her surprised laugh. "Evie! Language!" She chides, feeling her face flush from something other than the cold.

Evie laughs and bumps Franziska's shoulder with her own. "Jeez, it's just a word Frannie. You've got 'em too you know. I mean, you don't have as much as me but-"

Franziska pushes her into a snowbank, caught between laughing and blushing horribly. She's glad no one around them seems to have heard the remark - she's not sure she could handle comments like that from anyone other than Evie.

Fitzwilliam drops back to walk next to them shortly after, thankfully, so Evie starts behaving.

"More people came than I thought - I think only two people from class didn't sign up." He observes, sounding both surprised and nervous.

Evie beams happily. "You two did a great job getting the word out! I mean, two out of three Slytherins is frankly shocking, considering that they're off in their own elitist world over there." She adds, nodding to the two snakes who indeed are walking distinctly separate from the rest of the class, their heads bent together and ignoring the other students.

Fitzwilliam just hums awkwardly, not agreeing or disagreeing openly. For her part Franziska is leaning towards agreement - even over Christmas when barely any of them are still in the castle the snakes keep themselves aloof - but she maintains a neutral silence as well.

Evie is as usual unconcerned by the lacking response and plows on, chatting excitedly about her Christmas plans and how she's going to show her parents everything they've been learning in school now that she's old enough to do magic outside of Hogwarts' walls.

Franziska wonders if Fitzwilliam is feeling the same envy that she is, considering he never goes home over Christmas break either. She really wishes she could go home for the break as well and do magic with her parents - maybe her mother would even teach her some of  the housekeeping spells Franziska has seen her use that they haven't covered in school.

She's so caught up in her thoughts she nearly misses Fitzwilliam's response to Evie's inquiry about their Christmas plans.

"I always stay at school. So does Frannie - it's how we met."

Franziska grins, quickly refocusing on the conversation. "First year. It feels like forever ago, doesn't it? Sitting in the Gryffindor common room, watching Brandon and Nabila have pillow fights over - gosh, what were they even about?"

"Swearing. Odd now considering Nabila drops the occasional swear these days." Fitzwilliam supplies, a faint smile on his face.

Franziska grins as well, but then her smile falters slightly. "I guess I kind of screwed that up though, dumping Brandon like I did. We haven't even spoken since then." She admits, suddenly much less cheerful than she'd been moments before.

Fitzwilliam shifts awkwardly, clearly unsure of how to respond to that, but Evie punches her shoulder lightly, startling Franziska into looking at her friend.

"Well then talk to him! You're obviously ready to, see if he is. If not, well then you can say you tried, but what if he's feeling just the same as you? You've gotta try."

Franziska blinks, then nods uncertainly. "You... yeah. Yeah, you're probably right."

"Damn straight I'm right, I'm not in Ravenclaw for nothing. Now come on, we're almost there! Last one in the village has to buy everyone butterbeer!" With that Evie takes off, and though she feels a bit silly - they are seventeen after all, officially adults and technically above such things - Franziska runs after her after only a moment's hesitation.

She definitely feels embarrassed when they have to wait for the rest of the group to catch up, Fitzwilliam included. Definitely not one of her best moments.

"Alright everyone, I have your targets and the villagers have been so kind to clear out a large area we can use to practice!" Professor Whinging claps her hands happily and then slips her wand out of her sleeve and waves it in the air in the universal symbol for 'follow me.'

Most of the class complies, but Franziska notices one boy trying to sneak away towards Zonko's Joke Shop.

Unfortunately she recognizes him and knows he's not just going to the restroom - Tyler's cousin Remi has always been bad news, and though she hasn't seen him lately outside of class she's rather confident she ought to stop him before he causes any trouble.

"Remi, the clearing is this way." She reminds him, loud enough that nearly everyone else in the class turns to look at the brunet boy, who awkwardly turns around and waves.

"Um, yeah. I just need to go to the bathroom real quick." He explains, a smile plastered to his face.

Professor Whinging makes a small exclamatory sound. "Goodness me, that is important! Why don't we all go by the Three Broomsticks and take a quick rest stop! Excellent idea Mr. Longbottom!"

Remi keeps the smile up until the professor turns and starts redirecting the group to the Three Broomsticks. Once she's looked away he glares at Franziska.

"This isn't a shopping trip Remi, it's for school." Franziska points out flatly. "If you don't actually want to practice you can go back to the castle."

He continues glaring but she pointedly strides past him, ignoring the expression. How Tyler took so long to stop hanging out with his cousin she'll never know, but she gets now why he's seemed so much happier this year. Remi doesn't seem to be very nice.

She does end up using the restroom though, so the incident turns out to actually be useful.

Finally they get to the clearing and Professor Whinging pulls out a handful of shrunk targets which she enlarges and hands out cheerfully to all thirteen students.

"Alright then students, aim for your targets! And don't worry, the townspeople have erected an anti-apparition field in the immediate surrounding area so no one is going to end up in the ocean on accident!" She jokes cheerfully.

Franziska hadn't been worried about that possibility until it was brought up, but she's relieved someone had thought of it - she can definitely see someone zapping themselves somewhere they don't recognize and not be able to figure out how to get back.

Some people are less pleased with the preventative measures.

"How can we learn properly if we never actually take any risks?" Drake Jarvis complains loudly. Franziska didn't even realize he'd signed up for the trip - she had actually assumed he wouldn't considering neither Jemma nor their other friend are taking the class.

Conversely, thinking back on it, Jemma really hasn't been spending time with her Gryffindor friends. Franziska knows she'd broken up with Drake over the summer but apparently time hadn't yet healed that particular wound.

She admits to herself as she sets up her target that she'd been blaming Jemma's workload for why the three friends weren't hanging out as often, rather than admitting that a bad breakup could destroy such a strong friendship.

Something twists in her gut. Thinking about Drake and Jemma is making her think about Brandon - they hadn't been nearly as close before dating, so what hope does she really have of rekindling their old platonic relationship?

She sighs and shakes her head, forcing herself to stop fiddling with her target and take several steps back. A few more deep breaths later and she decides her mind is clear enough to make her first Apparition attempt.

She can already hear the others 'pop'ing around the clearing, and just as she flicks her wrist to join them she hears a strangled yelp. She starts to turn to see what's happened when the world suddenly inverts and she finds herself suddenly standing right next to Holly Kiddell, who's grimacing and cradling her left arm close to her body.

"Oh, hello Frannie." Holly attempts a grin, though it peters off rather quickly, "You're getting good at Apparating I see. I'm still having some trouble it turns out."

Franziska finally gets her bearings enough to process what exactly has happened. For one thing she'd not gotten anywhere close to her target, but had instead apparated next to Holly who had been the source of the strange sound. For another Holly's reason for making said noise is because she has splinched a decent chunk of flesh from the front of her arm and is looking decidedly sick.

Drake and Professor Whinging run over, the former looking incredibly guilty and the latter downright pale.

"Alright my dear let's see, let's see." The Professor instructs briskly.

They've gathered a crowd now, and Evie pushes her way to the front to stand next to Franziska, who has stepped back to put some space between herself and the blood. She does like Holly quite a bit - they'd been quite close back in first year when the Gryffindor had switched into their Flying class - but being close to that sort of injury holds no appeal to her, no matter how much she likes the person attached to it.

"What happened?" Evie asks curiously, sounding much less disturbed than Franziska thinks the situation warrants.

Drake coughs uncomfortably. "I dared her she couldn't apparate across the whole clearing and then distracted her when she did."

Evie hums. "Well, good thing I brought my Dittany with me in case of emergency!" She declares, pulling open the front of her robe and producing a small vial from one of it's inner pockets.

"Ugh cold." She mumbles as she quickly does her cloak back up before presenting the vial to Professor Whinging who is starting to look frantic. "Professor? A few drops of this will stabilize it until we can see Madame Pompfrey, right?"

That gets the Defense professor's attention. She stares at the vial a heartbeat longer than she should before nodding, her panic evaporating in an instant. "That is correct, excellent memory Ms...?"

It's an almost surreal moment of humor in an otherwise tense situation to realize that there's a professor who hasn't memorized Evie's last name, and it's a testament to how much more control the Ravenclaw has developed since first year. Franziska barely keeps down a snort, figuring it wouldn't really be appreciated.

"Jones, Evie Jones. I'm in your sixth year Defense class." Evie introduces herself with a grin as the vial is taken from her hands and Whinging deftly puts two drops onto Holly's arm.

"There you are dear, just take it easy for now, deep breaths, there you go."

Holly looks up from the ground, breathing as instructed, and scans around until she spots Drake still standing miserably next to Franziska.

"Hey, it's not your fault okay?" She tells him firmly. "I knew I couldn't go that far but I tried anyway." She then looks up at Evie. "And thanks Evie. Sorry I called you a fire demon behind your back once in first year."

Evie beams. "That's actually kind of cool! And hey, when you've got a wand like mine you need to come prepared." She adds with a laugh.

Franziska leaves them to chat and decides to take pity on Drake, dragging him over to where Fitzwilliam has started practicing again.

"Mind if we join you?" She asks, and Fitzwilliam nods.

"Go ahead. Say, did you know that Evie carried dittany with her?" He asks Franziska while Drake uncertainly takes the next turn with the target.

Franziska shakes her head. "No, but it's not that surprising. It sometimes feels like anything really can go wrong around her, so it makes sense to be prepared for as much as possible and dittany is a pretty easy thing to keep on hand."

Fitzwilliam hums in agreement, and they say nothing further on the incident for the rest of the trip, merely focusing on their apparating technique.

By the time they're packing up and heading back to the castle Franziska is almost feeling confident. She might just pass her Apparition test - if her luck holds out.

Rajani hadn't realized how quiet Hogwarts actually gets over the winter holidays. In her year only Nia and Elspeth are staying, and while Rajani likes them both quite well she very much feels like the third wheel when they hang out. Which they do daily - no one else Rajani knows has stayed over break.

She had thought the seventh years might stay to study for their NEWTs, but Trevor had reminded her that - like her - they're all of age and can practice magic at home just as well as at school.

Rajani kind of wishes more people didn't like their families.

One bonus of staying at school, though, is that she can keep practicing her Apparition with no difficulty. As long as she has a staff member present with her she can go out to Hogsmeade as much as she likes. The practice the week before, while dramatic, hadn't really been enough to make Rajani feel fully confident that she'll nail the exam so she'd sweet-talked Professor Whinging into being her personal chaperone to the village on their way back from the first trip.

"You just reacted so efficiently when Kiddell was splinched, I wouldn't trust the other professors as much." She'd said, blinking hopefully at the middle-aged woman.

The professor had actually blushed at the compliment. "Well, I suppose I could check with Headmaster Dumbledore to see if I could continue taking students out over the break. So many of the professors go home you know, but I wanted to be available to the students!"

"Oh, you're always so thoughtful that way." Rajani had really slathered it on, but she's all too familiar with people like Professor Whinging and she knew it would work.

And work it had. All she has to do now is stop by the Professor's office whenever she wants to go practice, adopt the most trusting puppy-dog eyes she has, and apologize profusely for interrupting Whinging's time, mixing in declarations of her kindness and how lucky the school and students are to have such a dedicated professor. Whinging buys it every time.

However, Rajani is getting decidedly bored. One can only go out to Hogsmeade so often considering the miserable weather, and spending time with Elspeth and Nia become grating after a certainly amount of time. She writes letters to Queenie, Eugene, and Trevor but it's not nearly the same as actually talking with any of them.

And that's how, on the first weekend of break, she finds herself sitting down in the library across from Aidan Ward.

She knows Ward mainly through their both being prefects, and as he's one of the less irritating people to patrol with she's hopeful that perhaps he'll be tolerable to chat with off duty as well. At least until she figures out a better fix - she certainly doesn't plan on reenacting the disaster that was Donaghan in third year. But at least if anyone sees them she can say she was discussing something related to their job.

He barely glances up from his book as she sits. She waits quietly for a few minutes before leaning down to check what he's studying. She frowns slightly when she sees an all-too-familiar textbook.

"Ancient Runes huh? How much harder has that gotten?"

Aidan finally looks at her properly, then glances around himself in confusion before replying. "Er, a lot harder, objectively speaking. Honestly unless your job requires it, which mine will, I wouldn't recommend it."

Rajani smirks at him. "You saying that to try and make me feel better for failing it?"

He shakes his head, frowning. "Not at all, trust me I know not to mess with you guys. It's just the truth - I'm probably going to have to drop a few classes next year, just focus on the ones I really need for work."

Rajani eyes him a moment longer before deciding he probably isn't making fun. "Fair enough. Which classes were you thinking of dropping?"

"Astronomy and Potions for sure, likely Care of Magical Creatures, and possibly History of Magic as well though I quite enjoy the material in the class so I'd be sad to miss the final year."

Rajani leans back in her chair. "I'll let you read my notes during patrols if you do end up dropping." She offers, only half mocking. It is a little ridiculous to want to take a class as dull as History for fun after all.

Aidan smiles faintly. "Well, thanks I guess. Did you want something by the way?" He adds, and Rajani sighs.

"Nope just bored. But if anyone asks this was strictly business."

Aidan smirks but wisely doesn't comment, instead switching the subject. "So how are solo patrols going for you this year? It seems like the pranks have dropped off but I admit I'm nervous about not having a partner with me in case of dungbombs."

Rajani huffs out a breath. "I'm fine with them, no prank has gotten the best of me yet. At this point I'm more worried about making a good impression on the staff. They choose the Head Girl, right?" She glares at Aidan. "And don't tell me that Jemma is going to get the role, I know. Doesn't mean I can't put up a good fight."

Aidan holds up his hands defensively. "Woah, I have no idea what you're talking about, Jemma's no better than the rest of you. And I have no idea how those roles are picked either, so I can't help you there."

Rajani huffs again. "Sorry, I get that from Queenie a lot. I guess you're immune to her goody-two-shoes nonsense since you're her Housemate."

Aidan shrugs. "Maybe, but I think maybe you're putting Jemma on a pedestal instead of actually getting to know her."

Rajani doesn't like the implication, but at least the whole conversation is a break from her grating usual routine. "And I think it's presumptuous to assume I'd do something like that - how well do you actually know me after all?"

"Not at all, you Slytherins keep to yourselves. And well, I'm a Muggleborn so I kind of assumed you hated me." Aidan replies bluntly, and if she wasn't getting ticked off Rajani might have been impressed.

"Oh, because all Slytherins are blood purists?" She shoots back, her voice rising slightly.

Aidan glances behind her. "Inside voice, Madame Pince will throw us out." He reminds her. "And at the very least you all are friends with them. That short-haired brunette you've been spending all break with called me a Mudblood a few times now. Have you ever called her out on that?"

Rajani genuinely hadn't known that Elspeth had done that, and she does kind of get now where Aidan is coming from. Still, she doesn't appreciate him making assumptions about her.

"It's a word, and Els is a to everyone. She's never said it around me anyway and I've never used it myself, my parents say it's poor form."

Aidan snorts. "Poor form, right. So you didn't know. Now you do. Are you going to do anything about it?"

Rajani hesitates. "If she does it in front of me sure." She finally responds. "Otherwise I don't see what I could do. We aren't that close - I like her and Nia well enough but Queenie and Eugene are my best friends."

Aidan shrugs. "Well, you do you I guess. When's your next patrol."

It is, Rajani reminds herself when she leaves the library an hour later, a definite shake up to her usual routine. That doesn't stop the whole incident from leaving a bad taste in .

It also unfortunately sours her time spent with Elspeth and Nia. She wonders if Nia knows about Elspeth's opinions, and if she does if she shares them or if she just isn't fighting with her friend. It is, after all, just a word, and it's common sense that Muggleborns aren't as magically powerful as purebloods.

'Really, it's no different than the term 'pureblood.' She thinks to herself at dinner that night. 'It's just inverted is all.'

She's not sure if she's convinced herself very well when she heads to bed that night. She tosses an turns for hours before she finally falls asleep, and even then she wakes up well before breakfast or the sun.

Sighing she gets up, knowing she won't be able to fall asleep again, and decides to ask the one person she's always trusted to not bull her on anything.

She grabs a quill and some parchment and heads into the common room, lighting a candle with her wand and settling next to the window. The Great Lake is dark beyond but there's still activity visible in the shadows. It makes the room seem less lonely.

She spreads out the parchment, dips her quill into an inkwell, and begins.

Dearest Ed,

It's been a while, how have you been? I admit, this communique is not entirely selfless - I have a very important dilemma and I'd hoped you would help me out with it.

In all it takes her two and a half hours to finish the letter, filling it to the brim with her reasoning and thought process as well as including the story of why she has the question at all (even though she figures that probably means Leona will find out about her willingly talking to another Hufflepuff). By the time she finishes the water is green outside the window and most of the remaining Slytherins are awake and lounging around waiting for breakfast to open.

Nia arrives before Elspeth and watches Rajani work on the last bit of her letter. "Is that for you parents?" She asks once Rajani has signed and begins blowing to dry the last few lines of ink.

She shakes her head. "Ed actually. I had a question for him - prefect stuff otherwise I would have asked you and Els. None of the other Slytherin prefects stayed over break and since, well, we dated I thought he might be open to taking some time to help me out."

Nia waggles her eyebrows knowingly. "Ah yes, the old beau. Does the new one know you still talk?" She teases.

Rajani rolls her eyes, smirking at her friend's antics. "You're worse than Clary sometimes, has anyone ever told you? But yes, Trevor knows that Ed and I are still friends and our breakup was amicable. He also knows that this is basically a for-fun rebound relationship for me. Any other questions?"

Nia shrugs. "Just how do you do it? Honestly relationships look so messy most of the time but you make it look so easy."

Rajani grins. "I'm just that good I suppose." She says airily.

Elspeth joins them a few minutes later, still half asleep, and collapses next to Nia with a cut-off groan.

Rajani immediately starts feeling awkward, double-checking that the letter is folded properly and standing.

"I should probably get this sent before breakfast - I presume a lot of people use the owlery to send presents and such around this time and I want to beat the rush."

Nia shrugs. "There really isn't one, but okay you do you. See you at breakfast Raj."

Rajani isn't sure if she imagines Elspeth's suspicious gaze following her all the way out of the common room, but imaginary or not it weighs heavily on her.

She feels a bit lighter once she enters the dungeon corridors but she's looking forward to mailing the letter and forgetting about the whole fiasco for a while. Perhaps she'll go out to Hogsmeade for a proper shopping trip today - she's pretty sure she can convince Professor Whinging to allow it - some sob story about getting presents for her friends without them seeing ought to do just fine.

She's surprised to find someone else in the owlery when she arrives, and she's more surprised to realize she knows him.

"Good morning Adrian." She says, pointedly louder than she probably needs to but it's worth it when the fifth year Gryffindor prefect yelps and nearly drops the package he's carrying.

He glares at her when he turns. "Not okay." He grumbles.

"Payback for the Quidditch match." She replies cheekily. "Christmas gift?" She guesses, gesturing to the package.

He nods awkwardly. "For my little sister Penny. She went home for Christmas but she was this close to skipping since I stayed to study. I thought I'd send her something a little early."

Rajani laughs and ruffes his hair as she makes her way over to Lakshmi's cage. "Look at you, such a thoughtful big brother. I wish Sahana had been so cognizant of my needs."

Adrian makes a face and fixes his hair. "If you were like this with her too I'm not surprised she wasn't."

Rajani hits him with a snowball.

Adrian is a weird case for her. He's a Gryffindor, yes, but since she met him as a prefect first she sees him mostly as a coworker. A cute, annoying, little brother of a coworker. As such she finds it oddly easier to talk to him than the Gryffindors in her own year (though of course they don't exactly make it easy to talk to them).

For his part Adrian had started out as wary of the Slytherins as they were of him, but he's gotten so comfortable that he apparently even said hello to Alana in their Transfiguration class a few weeks before. She hadn't exactly been happy with him but the rest of the Slytherin prefects had found the incident both hilarious and adorable.

She's pulled out of her reverie when a return snowball smacks her in the shoulder.

"Hey, I'm not even in my proper cloak you twit!" She shrieks, laughing despite herself. She quickly gives the letter to Lakshmi with instructions to take it to Ed before she turns back to the younger boy.

"You did start it." He says innocently, tying his own package to a hardy-looking snowy owl and setting him out into the crisp early morning air. "Really you guys started it with that Quidditch match. What was with Leacock flinging his bat like that?"

Rajani groans as they make their way back down the tower together. "Trust me he got reamed for that. It won't be happening again - and you losers will be put back in your place next year, just you wait and see. Alas has big plans for the team."

They split at the base of the owlery by unspoken agreement - neither really wants to be seen walking into the Great Hall together. For as fun as he is Adrian is still a lion. And if Rajani is embarrassed by the idea of being caught conversing casually with a Hufflepuff she'd be absolute mortified if she was caught with a Gryffindor.

Nice as Adrian is, he's not worth her reputation. Not by a long shot. So she heads to breakfast and sits with Nia and Elspeth and laughs with them over nothing much, all of her earlier concerns pushed away for the moment.

Ana is surprised when her father is the one who picks her up from the airport. Alexander Vulchanova is usually far too busy for such menial tasks, but Ana is pleased to see him nonetheless.

"Father." She greets him politely on the platform as he loads her trunk and Dracula's terrarium onto a cart with a flick of his wand.

He smiles at her slightly. "Ana, you've grown again."

She hadn't noticed if she's honest, but she wouldn't be surprised if it was true. She's gained several centimeters of height in the past few years and is easily the tallest in her friend group now, with only Shaun getting close.

Her father continues. "You're looking more and more like a young lady and less like my little girl." He glances at the cart. "I suppose you could have loaded these yourself."

Ana can sense that her father is about to go into one of his rare sentimental moments and she'd really rather he not so she quickly begins pushing the cart. "Indeed. In fact Alec has already been helping me acquire the required forms to apply for early admission into the Curse-Breaking apprenticeship next year. If I'm accepted I'll begin in the summer after graduation rather than in the fall so I'll complete it faster and be able to get into the field by the time I'm nineteen rather than twenty."

Her father has an odd look on his face. "You're quite close with Alec Macmillan these days." He observes.

Ana blinks. "I suppose so. He's quite a good source of information, and he's a friend of the family - it's all quite convenient."

Her father looks at her for a moment longer before he seems to make up his mind about something. "It's the oddest thing - we became friends with them because you were close with their younger son, and yet I hear far more about Alec than Alasdair these days."

Ana shrugs. "Alasdair is... we're still friends I suppose, of a sort. It's all rather complicated with school you see. The Slytherins all keep to themselves and the rest of us keep away. I don't understand it entirely myself but everyone seems rather content with the arrangement."

Alexander looks slightly confused but doesn't ask any further questions on the topic. "You're getting along well with your classmates then?"

Ana nods. "I actually was hoping to speak with you and mother on that topic. I'm aware the Boot family is no longer considered to be pureblooded but I was hoping we might extend them an invitation to our New Year's party this year. Their son Jerome is a very close confidant of mine, he was present as support for my first Animagus transformation."

Her father hums. "You will have to ask your mother, the party is her project more than mine, though I don't see why it would be a problem."

Ana doesn't mention that every other one of their friends are pureblooded and until meeting the other students she had been convinced that blood purity dictated at least fifty percent of a witch's worth. But she thinks it might be more prudent to keep that to herself.

"I will ask her when we arrive home then." She decides.

Her father clears his throat. "Actually your mother isn't home at the moment. She's over at the Macmillan's - Mareum apparently Floo-called earlier this afternoon absolutely distraught about something and your mother went right over. It's why I picked you up today."

Ana nods slowly. It's likely nothing - Mrs. Macmillan is well known to be overdramatic - but she does worry just slightly. She also wonders who had picked up Alasdair, and if it was Alec why he didn't come say hello.

"Well, I'll ask her when she arrives home then. Perhaps I could show you my Animagus form while we wait?" She suggests, and is quite pleased when her father beams.

"My little girl, an Animagus. I would love to see your form Ana, I'm just surprised you aren't tired of showing it."

Ana does smile slightly at that. "I was a cat more often than I was human for a few days after the initial change but once everyone had seen the form there wasn't much more to it. Besides I quite enjoy being a cat - it's an entirely unique perspective from ours, I can sense things I never could in this body."

"It must be quite something." Her father agrees. "I can't even begin to imagine."

They take the Knight bus home and Ana floats her trunks up to her room on her own, showing off a bit by casting the levitation spell wordlessly. Once she's unpacked - mostly using magic again, it really is wonderful no longer being under the Trace - and has cleaned Dracula's terrarium - which she actually does by hand as she's almost gotten to enjoy it after years of doing so - she finally heads downstairs to show her father the most impressive bit of magic she can do.

The transformation is completely seamless now, the agony she felt the first time nothing more than a half-forgotten memory after so many easy shifts.

She barely notices the awe on her father's face as she's once again surrounded by a million more stimuli than she can process as a human.

A few scents she can name - the lingering of her own human smell, a faint trace of Dracula - but more are entirely new. She pads around the living room, exploring curiously so she can put names to everything she's experiencing.

She's also seeing several colors mixed in where she'd never noticed them before - old stains on the wood floors, new shades of brown and red on the gold tassels of the drapes. She thinks her own house might actually be more interesting than even the Ravenclaw dorms which had proven to have even more stars on the ceiling that she'd thought.

She's then struck by the question if her own room's ceiling might have additional stars as well, and she bounds off towards the stairs.

Her father calls after her - and wow his voice sounds different when she's this size - but she only waves her tail in reply, intent on her mission.

The carpet is incredibly soft under her paws, and Ana spares a thought to be impressed by how clean it's actually kept. Even the Hogwarts carpets aren't as nice on her sensitive pads.

She can both hear and feel the vibrations of her father following her up the stairs, and when she thinks about it she's still slightly blown away by how much more she can sense in this form, despite how much smaller she is.

Unfortunately when she arrives at her room she finds the same nonsensical mess she always sees - she supposes as it was charmed by a human, rather than a massive magical entity like Hogwarts, it would only be attuned to the human eye. Still she decides to explore her room a bit more, and adds a mental note to start working on fixing the ceiling so it actually resembles the sky again. It may still look nice but as a NEWT Astronomy student the glaring inaccuracies can get quite irritating.

She noses around for a bit as her father catches up. She's not sure if he's really so out of shape or if she can just hear his heavy breathing a lot better than she normally would be able to. She doesn't really consider the question very much, instead exploring the incredibly familiar space with new eyes. After a few minutes she decides to morph back human, hopping onto her bed so that she won't be sprawled out on the floor.

"That was quite something." Her father sounds almost awed, and Ana smirks proudly.

"It certainly is." She agrees. "Mother does an excellent job cleaning the carpets by the way, I can see and smell a lot more as a cat and they still seemed spotless."

Her father smiles. "You'll have to tell her yourself. Hopefully she'll be home soon or you and I may be on our own for dinner."

Ana shrugs. "We should be alright, I can use magic now and I do recall some of what mother attempted to teach me when I was younger. I do wonder what Mrs. Macmillan was so worried about - if mother's been gone so long it may be something rather important."

Her father hums noncommittally. "It may already be sorted out and your mother is just visiting now. She and Mareum get on quite well you know, I'd even say they're best friends."

Ana taps her fingers down the banister in reply as the two of them make their way back to the living room. "Well even if mother does plan to return for dinner perhaps we can surprise her with it already being on the table."

Her father looks amused. "I do hope you mean you can surprise her, I have a few reports to finish and your mother has made very clear that I'm not allowed in her kitchen."

Ana shrugs and the two split in the hallway, her father to his study and Ana into her mother's beloved kitchen.

She knows where the cookbooks are kept, and she looks through them for something that appears relatively simple. For all her theoretical knowledge she's never actually cast any cooking spells and she knows theory only gets you so far.

She's about halfway through a spaghetti recipe when her mother finally returns, and she thinks she's doing alright. At least until Winona tuts lightly and joins her at the counter.

"Not bad, but let me show you a trick your grandmother taught me."

Ana wouldn't admit it, but it's actually surprisingly fun and relaxing to help her mother in the kitchen. She stands by her refusal to learn earlier but she can grudgingly appreciate now that it's not only a useful skill but quite a difficult one.

Winona calls Alexander to dinner while Ana sets the table and divides the meal into three equal servings. Once they've sat down Ana realizes that her mother looks exhausted. She'd been too focused in the kitchen to catch the signs, but now that she's paying attention Winona looks drained.

Alexander notices as well. "Everything alright with Mareum dear?" He prompts with clear concern.

Winona exhales. "Yes, everything is most likely fine. Ana dear, when was the last time you communicated with Alec?"

Ana blinks. The question feels distinctly like a non sequitur and she'd call her mother out on changing the topic if it wasn't for the answer. "Nearly three weeks actually. My last letter to him was returned undelivered - I had presumed there was bad weather and planned to try again tomorrow." She leans forward. "Is he alright? Did something happen?"

Winona gestures vaguely, somehow still prim even when rattled. "Most likely not. His entire camp and most of the surrounding area has been quarantined as a preventative measure - there's a dragon pox outbreak in the area." Her voice somehow remains light despite the fact the sentence had put a pit of dread in Ana's gut. "Mareum only learned about it today and she hasn't heard from Alec in two months so she was concerned. It's good you spoke to him more recently Ana, she'll be happy to hear that."

Ana nods quietly. Dragonpox. The term is used to terrify young children into doing their chores, and somehow it becomes so much worse when you grow up and realize that dragonpox really exists and there's no cure for it. It's an instant death sentence, and is highly contagious to boot.

"You said they got the quarantine up to prevent infection right? Not to contain it? So logically none of the Curse-Breakers in his camp are infected." She says, aware she's speaking a bit too fast but unable to slow down. Her left hand lifts to tap at the pendant around her neck, forever engraved onto her being through her Animagus form.

She's not quite sure what happens over the rest of dinner. What she does know is that she asks to be excused quite early on and retires to her room. Inside a silk-lined pocket she'd added to her trunk is the snake bracelet Alec had sent her for her birthday. She still usually wears the one Eric had gotten her, but now she swaps the two before lying down on her bed.

The small logical part of her brain that's still working notes that her entire reaction to the news is nearly as overblown as Mareum Macmillan's can get, but the larger part of her mind can't seem to shake the image of Alec the last time she'd seen him.

With a small shock she realizes that it's been nearly two years since the last time she'd seen him in person. She'd not come home the previous winter break so she had still been fifteen the last time he'd seen her, half-grown and gawky.

Oh, and she'd hated him. Or at least told herself so much.

She sighs and rolls onto her stomach to look at Dracula in his terrarium. For once he's actually looking back rather than sleeping, and she decides to take advantage.

"Cleary I'm being illogical." She tells the fire salamander. "What I need to do is determine why that is. How can I do that?"

Dracula, of course, does not answer, and she sighs again. Whoever said pets were good to talk to was utterly barmy. "You're no help. Let's see, perhaps we should start by listing what reactions are illogical. Isolate the problem." She nods, already feeling better now that she has a clear plan of action.

She rifles through her trunk as she starts reciting the questions she wants to consider. "Why did learning about the dragonpox outbreak in Peru make it feel like the floor fell out from under me? Why am I so concerned for Alec's safety when I know he's most likely perfectly alright? Why does the idea of never seeing him in person again make me feel sick?"

She pauses when she hears herself. "Not seeing him again scares me." She says, softly, testing the solution uncertainly to see how well it fits. Her stomach rolls and she sits back on her heels, the search for parchment forgotten.

"The idea of never seeing him again scares me." She repeats. "I want to see him again."

She doesn't know how long she sits on the floor silently, overwhelmed by the sudden awareness of feelings she hadn't realized she'd even had until now.

She'll need to add to her letter to Alec. And perhaps include a Christmas gift - no, definitely include a Christmas gift. But first she needs to write to Jerome.

He'd confessed his crush to her after all. Only fair she keep him appraised of hers.

Myr doesn't know how his sister does it.

She picks him up and King's Cross when he arrives home for break, informing him that she gets to "keep" him for a week for proper sibling bonding time, and within five minutes of being in the car she asks if his new crush is cute.

"How? How could you possibly know that I have a crush?" He demands, not bothering to deny it. Cadi has always been great at reading people, particularly her own family.

She laughs. "Honestly? You're the same age I was. Well, about anyway. Also I saw you watching that cute brunette while you were waiting for me."

Myr grumbles. He honestly has barely spoken to Amanda since the study incident over a month before but he's seeing her everywhere now - the library, the Great Hall, in the hallways. He's learned she's actually a Ravenclaw, not a Hufflepuff like he'd thought (She hadn't had her tie on during the study session and her familiarity with both Roderik and Jemma had led to assumptions on his part). Her twin sister Melody is in Hufflepuff though, and they like swapping robes to confuse the staff. Supposedly they're identical but Myr can always tell them apart, even when they're trying to trick people. She usually has her hair in a high ponytail while Melody always keeps hers down - it's how everyone else tells them apart.

Not that he's been stalking her. He's just happened to notice things is all.

"So? What's her name and how badly have you screwed up trying to talk to her?" Cadi prompts teasingly.

"I didn't! I... mostly just haven't talked to her. Her name is Amanda, and anyway she's two years younger than me - only fourteen. It's weird."

Cadi scoffs. "I dated an older man for a while, so that's a stupid reason not to pursue it. Which House is she? Not Slytherin obviously or that would have been reason number one."

Somehow by the time they're back at her flat Myr has told Cadi everything he knows about Amanda, even her cute smile.

"Well little brother, I deem you well and truly screwed. You really like this girl, nothing can be done. You'll have to ask her out." Cadi declares gravely as she helps him carry his trunk and Owen's carrier up the stairs of the building.

Owen chitters from his carrier, as if in agreement.

Myr huffs. "Hush you, don't encourage her. And no Cadi, I'm not going to ask her out, that would be weird. What would I even say?"

"Hey, I know it's been a while but you're super cute and I'd like to get to know you outside of a study group environment, would you be interested?" Cadi replies briskly as she unlocks her apartment.

Myr grimaces. "Wow, very romantic. Nothing says date me like clinical grammar."

Cadi laughs. "Oh whatever, you get the gist. And I have to point out that you're the one using phrases like 'clinical grammar'."

Myr lets Owen out of the carrier once the front door has been closed and drags his trunk over to the tiny study area that's been converted into a temporary guest room for him. "Enough about me, if you're so interested in romance how come you're not looking for any yourself?"

Cadi flashes him a Cheshire grin, leaning in the doorway of the room as he kneels to start unpacking. "Who says I'm not? You remember Wyniteg from a couple summers ago? We meet up sometimes for lunch and she's got a super hot older brother."

Myr chokes. "Okay, I regret asking, you win. Entirely new topic?"

Cadi laughs. "Oh fine, we'll table this. How's school going this year? I remember sixteen being a hellish age for both hormones and schoolwork."

Myr shrugs. "No exams but we're already having to prepare for NEWTS, and there have been a lot more assignments and essays to complete. I'm glad I'm only taking five courses for the next two years, any more and I would definitely be failing something."

Owen wanders between Cadi's legs and into the room them, nosing around curiously and ending up inside Myr's trunk, where he promptly decides to take a nap on top of the clothes Myr had been trying to unpack.

He laughs. "Alright I guess I'm done with this for now. How about you, how's work?"

Cadi makes a face. "Whoever said loving what you do means you'll never work a day in your life is a filthy liar. Overall it's pretty decent, I've met a couple people through Wyniteg so I'm definitely on the short list for dealing with the magical world but for now I'm stuck filing for boring old Muggles."

Myr smirks. "You're a boring old Muggle you know." He points out.

Cadi shakes her head proudly. "I'm a Squib, it's different. Wyniteg says there's an increased chance my kids will be magical even if I marry a Muggle."

Myr shrugs. "I mean your neices and or nephews will almost definitely be magical so there's that as well."

Cadi grins knowingly. "So there will be nieces and nephews? You know mum and I wondered for a while if you might not like girls, you know, romantically."

Myr makes a face. "Of course I do, who else would I like? And somehow we're back on this topic."

"You brought it up." Cadi points out with a grin. "But fine, moving on. Again. What do you feel like for dinner?"

They actually manage to keep off the topic of romance for a few hours after that as they cook dinner and chat about school and work and the magical world.

"You know, if you wanted to get a job in Diagon Alley or something I bet mum would't mind you staying with me over the summer." Cadi points out. "It would probably look better on your resume to have some magical job experience when you graduate in a couple years."

Myr makes a face. "I mean, yes but..." He hesitates. He hasn't actually told anyone his most recent ideas for his future, but he supposes he needs to start somewhere and his sister will likely be open-minded. "I'm thinking of applying to Muggle universities. I've been keeping up with school as much as possible over the summers, and I'm thinking that after graduation I might just dedicate a year to getting a high school diploma and taking a few SATs." He risks a glace at Cadi's face and she's frowning. His stomach twists. "You know, just thinking. Nothing is set in stone, I'm only sixteen like mum always says." He hurriedly adds.

His sister hums. "No it's a good idea, if it will make you happy. You definitely should tell mum, and maybe your professors? I'm not sure how that would work at Hogwarts but I don't see why they couldn't set something up for you."

Myr shrugs noncommittally. It really is a new idea he's been toying with - only in the past week has it solidified into a set concept - so he hasn't really thought too deeply about how to go about achieving it if he decides to go for it.

Cadi tuts. "Well, I'd make up your mind soon, you're halfway through your sixth year already." She tilts her head thoughtfully. "Although, Hogwarts does sort of end earlier than standard schooling - you could take a year off and still be young enough to convince people you're coming out of homeschooling. All things to think about I suppose."

Myr just shrugs again. "Don't mention it to mum for now, okay? I'll make up my mind by the end of the school year and tell her then, I don't want to stress her out or anything."

His sister snorts. "You can't stress her right now, trust me."

Myr raises an eyebrow, finally looked up at Cadi properly. "What do you mean? Something good happen?"

Cadi grins conspiratorially. "Depends on your definition of 'good'. Mum has a new boyfriend. I'm not supposed to say but honestly I don't know how they expected me to keep quiet for a whole week."

Myr blinks, his mind immediately forgetting the previous conversation to make way for the numb shock that settles through every crevasse of his brain. "...She what?"

His sister laughs. "You should see your face. It makes sense to me, but I guess you've been away so much you haven't really seen it coming have you?" She ruffles his hair sympathetically. "It's probably a good thing I told you then, rather than having it sprung on you next week."

Myr is still flailing for words, but he manages to process enough of Cadi's statement to formulate another question. "Saw it coming? You know the guy?"

His sister grins. "You do too Myr. I even mentioned it a few times in my letters - a while ago, yeah, but I still did."

Myr tries to remember what she's talking about - Cadi hasn't really sent him letters in a few years, not since she graduated and got a job - but he pulls up a blank.

Cadi laughs. "It's Uncle Cyril Myr. He and mum have gotten really close since you started at Hogwarts - I think losing that major secret about dad and wizards is what did it. They're going to tell you when you get home next week so act surprised, okay? I seriously wasn't supposed to mention anything."

Myr still feels weirdly numb. He manages to nod weakly before excusing himself for bed, mumbling some sort of excuse though he honestly couldn't say what it was.

He doesn't manage to fall asleep for quite some time, his brain desperately swirling as it tries to see the signs of the blooming romance between his mother and uncle that Cadi had claimed to be obvious. When he finally drifts into a restless sleep he still can't think of any.

The rest of the week his sister steers clear of the topic, which he's both thankful for but also a bit irritated by - it means he's not really able to fully come to terms with what the new relationship is going to mean for the family. As such he's still effectively blindsided when his Uncle picks him up and asks him quietly if he'd be okay with Cyril proposing to his mother just before they take the Floo back to the shop.

Myr just blinks owlishly at his uncle for a good minute while Cyril shifts uncertainly from foot to foot.

"That... seems kind of fast." Myr finally stammers out once he can find his voice again.

Uncle Cyril looks uncomfortable. "Well, yes, perhaps. We'd hoped Cadi would get you used to the idea." He replies.

The two stand in the fireplace awkwardly for another minute before Myr grabs a handful of Floo powder and tosses it in, enunciating his uncle's shop's name clearly but quietly before stepping through the green flames.

He knows it's not the response his uncle was hoping for, but honestly he's not sure he's okay with Uncle Cyril marrying his mother.

He really wishes Cadi had braced him better than she had.

His mother is in the shop when he steps out of the fireplace and she immediately puts down the inventory she'd been stocking to pull him into a hug.

"Myr! Have you gotten taller again?" She draws back to look him over with a critical eye. "We'll need to take your robes out again."

He shrugs away from her. "Mum we can't stand in front of the fireplace." He reminds her, stepping aside just in time for Uncle Cyril to come through. "I'm going to go drop off my trunk and let Owen out of his carrier. I'll be back." He quickly excuses himself and heads for home, dragging his trunk and his whining cat along with him.

He doesn't look back, not wanting to see the worry on his mother's and uncle's faces. He honestly can't deal with them right in that moment.

He gets home without any trouble and Owen is clearly thrilled to be back in the familiar house as he promptly starts rubbing over everything he can get his paws onto.

"Well I'm glad you're happy at least." Myr sighs as he collapses onto his bed, deciding to unpack later when his head will hopefully hurt less. "I just don't get it, this seems way too sudden to me." He announces, whether to Owen or the ceiling he isn't quite sure.

Regardless he's met with silence, not that he'd expected anything else. He sighs again and rolls onto his stomach, staring over the edge of his bed at his opened trunk. A pile of robes, textbooks, and parchment stares back at him, as does the elegant Larch wand Holly had sold him over two years ago now. He smiles faintly - despite have spent an even amount of time with both of his wands he can barely remember his first one anymore. Holly had certainly been right on that count.

His mind jumps from there to his recent contemplations on leaving the wizarding world entirely. If he were to attend a Muggle university he'd likely get a Muggle job. And if he did that he'd likely marry a Muggle as well, and the Statute of Secrecy would mean he'd never get to use magic again until their children possibly got their Hogwarts letters.

He drops his face onto his comforter, groaning softly, and then startling when he feels a whiskery nose push against his ear.

Owen startles as well, jumping back and staring at him wide-eyed and hurt.

Myr laughs breathlessly. "You scared me, sorry. Come on, c'm'ere." He reaches out for the black fur ball who hesitantly noses back over, sniffing Myr's offered hand a few times before deciding that pets are worth the risk and butting against Myr's palm with his head.

Petting Owen is surprisingly calming, and Myr feels the slight panic that had been building up just under his skin sliding away to the rhythm of Owen's purrs.

"Maybe I'm overthinking all of this. If mum is happy that's good, right? It's not my decision anyway and I can get used to it." That doesn't feel quite right but it makes him feel better so he decides to stick with it for the moment. "And maybe I should get a summer job in Diagon Alley. I bet Holly knows who's hiring. I can stay with Cadi this summer and see what working in the wizarding world would be like." He nods to himself, sitting up and earning a discontented mew from Owen, who headbutts his hand again in an attempt to get him to resume the petting.

Myr hums and gives in to his cat, leaning back against his headboard. It isn't a perfect plan, but he does feel a bit better about things. And he has plenty of time to properly think it over later - for now he just has to get through the New Year and he can go back to school where things are less stressful.

I think Ana is my favorite this year. I know, don't have favorite kids, but really so many of her major story beats happen this year how can I not love her a bit more? Anyway, first chapter written in nearly a month so hopefully the quality didn't drop OTL Next time will have some more Jerome/Ana friendship, Amanda and the twins, and some romantic drama~ Only two more chapters in sixth year!

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I know no one is reading these at this point but the cat who inspired Myr's fur baby Owen's personality passed away today unexpectedly :( RIP Shadow, you were a great friend.

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petitreveur
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Chapter 66: Hi Dani, you prolly wouldn't expect a comment on this story but tadah, here I am, finally finishing this amazing fic within three days of cramming!! Man, it's such a cathartic experience, going through seven years with these amazing youngsters in a mere three days :D It really feels like only yesterday Myr was getting his letter rudely dropped on his face, Raj was getting excited about her acceptance letter but her parents seemed more overjoyed with Sahana's prefect election, Franziska bouncing around in Diagon Alley and Ana really wanting to go Durmstrang. Now we have a matured version of them graduating Hogwarts and adulting at their own pace and finally figuring out what they want to do in life and being happy at the same time. I am hearing so many wedding bells <3

Finishing this fic had given me a whirlwind of emotions as I have slowly started to fall in love with all the characters one by one, even though Ana fights me every single time too!! She's really a hard to love lady but I can't seem to hate her as well :P I really like how she grew through the story, I found her very stuck-up and annoying in the beginning but her close-knitted friendship with Jerome at the end was just so sweet and endearing. After all, I realised she just takes time to warm up to people and with a smart brain like her, I can understand why she would love to hang out with the older kids who definitely have more knowledge than her. Ana dear, I think I can forgive you for ditching the your class and hanging out with Eric's class in the earlier years. The dynamics of Alec and Ana are so nice! They are like best friends, colleagues and lovers, all in one, that must be so nice :D

Speaking about Eric, I swear Eric and Laurel are my favourite OTP!! <3 At first, I actually thought that there might be something going on between Eric and Ana until Laurel came into the picture and I'm like NAWW they are so cute together!! And then Emily reminded me that Laurel died in the Battle of Hogwarts and my heart shattered < / 3 Poor Eric and Tori. I still can't come into terms with the fact that Eric is a widower now and Tori had lost his mum :'(

Another part that shocked me to the core was when Queenie died of dragon pox. I was literally so shocked and I had to read Clary's words over and over again to finally realise that my favourite Slytherin is gone :O Granted, this had to happen to stick to canon but it still when there's no more Eugene and Queenie :'( I swear they are the cutest and sweetest couple after Eric and Laurel. The idea of arranged marriage might not be the greatest thing but they managed to work things out so so well with love. I can really sympathise with how broken Eugene must have felt. I never fancied the Slytherins but Queenie was definitely an exception. I love her bubbly character and how she is kinda the most un-Slytherin Slytherin out of her class. Nia and Elspeth are definitely the stereotypes and for some reason, Elspeth was just so dodgy that I immediately linked all the Slytherin pranks to her LMAO (the Ravenclaw slippery staircase confirmed my suspicions that the Year 1 missing steps on the staircase definitely has sth to do with her). Ana's reading on Els during Divination was so on point and really ties up the entire loose thread. I'm very certain that Raj knows about it too but just never publicly called her out but rather quietly tried to clear up her mess bc snakes are supposed to have each other's backs. Dk why, just felt that Els is kinda taking advantage of that principle??

I never have thought that Myr would be Head Boy and you surprised me a lot. I knew Charlie wouldn't be HB cause canon so I was expecting another male Prefect. Plus imagine Charlie being a HB and Quidditch Captain + NEWTs on top of everything, poor boy is gonna burn out XD Kinda had a hunch that Raj would become Head Girl after Jemma's compliment after they broke apart Flint and Wood (+Perce) during one of the sixth year patrol. I only realised that the previous year HB and HG have a say in who's the next year's HB and HG towards the end of the fic (was that in canon that I had just conveniently forgotten?) That means Terrence and Tabs must have recommended the two of them :D Surprisingly, the two make a good pair and I'm glad that Raj is starting to hang out with another non-Slytherin (although the excuse is always Prefect duties :P) Would have really liked it if Raj's and Donaghan's friendship lasted but life happens, people come and goes and it's all part and parcel of growing up and character development so all's good XD Them recommending Saundra to Dumbledore as HG is so amazing and it really shows how much Raj has grown up (and fak, Saundra died too, my heart cracked again!!) Heck, when Raj started to enjoy Tabs' company during patrols in her sixth year, I'm like dang girl, you are doing soooo great!!

Franziska is like the kindest and sweetest lady, I swear!! She literally gives me the girl-next-door vibes and she's so pretty!!! Must be her Veela charms kekeke XD Right from the start, I know that she would be a easy lady to love and she would definitely not fight me, unlike Ana XD She and Stephan, a major yes from me!! Like Penny, I kinda felt that she and Stephan would end up dating and it's even more amazing that they are endgame!! <3 Her righteousness and compassion is going to take her to greater heights and I wonder if she will appear in UFF?? :-)

I think I have covered the major four characters and the side characters are real amazing as well, adding spice and colour to this entire story. I love that everyone is maturing at their own pace, from childish prankers to great people with ambitions and strife in their own ways as they step into adult world. Evie and her wand malfunctions makes me laugh all the time and oh my, she's becoming a Security Troll Trainer, that's just bat cool and crazy and befitting of her!! Remi riding on the Giant Squid was hilarious yet worrying at the same time, and true to himself, he's gonna become a monster hunter HAHAHA Remi never disappoints!! I love how at the end Frannie, Evie, Shaun and Finn was in the same train compartment during first year and it went back full circle to them being real good friends despite being sorted into different house, that's literally so lovely <33

I think I would have to go back to reread CtF to spot all the cameo appearances of our lovely H:aH casts and appreciate them even more cause I know all of them will be doing exceptionally well in their own ways :D I prolly really need to start a character chart for H:aH, CtF and UFF and link all of them together for better references and better appreciation of these amazing works from the greatest you!! With so many deaths in CtF and me just started loving the H:aH kids (now adults), I'm preparing a box of tissues to cry if there are more H:aH kids perishing :'(

This has been great ride and I'm looking forward to the end of CtF that would prolly had me bawling my eyes out but nonetheless, I'm all prepared to kickstart another emotional ride with you in UFF when October starts :-)
shionx
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Chapter 66: thank you for the past 2 years! i haven't been all that active in commenting or updating myself with this fic (idk if you'll even rmb me tbh haha) but i do read it whenever i have the time. it's been a blast reading all the fanatics and unique personalities of each characters hahaha i hope you'll be doing another applyfic soon? xd and much love and thanks for keeping evie in the fic! i thought she would be killed off or something based on her antics :p i'll keep this short cause idk what else to write anymore.

here's hoping that evie jones, our little ball of sunshine, weirdness and chaos brought a spark of happiness and excitement to the story as well helping the story progress to what it is today. much love! xoxo
luv_kero
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Chapter 66: And now, we're at the end. It's so weird seeing the green Completed status on this story and seeing Completed in the title. This story has brought me so much happiness over the past two years. I looked forward to the updates every fortnight and I would always wonder what you'd write about in the upcoming chapter. It's amazing that you were able to update regularly with such long chapters and I'm SO proud of you for finishing this mammoth project. You are an inspiration and I've learned a lot from you as a writer myself. Even though the end seemed far, you kept going and I want you to know that this accomplishment means A LOT.

It's also not easy to juggle so many characters while adhering to canon, but you did it. Like I mentioned before, I love huge character casts in anime, published series, etc., so this was right up my alley. But also, for some reason, whenever I read apply fics, I could never get attached to the characters. If they were OCs submitted by other users and not idols, I never got attached. But I became attached to every character in this story. You made magic happen and brought them to life with your story-telling abilities, and I honestly didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. It felt like I was reading an extended part of the original series and now this is my canon. These are the events that transpired before Harry attended Hogwarts. And even though H:aH is done, I know you're going to weave the same magic with CtF and I am so excited to see what you do with those characters. Even though I don't know most of the submitted characters, I know I'm going to become so attached to them, just like I did with the H:aH kids.

I'm also really happy that my comments were able to help you so much. I couldn't NOT comment, especially since I saw how much effort you were putting into this story. And I liked sharing my thoughts and talking with another Potterhead, since it's been such a long time since I've been able to properly fangirl over this series with someone. None of my close friends IRL are into the Harry Potter series and you're also such a wonderful person to talk to, so it was a no-brainer for me to set aside time to read and comment on each chapter. And I think commenting also helped me become more attached to the characters since I was voicing my thoughts, which made me read more carefully to catch any details you slipped in and try to find clues to things you were referencing in the future. It's been an amazing experience for me to watch these characters grow and to watch you grow as a writer, and I'm forever grateful that you were inspired to create this story and that I found it in time to apply with a character. And I'm even more grateful that we became friends and here's to many more moments of fangirling over the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!! Love you lots, Dani!! <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #4
Chapter 66: Oh my gosh, right off the bat, we're starting with Franziska in a serious relationship, AND I'M SCREAMING BC YESSS IT'S STEPHAN AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY ENDED UP TOGETHER!! *o* AND, OMG, THEY STARTED DATING SO QUICKLY!! A few DAYS after graduation?? Legit, I was expecting weeks or months, like after Franziska adjusted to her new position at the Ministry, but they didn't waste any time!! XD AHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY THAT THEY'RE TOGETHER AND THAT SHE WANTS TO MARRY HIM!!!!! AND, OMG, FITZ AND EVIE ARE GETTING MARRIED, AHHHHHH~~ SO MUCH HAPPY NEWS!!!!! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THEM!!!!!! (it seems like 90% of my comment is going to be me spazzing in caps HAHA) And, omg, I hope Stephan was able to properly propose to Franziska in a romantic and special way, haha, even though she would've already known it was going to happen. XD And I think it's so awesome that Franziska ended up in activism, similar to Rosa. ^^ She would've been great as a Muggle Liaison, but I definitely see her fighting for equal rights for Squibs and Creatures since she's always been such a compassionate girl. ^^ And I totally see her living in a non-magical community, especially since it would be easier for her to meet up with Rosa. :) And, omg, you fit in those canon references to the Sorcerer's Stone so well!! :D We all know that the Golden Trio is more than just a little quirky though, HAHA. :') It's so cool that sweet little Franziska has grown up to be a very capable, passionate young woman and she definitely perfectly embodies what it means to be a Hufflepuff with her hard work and kind heart. :)

Gahhh, the World Cup and the Triwizard Tournament!! :D You are fitting in canon events so so so well, and DUH, Rajani was Percy's predecessor as Crouch's assistant, HAHA. XD It's so cool that she's gradually moving up into the International Confederation, since she's been wanting to do that for so long and I'm so proud of her for getting one step closer to her dream!! ^^ And it's very cool that Clary is so much more confident now as an Auror and I can totally see her slinging insults at the recruits. XD BUT OMG, CLARY AND KINGSLEY???????? LEGIT WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PAIRING AT ALL!!!! Clary definitely has a type, LOOOOOL. XD And it makes sense that they'd get closer since they're both Aurors, hehe. BUT ALSO, WHAT???? ALASDAIR AND NIA??????? ALL OF THESE UNEXPECTED SLYTHERIN ROMANCES, OMG. I'M SHOOK. When and how did they get close???????? :O And, omg, of course Rajani is with another older man. XD And she still loves to openly flirt, just like the good ole days. :') Even though she and Ed don't end up together, I'm glad they're still super close friends which makes me just as happy. ^^ (i wonder how lenox is doing though :O hopefully he's happy with someone else and completely over rajani by now LOOOOL) And I'm glad Eugene is finally at a point where he's able to see other women and let his life progress forward, since Queenie would've wanted that. :) And Rajani isn't illogical for talking to Queenie and I think she's listening to Rajani's words from wherever she is. ^^ Legit, Rajani is what every Slytherin should aspire to be like and I know she's going to eventually reach the top. :)

Awww, that's so sweet that Myr is still working at the bookshop!! ^^ He's such a wholesome boy and this peaceful life does fit him, hehe. :) And I love the cameo from Padma Patil!! :D She barely showed up in the main series, since she was in Ravenclaw and didn't cross paths with the Golden Trio that much, so it's cool to see her working with Myr here!! ^^ And awwwww, it's so cute that Percy visits Myr!! x] But, yikes, this is after the Triwizard Tournament, so things are going to get really bad for Percy soon. >___> Hopefully he finds some solace in Myr's company after he becomes estranged from his family, since it's not going to be easy to push forward when it feels like the whole world is against you. OTL And, omg, YAAAAAY, MYR IS BECOMING A STORE OWNER!! At such a young age too!! :D And Holly is still as passionate and energetic as ever, HAHA. I LOVE IT!! XD And Myr broke up with Amanda?????? :O Granted, she was his first girlfriend and it's relatively uncommon for people to end up with their first love. OTL I wonder why they broke up though. >___< I guess they weren't able to do long-distance?? I know an obstacle they faced was that they didn't have time for each other, so maybe Amanda got too busy once she had NEWTs to prepare for?? Anyway, hopefully the split was amicable and I know they'll find better partners for themselves later on. :) And, omg, OF COURSE Myr doesn't know his new crush's name, HAHA. :') And I can totally see him getting together with a Muggle who knows about magic, since I think he still misses some parts of Muggle life, especially since his mom and sister are basically honorary witches at this point. :P AND OMG, CADI IS PREGNANT????? YAAASSSS, MYR WILL GET A LITTLE NIECE TO SPOIL, HEHE. x] And Tori sounds like an absolute dear and I bet she's the cutest lil bean. ^^ Even though Myr is the only single one of the four, it's sweet that he still has Owen to keep him company and it's totally okay that Myr isn't in a relationship right now. ^^ Everyone goes at their own pace and even though Myr has always been a bit of a late bloomer, he's still just as successful as everyone else. :)

YESSSSSS, Jerome meeting up with Ana makes me so happy, and it's awesome that he and Finnigan are still together!! ^^ Finnigan is so much more chill and open now, which is cool to see and I'm glad that being with Jerome has had such a positive impact on him!! :D Also, Jerome is totally me and I would definitely freak out in the best way possible if I saw alpacas, HAHA. XD AND OMG, JEROME WAS ANA'S MAID OF HONOR??????? THAT'S AMAZING!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW PROGRESSIVE ANA IS, even if she's not necessarily trying to be progressive, LOOOOL. AND JEROME IS A RIOT. YESSSS, BREAK THOSE GENDER NORMS WITH YOUR DRESS, HAHA. Honestly, there was no one better for the position than him and I'm so happy that their friendship is still so strong after so many years. :') And it's so great that Shaun and Aidan made it to the wedding too (but it that there's still prejudice against Muggleborns ;~; I hope they didn't hear any of the mean comments from those Pureblood snobs =/). And it's so cool that prim, proper Ana is living in the wilderness, under the stars, and I love how open she's also become over the years. ^^ And, wow, that was such a moment of vulnerability for Finnigan and I'm glad we still got to learn stuff about him in the end. :) It definitely recontextualizes a lot of his behavior during school, since it couldn't have been easy growing up as a homeless kid. :( That makes me even more happy that he and Jerome found each other, because I feel like Finnigan would have grown up to be a very lonely adult otherwise. AND OMG, NIA IS PREGNANT?? GAH, SO MANY FAMILIES STARTING AND IT'S CRAZY TO THINK THAT THESE KIDS ARE NOW FULL-GROWN ADULTS, AHHHHH. And I think Ana and Alec will have a lovely family with Jerome and Finnigan to dote on the kids, and I hope Jerome and Finnigan can start a family of their own later down the road. ^^ Ana is such a sweetheart and to see her develop from an anti-social, stuck-up child to this wonderfully open-minded, compassionate woman is amazing and I'm so happy that she's content with life. :)
luv_kero
2491 streak #5
Chapter 65: omg the title saying "end of seventh year" Q____Q
i'm not ready for this to end

It's pretty cool to finally get a glimpse into what NEWTs are like, since we never got that in the original series. :') I love your interpretation of what they're probably like, especially through the eyes of the number one student of this year. XD Ana, bless her heart, makes NEWTs seem almost bearable, in spite of their name. :P And I wasn't expecting Clary to ask Ana to send a message to Amelia. :O I guess they used to be friends?? When they were children?? And the divide between Slytherin and the other houses caused them to drift?? That's pretty sad if that's the case. =/ But at least Clary did try a bit, in the end, to show Amelia that she still somewhat cares. >___< And, omg, I hope Aidan didn't have three exams on Wednesday. O___O Thank goodness he's finally graduating, since he won't have to be studying 24/7 anymore and he'll finally be able to sleep like a normal person again. OTL And AHHHH, it's so cute how Ana is reminiscing Alec proposing to her right before her DADA practical and I love love love whenever her wolf Patronus appears!! x] She is so ready to be an adult and I am LIVING for it, because I know she has an amazing future ahead of her!! ^^

And, ooh, is Holly dating an older Muggle now?? :O Did she break up with Emery?? Since, IIRC (but i could be wrong LOL), he was younger than her and a Hogwarts student?? And since she used the word, "university," that seems to imply that her boyfriend is a Muggle, since I don't think there are wizarding universities?? (but, again, i could be wrong LOL so pls correct me if i am!! ^^;) But yeah, it's pretty cool that Remi has chilled out a bunch. ^^ I've definitely liked him a lot more these past few chapters than I have for most of the story. :P And I love these little lake parties, since they're always so much fun!! :D I also think it's super cool that Dumbledore asks the current Head Boy and Head Girl for their input on their potential successors, since it would be hard for Dumbledore to keep track of EVERY student and their qualifications, amidst all of his other duties. And, awwww, that's so sweet of Myr to invite Rajani to the lake party. :') It makes me wish that the Slytherins weren't so cut off from the rest of the school, because that would've been so awesome if their entire year had partied together one last time before leaving Hogwarts. >___< And, omg, of course Evera and Drake wanna jump into the lake from their brooms, HAHA. Never change, my children. :') And I love seeing how much Myr has grown to love Hogwarts, especially compared to how scared and uncertain he was about the whole "being a wizard" situation. He's really matured into such a dependable, courageous young man and I'm going to miss him so much. T^T

It's kind of sad that Rajani's parents didn't come to either of their daughters' graduation... =/ It's a pretty big deal, but I guess, for them, it's not an achievement; it's a given, so there's no need to celebrate it. >___> (sigh, that tiger parent mindset OTL) And I'm really happy that Eugene is feeling better. :) Seventh year was a tough one for him, but he made it. And I think it's so sweet that he's living out Queenie's dream for her. :') I hope he manages to do all of the amazing things that Queenie dreamt of doing for the wizarding world. ^^ And I think it's awesome that he and Rajani will be rooming together. :D In that way, they'll be able to support each other whenever the waves of grief return as they also learn to adjust to adulthood and working in the Ministry. AND YAAAAAY SWEET, SASSY ED IS BACK!! I'M SO HAPPY HE CAME!! (even tho it's partially bc of leona LOOOL but details schmetails~~) Even though it sounds like he's moved on from Rajani and she hasn't been thinking at all about romance this past year because of everything going on, I'm still going to hold onto the small sliver of hope that maybe they'll come back together in the future. :') Regardless, I'm so happy that they're still super close and this scene made me smile so much!! ^^ And I loved the inclusion of Kingsley as well. :) Things were probably really difficult for him as well this past year and it couldn't have been easy to come to Hogwarts for their graduation when his sister wouldn't be there with the rest of her class. ;~; But he's a strong guy and we all know he blossoms even more in the future. :') And I think it's super cute that Rajani met Myr's mom. x] I hope she and Myr keep in touch, because their friendship is too precious to lose. And I think Aster would be a great motherly figure in Rajani's life. :) And CONGRATS to Slytherin for a perfect seven-year win streak!! :D

Oh my gosh, Franziska's sadness is spreading to me, especially because I've been in a super nostalgic mood lately for other reasons, LOL. ^^; Legit, missing things is all I do right now. OTL So Franziska being so emotional over never seeing her friends again is definitely getting to me. ;~; And I love how you've integrated a lot of people's future plans into this section, since it's nice to know where they're all headed after they leave the Hogwarts Express. :') It's super cool that Tyler and Lola are so passionate about brooms, and I also hope that he and Kiera last a very long time!! :) Even though they were a low-key couple most of the time, I think they had the healthiest relationship in the entire year and I'm rooting for them to make it work, even though they'll be long-distance!! :D And I'm happy that my three children are hanging out again. :') Jemma and Donaghan are so adorable, but there's also nothing wrong with living in the dorms, Jemma. XD But I also get that she and Donaghan want to spend as much time with each other as they can, especially since they are an end-game couple. :P And YESSSS, I had a feeling that Evie and Fitzwilliam would end up together!! x] That's so so cute and I hope their relationship also lasts a very long time!! :D And, just like that, the Hogwarts Express is back and I think these kids are all ready for their next adventure. :)

gah, i can't believe there's only the epilogue left...
i'll also save my spiel for the very last chapter
but just know that you've done a phenomenal job with hogwarts: a history
and this is one of my favorite stories of all time
and, above all, you are an amazing writer <3
luv_kero
2491 streak #6
Chapter 64: Awwww, Rajani and Myr doing a school project together of their own volition is super cute and THIS is now my favorite inter-House friendship, even though the story is about to end. :') Just knowing how far they've come, especially this last year, makes this friendship so much more special and I'm really happy that they were paired together. ^^ This friendship is as unconventional as it gets, between a Muggleborn Gryffindor male and a Pureblood Slytherin female (not to mention their ethnic backgrounds and family upbringing), but that's the beauty of it. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you're willing to get to know a person (even if you're kinda forced into the situation at first, LOL), you might find yourself forging a unexpected bond with them. (legit two of my friends who weren't rlly friends before are now super close after a week of vacation together and it makes me so happy when ppl form these unforeseen connections :') life has a funny way of bringing ppl together!!) And that was so considerate of Rajani to compliment Alasdair. ^^ I feel like he's been putting a lot of pressure on himself over the years and with everything that's happening in Alec's life, he probably feels even more pressure to bring home both the Quidditch Cup and the House Cup. Even though he hasn't been the nicest guy in school these last seven years, I gotta cut him some slack, given his situation. >___< And ooh, I wasn't expecting Nia to become a duelist!! Good for her and hopefully she does well in the tournament later on!! :P

Gah, Franziska thinking about never seeing her Hogwarts friends again is also reminding me that the end is nearing. OTL I hope she's making as many memories as she can before graduation. >___< And oops, I always forget that Tyler is on the Quidditch team, since most of the big Hufflepuff Quidditch moments were about Lola. ^^; But, yikes, I feel like I've been forgetting how hostile that Slytherins are to the other Houses, because Rajani is relatively so much nicer than her Housemates are. >___> That insult was definitely unwarranted from Cadfael and I feel bad that Donaghan had to experience that so publicly. =/ And aww, Donaghan still has a soft spot for Rajani, since he didn't even hesitate to defend her. :') I miss that friendship a lot, but I can't really complain since Donaghan is happy with Jemma and the other Hufflepuffs while Rajani is now good friends with Myr. ^^ And just like how it was hilarious that Myr didn't remember Franziska's name, I find it so so so funny that Franziska doesn't know Myr's name. XD And now that I think about it, all of the main four have difficult names to pronounce, HAHA. And I love the little inclusion of our good ole friend Felix Felicis!! x] And, omg, Rita Skeeter and Leona will be a DEADLY combo. The entire world's secrets will be in their hands. OTL NO ONE WILL BE SAFE. NO ONE!! And I definitely agree with Fitzwilliam's observation. Franziska, even though her growth has been the most subtle of the main four, has really become a confident and sociable young woman. :) She was so cute and innocent when she was younger, but now she's truly a mature young adult and I know she's going to do amazing things after graduation. ^^ ALSO, YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS CHARLIEEEEEEE MY BOYYYYYYYYY~~ YOU GET THAT WIN!! YOU DESERVE IT!! And I love love love that it was a callback to Lola's infamous catch back in first year!! :D I miss her. :')

I get where Amelia is coming from, since it could look like Ana is rushing into marriage from an outsider's perspective. Considering how low-key Ana was whenever it came to Alec for the longest time and how young these kids are, I would probably also feel like they're rushing into marriage if I were Amelia. But since this is all about Ana, HECK YEAH IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE AND ALEC COMMITTED TO EACH OTHER FOR LIFE. NOVEMBER 1992 IS WAY TOO FAR. (thank merlin you're writing an epilogue :') bc i think i would cry if we never find out what happens at ana's wedding LOL) And I'm glad we're still getting snippets of Aidan and Ana being friends, even though they're not as close as they used to be. >___< But friends drift and I'm glad that their friendship didn't end up in tatters, at the very least. :') And omg, ahhhhh, it's so awesome that all of the Ravenclaws of their year finally sat together for a meal!! *o* SO WHOLESOME!! I really wouldn't have expected it, considering how anti-social Ana used to be. ^^; I loved their conversation and how Jerome was encouraging Finnigan to open up, which is super sweet of him to do!! x] And wow, I wasn't expecting Finnigan to be so interested in Alchemy and I love how Ana is low-key salty about his private lessons. XD That's the overachieving Ana I know and love. :')

I've gushed enough about Myr and Rajani's friendship, but I just wanna say again that I love their dynamic together and I'm so happy this happened. ^^ This friendship really brings out the best in both of them and we need all of the happy moments we can get before they graduate. :') And awww, it's cute how Percy is embarrassed that he doesn't something and he's trying to hide it. XD Don't worry, kiddo, there's nothing wrong with not knowing Muggle technology, especially considering your upbringing (and there's no telling what arthur thinks a gun is LOOOOOL OTL). And oh man, I completely forgot about Easter break. ^^; I'm happy that Myr finally got a short vacation from Head Boy duties, since he completely deserves it. :) And I totally feel Myr when it comes to being exhausted by change. I'm the type that isn't super open to change and it's been a big learning process over the years to embrace change in my life. Constants are comforting, but I do acknowledge that growth happens the most when you're put in a position that induces change. :) And I'm glad that Myr is feeling better about the situation with his mom and Uncle Cyril. Even though there wasn't much discussion about it, him feeling comfortable and happy in their presence says a lot. ^^

omg it's crazy how there's only one chp of 7th yr left...
i keep thinking there are two bc of the epilogue, but yeah, WOW, they're literally graduating from hogwarts in two weeks...
I'M GONNA CRY AHHHHHH
BanaWarrior
#7
Chapter 21: Oh no, everyone, stop looking weirdly at Ana and Alasdair. There is nothing wrong with a inter-house friendship ;-; But I'm glad they didn't mind the looks and seated together anyway! yey! But I love how they get more talkative and open with each other. I mean, Ana actually started a conversation, Alas actuallu laughed, and they kiiind of made fun of Snape so. I think that's a big win for them xD
It was really nice of Alas to help Ana with Dracula, even if that caught the attention of her mother and oh man, pureblood mothers... See, even Ana had to make sure her mother was not thinking more than it actually was.
Oooohh maaaan! Ana knows about her mother's school friends! The question now is, is that simply deduction, or Ana actually knows about her mother's past? Anyway, I do feel like Winona will take this opportunity to make new friends, after all, she spent many years after her graduation all the way in Bulgaria, so I guess that most friends she and Alexander had, are still there.
Also, it's cute how Ana is enthusiastic to tell her parents about her academics acomplishments so far. And that her mom is proud of her. I think any child that is going to a different house than the one their parents went feel this. And actually, I haven't thought about it in the beggining, but the fact that a she has a Hag for a grandmother is like, if she had a goblin for grandfather. Does it makes sense? (actually, now I wonder, where are Ana's ACTUALL grandparents??? -insert meme of the shocked groudhog-)
On another note, it's still impressive that she actually is learning dark magic at such young age, and I have my theory that she couldn't see Alasdair because his house probably has protections against those type of stuff. And I laughed at "She insulted my ceiling" I can ALMOST hear a tiny bit of a pout in that xD But the bonding moment between mother and daughter is also pretty cute.

It's nice to see that the holidays are going well for Raj. Even if, again, there is this sad and annoying thing of having to hide friendships with other houses :'( And it's also nice that Raj is keeping in contact with some of her yearmates!
I'm laughing at Vandana implying that Sahana has a secret boyfriend. Pureblood mothers are all the same xD Winona just did something similar with Ana right after meeting Alasdair lol And it's cute that Raj is buying gifts even if she doesn't celebrate christmas. Tho again, I'm amused at how quickly her mother agreed when she got to know it was for a Shacklebolt. But their bonding moment was very wholesome.
Oh man, Raj really seems like she just wants to be close to Sahana :') I don't know what happened to those two, but it's nice to see them discussing quidditch and then Sahana offering to talk with Mayra for Raj. (on another note, I laughed angain at the "Sacrad Twenty Eight name drop" and we learned that Sahana and Mayra are problably good friends, and not only roommates :3)
The christmas cards are really funny lol And omg I'M SO SOFT WITH THE "THAT'S WHAT BIG SISTERS ARE FOR" AAKSNDAJSDJASDH <3 I wish they can get closer, because it really seems that Raj wants that and honestly this is adorable.
On a final note, I'm laughing at Eugene's gift, I can see galleons showering him in a very meme-like way xD Tho I guess Queenie helped it, so I think she's also interested in the "Get Raj as the future captain" plan lol Clary's gift is awesome too hahahahahaha And even Lenox sent a cute present!

Wow if even Peeves is bored, that means that the castle is truly empty (what makes me wonder how Peeves deals with the three months of summer vacations). I hadn't think about it at first, but since Frannie is an ACTUAL international student, I guess it's too far for her to go back just for some weeks.
And wait. DUMBLEDORE summoned a snowstorm INSIDE the great hall??? xD I guess he thinks it's safer a controled snowstorm than letting the kids out in the real cold. And I'm sorry Brandon, the fifth years need to release the stress from the OWLS, that's why they are so ruthless xD hahaha
Oh so we got the kids that stayed over for Christmas! Nabila is another international student too, right? Tho I wonder why Brandon, Finnigan and Fitz stayed as well. And I guess the Slytherins are REALLY closed off if even Frannie noticed it. And I'm amused at quiet Nabila being an unstoppable force of snowball-throwing and Frannie specifically targeting Hunter lol
I'm actually surprised that students from a different house can lounge in the common room of another house. Tho I guess fireplaces are really the best place after a day in the snow. And of course that good girl Frannie will defend people that can't defend themselves. Also, well done Nabila hahahahahaha Brandon deserved that. Btw, they really act like siblings lol
Fitz is a sweetie and I'm glad he seems to be making friends. We all know that his own housemates are... a curious bunch. I hope their friendship can last :3 Omg wait. Football. THEY ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL! WHERE IS ALASDAIR WHEN YOU NEED HIM! XD HAHAHAHAHA Just because of their liking for football I'm sure Frannie and Alas could have a good conversation. Tho unfortunately there is the whole "Slytherin against the world" thing going on, so I'm pretty sure this would end like Raj&Don 2.0.

Oh man, I guess Myr REALLY missed his old life, huh? :') At least he can spend the holidays with his family. Owen is the absolute CUTEST thing <3 I totally agree with Cadi, I would be head over heels for the little ball of fur too!
Uh-oh. It seems there is SOMETHING with that wand. Now that I think of it, Cyril must know that a wand chooses the wizard and all that jazz. There is something fishy about the wand he game Myr -squints- But on another note, it's precious and funny that Cadi is trying to get so much info out of Myr haha
Oh man pt.2 Myr REALLY REALLY missed his home and I guess his feelings of not belonging in the magical world are really strong :'( Aster tho. Such an awesome mom! What an amazing human being! No wonder Myr's dad risqued it all to marry a muggle. Aster was worth it :')
But even Aster made the joke about opposite friends with Myr xD But I find it cute that in an age where most boys are "eewww girls" Myr gets along better with the girls. Also, I feel like Aster is so wise. Suddenly I feel like that is she had the power to do it, she would simply end the house rivalry with logic arguments-
So now, seems that we have Prime Minister Cadi on the future and the Myr could work somehwere in the Ministry of Magic. If Cadi was a witch I'm pretty sure she would run for Minister of Magic xD I also love the subtle mention that Cyril is a messy person because he leaves HIS potion stuff lying around, and I hope Owen can stay out of trouble :') Also, something says to me that Cyril gave Myr a cat because it's the most normal of the pets allowed, so it wouldn't create too much of a trouble for Myr carrying him around. And it would be something safe that he can have with him in Hogwarts that makes him remember of home. I'm problably reading too much into it, but oh well. Glad he seems to go back with new resolutions.
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 20: Oh, I'm happy that Myr finally had a great day! Specially because it seems that things aren't going very well for him. Holly, I know you are trying to help, but I think you are only getting Myr more stressed :')
Them complaining about prefects tho. They still didn't realize that two of them will turn prefects in fifth year, it seems xD
Don't give up on flying yet Myr! You didn't even try! Coach Crowell is really strict, but I guess you need to be when the students can fall and crack their heads open if they are not careful. I laughed at the "You like dragons Charlie". I could her the silent "So your argument is invalid" after it hahaha
Oh nice Myr! You did it! We are off to a good start! And oh, his question about brooms is a really good one! Now I want to know the answer xD hahahaha Ugh, a note, why Drake is so adorable?
Also it's nice how Coach Crowell treats everyone equally. He seems a bit harsh but he actually tries to help. And yey! Myr is flying!! And he seems he's good at it!! Coach even congratulated him! I'm so happy for Myr! It's really nice that he faound something he likes AND that he is good at. I think he was the one suffering the most to adapt to Hogwarts.

It's good that Frannie found a rythm that works for her and I can't help but find funny that "it's okay that she's failing Transfigurations because Henry is as well" xD
It's the Hunter curse, what Hunter said is comming true. Poor Frannie. Oh wait. There is a group study!! Maybe they can help! And i'm going a little bit crazy right now because I think this is the first time that two main characters meet. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder where Finnigan is tho. He's the only one missing from the Ravenclaw boys.
Oh wait, the friend Don is waiting, maybe it's Raj! And I will never stop finding it funny how Cian get's even more grumpy when Don is not around XD hahahahahaha "Mr. Pouts-A-Lot" is indeed a good nickname for Cian xD Also, suddenly I'm wondering if everyone remembers Cian's actuall name, because I'm pretty sure McGonagall had called his real name in the sorting cerimony.
And of course that Cian wouldn't study on his own xD And of course Myr wouldn't let Holly flunk. He needs all the scores he can get :') OH so that's why Holly doesn't like talking about Quidditch of flying that much! I hope she change classes. And really it must because the Lions ARE big show offs xD hahahahaha Even idf they have good intentions.
Good student Frannie practicing more. And there it comes a random Slytherin- OMG IT'S ED ASHDKJASKJD LEONA TREATHNED HIM WITH THEIR OLDER BROTHER I CAN'T XD And of course that leona will talk a mile a minute about someone else. :') But we leraned interesting things about the Gryffindor team, Patrick is the Seeker and Sarah is a prefect! So wait, Sarah and Eric are the fifth years prefects of Ravenclaw, right?
What more did we learn? That Leona is apowerful force to be feared because HECK SHE'S JUST A FIRST YEAR AND SHE ALREADY KNOWS SO MUCH HSKADHKAJDAJSD Legit, if Leona was a Slytherin, she would overthrow Voldemort alone and using ONLY her information network xD We also learned that I will never get tired of Don&Cian relationship and interactions I just love those two so much :')
And it's interesting to see the contrast between Frannie and Myr, because to her everything is awesome (suddenly I heard Aidan-) while for Myr, till this point everything is feeling pretty much overwhelming.

Heck, we had a great start already huh? Ana for sure is mad and annoyed. Also, I find it interesting and amusing how the first mention of wanting to use harmful magic actually didn't come from a Slytherin, but a Ravenclaw. Honestly, I think Ana probably if the most dangerous of the first years, she's just too logical to act on her emotions :')
It's funny that Ana is the first main charater so far that is pretty 'meh' about flying (and quidditch to probably lol) And oh heeeck! Evie was the Raven claw girl! I mean, it's not like there was TOO many options to chose from... xD And I find amusing how disunited the Ravenclaw year seems compared with the other houses. Seriously tho, I can understand why Evie was banned from flying. She comletely ignored everything Coach Crowell said about safety. rip u child
In the paragrph about why Ana loves Holloween so much, I can FEEL all the Wednesday vibes I gave her, and I love it xD Ooh presents! Even Baba Inga sent something! Tho somewhat I was expecting a huge crow to make the deliver instead of a normal owl lol
"Evie hasn't yet figured out that Ana hates her" ouch! "Jerry Boot is marginally more tolerable than Evie, though only just" double ouch! Ana is really not there to make friends
Oh wait, there were people mocking her accent? No wonder she's so guarded! And I wonder who is the Hufflepuff who wished her a happy birthday. Somewhat reading close to the restricted section is very Ana. And wow! Some interactions between lil ravens! Still so awkward tho! Nice gifts tho! ANIMAGUS BOOK HELL YEAH! Okay I will control myself. But I'm also happy she is still talking with Alasdair! They seem to make a good pair! Oh hey Sarah!
I'm happy that finally got the book if she wanted to read about the matter that much. And I also feel happy but bad at the same time for her. Idk if it's just me but I think her enjoying Halloween so much finally shows her side that says "hey, I'm just a twelve-year-old" and at the same time it seems like she really misses her home, back in Bulgaria. I wonder if she will ever go back one day. I kinda wish she can, specially if that's the place she relates the most to. And nice that Eric enjoys Halloween too! And awn, her letter is kinda stiff but since it's her first so far, it weirdly makes me soft.

And there is back! People that like Quidditch! hahahaha It's cute how Nia is always trying to make Elspeth to open up. It's almost like... Don and Cian xD hahahahahahaha And not cool bro, whatever is your name Ravenclaw boy (I'm pretty sure it's some upper year, I don't think any of the first years would say something like that). But I guess the insulthit hard with Nia. Her parents were indeed Death Eaters, right? As well as Elspelth's.
It's cute how the older students yake care of the younger students in Slytherin.
Aaaaand here is where we see Rajani having a cultural shock xD She's so prim and proper but the Slytherins are like, the cheer for a World Cup game! (Alasdair would like my comparisson) To be fair, I think Only Slytherin cheers for Slytherin, so they need to make enough noise to compensate for the other houses.
Idk who T is, but it reminds me of Lee Jordan being called out by McGonagall because he clearly supports Gryffindor xD But T is a fun Announcer I think.
And wow! Raj that was impressive! Eugene is right, if you are already catching up plays like this, you will be an awesome Captain! And I quite like the Captain Rajani Misra idea! :D And see, my theory was correct, only Slytherin celebrates when Slytherin wins, so of course that they need to make a whole lot of noise. And poor Raj, she just wanted to talk with her sister :') It makes sense that Alasdair would be interested in Quidditch. He likes football, right? And Eugene, what are you doing, trying to put Raj and Alas against each other? xD hahaha
I guess that not even Nia can get Elspeth out of her shell sometimes. And idk... it feels kind of wrong that Raj is hidding her friendship with Don? I mean, it looks like she's ashamed and there is nothing to be ashamed. Although Nia is quite agressive on her views, I'm sure not all the first years are like her. Anyway, it's still cute how close the girls got. And I'm laughing at the jab at Eugene. And now I also wonder where the heck Cadfael and Alasdair go. Are they even friends? They were the two that bickered in the first day dinner, weren't they? Oh well, mysteries for the next chapters!

Also, I'm late with the review, sorry :') But in the mean time I checked the sequel and I had some ideas :3
luv_kero
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Chapter 63: Fitzwilliam is such a sassy boy nowadays and I love how he's opened up even more after his confession to Franziska. I feel like he was holding himself back quite a bit before and now that the air has finally been cleared on that front, he can fully let go and be himself. :') SUCH GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! WE STAN!! :D And yaaaaay, it's been awhile since we've had Hagrid appear and I love how well you write him!! ^^ I can just imagine our big-hearted half-giant friend interacting with these kiddos and now I wish this could be made into a movie series of itself. x] And wait, omg, what happened to Nabila's Erumpent?? :O I remember it being mentioned way back, since she was so happy to own one as a pet, and now I'm sad to hear that she no longer has one. =/ I also love that Franziska and Brandon are talking again, since I've missed them, but it was definitely the right call for them to break up. I think Franziska has matured past him, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. They function much better as friends and this Christmas is proof of that. :) But also, ahhhh, yaaaaay, more Adeline!! *o* And we even get Cassie and Zoe too, yaaaay!! :D Channer definitely would not be engaging in any snowball shenanigans, but this is right up the girls' alley. XD And, omg, yessss, Zoe for sure would betray her team for the LOLZ and the pictures, HAHA. Such a fun Christmas break!! :D I can't believe this is the last one they'll experience at Hogwarts together and now I'm getting emotional. OTL HOW CAN WE LET GO??

Aw man, poor Myr. He's really having a rough seventh year and it's only halfway over. OTL He's going to have to confront the inevitable conversation he has with his mother and Uncle Cyril about their relationship sooner or later, but I suppose that'll be the last thing he ends up resolving, considering he won't be seeing them until graduation since he didn't go home from Christmas. >___< And, omg, I had no idea that Adrian was Penelope's older brother!! What a fun little canon tie-in!! ^^ And Lee Jordan is just the cutest lil bean (now that Oliver has grown up a bit HAHA) and I love how wild he is already. :') A fitting addition to carry out the Weasleys' twins reign of terror at Hogwarts, LOOOOOL. But, man, what a heavy gift from Uncle Cyril, even though Myr has sort of moved on. I think there's still a small part of him that will always be affected by any reminders of his father, even if he tells himself that he doesn't feel anything. >___< And, awww, Melody is such a great sister!! ^^ I love how close she and Amanda are, and she really does fit the role of prefect really well. :) And I think it's hilarious that Myr doesn't remember Franziska's name at all, LOLOLOL. Another reminder that the main four aren't close at all, with the new exception of Rajani and Myr finally working together this year. :P Also, Myr is such a wonderfully mature boy and I wish all boyfriends could be more like him. OTL (IRL, my friends have been dealing with so many immature boys lately and I'm just like WHY ARE BOYS SO DUMB LOL)

Oh no, poor Eugene. ;~; I understand how he feels, even though I personally wouldn't lash out at anyone for moving on more quickly. People mourn at their own pace and some people are better at accepting grief than others are. And, especially since this is very situational, with Eugene's identity being so closely tied to Queenie's for so many years, it's even more difficult for him to let go. :( But Rajani has been coping in her own way and she's also had a lot of other things to deal with, which has probably helped her sort of process her emotions throughout the year. It's a tough situation all-around for them and the holidays tend to magnify emotions even more. :'( But, oooh, I do wonder who'll be casting Patronuses in this year!! :D That's always super fun and I imagine maybe one or two of them will get the hang of the spell by the end of the year, since we've got some very smart kids in this class. ^^ I hope Rajani can do it, but I'm not sure she'll be able to with the cloud of Queenie's death still hanging over her and I don't know which happy memories she would draw from. >___< But maybe something will happen before the year ends?? Who knows?? And now I'm wondering what Sahana's happy memories were. :O And, LOOOOOL, I wasn't expecting Rajani to meet Amanda while on a date with Myr. XD It was such a stiff, formal meeting, HAHA. :') I don't think Rajani needs to worry about Myr saying anything bad about her to Amanda. He's not the type to do that and even though she can come off a bit strong, since she wasn't too thrilled about having to hand-hold him in the process at the beginning, it's not like she's ever been rude or unfair to him, despite their House rivalry. They've got a very amicable relationship and I think I've been enjoying their scenes the most this year so far!! :)

AHHHHHHHHH, THE DEVELOPMENT!!!!!! ANA USED TO BE SO ANNOYED BY ALEC'S SMUG SMILE. NOW SHE LOVES IT. AHHHHHHHHH, PLS HOLD ME BC THIS IS SO SOFT!!!!!!! And it's so cute that Eric still sends Ana presents, since it's been awhile since they've last talked and seen each other. :') Never forget Ana's first friend at Hogwarts!! BUT ALSO, UMMMMMMMMM, I AM SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG~~ THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!! I WASN'T EXPECTING THIS AT ALL!!!!!!!!! THE PROPOSAL WAS SO CUTE OMG THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST THING EVER I AM LIVING YET DYING AT THE SAME TIME BC ANA AND ALEC ARE OFFICIALLY GETTING MARRIED AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WHO WOULD HAVE EVER THOUGHT THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN TO ANA???????? NOT ME. AND HER PATRONUS MATCHES HIS, AHHHHHHHHHHHH~~ SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY ARE LEGIT THE BEST COUPLE IN THIS STORY. HANDS-DOWN. SORRY MYR AND AMANDA. SORRY JEMMA AND DONAGHAN. BUT ANA AND ALEC ARE MY OTP FOR LIFEEEEEEEEEE~~ And I really do wonder who Ana's maid of honor will be if it's not Hannah. :O She isn't really close to any other females and it is a very important role to fulfill, especially since their wedding will likely be very traditional. BUT DETAILS DETAILS, THEY'LL FIGURE THEM OUT LATER, HAHA. And, omg, Alasdair is so salty, poor guy. OTL I still think he's had a secret crush on Ana all of these years, which is why he refuses to congratulate her and Alec. >___< BUT HONESTLY, WHO CARES BC ANA AND ALEC ARE LITERALLY THE CUTEST AND I HOPE THEY HAVE A LONG, BEAUTIFUL MARRIAGE WITH EACH OTHER FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES, HEHEHHEHEHEHHEHE~~ x]
BanaWarrior
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Chapter 19: I also think Ravenclaw's commom room is a dream come true Ana hahaha And althought Evie could have been dealt with with more tact, I can understand the grumpiness that comes with your sleep being denied xD And it's just me or Eric might have been intimidated by Ana? Or maybe it's just the usual "Ravenclaw's are not very social" thing too. And wow, less than 24h and Ana is feeling vindictive :') Evie just broke some sort of record hahahahahaha Wow Ana made Amelia smile! Well, kind of. Isn't that also some sort of record? xD
Honestly? I love how Ana suddenly becomes more chatty around Alasdair and how he show reactions, even if small. xD Evie already causing trouble :') how this girl will survive.
Eeeyyy Ana approving of Finnigan! It's always the ones that are harder to befriend tho. First Alasdair, now Finnigan. This would become the anti-social club, if they really become all friends xD JERRY BABY AND HIS WRONG ANSWERS!!! Sis, FITZWILLIAM held down his hand! xD This is serious lol
Ana mapping the castle. Somewhat I feel like this could give her a lot of advantage on the long run. Advantage over what idk.
Awn man, Evie is trying to making friends :') Unfortunately it's Ana. I laughed at the "you sound like a gryffindor" tho xD And the unenthused guy from Hufflepuff... I can only think about Cian xD hahahaha
All in all, seems like Ana's heart still is at Durmstrang :')

Myr being a smart guy and trying to learn the castle's layout as soon as possible. I see why the Hat considered putting him in Ravenclaw for a moment haha And oh, Charlie and Brandon? That's a loud duo hahaha Oh wait! Aidan too??? I honestly didn't thought he would be friends with Brandon either hahaha And I wonder if those three musketeers will be as crazy as Weasley twins and Lee Jordan xD The prank planning already started, it seems!
SO, Myr is the new chess prodigy. But it's also kinda painful to watch the awkward interactions in this period where the kids are still trying to get used to everything and everyone. But at the same time it's endearing to watch some of the more extroverted kids kind of taking others under their wings (yes Holly, I'm talking about you haha) I'm also surprised the lack of reaction from Myr for the fact that one of his teachers is a ghost XD
Dora! Our Tonks has showed up! Yey! And I'm laughing at Kiera's description by Myr. Pretty accurate. ANd omg why Drake is so adorable. Superman! My heart! (Also, highkey loving to see interactions between the two older Weasleys :'3)
And I liked Evera teaching Myr about Quidditch. Even I could understand if I didn't know what it was about. xD And I wonder why Holly fled the flying/Quidditch talk.

So, Raj seems to be integrating well with the other Slytherins. I think it's the first pov in this chapter where everyone already looks comfortable around each other and there is no palpable awkwardness around them. Which is kind of refreshing, I guess.
Professor Whits has a really... unique way of saying "little ones" xD And seems that despite Queenie being the "Teacger's pet", Finn also likes to cause a good impression, and Raj too. Since the three of them sat at the front while the rest of the Slytherins sat in the back.
Oooh Donaghan and Cian! Heck, Cian must be mad at Don now tho hahahahaha And ouch Nia, isn't that atad bit too harsh for the beggining of the first year? You didn't even had time to live with the others yet. And I mean, he's a Hufflepuff! Hufflepuffs would never hurt anyone!
I can hear Snape in my head while reading- And heck, Raj is feeling bad for ignoring Don. Stupid House Rivalry :'( You should be able to make friends with whoever you want. Oh wait. Yey Raj and Don are talking again!
On a final note, heck the Astronomy tower is far away AND super tall if it takes half an hour to get to the top! And I guess Pofessor Sinestra is a night owl, if she oly teaches night classes.

My first thought: poor Frannie. My second thought: Wait. Hunter Vaugnes as in the same one from the prologue?! So Eric is that same Eric too! akhsakdjkasdjasd -mind blow-
Anyway, going on hahahaha Jemma seems like a supportive friend. Honestly everyone in Hufflepuff so far looks like a sweetheart.
Oh man, I bet Snape was super mad at Brandon with the potion incident. And Charlie has all the right to be mad too. But so far, I guess no one has any idea how big Charlie's family really is. Also, seems like Frannie was kind of right, if not for Charlie. And heck, it's super nerd if AIDAN WARD says it's nerdy hahahahahahahahah But Jemma's dad has a super cool job! Maybe he will be Bill's veteran?
Frannie seems do be doing a good job with her homework, I can honeslty picture Don dragging Cian so he will actually interact with people (and the image is hilarious), and oh no, Tyler, don't give that much power to Leona :') Just Kiera to be HAPPY about being caught by tentacles hahaha And seems like Quidditch is still one of the biggest question marks for the muggleborns.
Omg this surprise party, or prank, or both! I'm picturing it super pretty and super fun! I find it funny that Kiera the mud girl doesn't want flowers in her head hahahahaha And poor Cian, this is so out of his comfort zone! xD Leona has the best war cry so far! hahahaha And Lola sure is competitive! I wonder who won the flower war, tho I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone seems to have had so much fun, and that's the objective! I'm glad everyone seems to have enjoyed it so much! (and I hope Cian is not too much traumatized xD) Let's see what they will plan for their own seventh year!